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Old 09-02-2018, 07:20 PM   #1
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So i been on the boards you all know my writing very well
Ive dropped in cyphers with j battled cats like jabari aint no bruise i gotta swell
Right maybe them last two lines were too battle like er whatever
And this aint follow a normal storyline and maybe your going tell me it aint even nothing u going remember
But maybe you aint even know me in real life and aint know who i am
Dont really matter to be honest cause god already made me some plans
Right that was basically enough even if this open mic wasnt really structured properly
Cause you aint have no lessons to study and nothing to nothing just a head with no body
You aint have to complete the rest of this story though on the real
Cause i think everybody already figuered out that you aint even have to know the deal
Right and everything still workout somehow
How you going be gay like that right tell me some shit right you just a fucking clown
So whats the deal then where the battles at
I cant even remember one where them lines with the dopewise rap
Wheres the humour where are the flips why all the questions
Leave you dead on the floor you aint even compete at ya sessions
Yo what is the fucking deal yo
Better come up next time before tripple leave you melting like you was some snow
Good luck putting the rest of ya verse together though
Finding some lines knowing what the fuck ya saying before ya even have to know
Anyways this is my life this is tripple in all his glory and shit like that
You aint have a career to stack cause tripple aint really need it when he forgot all his raps
I bet next time u see this lil homie your like what the fuck is up
Cause tripple got so many threads and you say he aint creative when tripple dope as fuck.....
Dont know thpugh man sure i seen you cypher a couple times i guess
But you aint really posted either but i aint have to put up with ya stress
Whatever man maybe i will get more involved again whatever
I just want to write an open mic for now its too hard having lines i cant measure
Dont know man i give up really feel bad sorry or maybe i dont
That sucks i mean i had nice battles dope lines i couldve quoted and shit and now i wont
Whatever man guess no one really want to battle me anyways cause im such an animal
Ill fuck cats up maybe or not whatever its all up to opinion but who cares cause see i got a scale to strangle
A couple meals to eat some food in the refridgerator
You aint stack on the real though cause one day all ill have is paper
Never work for nothing never have to deal with noone
Aint have to do shit but just remember the days when i was young
So picture me there just chilling right for the rest of my life
What you going do about it trupple sitting there by himself with mad battles mad threads a couple hundred a nice apartment fuck man whats up who sucks now right....?
I dont care right if that last line was stretched and that was a quote er whatever
From one of my other open mics i cant remember the title but i remember the line and it was under the weather
That was another quote and a family jewel
Whatever pull up a chair when you aint even own a stool
You aint even going be creative though say something like u was cool
Whatever man you can hate like im whack whatever i just aint have no real need for this fool.....




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Old 09-02-2018, 10:08 PM   #2
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I'll say it again, try to cut the word "aint" from your raps. They'll be better.
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Old 09-03-2018, 12:03 AM   #3
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