Championship Match: murda sho vs. Jilti [Jilti Wins]

BROKE LESNAR · 10-24-2014, 05:33 PM

Rebuttal Option

▪both competitors must agree to it at time of check-in
▪format is A, B, B, A (A posts first, B drops next, B posts follow-up, A drops final bar)

Due Monday 12am PST

jilti · 10-27-2014, 07:48 AM

kinda resembles a circus freak with all the tattoos, Piercings & dirty hair
but when i put metal thru ya Sideshow, u'll really look like the people working there

murda sho · 10-28-2014, 12:50 AM

I don't care to get personal that's wack now, but if u show up I'm at u
Unloading the gat to give ur back rounds more than Broke when he battles

Zip Him Up!!

Packed Graves · 10-28-2014, 01:02 AM

Backgrounds was fire to me lol, jilti was creative but got out done. Sho came smooth, creative & direct. Im pretty sure side show has been done, not saying its played just not over the top.

Vote sho

El Muffin · 10-28-2014, 06:56 AM

haha this was close

similar concepts

i got sho hrre tho

backrounds

nice

jilti came w/ it..i just think sho was fresher considering its relevant as hell

v sho

fresh · 10-28-2014, 09:15 AM

Feel like sideshow had potential, but it was worded very lazily.

I had to do some research to actually comprehend murda sho's punch, but after getting the info I needed, I have to give this to sho. the double entendre is there, and it was executed better than jilti here.

v/sho

Kin · 10-28-2014, 09:50 AM

best battle of week...

J-set up was fire...kept it goin' wit' punch...not sure if people missin' the obvious "side Sho"
had me like WHOA!!.. good drop

Sho- back roundz was dope also...another Whoa punch

pretty close...feelin' sho's wasn't as directed as J...and thought J's wordplay was a lil' more creative in punch an set up

Vote- iLL jiLL

BROKE LESNAR · 10-28-2014, 10:22 AM

This is more difficult than it would appear. At first I was going to give this to sho handedly due to the sidesho np. Freak sho/sidesho plays are just really, really overdone. I hate BROKE np's at this point. I know sho hates these, too. BUT the way Jilti made the concept, using a personal/pic reference to setup the np, I haven't seen that before. I haven't seen the concept flipped that way before. Now sho's had a great relevent reference. But looking deeper I have to say that the comment ab using personals is wack in the setup, I couldn't disagree with that more. Personals have always been, imo, more insulting and harder hitting than any generic bar or reference, unless those generic bars are tied into a np or wp. I think in this regards, it makes it a tough call. Both used a weapon concept. Sho had a tight reference regarding my use of personals, Jilti used a personal reference to set up his concept. Both had solid delivery.

v-Jilti

Tazz · 10-28-2014, 12:29 PM

Vote: Murda. Jilti came with a decent punch. I think Sho had much bettter execution and his diss hit harder

Blanco Bishop · 10-28-2014, 02:56 PM

Honestly if it's on mere wordplay sho wins but when u consider everything imo jils read smoother n was a tad bit more creative.

So imo

V jil

Defiant · 10-29-2014, 03:53 PM

Close as fuck usually I'd vote against a sho no but I liked this flip so he's gets this IMO
Shos was decent but prefer Jilti

Vote jilti

~RustyGunZ~ · 10-29-2014, 03:55 PM

I liked jiltis wording

sho didn't have the G sound in backgrounds so that was forced to me

v/jilti

Destroyer · 10-30-2014, 10:23 AM

thought back rounds was fire
sideshow felt played to me

v/sho

Letterman · 10-30-2014, 11:34 AM

Don't know if I'm missing something but if Sho's was suppose to be background then that's forced when you say it. Jilti's sideshow line was decent enough. I got him taking it.

v/Jit

10-30-2014, 01:00 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by jilti

kinda resembles a circus freak with all the tattoos, Piercings & dirty hair
but when i put metal thru ya Sideshow, u'll really look like the people working there

I'll have to be honest; this bar was dope. The setup definitely assisted the impact as well, so props for that.

Quote:

Originally Posted by murda sho

I don't care to get personal that's wack now, but if u show up I'm at u
Unloading the gat to give ur back rounds more than Broke when he battles

This can be debating whether it's forced or not. IMO, I don't think it's too bad, as I've seen a hell of a lot worse. This was also dope.

Overall: Close battle, however, I do feel Jilt took this slightly, due to the simple fact his personal landed a little harsher because his was more of an insult then just the typical threat. So to me, it was a threat blended with and insult vs a threat, so that helped me make my decision.

v/Jilt - Both PUNs were dope, tho. Props to both.

Unfukwitable · 10-30-2014, 01:37 PM

Liked both ideas but one came off alil tougher in my opinion.
props to both of yall, v/murda

Tic · 10-31-2014, 10:43 AM

Gotta go with Jilti here....I thought his wording at the end could've been a little better, but the bar as a whole was dope. Murda had a nice bar as well, but it didn't feel as smooth as Jilti's.

Jilti

10-24-2014, 05:33 PM	#1
BROKE LESNAR βгοкε ㄴεςηαг Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 2,245 Battle Record: 9-4 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12760961	Championship Match: murda sho vs. Jilti [Jilti Wins] Rebuttal Option ▪both competitors must agree to it at time of check-in ▪format is A, B, B, A (A posts first, B drops next, B posts follow-up, A drops final bar) Due Monday 12am PST

10-27-2014, 07:48 AM	#2
jilti neckties Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 1,629 Battle Record: 43-19 Champed - BA Cypher - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 20816225	kinda resembles a circus freak with all the tattoos, Piercings & dirty hair but when i put metal thru ya Sideshow, u'll really look like the people working there Last edited by jilti; 10-27-2014 at 11:24 AM.

10-28-2014, 12:50 AM	#3
murda sho Shonami Surf Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 1,069 Battle Record: 24-16 Champed - Bad Blood II - BA Tag - BA Tag Tournament IV - 1-2 Punch League - Shadow Boxing Rep Power: 42758479	I don't care to get personal that's wack now, but if u show up I'm at u Unloading the gat to give ur back rounds more than Broke when he battles Zip Him Up!! __________________ "aim impeccable if I miss somebody I aint seen em in a while"

10-28-2014, 01:02 AM	#4
Packed Graves Name Flips Are Clever Join Date: Sep 2014 Posts: 471 Battle Record: 9-10 Champed - Alias Tourney '14 Rep Power: 777844	Backgrounds was fire to me lol, jilti was creative but got out done. Sho came smooth, creative & direct. Im pretty sure side show has been done, not saying its played just not over the top. Vote sho __________________ back

10-28-2014, 06:56 AM	#5
El Muffin DOHpe since 02' Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Surrounded by white ppl Posts: 14,693 Battle Record: 43-24 Champed - Netcees Battle League - 1-2 Punch Onslaught - 1-2 Punch League - Hot or Thot Roast - Hot or Thot 2018 - Fight Night 11 - NPL Roast Rep Power: 34230532	haha this was close similar concepts i got sho hrre tho backrounds nice jilti came w/ it..i just think sho was fresher considering its relevant as hell v sho __________________ It’s like weed in Highschool- w/ the cans I’ll smoke you Bitch I floss . I Got the chain out to see like Constantinople

10-28-2014, 09:15 AM	#6
fresh Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2014 Posts: 302 Battle Record: 0-4 Rep Power: 0	Feel like sideshow had potential, but it was worded very lazily. I had to do some research to actually comprehend murda sho's punch, but after getting the info I needed, I have to give this to sho. the double entendre is there, and it was executed better than jilti here. v/sho

10-28-2014, 09:50 AM	#7
Kin Kill.It.Nonstop Join Date: Jun 2014 Posts: 666 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 662198	best battle of week... J-set up was fire...kept it goin' wit' punch...not sure if people missin' the obvious "side Sho" had me like WHOA!!.. good drop Sho- back roundz was dope also...another Whoa punch pretty close...feelin' sho's wasn't as directed as J...and thought J's wordplay was a lil' more creative in punch an set up Vote- iLL jiLL

10-28-2014, 10:22 AM	#8
BROKE LESNAR βгοкε ㄴεςηαг Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 2,245 Battle Record: 9-4 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12760961	This is more difficult than it would appear. At first I was going to give this to sho handedly due to the sidesho np. Freak sho/sidesho plays are just really, really overdone. I hate BROKE np's at this point. I know sho hates these, too. BUT the way Jilti made the concept, using a personal/pic reference to setup the np, I haven't seen that before. I haven't seen the concept flipped that way before. Now sho's had a great relevent reference. But looking deeper I have to say that the comment ab using personals is wack in the setup, I couldn't disagree with that more. Personals have always been, imo, more insulting and harder hitting than any generic bar or reference, unless those generic bars are tied into a np or wp. I think in this regards, it makes it a tough call. Both used a weapon concept. Sho had a tight reference regarding my use of personals, Jilti used a personal reference to set up his concept. Both had solid delivery. v-Jilti

10-28-2014, 12:29 PM	#9
Tazz Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2014 Posts: 22 Battle Record: 0-2 Rep Power: 90561	Vote: Murda. Jilti came with a decent punch. I think Sho had much bettter execution and his diss hit harder

10-28-2014, 02:56 PM	#10
Blanco Bishop Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: Cali Posts: 1,460 Battle Record: 11-20 Rep Power: 4150482	Honestly if it's on mere wordplay sho wins but when u consider everything imo jils read smoother n was a tad bit more creative. So imo V jil

10-29-2014, 03:53 PM	#11
Defiant Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,121 Battle Record: 31-50 Champed - Time to Kill I Rep Power: 6442244	Close as fuck usually I'd vote against a sho no but I liked this flip so he's gets this IMO Shos was decent but prefer Jilti Vote jilti

10-29-2014, 03:55 PM	#12
~RustyGunZ~ (ง'̀-'́)ง Join Date: Nov 2015 Posts: 15,852 Battle Record: 52-28 Accomplishments -50+ wins Champed -Summer Classic VIII -Netcees Battle League -BA Picture -BA TagTeam -Fight Night Cypher I -Fight Night XXXV -Key Grand Prix 2018 1/2 Rep Power: 85899402	I liked jiltis wording sho didn't have the G sound in backgrounds so that was forced to me v/jilti

10-30-2014, 11:34 AM	#14
Letterman Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 344 Battle Record: 15-11 Rep Power: 374701	Don't know if I'm missing something but if Sho's was suppose to be background then that's forced when you say it. Jilti's sideshow line was decent enough. I got him taking it. v/Jit

10-30-2014, 01:37 PM	#16
Unfukwitable baz∞ka Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 1,628 Battle Record: 38-35 Champed - Fight Night 7 - Battle Arena Tournament - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 36460385	Liked both ideas but one came off alil tougher in my opinion. props to both of yall, v/murda __________________ WICKeD

10-31-2014, 10:43 AM	#17
Tic Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 1,509 Battle Record: 51-29 Champed - Newbie Tourney VII - Netcees Battle League Rep Power: 20137906	Gotta go with Jilti here....I thought his wording at the end could've been a little better, but the bar as a whole was dope. Murda had a nice bar as well, but it didn't feel as smooth as Jilti's. Jilti