06-14-2016, 12:20 PM | #1 |
Saul Paul
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Spooky action at a Distance
Creep wit me... I’m surfing the wave dusts of ether
Smoking dope! but to catch my frequency it’ll have to be adjusted by a tweeker I’m part particle part isotope that can only be seen through a microscope a multi dimensional object, violet toned, filtered by a kaleidoscope my transit is transient but you can’t pick me up, to hard to transmit did that peak your antennas? my voice is a squelch, thoughts are in Sanskrit I’m everywhere at once but to you I’m yours in the blink of an eye A twinkle in the sky, to someone else I’m merely an inanimate thing in disguise A plexus of a nexus, a quantum body with infinite ties An entangled ball of mystery, they string me along with theories and lies I’ve been discovered and forgotten, brushed under the rug, yet they keep finding me I’m the finish line for brilliance while your brains run parallel, trying to keep in line with me Even when eyes are wide shut, I’m a sight to see, glimpses of me floating in geometry I reside between everything from a shadow to mathematical anomalies Religions speak of me atop the highest mountains they try and see, but I’m beyond beliefs Whether you know it or not, you’re all a part of me Who am I? |
06-16-2016, 08:27 AM | #2 |
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Oh shit I didn't kno there was gonna be a quiz at the end LOL
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06-16-2016, 11:45 AM | #3 |
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are you math or science? im on my lunchbreak and only skimmed
isotope/microscope is an ill rhyme though i fucks with it pretty sure @MMLP will like some of this i'll check back when ive more time
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07-29-2016, 01:56 AM | #4 |
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This was pretty sick, I enjoyed the whole violet toned kaleidoscopes
the whole transit is transient & transmit idea is very smooth. Im too otherworldly at this moment to consider the answer to the question. but once I mullet over I will get back to it. a hidden gem with many gems mixed between the lines. nice work.
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04-01-2024, 10:49 PM | #5 |
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The answer was God
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04-02-2024, 02:33 AM | #6 |
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