08-07-2018, 12:49 PM | #1 | |
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FINAL 4: BodySnatcher vs. Jabari Black BS WINS
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Due Dates: Verses are due FRIDAY and will be open until Sunday/Monday Battles that lack votes may close later. One sided battles may get closed early. Extensions are 24 hours Line Limit: Minimum of 8, maximum of 20 If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first. Edit Rules: 1st Person can edit until his opponent drops 2nd Person can edit until the first vote is posted Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ FAILURE TO VOTE ON 3 BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON 3 BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE! THERE’S BEEN A LOT OF COMPLAINTS ABOUT VOTING RECENTLY, IF THERE IS SOMEONE WHO YOU DON’T WANT TO VOTE IN YOUR BATTLE YOU MUST STATE THEIR NAME IN YOUR CHECK IN. IF IT’S A CRAZY AMOUNT OF PEOPLE THEN SORRY YOU’RE JUST A BITCH AND ALL VOTES WILL COUNT. AS PER YOUR MOM @BodySnatcher @Jabari Black
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08-07-2018, 01:06 PM | #2 |
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My G.....16?
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08-07-2018, 01:35 PM | #3 |
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Yep...16 is good
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08-10-2018, 04:58 PM | #4 |
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Red Gang Nigga!
Mafia shit... Jabari's slippin on his road to victory cuz I'm nice w/the heat But these bullets are so fuckin cold they'll leave Black ice in the street He's dead but I pack a Jackhammer so I gotta let a shot roll Then I'ma keep drilling until I take a chunk out of Blacktop like a pothole My wig hot, roll up & let the stick pop after I find a slick spot & dump behind cover...I'm 'shooting over a board' like an NBA trick shot Each punch to the dome induces a break. The bruises I make... Got yall starin at Blackface but I bet he'll have more excuses than Drake This is exclusive but wait...ur bitch told me my jocks flawless I've been 'workin that pussy' so often, I'm settin records at the box office My clippers will give a 'Fade to Black', I scheme w/the lead But u couldn't Spotify put a gun to ur earbud & let a clip stream in ur head Lay a beat down like Madlib on a bad kid, catch u at ur dad crib Then let off rounds till all u hear is the 'cannon echo' like a DJ Drama adlib Gun so big I call it Tropic Thunder. It'll wet`em like a tsunami So if I decide to Jack Black...I bet we'll see the bitch inside him like Jumanji . |
08-10-2018, 05:54 PM | #5 |
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The sight’s laser. Lift the beam from the hip like a lightsaber/
Or pull up to ya doorstep...I’m on ya porch wavin like polite neighbors/ One call...will have my whole neighborhood ready to end your shit/ With guns drawn...We’ll see ‘Black block on Body’ like we censored it/ Oh you boolin now?? The strap’ll make sure you dying slime/ Violent crimes! I grab the sig and go to work....’I gotta 9 to 5’/ Tell ya parents their son’ll rest. Stab you then give ya mom the TEC/ Ya mother’ll die after I cut Body open like Donda West/ Ya homies getting slump too. Unload and kill this bum’s crew/ This Taurus? INCREDIBLE....that mean the Judge’ll take ya boys from you/ Was in the pen before they set me free. Had a weapon in the cell with me/ Bigass shank....I had to use it in a sentence like a spelling bee/ You spit cool, but I’m the best of the new wave - that’s something to get used to/ Im the Lebron of this class...’I Promise’ I’m running the new school/ You not aggressive. 9 mil - the glock’ll stretch ‘em/ Or pop the Wesson...lift the arm up in front of him like I got a question/ Last edited by Jabari Black; 08-10-2018 at 07:12 PM. |
08-10-2018, 08:10 PM | #6 |
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Pretty fucking fire gun battle tbh... I had JB on first read but then noticed he got a bit S&Fish... on my phone but will edit when i get home
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08-10-2018, 10:19 PM | #7 |
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Mafia shit...
Jabari's slippin on his road to victory cuz I'm nice w/the heat But these bullets are so fuckin cold they'll leave Black ice in the street pretty cool, solid opener He's dead but I pack a Jackhammer so I gotta let a shot roll Then I'ma keep drilling until I take a chunk out of Blacktop like a pothole lol fuckin dope My wig hot, roll up & let the stick pop after I find a slick spot & dump behind cover...I'm 'shooting over a board' like an NBA trick shot good again, swaggy Each punch to the dome induces a break. The bruises I make... Got yall starin at Blackface but I bet he'll have more excuses than Drake nah not feelin this This is exclusive but wait...ur bitch told me my jocks flawless I've been 'workin that pussy' so often, I'm settin records at the box office not feelin it My clippers will give a 'Fade to Black', I scheme w/the lead But u couldn't Spotify put a gun to ur earbud & let a clip stream in ur head mmm decent flip, I had a Spotify punch last nbl season. Completely different from yours but yea they called mines played so yours is too bitch Lay a beat down like Madlib on a bad kid, catch u at ur dad crib Then let off rounds till all u hear is the 'cannon echo' like a DJ Drama adlib alright cool Gun so big I call it Tropic Thunder. It'll wet`em like a tsunami So if I decide to Jack Black...I bet we'll see the bitch inside him like Jumanji ha this was nice lol 5 good 1 Decent 2 misses Vs The sight’s laser. Lift the beam from the hip like a lightsaber/ Or pull up to ya doorstep...I’m on ya porch wavin like polite neighbors/ lmfaoooooo I literally busted out laughing at this. I like it One call...will have my whole neighborhood ready to end your shit/ With guns drawn...We’ll see ‘Black block on Body’ like we censored it/ damn this was fire, creative & all around dope Oh you boolin now?? The strap’ll make sure you dying slime/ Violent crimes! I grab the sig and go to work....’I gotta 9 to 5’/ mmm decent at best w/ this one Tell ya parents their son’ll rest. Stab you then give ya mom the TEC/ Ya mother’ll die after I cut Body open like Donda West/ Decent again, this was done pretty basic and dull Ya homies getting slump too. Unload and kill this bum’s crew/ This Taurus? INCREDIBLE....that mean the Judge’ll take ya boys from you/ OK flip, the judge concept was used a lot in the first 1-2 Cypher Was in the pen before they set me free. Had a weapon in the cell with me/ Bigass shank....I had to use it in a sentence like a spelling bee/ took a minute for this one to click but it’s nice lol You spit cool, but I’m the best of the new wave - that’s something to get used to/ Im the Lebron of this class...’I Promise’ I’m running the new school/ ehhh nah not feelin You not aggressive. 9 mil - the glock’ll stretch ‘em/ Or pop the Wesson...lift the arm up in front of him like I got a question/ decent at best, pretty played concept 3 good 3 Decent 1 Miss Really dope battle here, props to both for dropping straight BARS and closing out with a bang. I have body with more nice punches but also with 1 more miss than Jabari. In this case it’s not about who had more misses burcause they’re only 1 apart, but Jabari also had a few decent lines that contained some played stuff unfortunately but with a decent flip to it. I think I gotta go with body here. Dope battle fellas. Vote BodySnatcher |
08-11-2018, 01:35 AM | #8 |
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That black block body censor bar was dope af. But over all Body’s nameplay and less S&F bars took it.
Censor bar Opener Spelling bee Vs. Opener/closers Pothole line Drake Trick shot V/Body not as close as o thought just comparing ‘highlights’ |
08-12-2018, 01:18 AM | #9 |
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This shit close I'm gonna edit in tmrw I'm fucking baked and tired don't wanna sleep on anything besides these titties. Holler tmrw yall
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08-12-2018, 02:25 PM | #10 |
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Mafia shit...
Jabari's slippin on his road to victory cuz I'm nice w/the heat But these bullets are so fuckin cold they'll leave Black ice in the street Dope opener here! He's dead but I pack a Jackhammer so I gotta let a shot roll Then I'ma keep drilling until I take a chunk out of Blacktop like a pothole Another nice jab here My wig hot, roll up & let the stick pop after I find a slick spot & dump behind cover...I'm 'shooting over a board' like an NBA trick shot Lol I like this Each punch to the dome induces a break. The bruises I make... Got yall starin at Blackface but I bet he'll have more excuses than Drake Ehh, drake/blackface references getting kinda worn out, this was ok tho This is exclusive but wait...ur bitch told me my jocks flawless I've been 'workin that pussy' so often, I'm settin records at the box office Decent at best on this one My clippers will give a 'Fade to Black', I scheme w/the lead But u couldn't Spotify put a gun to ur earbud & let a clip stream in ur head Think the wording made this a no for me Lay a beat down like Madlib on a bad kid, catch u at ur dad crib Then let off rounds till all u hear is the 'cannon echo' like a DJ Drama adlib Nice Gun so big I call it Tropic Thunder. It'll wet`em like a tsunami So if I decide to Jack Black...I bet we'll see the bitch inside him like Jumanji Lol this was cool closer ----------- The sight’s laser. Lift the beam from the hip like a lightsaber/ Or pull up to ya doorstep...I’m on ya porch wavin like polite neighbors/ Dopeee opener One call...will have my whole neighborhood ready to end your shit/ With guns drawn...We’ll see ‘Black block on Body’ like we censored it/ Another good punch here Oh you boolin now?? The strap’ll make sure you dying slime/ Violent crimes! I grab the sig and go to work....’I gotta 9 to 5’/ Ehh didn't really like this one to much Tell ya parents their son’ll rest. Stab you then give ya mom the TEC/ Ya mother’ll die after I cut Body open like Donda West/ Nice here Ya homies getting slump too. Unload and kill this bum’s crew/ This Taurus? INCREDIBLE....that mean the Judge’ll take ya boys from you/ Damn this was nice, but so many people are killing this concept now lol Was in the pen before they set me free. Had a weapon in the cell with me/ Bigass shank....I had to use it in a sentence like a spelling bee/ I the creativeness here, this a hit for me You spit cool, but I’m the best of the new wave - that’s something to get used to/ Im the Lebron of this class...’I Promise’ I’m running the new school/ Another creative line here, no direct impact on the hit but still nice You not aggressive. 9 mil - the glock’ll stretch ‘em/ Or pop the Wesson...lift the arm up in front of him like I got a question/ This was a decent closer here/concept played tho This was a dope ass battle here no lie, both was coming out the thread with fire! I read this battle 4 times actually. Both with the same amount of misses, but I have to say....Body in this one didn't have as many played concepts as JB. JB had some dope lines, but they wasn't DIRECT hits as of BS was coming with more direct swings. Both had good haymakers, but Body had more in this case. Dope ass battle though and props to both, but I got to give this one to Body. V-Body
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08-13-2018, 04:37 PM | #11 |
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JB u know I fk w/ you but idk man you weren't attacking here enough. I don't think it would have taken but like 1 or 2 more to take this easily. First half was fire, 2nd just needed a little rewording to direct it more at him instead of hyping yourself. The I Promise shit could have been cool but needed something putting Nick down on the totem pole. Use it in a sentence could have been cool but doesnt even put Nick in the picture at all.
NJ I like this verse, I think it could have been better but its still cool, consistent. You maybe OD'd on nameplay but that's what Nick James is known for, huh? Nick James |
08-13-2018, 08:23 PM | #12 |
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Jabari's slippin on his road to victory cuz I'm nice w/the heat
But these bullets are so fuckin cold they'll leave Black ice in the street yup He's dead but I pack a Jackhammer so I gotta let a shot roll Then I'ma keep drilling until I take a chunk out of Blacktop like a pothole dope My wig hot, roll up & let the stick pop after I find a slick spot & dump behind cover...I'm 'shooting over a board' like an NBA trick shot cool angle, this is nice Each punch to the dome induces a break. The bruises I make... Got yall starin at Blackface but I bet he'll have more excuses than Drake na.. This is exclusive but wait...ur bitch told me my jocks flawless I've been 'workin that pussy' so often, I'm settin records at the box office lol jocks flawless, wasn't feeling this one My clippers will give a 'Fade to Black', I scheme w/the lead But u couldn't Spotify put a gun to ur earbud & let a clip stream in ur head fks w/ this, nice Lay a beat down like Madlib on a bad kid, catch u at ur dad crib Then let off rounds till all u hear is the 'cannon echo' like a DJ Drama adlib again Gun so big I call it Tropic Thunder. It'll wet`em like a tsunami So if I decide to Jack Black...I bet we'll see the bitch inside him like Jumanji yup. dope concept, executed really clean The sight’s laser. Lift the beam from the hip like a lightsaber/ Or pull up to ya doorstep...I’m on ya porch wavin like polite neighbors/ fuuuuck, lol this is dope af imo One call...will have my whole neighborhood ready to end your shit/ With guns drawn...We’ll see ‘Black block on Body’ like we censored it/ coo Oh you boolin now?? The strap’ll make sure you dying slime/ Violent crimes! I grab the sig and go to work....’I gotta 9 to 5’/ hmm, just ok to me Tell ya parents their son’ll rest. Stab you then give ya mom the TEC/ Ya mother’ll die after I cut Body open like Donda West/ not feeling this one Ya homies getting slump too. Unload and kill this bum’s crew/ This Taurus? INCREDIBLE....that mean the Judge’ll take ya boys from you/ ok Was in the pen before they set me free. Had a weapon in the cell with me/ Bigass shank....I had to use it in a sentence like a spelling bee/ lmao, dope You spit cool, but I’m the best of the new wave - that’s something to get used to/ Im the Lebron of this class...’I Promise’ I’m running the new school/ na You not aggressive. 9 mil - the glock’ll stretch ‘em/ Or pop the Wesson...lift the arm up in front of him like I got a question/ I think you should of closed on a different note, this was st8 tho Thought JB had LOTB w/ his opener, but Body had some really heavy hits as well. I think Body got this w/ consistency. Dope battle fellas. v/ body |
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