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Let's vote nicely..and done.. Let's go!
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Yo yo yo
I got mine |
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You’re walking a fine line, rock the boat and you will be capsized.
‘Cause with his bars, I don’t ‘see any original Sin’, I got the whole community baptized. And still if ‘Cog’s mob comes around, I’m getting rid of Sin’s like a parish priest. I’ll ‘burn Sina’ with lines’ like he committed heresy. He Raps like an insane zealot, so he’ll get part of the tools flame. ‘The stick sends a round to this screwball’ like the start of a pool game. I’ll fucking ‘shoot 8’ then this foe is done. I’ll make sure to ‘put the 9 in my pocket’ so you know that Dope just won. I’ll be cold n blunt, consider stopping, you rather should. Because the definition of Sin’ literally is a lack of good. |
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You don't get vagina; I got the apple juice..you got the floopie, queering kid
Your bars are like your sex life; if you 'make a splash on the net'..you're probably not getting pussy, period When it comes to your raps; I have to 'give you Cred' your a loser, idol When it comes to rhymes; you have 'no bars'..like a unicycle.. Yeah I watch anime; and my sword will slice this whore twice You think your giving out 1000 cuts? But I'll give you more 'Death Notes' than Ryuk being bored twice Your 20 years old? No wonder I'm about to slice you in duels At the end of 'Engine's All Go' the Mystery is why your parents don't drag you from a car to your school.. Angels love me; they tell me they love my bars with my words mate Funny, how I haven't used 'one name flip' but this blasphemous idiot would probably 'flip shit for Sin' in the first place... Lol...niice..
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Someone open this for votes already
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@bleak @Incredible umm hello mods?
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clearly no one can do there job here, I smoked his boots someone vote n make it official
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You couldn’t smoke a joint little kid..lmao..I thought I win..
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Original sin was an okay idea with less than stellar execution
Not a fan of most partial name flips. Burn Sina was crazy basic The setup on screwball is worded terribly, but the punch is good I get the extended pool scheme and like that you're going for something, but nine in your pocket wasn't much of a punch. Okay wp, swaggy, but lacking sting Definition of sin is an okay idea but this verse was almost all sin flips already Aight gawd I love the setup but the punch is a little awkward Setup was mad awkward and punch was mad basic, appreciate that you mentioned cred (I know this is around that battle cred won) but there's not much of a connection/punch in a reference The rhyme really lame... Whore twice/bored twice... But after that death by 1000 cuts meltdown Im cool with this bar I outright don't get the engine all go thing That closer is my lotb after the verse that was 60% sin flips I legit have sin with the closer being lotb. DMS got lazy with this one and sinacog thought his concepts out For real V/Sinacog |
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