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Old 05-27-2018, 07:52 PM   #1
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24?

Okay, Sounds good

Wtf dude. Is the due date due tonight at 11:59 or tomorrow 11:59
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Yeh 20 or 24 , just match who drops first.
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What kinda person sells out joe Boston for lenox
LOL.

Lennox, this anime fag sold out Joey to Roc with you, that’s crazy kid
I bet ya Dame Dash for thinkin you can carry Bleek as long as Jay-z did
There’s money on y’all head so we’ve been waitin on this bout all week
4 the right price...income bullets to there chest leavin their outcome bleak
& if outcome Bleak…I bet this right cross will let his soul be healed
He’ll be knockin on heaven’s door while Lenox overlooks a Holyfield
Lenny...You say you trynna turn it around, kid try to market a better story
Still I'm behind you...This animal spraying from the back jus marking my territory
You been getting groomed on kik, there's no other way to call it buddy,
Now you March to the beat of a different drum since Bongo left you walking funny
This sloppy faggot can't help you, ya'll lames won't do a single thing
Never had a line worth shoutin about, ain't gone change under Bleaks bingo wing
Most Hated? Soon we won’t be able to I.D. these pair of contenders
I got 4 clips on the waist & 2 shoulder straps like a pair of suspenders
Who let y’all in this tourney? People get cold chills if we comparin ya
Cuz y’all look more outta place than a Jamaican bobsled team in America
Think about it, if Len lookin to learn from the best, who would mention ya name?
This desperate lame got some Loose Logic but kid ain't got no sense or No Shame
You didn't see me n body comin, your closeness is awkward for the rest of us
They could say here you landed the odd couple but that's more than fuckin generous
Lennox, I bet if we tussle you'd buckle & B for this scuffle you need muscle
Cause right now ya'll more of a push-over than Jordan's last shot on Russell
Lenox invited his cavalry but they already Army with a super llama
& when it spits bullets shred thru these jarheads like a gunfight in Futurama

plus ya momma fat.
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Old 06-01-2018, 01:29 PM   #6
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BS cool but fake joog would get flattened, no sense of humor having English muffin cuck fgt ass needs to gtfo we don't accept you

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Medicine for anxiety should only be used on the short term to help. If you just Medicate the whole time your just masking the problem.
Really E.

The pizza boy? Here's some meds: you formed tags w/ a bore fag
Lace this thread & snatch Body, Masking YOUR Problem w/ chloroform rags
Fake joog w/ smooth edits, tossing his partner's bars in a urinal
"20-24" then posting more Chopped Body verses than Lars' journal
Name's bleak, but Serta YOUR type. Purple got me grilling opps
Chop fresh out the Box, Spring loaded to rest they heads on Pillow tops
I dice prey, toss bits and pieces out the window on the ride back
Type of shit make 1 Body look like Memorial counts in Chiraq
Bombz strapped to Body w/ suicide vests on, crying's worthless.
In other words: locked together & on OUR word, they dying virgins
We the splash bros, snatch hoes from range while these lame's beggin
Get'n numbers while y'all miss w/ 24 straight 3's like Houston in Game 7
Cut snatch’s throat open. leave En’s brain blown out clean.
A shot’ll leave his dome in ya lap.. - That's a Bang Bros scene.
gat loaded, I’ll leave both of u nobodies on FOX News.
The smoke’ll put ur name in the sky like airplane messages in cartoons.
Talk shit & eat a clip, im quick to bust toys.
keep that bitch on my waist, squeezing more ratchets in ya face than NBA Youngboy
My knuckles do damage to pussies, but not to mention.
I got black thoughts, I’ll give u a hard beat till ur soul hits the 9th dimension.
dumb faggot enbombz, swaying before the verse? u ain’t a sheer veteran’.
I’ll put the banana clip to his grill, just to give bombz a better idea of extensions.
cred merkd u then let me have a turn, those gun bars had u takin’ shells.
.. But from the looks of that battle.. body already dug his own grave himself.
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Old 06-02-2018, 01:32 AM   #7
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Lennox, this anime fag sold out Joey to Roc with you, that’s crazy kid
I bet ya Dame Dash for thinkin you can carry Bleek as long as Jay-z did
(pretty dated wordplay. on the bleak/bleek. i remember canibus did it.. but since its a nameplay itll get a pass.. and it was a personal. this is ok)
There’s money on y’all head so we’ve been waitin on this bout all week
4 the right price...income bullets to there chest leavin their outcome bleak
(this i didnt like though. the tie ins didnt do the income wp justice)
& if outcome Bleak…I bet this right cross will let his soul be healed
He’ll be knockin on heaven’s door while Lenox overlooks a Holyfield
(i get the boxing lennox/holyfield angle..but the other way..lenox overlooks a holy field..was incredibly loose and a bit nonsensical.)
Lenny...You say you trynna turn it around, kid try to market a better story
Still I'm behind you...This animal spraying from the back jus marking my territory
(i like this though)
You been getting groomed on kik, there's no other way to call it buddy,
Now you March to the beat of a different drum since Bongo left you walking funny
(lol this was jokes)
This sloppy faggot can't help you, ya'll lames won't do a single thing
Never had a line worth shoutin about, ain't gone change under Bleaks bingo wing
(nah)
Most Hated? Soon we won’t be able to I.D. these pair of contenders
I got 4 clips on the waist & 2 shoulder straps like a pair of suspenders
(kinda swagger n flow. saying how armed you are. kind of out of place. shootthe nigga. lol)
Who let y’all in this tourney? People get cold chills if we comparin ya
Cuz y’all look more outta place than a Jamaican bobsled team in America
(ehhhh)
Think about it, if Len lookin to learn from the best, who would mention ya name?
This desperate lame got some Loose Logic but kid ain't got no sense or No Shame
(borderline ok)
You didn't see me n body comin, your closeness is awkward for the rest of us
They could say here you landed the odd couple but that's more than fuckin generous
(nah)
Lennox, I bet if we tussle you'd buckle & B for this scuffle you need muscle
Cause right now ya'll more of a push-over than Jordan's last shot on Russell
(niceeeee)
Lenox invited his cavalry but they already Army with a super llama
& when it spits bullets shred thru these jarheads like a gunfight in Futurama
(jarheads are marines. idk wasnt liking this too much tbh)

he pizza boy? Here's some meds: you formed tags w/ a bore fag
Lace this thread & snatch Body, Masking YOUR Problem w/ chloroform rags
(a little clunky.but borderline ok)
Fake joog w/ smooth edits, tossing his partner's bars in a urinal
"20-24" then posting more Chopped Body verses than Lars' journal
(ehhh . same as above but not as ok. this missed)
Name's bleak, but Serta YOUR type. Purple got me grilling opps
Chop fresh out the Box, Spring loaded to rest they heads on Pillow tops
(eh)
I dice prey, toss bits and pieces out the window on the ride back
Type of shit make 1 Body look like Memorial counts in Chiraq
(didnt like the direction u took this)
Bombz strapped to Body w/ suicide vests on, crying's worthless.
In other words: locked together & on OUR word, they dying virgins
(this was clever if u look into it. i like that our word part. n what your implying there)
We the splash bros, snatch hoes from range while these lame's beggin
Get'n numbers while y'all miss w/ 24 straight 3's like Houston in Game 7
(HAHAHAHAHALMAO thsi was fire)
Cut snatch’s throat open. leave En’s brain blown out clean.
A shot’ll leave his dome in ya lap.. - That's a Bang Bros scene.
(simple. butok)
gat loaded, I’ll leave both of u nobodies on FOX News.
The smoke’ll put ur name in the sky like airplane messages in cartoons.
(nah)
Talk shit & eat a clip, im quick to bust toys.
keep that bitch on my waist, squeezing more ratchets in ya face than NBA Youngboy
(mmm maybe ok)
My knuckles do damage to pussies, but not to mention.
I got black thoughts, I’ll give u a hard beat till ur soul hits the 9th dimension.
(ok)
dumb faggot enbombz, swaying before the verse? u ain’t a sheer veteran’.
I’ll put the banana clip to his grill, just to give bombz a better idea of extensions.
(nah)
cred merkd u then let me have a turn, those gun bars had u takin’ shells.
.. But from the looks of that battle.. body already dug his own grave himself.
(eh close)

decent battle.

3-2 in quotes.. i got body n enbombz

but that houston game 7 line was fire af

i can see it going either way... its the ok lines that'll decide this coz everything else is close when it comes to quotes

v/first duo

body/enbmombz
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I'll edit more of a breakdown, but I have body/bombz here.. both had some shit tho.

Lenox/Bleak -- 24 3', 9th dimen (almost)
DBSB -- jordan, animal spraying, bongo

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Lennox, this anime fag sold out Joey to Roc with you, that’s crazy kid
I bet ya Dame Dash for thinkin you can carry Bleek as long as Jay-z did

Lol Nice

There’s money on y’all head so we’ve been waitin on this bout all week
4 the right price...income bullets to there chest leavin their outcome bleak

Ehh, This coo

& if outcome Bleak…I bet this right cross will let his soul be healed
He’ll be knockin on heaven’s door while Lenox overlooks a Holyfield

Dope here!

Lenny...You say you trynna turn it around, kid try to market a better story
Still I'm behind you...This animal spraying from the back jus marking my territory

Lol Coo

You been getting groomed on kik, there's no other way to call it buddy,
Now you March to the beat of a different drum since Bongo left you walking funny

Didn't get this one!

This sloppy faggot can't help you, ya'll lames won't do a single thing
Never had a line worth shoutin about, ain't gone change under Bleaks bingo wing

Ehh

Most Hated? Soon we won’t be able to I.D. these pair of contenders
I got 4 clips on the waist & 2 shoulder straps like a pair of suspenders

Played! But the way it was worded made it nice!

Who let y’all in this tourney? People get cold chills if we comparin ya
Cuz y’all look more outta place than a Jamaican bobsled team in America

Lmao coo

Think about it, if Len lookin to learn from the best, who would mention ya name?
This desperate lame got some Loose Logic but kid ain't got no sense or No Shame

Ok

You didn't see me n body comin, your closeness is awkward for the rest of us
They could say here you landed the odd couple but that's more than fuckin generous

Light, but Decent

Lennox, I bet if we tussle you'd buckle & B for this scuffle you need muscle
Cause right now ya'll more of a push-over than Jordan's last shot on Russell

Niceeeee!

Lenox invited his cavalry but they already Army with a super llama
& when it spits bullets shred thru these jarheads like a gunfight in Futurama

Decent ender!

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The pizza boy? Here's some meds: you formed tags w/ a bore fag
Lace this thread & snatch Body, Masking YOUR Problem w/ chloroform rags

Ok opener!

Fake joog w/ smooth edits, tossing his partner's bars in a urinal
"20-24" then posting more Chopped Body verses than Lars' journal

Niceeee!

Name's bleak, but Serta YOUR type. Purple got me grilling opps
Chop fresh out the Box, Spring loaded to rest they heads on Pillow tops

Coo

I dice prey, toss bits and pieces out the window on the ride back
Type of shit make 1 Body look like Memorial counts in Chiraq

Light, but coo

Bombz strapped to Body w/ suicide vests on, crying's worthless.
In other words: locked together & on OUR word, they dying virgins

Lol ok

We the splash bros, snatch hoes from range while these lame's beggin
Get'n numbers while y'all miss w/ 24 straight 3's like Houston in Game 7

Nasty!

Cut snatch’s throat open. leave En’s brain blown out clean.
A shot’ll leave his dome in ya lap.. - That's a Bang Bros scene.

Nice

gat loaded, I’ll leave both of u nobodies on FOX News.
The smoke’ll put ur name in the sky like airplane messages in cartoons.

This was creative!

Talk shit & eat a clip, im quick to bust toys.
keep that bitch on my waist, squeezing more ratchets in ya face than NBA Youngboy

Toooo simple

My knuckles do damage to pussies, but not to mention.
I got black thoughts, I’ll give u a hard beat till ur soul hits the 9th dimension.

This is ok!

dumb faggot enbombz, swaying before the verse? u ain’t a sheer veteran’.
I’ll put the banana clip to his grill, just to give bombz a better idea of extensions


Decent

cred merkd u then let me have a turn, those gun bars had u takin’ shells.
.. But from the looks of that battle.. body already dug his own grave himself.


This is coo!


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This was a good ass read I aint gone lie! I had to read this long ass shit twice lol, but at first I had BS/Bombz, but man that Houston in 7 line was nasty and that Bang Bros line was nice!

This sloppy faggot can't help you, ya'll lames won't do a single thing
Never had a line worth shoutin about, ain't gone change under Bleaks bingo wing
Most Hated? Soon we won’t be able to I.D. these pair of contenders
I got 4 clips on the waist & 2 shoulder straps like a pair of suspenders
Lennox, I bet if we tussle you'd buckle & B for this scuffle you need muscle
Cause right now ya'll more of a push-over than Jordan's last shot on Russell

vs

Fake joog w/ smooth edits, tossing his partner's bars in a urinal
"20-24" then posting more Chopped Body verses than Lars' journal
Get'n numbers while y'all miss w/ 24 straight 3's like Houston in Game 7
Cut snatch’s throat open. leave En’s brain blown out clean.
A shot’ll leave his dome in ya lap.. - That's a Bang Bros scene.
gat loaded, I’ll leave both of u nobodies on FOX News.
The smoke’ll put ur name in the sky like airplane messages in cartoons.

V-I got Bleak/Lenox here
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LOL.

Lennox, this anime fag sold out Joey to Roc with you, that’s crazy kid
I bet ya Dame Dash for thinkin you can carry Bleek as long as Jay-z did

I liked this, sure the reference is a little dated and I imagine it has been done but it works and applied to the opposition so can't fault it

There’s money on y’all head so we’ve been waitin on this bout all week
4 the right price...income bullets to there chest leavin their outcome bleak

This one needed something more to make it really hit harder, the outcome Bleak is a nice idea, just needed executing differently maybe to make it pop


& if outcome Bleak…I bet this right cross will let his soul be healed
He’ll be knockin on heaven’s door while Lenox overlooks a Holyfield

I liked the Holyfield idea off Lenox name, this was good and creative

Lenny...You say you trynna turn it around, kid try to market a better story
Still I'm behind you...This animal spraying from the back jus marking my territory

LOL seemed more swag and flow in all honesty but I fucked with this and not seen it done before so it gets props from me!

You been getting groomed on kik, there's no other way to call it buddy,
Now you March to the beat of a different drum since Bongo left you walking funny

Dope shit

This sloppy faggot can't help you, ya'll lames won't do a single thing
Never had a line worth shoutin about, ain't gone change under Bleaks bingo wing

Again this was cool, enjoyed Bleaks bingo wing

Most Hated? Soon we won’t be able to I.D. these pair of contenders
I got 4 clips on the waist & 2 shoulder straps like a pair of suspenders

LOL again this one came off swaggy but I can def fuck with it. Dope

Who let y’all in this tourney? People get cold chills if we comparin ya
Cuz y’all look more outta place than a Jamaican bobsled team in America

LOL yep liking the comedic stuff in here

Think about it, if Len lookin to learn from the best, who would mention ya name?
This desperate lame got some Loose Logic but kid ain't got no sense or No Shame

I get the Loose Logic being his friend or some shit but only know of No Shame the transgender battler, not sure entirely how that ties in so think this may be missed by me sadly

You didn't see me n body comin, your closeness is awkward for the rest of us
They could say here you landed the odd couple but that's more than fuckin generous

Cool

Lennox, I bet if we tussle you'd buckle & B for this scuffle you need muscle
Cause right now ya'll more of a push-over than Jordan's last shot on Russell

Nice current reference and punch, first I've seen

Lenox invited his cavalry but they already Army with a super llama
& when it spits bullets shred thru these jarheads like a gunfight in Futurama

Jarheads/Futurama is dope, first I've seen that done. Lots of creative lines in this. Good wording also. You blend well together

plus ya momma fat.

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BS cool but fake joog would get flattened, no sense of humor having English muffin cuck fgt ass needs to gtfo we don't accept you



Really E.

The pizza boy? Here's some meds: you formed tags w/ a bore fag
Lace this thread & snatch Body, Masking YOUR Problem w/ chloroform rags

okay

Fake joog w/ smooth edits, tossing his partner's bars in a urinal
"20-24" then posting more Chopped Body verses than Lars' journal

LOL have to enjoy this

Name's bleak, but Serta YOUR type. Purple got me grilling opps
Chop fresh out the Box, Spring loaded to rest they heads on Pillow tops

Yeah this one was nice

I dice prey, toss bits and pieces out the window on the ride back
Type of shit make 1 Body look like Memorial counts in Chiraq

SwagNFlow type bar but I enjoy it

Bombz strapped to Body w/ suicide vests on, crying's worthless.
In other words: locked together & on OUR word, they dying virgins

This is cool, felt it could have used a little more to make it even harder though tbh

We the splash bros, snatch hoes from range while these lame's beggin
Get'n numbers while y'all miss w/ 24 straight 3's like Houston in Game 7

Nice current reference here

Cut snatch’s throat open. leave En’s brain blown out clean.
A shot’ll leave his dome in ya lap.. - That's a Bang Bros scene.

Fire. Real nice execution too.

gat loaded, I’ll leave both of u nobodies on FOX News.
The smoke’ll put ur name in the sky like airplane messages in cartoons.

Great conceptually but the wording was overkill lol Maybe only needed airplane messages to get the point across

Talk shit & eat a clip, im quick to bust toys.
keep that bitch on my waist, squeezing more ratchets in ya face than NBA Youngboy

Again more swaggy, I can fuck with it as both teams did the same thing

My knuckles do damage to pussies, but not to mention.
I got black thoughts, I’ll give u a hard beat till ur soul hits the 9th dimension.

This was cool

dumb faggot enbombz, swaying before the verse? u ain’t a sheer veteran’.
I’ll put the banana clip to his grill, just to give bombz a better idea of extensions.

Okay

cred merkd u then let me have a turn, those gun bars had u takin’ shells.
.. But from the looks of that battle.. body already dug his own grave himself.

Alright
This is a lot better a battle than most will think it's gonna be, I think you showed something different here, more swag to battles is definitely something I could get behind. Bang Bros was probably LOTB for me BUT I came away feeling like Body and Bombz had the better overall verse in terms of consistency and shit I liked, better execution to their lines and a couple more creative concepts like the Holyfield and Jarheads that I felt


Vote - Body and Bombz
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Lennox, this anime fag sold out Joey to Roc with you, that’s crazy kid
I bet ya Dame Dash for thinkin you can carry Bleek as long as Jay-z did
ok
There’s money on y’all head so we’ve been waitin on this bout all week
4 the right price...income bullets to there chest leavin their outcome bleak
nah, bad execution
& if outcome Bleak…I bet this right cross will let his soul be healed
He’ll be knockin on heaven’s door while Lenox overlooks a Holyfield
creative, i like
Lenny...You say you trynna turn it around, kid try to market a better story
Still I'm behind you...This animal spraying from the back jus marking my territory
cool
You been getting groomed on kik, there's no other way to call it buddy,
Now you March to the beat of a different drum since Bongo left you walking funny
lolll
This sloppy faggot can't help you, ya'll lames won't do a single thing
Never had a line worth shoutin about, ain't gone change under Bleaks bingo wing
concept was dope but bleaks bingo wing? nahh, terrible execution
Most Hated? Soon we won’t be able to I.D. these pair of contenders
I got 4 clips on the waist & 2 shoulder straps like a pair of suspenders
dope, even tho likely played
Who let y’all in this tourney? People get cold chills if we comparin ya
Cuz y’all look more outta place than a Jamaican bobsled team in America
air ball
Think about it, if Len lookin to learn from the best, who would mention ya name?
This desperate lame got some Loose Logic but kid ain't got no sense or No Shame
nope, miss
You didn't see me n body comin, your closeness is awkward for the rest of us
They could say here you landed the odd couple but that's more than fuckin generous
another miss
Lennox, I bet if we tussle you'd buckle & B for this scuffle you need muscle
Cause right now ya'll more of a push-over than Jordan's last shot on Russell
ok, dece
Lenox invited his cavalry but they already Army with a super llama
& when it spits bullets shred thru these jarheads like a gunfight in Futurama
decent again

4 gd punches
3 jabs
5 misses
vs

The pizza boy? Here's some meds: you formed tags w/ a bore fag
Lace this thread & snatch Body, Masking YOUR Problem w/ chloroform rags
OK
Fake joog w/ smooth edits, tossing his partner's bars in a urinal
"20-24" then posting more Chopped Body verses than Lars' journal
ok
Name's bleak, but Serta YOUR type. Purple got me grilling opps
Chop fresh out the Box, Spring loaded to rest they heads on Pillow tops
ehh, ok
I dice prey, toss bits and pieces out the window on the ride back
Type of shit make 1 Body look like Memorial counts in Chiraq
miss
Bombz strapped to Body w/ suicide vests on, crying's worthless.
In other words: locked together & on OUR word, they dying virgins
no
We the splash bros, snatch hoes from range while these lame's beggin
Get'n numbers while y'all miss w/ 24 straight 3's like Houston in Game 7
dope
Cut snatch’s throat open. leave En’s brain blown out clean.
A shot’ll leave his dome in ya lap.. - That's a Bang Bros scene.
damn, this is flames
gat loaded, I’ll leave both of u nobodies on FOX News.
The smoke’ll put ur name in the sky like airplane messages in cartoons.
ok-decent
Talk shit & eat a clip, im quick to bust toys.
keep that bitch on my waist, squeezing more ratchets in ya face than NBA Youngboy
miss
My knuckles do damage to pussies, but not to mention.
I got black thoughts, I’ll give u a hard beat till ur soul hits the 9th dimension.
ok
dumb faggot enbombz, swaying before the verse? u ain’t a sheer veteran’.
I’ll put the banana clip to his grill, just to give bombz a better idea of extensions.
played
cred merkd u then let me have a turn, those gun bars had u takin’ shells.
.. But from the looks of that battle.. body already dug his own grave himself.
nope

2 gd punches (including lotb)
5 jabs
5 misses


very close, cool read
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Lennox, this anime fag sold out Joey to Roc with you, that’s crazy kid
I bet ya Dame Dash for thinkin you can carry Bleek as long as Jay-z did
ok, would have liked you to have incorporated “his girl” somewhere in the opener to tie in dame, but still an ok line
There’s money on y’all head so we’ve been waitin on this bout all week
4 the right price...income bullets to there chest leavin their outcome bleak
played bros
& if outcome Bleak…I bet this right cross will let his soul be healed
He’ll be knockin on heaven’s door while Lenox overlooks a Holyfield
alrght this was different and pretty cool here
Lenny...You say you trynna turn it around, kid try to market a better story
Still I'm behind you...This animal spraying from the back jus marking my territory
nice
You been getting groomed on kik, there's no other way to call it buddy,
Now you March to the beat of a different drum since Bongo left you walking funny
lol alright I liked this
This sloppy faggot can't help you, ya'll lames won't do a single thing
Never had a line worth shoutin about, ain't gone change under Bleaks bingo wing
nah wasn’t feelin this, not sure what you were going for tbh
Most Hated? Soon we won’t be able to I.D. these pair of contenders
I got 4 clips on the waist & 2 shoulder straps like a pair of suspenders
you know I fuck w gunbars. This was good
Who let y’all in this tourney? People get cold chills if we comparin ya
Cuz y’all look more outta place than a Jamaican bobsled team in America
nah
Think about it, if Len lookin to learn from the best, who would mention ya name?
This desperate lame got some Loose Logic but kid ain't got no sense or No Shame
wasnt feeling this either
You didn't see me n body comin, your closeness is awkward for the rest of us
They could say here you landed the odd couple but that's more than fuckin generous
ok
Lennox, I bet if we tussle you'd buckle & B for this scuffle you need muscle
Cause right now ya'll more of a push-over than Jordan's last shot on Russell
nah this is a reach man
Lenox invited his cavalry but they already Army with a super llama
& when it spits bullets shred thru these jarheads like a gunfight in Futurama
alright this was creative


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The pizza boy? Here's some meds: you formed tags w/ a bore fag
Lace this thread & snatch Body, Masking YOUR Problem w/ chloroform rags
decent
Fake joog w/ smooth edits, tossing his partner's bars in a urinal
"20-24" then posting more Chopped Body verses than Lars' journal
lol alright cool
Name's bleak, but Serta YOUR type. Purple got me grilling opps
Chop fresh out the Box, Spring loaded to rest they heads on Pillow top
i was not feeling this one
I dice prey, toss bits and pieces out the window on the ride back
Type of shit make 1 Body look like Memorial counts in Chiraq
mmm this is decent at best, I like the swag in it but the punch itself wasn’t fulfilling
Bombz strapped to Body w/ suicide vests on, crying's worthless.
In other words: locked together & on OUR word, they dying virgins
nah miss
We the splash bros, snatch hoes from range while these lame's beggin
Get'n numbers while y'all miss w/ 24 straight 3's like Houston in Game 7
this is dope
Cut snatch’s throat open. leave En’s brain blown out clean.
A shot’ll leave his dome in ya lap.. - That's a Bang Bros scene.
lol fucking fire
gat loaded, I’ll leave both of u nobodies on FOX News.
The smoke’ll put ur name in the sky like airplane messages in cartoons
ok, coulda been done better but I like the concept
Talk shit & eat a clip, im quick to bust toys.
keep that bitch on my waist, squeezing more ratchets in ya face than NBA Youngboy
ehh Barely decent here
My knuckles do damage to pussies, but not to mention.
I got black thoughts, I’ll give u a hard beat till ur soul hits the 9th dimension.
decent
dumb faggot enbombz, swaying before the verse? u ain’t a sheer veteran’.
I’ll put the banana clip to his grill, just to give bombz a better idea of extensions.
this is played
cred merkd u then let me have a turn, those gun bars had u takin’ shells.
.. But from the looks of that battle.. body already dug his own grave himself.
nah

Bombs/Bodies:
3 haymakers
4 OK
5 misses

Most Hated:
2 haymakers
2 OK
4 Decent
4 misses


This battle extremely close. Houston & Bang Bros we’re both LOTB but a lot of their other stuff was edging decent, Bombbody had 1 more miss but had 1 more haymaker and better quality OK bars. I almost feel bad for voting against Most Hated here because they did their thing, but the other team unfortunately beat them by inches. Had Most Hated had 1 less miss turned into an OK or Decent bar they’d have won. Good battle guys.


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