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08-24-2014, 08:57 PM
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pharaohsarmy52 vs jilti - JILTI WINS
10 lines due tuesday
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08-24-2014, 09:06 PM
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08-25-2014, 07:11 PM
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you were an up n coming rapper 'till i up n fucking smacked you.
You are nothing special so this Jus' another battle. what didju do last night?- yep i guessed it you fucked another faggot.. i've broken your nose, with an orderly flow. i introduced myself to yer girl by poking 'er throat. this thread is open for votes but you're hoping it's closed. nowhere here am i joking yo you're silly. jilti you be softer than a "quiltie", ..n if i mispronounced your name, i don't feel guilty. |
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08-27-2014, 02:59 AM
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wtf was that shit?^^ now i have to match the wackness
Freestyle was garbage, meanwhile we'd Pay to have it tossed back in im the captain, all hands on deck. i'll just smack him stand tall and get this action like the sixth man at practice hit the canvas. lights out before Midnight Passes and it's what ur girl does whenever i sit by that bitch this a quick verse to Beat the Deadline but i wont need to, since u already brought it 10 times only got a minute to post, so here's the closing last key leave him sad and weak. cuz when I give Pharrell, he won't be Happy |
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08-27-2014, 01:40 PM
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jilt got this easy
other dude had nada jiltis opener was enough to win v/j
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09-01-2014, 07:06 PM
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I get that Jilti mentioned this was a quick key for deadline sakes, but it still wasn't a good verse from neither combatant IMO.
Bar 1: PHARAOH Pharoah took this opener. I felt it flowed better, was funny, and was a good way to open yet Jilt's didn't flow as well and didn't really land or entertain to me. But neither bar was solid at all IMO. Bar 2: JILT Jilt took it easily. He had a decent metaphor that connected enough but Pharaoh just had a line devoid of any cleverness or originality, and the flow was ok but not enough to make up for it. Bar 3: Jilt took bar 3 cuz Pharaoh's was clearly very very primitive. a And that's disappointing. Jilt had a funny line that was simple but effective and flowed well. Bar 4: Was waaaay too simple for Pharaoh. So even though Jilti didn't go hard and had a very basic and simplistic line it was still enough to beat Pharaoh here. Bar 5: Not a fan of either line but Jilt took the closer clearly. V/ JILTI
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09-10-2014, 04:12 PM
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09-12-2014, 10:15 AM
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IMO pharaohsarmy52 slapped him silly, and he didn't respond as a drunken ninja would.
/v pharaohsarmy52
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09-12-2014, 11:27 AM
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you were an up n coming rapper 'till i up n fucking smacked you.
You are nothing special so this Jus' another battle. what didju do last night?- yep i guessed it you fucked another faggot.. i've broken your nose, with an orderly flow. i introduced myself to yer girl by poking 'er throat. this thread is open for votes but you're hoping it's closed. nowhere here am i joking yo you're silly. jilti you be softer than a "quiltie", ..n if i mispronounced your name, i don't feel guilty. first bar was a blant statement if i ever seen 1 2dnd bar didnt even rhyme 3rd bar had an alright flow but nothing hit no wordplay or anything no punchline just a statement closer was pretty sad quiltie is not a good line and you seid if u mispronunced his name u dont feel guilty ok thats nice to know feels like u just concentrated on flowin wtf was that shit?^^ now i have to match the wackness Freestyle was garbage, meanwhile we'd Pay to have it tossed back in im the captain, all hands on deck. i'll just smack him stand tall and get this action like the sixth man at practice hit the canvas. lights out before Midnight Passes and it's what ur girl does whenever i sit by that bitch this a quick verse to Beat the Deadline but i wont need to, since u already brought it 10 times only got a minute to post, so here's the closing last key leave him sad and weak. cuz when I give Pharrell, he won't be Happy first bar was alright 2nd bar was nice i was feelin it with the flow too 3rd was ehhh midnight passes 4th was cool and last bar was weak could of came harder but it hink u already knew u got it didnt need to do much v/ jilti |
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