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Old 03-21-2021, 07:04 PM   #81
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5 HOURS UNTIL COUNTLESS NO SHOWS
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Old 03-21-2021, 11:54 PM   #82
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@fraze @symetrik if you guys are in the process of writing I’ll give you a pass

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Old 03-21-2021, 11:59 PM   #83
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Old 03-22-2021, 12:01 AM   #84
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@Diablo a verse in your honour ;) weird to write in a mockery of your style tbh
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Old 03-22-2021, 12:19 AM   #85
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Got three no shows and one battle that needs voted on

Let’s get this week over with
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@evaD @Objective @Blue Bayou need an EXT?
I checked in, posted my verse on time. (if it wasn't on time, drop it and go by who checked in or give me another 12 hours to post something. Thought for sure he was going to no-show)
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Smh @ only one actual battle.

Dave vs Objective is a crappy outcome either way. Dave didn't check in until after the deadline and posted his verse late. Both of those are DQ'able offenses, unless he had asked for an extension, but it isn't clear he did.

Objective posted a no-show verse assuming there would be no opponent. But it also seems like you didn't write at all and didn't check up on the battle. Not illegal but probably bad form. I get it. We've seen many disqualifications for rule violations so it would seem fair to assume Dave would get the boot. But the league also has automatic extensions, so it isn't really a safe bet. If Dave got the ext in time, that means his verse counts and it should go to votes. Ext should count as a check in, but I didn't see it in thread until after deadline.

There's only one open battle otherwise, so my vote would be for giving Objective a brief extension and enforcing a matching line limit to match Dave's verse. It shouldn't slow things down that much and its better than a double DQ or giving the win to an illegally posted verse (if there was no ext request).
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I checked in, posted my verse on time. (if it wasn't on time, drop it and go by who checked in or give me another 12 hours to post something. Thought for sure he was going to no-show)
Go ahead and write I’ll give you the rest of the day, this has been a crappy situation and both you guys deserve a fair shake at it. @evaD if you need to make any changes or anything feel free
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I DMed adverse before the deadline to say I would post a verse

idc though I’m only showing to help ad get the tourney finished since these so called topical heads aren’t capable of writing 10 lines in a week
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I DMed adverse before the deadline to say I would post a verse

idc though I’m only showing to help ad get the tourney finished since these so called topical heads aren’t capable of writing 10 lines in a week
Also just wanted to say props to you for filling in. This instance is just a bad situation, but it was cool of you to participate in the first place.
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Go ahead and write I’ll give you the rest of the day, this has been a crappy situation and both you guys deserve a fair shake at it. @evaD if you need to make any changes or anything feel free
I fell asleep, damn. Would advice to give people a heads up that you've been DM'd they'd show tho.

evaD: Why didn't you just check in to show that you'll meet the deadline? That's the whole purpose of having to check in, so your opponent will know. That can't be news to you, right? You can call on lazy topical heads all you want, but not checking in and giving me an indiciation you'll show is definitely not a good look either.

I'm in the process of moving and this has been a rather busy week. If I got the option of focusing on other shit vs writing a verse for someone that most likely won't show up and rules stating they'll DQ if they don't check in, then why would I if it meant rushing to write something for the sake of just writing something? That's just as good as the verse I posted up. Either way, looks like you'll advance, good luck to you. I'm too late to post anything now anyways.
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My verse took less time than the paragraphs you’ve written bitching in here
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Good to see the league is thriving
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Thriving is a strong word man lol I just want it to be over literally over half the playoff battles have been no shows and we have one SINGLE open battle this week that’s got two votes on it
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Nah, you posted a verse tbh. I was just surprised but you're on point with just writing shit regardless in case someone shows. Shouldn't be that hard no matter the reasoning. 10 lines is a legit argument as well. You showed, I didn't. It's as easy as that when it comes down to it after I asked for EXT and @Adverse gave it. Defo my fuck up for falling asleep smfh, I'll show next time we meet up and feed your piece tomorrow as well.

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Old 03-26-2021, 07:29 PM   #99
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Was hoping to get a couple more votes on me and Fraze by tomorrow, if not we’ll have to move on these long waits are ridiculous
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It's all good man. If it doesn't go my way its been fun.
Was trying to do something outside of the box but didn't have time to tighten up the last verse.
Also it was kinda tight trying to fit in 3 different angles in 30 lines and still make the story work.
My bad luck to be in the one battle where two people showed, but can't be mad you had a solid drop.
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