Week 1: Chat and Predictions

asylum · 03-01-2016, 01:21 AM

Season 6

2Tripple0 (0-0) vs. Godcomplex (0-0)
Tom (0-0) vs. Pinot Grij (0-0)
Mr. J (0-0) vs. Adonis (0-0)
Vividly Vague (0-0) vs. Dr. Dog (0-0)
Asylum (0-0) vs. Frank (0-0)
MMLP (0-0) vs. Just Write (0-0)
Jesodist (0-0) vs. Razah (0-0)
Alice White (0-0) vs. Og Smokestein (0-0)
Timeless (0-0) vs. Maximus (0-0)

UnbornBuddha · 03-01-2016, 02:04 AM

Hey, nothing against 2trip, but I previously requested a match against Jesodist, and the answer was a yes. Yet, now, I'm facing another person....??

UnbornBuddha · 03-01-2016, 02:06 AM

Actually, it's cool, next match put me with him.

Pinot Grij · 03-01-2016, 03:09 AM

Verses may not exceed 16 lines? When did that become a thing?

Adonis · 03-01-2016, 08:53 AM

@Diode @Meth

We really need that season 6archive right about now

Just Write · 03-01-2016, 09:35 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Pinot Grij

Verses may not exceed 16 lines? When did that become a thing?

That's what I'm saying, I'm usually good for at least 60 lmao, I think it should be up to the writers to agree on a line limit, when did this change? I been gone too long, I'll stfu now

Tom · 03-01-2016, 09:50 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Pinot Grij

Verses may not exceed 16 lines? When did that become a thing?

Since it's only 16 lines, I'll drop later today/tonight or tomorrow.

MMLP · 03-01-2016, 10:28 AM

Yerrr, I think 16 lines is short but a welcome a challenge n hopefully will extend as the weeks progress!

Mr. J · 03-01-2016, 02:29 PM

look how they crumble under short verse @Razah I see you...

this will be a fun start

Just Write · 03-01-2016, 04:30 PM

@MMLP Dropped

Witty · 03-01-2016, 04:49 PM

16 lines is way too limiting.

It's cool for a weekly challenge here or there, or for a tournament format, but for a league I think it is the wrong decision. Just let people write, let the piece conclude at a natural stopping point, doing this, imo, makes for better pieces all round.

Razah · 03-01-2016, 04:53 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Witty

16 lines is way too limiting.

It's cool for a weekly challenge here or there, or for a tournament format, but for a league I think it is the wrong decision. Just let people write, let the piece conclude at a natural stopping point, doing this, imo, makes for better pieces all round.

Quote:

Originally Posted by asylum

Every week I will introduce a challenge or stipulation along with your topic. In light of Spring Training Season 6 is starting on a lighter note. 16 bar maximum is in place.
Brevity, the soul of wit, The Art of saying less with more. No room for error. Compact. No allowance for any misplaced word or
filler. Precise and to the point, execute your idea in a small amount of space.

^From the mag

Witty · 03-01-2016, 05:03 PM

My bad.

Adonis · 03-01-2016, 08:25 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Witty

My bad.

Nate Diaz bitch!!!!!!

I don't think he'll win, but make no mistake. His stand up is just as good and his ju jitsu is better.

Meth · 03-02-2016, 03:31 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Adonis

@Diode @Meth

We really need that season 6archive right about now

Done sorry it took so long

I haven't been on tho

Idk why diode didn't do it lmao

Mr. J · 03-02-2016, 10:27 AM

Some days I would like to twirl the world in a string...
yo...yo...I think it is obvious what the squirrel brings.

Mr. J · 03-02-2016, 04:29 PM

@asylum speak more on this live thread of yours...

asylum · 03-02-2016, 06:49 PM

looking forward to this weeks verses. we'll be off to an interesting start. i'll begin the writing process this evening. best of luck to all participants.

Tom · 03-04-2016, 09:24 AM

Haven't forgotten, just been busy. Sorry.

Mr. J · 03-04-2016, 02:05 PM

@Adonis I will be plotting your demise today, I have a few pieces in mind...expect something this afternoon or evening...or tomorrow near the deadline :D

03-01-2016, 01:21 AM	#1
asylum Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2014 Posts: 993 Battle Record: 7-5 Rep Power: 8214208	Week 1: Chat and Predictions Season 6 2Tripple0 (0-0) vs. Godcomplex (0-0) Tom (0-0) vs. Pinot Grij (0-0) Mr. J (0-0) vs. Adonis (0-0) Vividly Vague (0-0) vs. Dr. Dog (0-0) Asylum (0-0) vs. Frank (0-0) MMLP (0-0) vs. Just Write (0-0) Jesodist (0-0) vs. Razah (0-0) Alice White (0-0) vs. Og Smokestein (0-0) Timeless (0-0) vs. Maximus (0-0)

03-01-2016, 03:09 AM	#4
Pinot Grij Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 863 Battle Record: 23-19 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night 2 - Write Week V - Netcees Battle League (2x) - Winter Topical II - 1-2 Punch league Rep Power: 29195060	Verses may not exceed 16 lines? When did that become a thing? __________________ Topical C.R.E.A.M.

03-01-2016, 08:53 AM	#5
Adonis Tsk Tsk Join Date: Feb 2013 Location: Beer Goggles Posts: 4,834 Battle Record: 36-34 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - NFL Pick'em 2016-17 Rep Power: 9946446	@Diode @Meth We really need that season 6archive right about now __________________ I'm tryna fuck like A-don-is TUPAC SHAKUR

03-01-2016, 02:29 PM	#9
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,022 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349678	look how they crumble under short verse @Razah I see you... this will be a fun start __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you

03-01-2016, 04:49 PM	#11
Witty Lime Life Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 16,794 Battle Record: 30-41 Accomplishments - Only Slightly Retarded Champed - Lyric Olympics - Summer Classic Rep Power: 82986458	16 lines is way too limiting. It's cool for a weekly challenge here or there, or for a tournament format, but for a league I think it is the wrong decision. Just let people write, let the piece conclude at a natural stopping point, doing this, imo, makes for better pieces all round. __________________ He listens to voices inside of his mind Explicit and poisonous violent crime.

03-01-2016, 02:04 AM	#2
UnbornBuddha Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 1,008 Battle Record: 23-10 Champed - Art of Writing League - AOWL Season 5 Rep Power: 23856375	Hey, nothing against 2trip, but I previously requested a match against Jesodist, and the answer was a yes. Yet, now, I'm facing another person....??

03-01-2016, 02:06 AM	#3
UnbornBuddha Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 1,008 Battle Record: 23-10 Champed - Art of Writing League - AOWL Season 5 Rep Power: 23856375	Actually, it's cool, next match put me with him.

03-01-2016, 10:28 AM	#8
MMLP Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 600 Battle Record: 15-16 Champed - Write Week 9 Rep Power: 9768087	Yerrr, I think 16 lines is short but a welcome a challenge n hopefully will extend as the weeks progress!

03-01-2016, 04:30 PM	#10
Just Write Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,709 Battle Record: 9-12 Rep Power: 4997613	@MMLP Dropped

03-01-2016, 05:03 PM	#13
Witty Lime Life Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 16,794 Battle Record: 30-41 Accomplishments - Only Slightly Retarded Champed - Lyric Olympics - Summer Classic Rep Power: 82986458	My bad. __________________ He listens to voices inside of his mind Explicit and poisonous violent crime.

03-02-2016, 10:27 AM	#16
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,022 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349678	Some days I would like to twirl the world in a string... yo...yo...I think it is obvious what the squirrel brings. __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you

03-02-2016, 04:29 PM	#17
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,022 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349678	@asylum speak more on this live thread of yours... __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you

03-02-2016, 06:49 PM	#18
asylum Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2014 Posts: 993 Battle Record: 7-5 Rep Power: 8214208	looking forward to this weeks verses. we'll be off to an interesting start. i'll begin the writing process this evening. best of luck to all participants.

03-04-2016, 09:24 AM	#19
Tom Save the Queen Join Date: Feb 2016 Posts: 8 Rep Power: 0	Haven't forgotten, just been busy. Sorry. __________________ PEAKY RHYMERS

03-04-2016, 02:05 PM	#20
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,022 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349678	@Adonis I will be plotting your demise today, I have a few pieces in mind...expect something this afternoon or evening...or tomorrow near the deadline :D __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you