09-17-2018, 07:23 PM | #1 |
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UH-OH vs Dynomight[HUSH WINS]
NWL:Season I: Week I
Verses are due: FRIDAY at 11:59 PM EST Voting ends: SUNDAY at 11:59 PM EST Line Limit: Minimum:10 lines, Max: 30 Voting on 2 battles is required. TOPIC: @uh-oh vs @Dynomight Last edited by Inno; 09-24-2018 at 06:57 PM. |
09-17-2018, 08:14 PM | #2 |
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09-18-2018, 09:50 PM | #3 |
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**a lone figure surveys the rubble that is Uh-ohs life**
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09-21-2018, 06:46 PM | #4 |
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Crumbled to pieces .. humbled by grievance
In the aftermath of destruction your speachless Where rubble laid covered a hundred graves Trying to stomach the destruction brung hunger pains The clouds were shiitake and portobello Enter the wasteland, now the whole world a ghetto traded flowers and trees for plants of the nuclear kind Watched death blossom and sprout root in our mind Learn a murderous lesson due to greed, hate, and aggression History erased in a second beckons a new Great Depression
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09-21-2018, 06:48 PM | #5 |
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09-21-2018, 08:42 PM | #6 |
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YEARS OF WAR.
A GREAT NATION OF FEARLESS WARRIORS WIELDING SWORDS BROUGHT TO ITS KNEES BEFORE IT COULD SEAL THE DOORS SQUEALING HORDES. DEATHLY BEFUDDLED. SHADOWS OF THOSE WHO NEVER WITNESSED BATTLE ETCHED IN THE RUBBLE. A MANS TEMPTED TO CHUCKLE. PATHS CLOSE WHILE GRIEF GRABS THOSE LEFT TO THE STRUGGLE AS THE MAD GLOW LETS THE MAN KNOW WHAT HE'S LEFT TO SUCCUMB TO. A SLOW DEATH.
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09-22-2018, 03:12 PM | #7 |
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Think both could've did much much better, and went more lines.... uh oh started out better than hush. But as a overall verse and how well a picture was painted into his own picture and feel was just overall more creative and that's hush, so I'll vote for him
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09-23-2018, 09:43 PM | #8 |
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whos victor? I'll vote when I know whats going on lol
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09-23-2018, 10:35 PM | #9 |
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Yea I think Dyno was dope w/ this one, more creative imo
Definitely 2 different styles it seems, one more poetic & one more rap-like Both were cool in referencing the pic and incorporating it into their verses Shiitake and portobello line was tight, all around good imagery from Dyno I think this will come down to personal preference from voters since both were cool but I have Dyno taking it with a better verse. |
09-24-2018, 05:50 PM | #10 |
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Traded flowers of peace for plants of the nuclear kind LOTB
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