06-11-2018, 08:54 AM | #1 |
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WK 6: 2tripple0 0-1 vs. Cereal 0-0 - Cereal WINS!!
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Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ FAILURE TO VOTE ON 3 BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON 3 BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE! THERE’S BEEN A LOT OF COMPLAINTS ABOUT VOTING RECENTLY, IF THERE IS SOMEONE WHO YOU DON’T WANT TO VOTE IN YOUR BATTLE YOU MUST STATE THEIR NAME IN YOUR CHECK IN. IF IT’S A CRAZY AMOUNT OF PEOPLE THEN SORRY YOU’RE JUST A BITCH AND ALL VOTES WILL COUNT. AS PER INCREDIBLE @2tripple0 @Cereal |
06-11-2018, 07:13 PM | #2 |
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checkin in
http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=128216 http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=128215 http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=128219 http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=128220 http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=128217 http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=128218 Last edited by Cereal; 06-18-2018 at 04:34 AM. |
06-11-2018, 11:21 PM | #3 |
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Topic: 2tripple0
i paged this nigger once like yo.. except i never hada pager.. instead a print fell out reading, 0 tripple found the police in-between red is incorrect and turning blue is my major eagh i erase yah, at this dogs front door step with a rock lighter then a general crossover ..i am willing to build him a home of shit, just to scream fire when i kick it over this flunky aint ish but biodegradable passages.. i would take this further, but sonning kids ended at SOLO jobs from this oversized pasanger.. beep i need an L, like i need a hole in my head, a hole in a phone and airport security speakerbox's giving this nigger a chance to press.. i got your tripple it has a drizzle of what for.. i only bye bye love so tell Meleana this tit is even damaging the floor.. for sure, im board but not with this live wire tongue kissing my anus taste.. ..spitting so much heat i had to retire my Lebron James jersey.. if the world was this big and a wall was a walrus.. this kid would be all net like the side of building -reading- "donald trump rejects with a purpose" Last edited by Cereal; 06-11-2018 at 11:29 PM. |
06-13-2018, 01:49 PM | #4 |
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Yo you suck why am i even wasting a verse im not trying to diss
But do you know what this battles about cereal im pushing in week 2 like taking a piss Nah you aint shit or maybe not and aint no one really care Whatever this is the battle maybe i didnt drop enough punchlines 2 still put it up in the air You aint know why those last two bars killed this battle Can he do it again this a true champ er sumn trying to get down ypu aint even foul Whoops man whatever thought we was boys I guess thats what this competitive shit gets you who cares who lost you aint even nothing i enjoy Dont you get how much this battle in the fucking battle arena league means to me You aint ill i beat you cause yo im about to travel at sea...
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06-15-2018, 08:43 PM | #5 |
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Close, kind of. Cereal was more consistent but, it did come off as a little confusing and weak. The only line I kind of liked from triple is "But do you know what this battles about cereal im pushing in week 2 like taking a piss"
v/ Cereal
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06-15-2018, 09:00 PM | #6 |
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2trip did 2trip... the inner monologue battle against himself.
You're about to beat him because ur about to travel at sea, huh? Keep at it. Cereal was kind of all over the place. It was hard to follow what he was trying to say, but I'ma edge it to him for better attempts. v/ cereal |
06-16-2018, 10:29 PM | #7 |
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Nothing honestly on Trip verse to quote, he just wrote a key style with no punches or jabs....
Props to cereal, I couldn't understand your verse clear but you some ok ish, just need to get use to the format of how the bars are structure cause It look like some shit didn't rhyme. V-Cereal
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06-17-2018, 12:49 PM | #8 |
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what the fuck was this?
cereal was beyond awful, future reference, saying nigger doesn't make your verse more appealing IMO. 2trip was garbage...but he gets my vote. Nothing to quote from either. Incred should just toss this battle in the garbage and give both L's and a boot from the league. |
06-17-2018, 01:12 PM | #9 |
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Absolutely demolished @ nigger
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06-17-2018, 01:27 PM | #10 |
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Cereal came out the gate saying nigger for no reason. Smh what is going on. Anyways opener missed imo - didn’t really make sense. Next you had the fire and kick it over bar. I can kinda see some direction but you had a bunch of phrases that didn’t really mean anything. Pasanger bar didn’t really make sense. Had some direction but you’re just throwing phrases together.
Next line was saying nigger again amongst a lot of obscure phrases. Next line was obscurity without the n word. LeBron James line was pretty gay to me. He heat jersey part was fine but the setup was just too gay. Closer didn’t make sense. 2trip came out with an opener that was just a statement bar. Same as the next, but at least they made some sort of sense. Next bar starts to slide into obscurity. Back to the statement bars with the next bar. Travel the sea made me laugh. Not in a good way but I guess that counts for something. I’m giving this battle to 2trip. Both got some work to do and need to hone in their craft. 2trip didn’t land any punch imo but cereal was saying stuff that’s worse than missing a punch. Like if you use a point system, trip was missing and getting zeros while cereal was saying crazy stuff that gets negative points. Cereal, a random nigga saying nigger behind a computer screen doesn’t really bother me but there’s no way I’m giving you points for that. Plus you had a really gay line. 2trip you could be a lot better if you gave a damn. I’m sure I spent more time on this breakdown than you did in your verse. Somehow I think you took this battle though. Mvgt 2trip Last edited by Jabari Black; 06-17-2018 at 01:35 PM. |
06-17-2018, 11:59 PM | #11 |
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4-2
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06-18-2018, 03:58 AM | #12 |
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Neither deserve to win. 2trip i commend your ability to after several years continue with your method despite it never providing dividends. However you really have no excuse not to have figured this out even slightly yet. An @Incredible wall of shame going to be packed this week.
Cereal i give you benefit of doubt that your actually a new face an shouldny be judged as harshly as 2crip. So if incredible wont let me vote draw you can have my vote. Although there is nothing notable here whatsoever |
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