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faggot u been a fan of me, stealin concepts is screwed an sick my bars only look Familia cuz u scroll thru my archives findin shit u relate too & flip Zelph fuckin annihilated ur career, now txt is a waste in ur life moment 'Lip Waxed' u he ripped all of ur credibility clean off the face of the site acouple days after i killed ya, i fucked ya girl & worked her mean while 'Ryan Hurst" goin to the funeral im 'Laying Pipe' till the box a murder scene i'll do a drive-by on ya crews spot, uzi leavin ya set ugly Gangrel w/ the cup, wen i let it spit out in ya crowd everyones left bloody ur slut direct message me to fuck, comes home w/ beat cheeks she Stadiuming me & my sex game gets VIP Box while urs get nose bleed seats walk up on u & spray the heat in ur torso, gun wreckin ya image u aint a Piggy Bank but ur gut'll change around wen i drop sum metal in it every chick at the strip club can tell u homo...dudes a scrub them sluts knew Ewer a faggot & they wouldn't bother showin u there jugs & ur moms a homeless druggy, hoeing it up hard for a rock aint no Life Guard but she couch surfs till High Waves got her givin CPR to a cock ur pimp games weak faggot, girls rather take the dike route should change ya name to Nolan, Ryan every time u pitch a line u strike out 18.
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smh… guys, when you see a GOD AWFUL wordplay, a line so bad ur head shakes & spins there’s a 99% chance you can ‘call it A. Knight’.. like girls do an hour into dates w/ him Al your HOF accomps are laughable, real talk man your rappin is weak i ‘looked into those records’ & find it Audits a buncha shitty verses that are Taxin’ to read it’s your coke or your life bitch. that’s my demand & it’s well in reason give up the drugs or i’ll have the ‘Chopper Drop you Over some White’ no Heli-Skiin’ Body smashed you! i didn’t know you had riders that empowered you but after that ShamWowww - that’s proof you got more Rings then the Towels do gun in hand & one on the hip...two nines gaurentees you bleed tonight first one jams, the ‘Side Piece is Up in your Grill’ screamin you should leave ya wife this loser needs drugs to get laid, he’s droppin roofies every forty minutes it should come as no a surprise any girl Allays was ‘put to rest’ before he hit it & your fiancé’s a slut homie. can’t call your relationships the stable type she sees other men & Takes the Ring-Off so fast Clorox branding it a table wipe on your front lawn calling you out, weapon in hand pussy tonight it’s death if u won't come outside – One-Click i’ll let it ‘Ring on Your Front Door’ w/ another type a Tech just keep your mouth shut faggit. don't even try flossin’ in here anything you Recital prove when putting on a show you come across as a queer 18.
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faggot u been a fan of me, stealin concepts is screwed an sick
my bars only look Familia cuz u scroll thru my archives findin shit u relate too & flip Cool angle, but unless I'm missing something, I don't see any relationship between "familia" and "flip". This bar probably would've been stronger if you just left that part off altogether. 7/10 Zelph fuckin annihilated ur career, now txt is a waste in ur life moment 'Lip Waxed' u he ripped all of ur credibility clean off the face of the site Someone might dock you for using a lip bar but I liked this one. 8/10 acouple days after i killed ya, i fucked ya girl & worked her mean while 'Ryan Hurst" goin to the funeral im 'Laying Pipe' till the box a murder scene Nitpicking here, you're calling a room a "box" which is a bit of a reach. Other than that, this is a solid jab. 7.5/10 i'll do a drive-by on ya crews spot, uzi leavin ya set ugly Gangrel w/ the cup, wen i let it spit out in ya crowd everyones left bloody eh it's ok, it feels a bit simple and syntactically it falls apart in two spots. 6/10 ur slut direct message me to fuck, comes home w/ beat cheeks she Stadiuming me & my sex game gets VIP Box while urs get nose bleed seats eh, also ok. Stadiuming isn't a word and im not sure what nose bleed seats is supposed to be representing in this "DM'ing me for sex" scenario unless you're implying that she sits on his face during her period, which is really cringe. 7/10 walk up on u & spray the heat in ur torso, gun wreckin ya image u aint a Piggy Bank but ur gut'll change around wen i drop sum metal in it I like the idea, but the wording doesn't hold up. Saying I have a piggy bank and its "gut change around" isn't a coherent way of saying a piggy bank has change in it's gut. 7/10 every chick at the strip club can tell u homo...dudes a scrub them sluts knew Ewer a faggot & they wouldn't bother showin u there jugs wp is okay, but again the wording just falls apart syntactically. There's two implied meanings to every punchline, on one side of this you're calling your opponent a fag, which is fine. Then there's the other side here where you're calling an ewer, an inanimate jug, a fag and that just doesn't make sense. 6/10 & ur moms a homeless druggy, hoeing it up hard for a rock aint no Life Guard but she couch surfs till High Waves got her givin CPR to a cock this is dope, funny. 8.5/10 ur pimp games weak faggot, girls rather take the dike route should change ya name to Nolan, Ryan every time u pitch a line u strike out I think you could've done something more with "Nolan" to make this stronger, but this is solid. 7.5/10 when you see a GOD AWFUL wordplay, a line so bad ur head shakes & spins there’s a 99% chance you can ‘call it A. Knight’.. like girls do an hour into dates w/ him Nah not feeling this. I'm sure the general "a night/a knight" play has been done plenty of times and the overall angle didn't feel fresh or complex enough for me to ignore that. 6/10 Al your HOF accomps are laughable, real talk man your rappin is weak i ‘looked into those records’ & find it Audits a buncha shitty verses that are Taxin’ to read this doesn't come off crazy smooth, but it just barely works syntactically. The idea is cool, but I think this should hit harder in theory than it actually does. It's still a solid jab imo. 8/10 it’s your coke or your life bitch. that’s my demand & it’s well in reason give up the drugs or i’ll have the ‘Chopper Drop you Over some White’ no Heli-Skiin’ I've seen a lot of chopper/helicopter bars and this one doesn't feel innovative enough. I also don't like the idea of referring to "Snow" as just "white". 7.5/10 Body smashed you! i didn’t know you had riders that empowered you but after that ShamWowww - that’s proof you got more Rings then the Towels do I like the general idea. I've never owned a shamwow, but to my understanding they don't have rings on them. You can say you'll "ring them out" but that doesn't mean the same thing as "having rings". I think you could've executed that part better. 7/10 gun in hand & one on the hip...two nines gaurentees you bleed tonight first one jams, the ‘Side Piece is Up in your Grill’ screamin you should leave ya wife this is cool, I think I like the wording more than the actual concept. 7.5/10 this loser needs drugs to get laid, he’s droppin roofies every forty minutes it should come as no a surprise any girl Allays was ‘put to rest’ before he hit it Phonetically this just doesn't have the right emphasis on "Al" to make the wp work. Overall it's ok. 7/10 & your fiancé’s a slut homie. can’t call your relationships the stable type she sees other men & Takes the Ring-Off so fast Clorox branding it a table wipe This one's dope. Still think you could've done just a bit more with it, but no other complaints. 8.5/10 on your front lawn calling you out, weapon in hand pussy tonight it’s death if u won't come outside – One-Click i’ll let it ‘Ring on Your Front Door’ w/ another type a Tech eh to be honest im not seeing the implied meaning unless it's just a doorbell which kinda seems kinda simplified to me. Also, like 3 out of your 5 last bars have been different types of rings. At least the wedding ring bar wasn't a gunplay, but I think you could spread them throughout the verse more. 7/10 just keep your mouth shut faggit. don't even try flossin’ in here anything you Recital prove when putting on a show you come across as a queer Nah I'm not really digging this syntactically and I feel like the wording could've been better either way. 6.5/10 top bars from AK lipwaxed CPR top from BB audits clorox overall it's neck & neck to me but i got AK 64.5/90 --> 71.67% BB 65/90 --> 72.22% mvgt Blue by the smallest margin imaginable |
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Answer seemingly didn’t get familiar / familia / relate. I got you, bruh. It was good, mostly wording wise rather than conceptually or anything, but I liked it.
Lip Waxed was made better because of the face of the site tie-in. Again, the wording made this sound better than I felt it was conceptually. Good shit. I don’t get the Ryan Hurst thing to be honest, I get that Ryan is his first name and you’re going for Hurst/hearse which isn’t clean to me in my accent but I can see what you’re hinting at. No idea who RH is for the laying pipe tie-in but I think I can get the gist without caring to google it. I wasn’t a big fan of the Gangrel line in truth LMFAO @ how bad Stadiumming/ stay DMing me is. That is one horrible as fuck reach to me personally, bruh. I can’t look past it. Legit garbage juice lolololol I’ve seen similar to the piggy bank / metal in its stomach before tbh so conceptually it wasn’t that fresh to me, wording wise it lacked some of that AK aggression we love IMO. I liked it, still, just wasn’t mind blowing or anything. I thought Ewer was solid, not seen the play before and I liked what you did with the line. It’s simple, direct and straight to the point. I wasn’t such a fan of the homeless druggy mom line, especially following the last one. All the tie-ins were there, maybe too many for me in truth, it felt like you attempted to do too much with and the payoff wasn’t all that great (to me) I wasn’t feeling the comma between Nolan and Ryan in the closer, I find it really odd that people do that in text to be honest, to me it’s like you’re really reaching hard for the concept. I dunno. Maybe these other dudes will like it, but it’s not for me. It’s one of those lines that only really works in text IMO vs lmao Blue beginning right where I left over with AK on ‘lines that sound weird when read aloud”. I don’t say “call it a night,” with a hard A sound in there. It also only works if (to me) if his name was A Knight and not Allen. I like it conceptually, just not so much in its execution. It could just be me being nitpicky, but I hold everyone to my ridiculously high standards and that’s one thing I can’t look past here Audits/odd it’s doesnt work in my accent but I can see it in yours. I’ll give you that one. I fucked with heli-skiing tbh, it’s a bit of an obscure one (to me) but I liked it enough. I don’t get Shamwow and don’t feel like googling it. At least that evens out the one I didn’t get by AK to keep the scores clean and even here. Side piece in your grill reminded me of Jabari’s “loyal friend” somewhat wording wise but I liked this one even though I’ve seen side piece and grill stuff done before, the wording made it feel fresher I guess. Allays was a bit of a miss to me in truth, again it could be one of those text lines that don’t work well enough when sounded out for me to enjoy as much as some people might do. I can kind of see it, but it’s not my thing. Takes the rings off was fire, not seen that concept done before. I’d have probably worded the second half of the line different to “branded them as table wipes” but I won’t dwell on that here - this was nice. Not feeling the tech line, wording wise it had too much going on with associative words and the end meant it didn’t land with any real sting (for me). Especially following the last line, maybe it caused this one to lose some of its impact given how clean the couplet before it felt. I dunno. It wasn’t bad, just lacked some zing to it maybe? I’ve seen recital / recite’ll done before. This one wasn’t bad but wasn’t great, it just felt a bit flat to me in truth - especially as a closing line. I’d have expected more of an ATTACK from the master of attack lines. Lol. Again, it was decent enough, just seemed like a kind of BB throwaway type line to me in truth. That’s it. Vote - Blue bayou Last edited by Diablo; 07-30-2019 at 01:01 PM. |
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faggot u been a fan of me, stealin concepts is screwed an sick my bars only look Familia cuz u scroll thru my archives findin shit u relate too & flip Okay coolish.. Zelph fuckin annihilated ur career, now txt is a waste in ur life moment 'Lip Waxed' u he ripped all of ur credibility clean off the face of the site Lip is already played at this point acouple days after i killed ya, i fucked ya girl & worked her mean while 'Ryan Hurst" goin to the funeral im 'Laying Pipe' till the box a murder scene I wanted to like it i'll do a drive-by on ya crews spot, uzi leavin ya set ugly Gangrel w/ the cup, wen i let it spit out in ya crowd everyones left bloody a Gangrel reference man, I forgot all about him I appreciate the reference.. the punch is cool ur slut direct message me to fuck, comes home w/ beat cheeks she Stadiuming me & my sex game gets VIP Box while urs get nose bleed seats what's Stadiumming? explain this walk up on u & spray the heat in ur torso, gun wreckin ya image u aint a Piggy Bank but ur gut'll change around wen i drop sum metal in it alright alright.. predictable though every chick at the strip club can tell u homo...dudes a scrub them sluts knew Ewer a faggot & they wouldn't bother showin u there jugs I'm not a fan of wordplay with weak tie-ins it's lazy but this was alright & ur moms a homeless druggy, hoeing it up hard for a rock aint no Life Guard but she couch surfs till High Waves got her givin CPR to a cock awful.. you tried though ur pimp games weak faggot, girls rather take the dike route should change ya name to Nolan, Ryan every time u pitch a line u strike out cute BB: when you see a GOD AWFUL wordplay, a line so bad ur head shakes & spins there’s a 99% chance you can ‘call it A. Knight’.. like girls do an hour into dates w/ him cute Al your HOF accomps are laughable, real talk man your rappin is weak i ‘looked into those records’ & find it Audits a buncha shitty verses that are Taxin’ to read I mean it's okay. This is an AK type of bar but done decently it’s your coke or your life bitch. that’s my demand & it’s well in reason give up the drugs or i’ll have the ‘Chopper Drop you Over some White’ no Heli-Skiin’ nice Body smashed you! i didn’t know you had riders that empowered you but after that ShamWowww - that’s proof you got more Rings then the Towels do like a voter ring? like voting circles? Shamwow is corny wp gun in hand & one on the hip...two nines gaurentees you bleed tonight first one jams, the ‘Side Piece is Up in your Grill’ screamin you should leave ya wife nice.. would've been better like "the side piece is in up in your grill" forcing you to leave your wife this loser needs drugs to get laid, he’s droppin roofies every forty minutes it should come as no a surprise any girl Allays was ‘put to rest’ before he hit it it's UH LAYS here in my accent but I wont knock it.. this is another AK type bar though, not feeling & your fiancé’s a slut homie. can’t call your relationships the stable type she sees other men & Takes the Ring-Off so fast Clorox branding it a table wipe come on man.. what is this? it's lazy on your front lawn calling you out, weapon in hand pussy tonight it’s death if u won't come outside – One-Click i’ll let it ‘Ring on Your Front Door’ w/ another type a Tech PREDICTABLE just keep your mouth shut faggit. don't even try flossin’ in here anything you Recital prove when putting on a show you come across as a queer terrible This battle was underwhelming.. AK was himself with the wordplays and weak tie-ins and blue tried to be Allen. Egh, I'm mad I wasted my time voting on this. This is the Semi-Finals and this is what you guys pull. Side Piece and Heli -Skiin win this for me... It's a lot closer than I thought and I was going to do a numbers break down so I can be objective as possible but looking back at the Stadium bar I think that might be the worst thing I've seen. MVGT Blue. To be clear if the verses are wack next round I'm definitely not voting.
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faggot u been a fan of me, stealin concepts is screwed an sick
my bars only look Familia cuz u scroll thru my archives findin shit u relate too & flip I like it but the wording is a lil cluttered for me Zelph fuckin annihilated ur career, now txt is a waste in ur life moment 'Lip Waxed' u he ripped all of ur credibility clean off the face of the site okay acouple days after i killed ya, i fucked ya girl & worked her mean while 'Ryan Hurst" goin to the funeral im 'Laying Pipe' till the box a murder scene Ryan 'hearsed'? The flip is too awkward Edit:googled it, hearsed is a word i'll do a drive-by on ya crews spot, uzi leavin ya set ugly Gangrel w/ the cup, wen i let it spit out in ya crowd everyones left bloody lol. Dope ur slut direct message me to fuck, comes home w/ beat cheeks she Stadiuming me & my sex game gets VIP Box while urs get nose bleed seats stay dmming/stadiuming? Not a fan tbh walk up on u & spray the heat in ur torso, gun wreckin ya image u aint a Piggy Bank but ur gut'll change around wen i drop sum metal in it okay every chick at the strip club can tell u homo...dudes a scrub them sluts knew Ewer a faggot & they wouldn't bother showin u there jugs had to google but okay & ur moms a homeless druggy, hoeing it up hard for a rock aint no Life Guard but she couch surfs till High Waves got her givin CPR to a cock lol... Light tho ur pimp games weak faggot, girls rather take the dike route should change ya name to Nolan, Ryan every time u pitch a line u strike out cool when you see a GOD AWFUL wordplay, a line so bad ur head shakes & spins there’s a 99% chance you can ‘call it A. Knight’.. like girls do an hour into dates w/ him think I've seen this done almost exactly Al your HOF accomps are laughable, real talk man your rappin is weak i ‘looked into those records’ & find it Audits a buncha shitty verses that are Taxin’ to read audits/odd it's barely works for me. Well constructed bar tho it’s your coke or your life bitch. that’s my demand & it’s well in reason give up the drugs or i’ll have the ‘Chopper Drop you Over some White’ no Heli-Skiin’ okay Body smashed you! i didn’t know you had riders that empowered you but after that ShamWowww - that’s proof you got more Rings then the Towels do okay gun in hand & one on the hip...two nines gaurentees you bleed tonight first one jams, the ‘Side Piece is Up in your Grill’ screamin you should leave ya wife funny but kinda light this loser needs drugs to get laid, he’s droppin roofies every forty minutes it should come as no a surprise any girl Allays was ‘put to rest’ before he hit it stop making me Google stuff guys & your fiancé’s a slut homie. can’t call your relationships the stable type she sees other men & Takes the Ring-Off so fast Clorox branding it a table wipe ring/cleaning rag twice in one verse? Better than shamwow on your front lawn calling you out, weapon in hand pussy tonight it’s death if u won't come outside – One-Click i’ll let it ‘Ring on Your Front Door’ w/ another type a Tech ok but pls no more ring bars just keep your mouth shut faggit. don't even try flossin’ in here anything you Recital prove when putting on a show you come across as a queer recite'll prove when putting is awkward to read I'm torn with this one... Didn't particularly like either... Lemme come back to it Highlights Ak Familiar Gangrel Nolan Ryan Blue Audit Side piece Front door I'm torn, I got AK by the sliiiiiighest margin. Blue's call it A knight and closer outweighed stadiuming to me, but fuck, this I close Honestly I'd vote tie if I could, but V/AK |
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