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Old 07-22-2019, 08:34 PM   #1
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    JULY 27TH, 2019 @ 11:59 PM PST.
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AKA Ryan AKA Steals my concepts AKA Bitch made.

faggot u been a fan of me, stealin concepts is screwed an sick
my bars only look Familia cuz u scroll thru my archives findin shit u relate too & flip
Zelph fuckin annihilated ur career, now txt is a waste in ur life
moment 'Lip Waxed' u he ripped all of ur credibility clean off the face of the site
acouple days after i killed ya, i fucked ya girl & worked her mean
while 'Ryan Hurst" goin to the funeral im 'Laying Pipe' till the box a murder scene
i'll do a drive-by on ya crews spot, uzi leavin ya set ugly
Gangrel w/ the cup, wen i let it spit out in ya crowd everyones left bloody
ur slut direct message me to fuck, comes home w/ beat cheeks
she Stadiuming me & my sex game gets VIP Box while urs get nose bleed seats
walk up on u & spray the heat in ur torso, gun wreckin ya image
u aint a Piggy Bank but ur gut'll change around wen i drop sum metal in it
every chick at the strip club can tell u homo...dudes a scrub
them sluts knew Ewer a faggot & they wouldn't bother showin u there jugs
& ur moms a homeless druggy, hoeing it up hard for a rock
aint no Life Guard but she couch surfs till High Waves got her givin CPR to a cock
ur pimp games weak faggot, girls rather take the dike route
should change ya name to Nolan, Ryan every time u pitch a line u strike out


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I treat all my verses like its my last then i'll work the lead
every bar i spit Vitiligo off w/ heat till theres patches of ya skin burnt to shreds

smh… guys,


when you see a GOD AWFUL wordplay, a line so bad ur head shakes & spins
there’s a 99% chance you can ‘call it A. Knight’.. like girls do an hour into dates w/ him
Al your HOF accomps are laughable, real talk man your rappin is weak
i ‘looked into those records’ & find it Audits a buncha shitty verses that are Taxin’ to read
it’s your coke or your life bitch. that’s my demand & it’s well in reason
give up the drugs or i’ll have the ‘Chopper Drop you Over some White’ no Heli-Skiin’
Body smashed you! i didn’t know you had riders that empowered you
but after that ShamWowww - that’s proof you got more Rings then the Towels do
gun in hand & one on the hip...two nines gaurentees you bleed tonight
first one jams, the ‘Side Piece is Up in your Grill’ screamin you should leave ya wife
this loser needs drugs to get laid, he’s droppin roofies every forty minutes
it should come as no a surprise any girl Allays was ‘put to rest’ before he hit it
& your fiancé’s a slut homie. can’t call your relationships the stable type
she sees other men & Takes the Ring-Off so fast Clorox branding it a table wipe
on your front lawn calling you out, weapon in hand pussy tonight it’s death
if u won't come outside – One-Click i’ll let it ‘Ring on Your Front Door’ w/ another type a Tech
just keep your mouth shut faggit. don't even try flossin’ in here
anything you Recital prove when putting on a show you come across as a queer

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faggot u been a fan of me, stealin concepts is screwed an sick
my bars only look Familia cuz u scroll thru my archives findin shit u relate too & flip

Cool angle, but unless I'm missing something, I don't see any relationship between "familia" and "flip". This bar probably would've been stronger if you just left that part off altogether. 7/10

Zelph fuckin annihilated ur career, now txt is a waste in ur life
moment 'Lip Waxed' u he ripped all of ur credibility clean off the face of the site

Someone might dock you for using a lip bar but I liked this one. 8/10

acouple days after i killed ya, i fucked ya girl & worked her mean
while 'Ryan Hurst" goin to the funeral im 'Laying Pipe' till the box a murder scene

Nitpicking here, you're calling a room a "box" which is a bit of a reach. Other than that, this is a solid jab. 7.5/10

i'll do a drive-by on ya crews spot, uzi leavin ya set ugly
Gangrel w/ the cup, wen i let it spit out in ya crowd everyones left bloody

eh it's ok, it feels a bit simple and syntactically it falls apart in two spots. 6/10

ur slut direct message me to fuck, comes home w/ beat cheeks
she Stadiuming me & my sex game gets VIP Box while urs get nose bleed seats

eh, also ok. Stadiuming isn't a word and im not sure what nose bleed seats is supposed to be representing in this "DM'ing me for sex" scenario unless you're implying that she sits on his face during her period, which is really cringe. 7/10

walk up on u & spray the heat in ur torso, gun wreckin ya image
u aint a Piggy Bank but ur gut'll change around wen i drop sum metal in it

I like the idea, but the wording doesn't hold up. Saying I have a piggy bank and its "gut change around" isn't a coherent way of saying a piggy bank has change in it's gut. 7/10

every chick at the strip club can tell u homo...dudes a scrub
them sluts knew Ewer a faggot & they wouldn't bother showin u there jugs

wp is okay, but again the wording just falls apart syntactically. There's two implied meanings to every punchline, on one side of this you're calling your opponent a fag, which is fine. Then there's the other side here where you're calling an ewer, an inanimate jug, a fag and that just doesn't make sense. 6/10

& ur moms a homeless druggy, hoeing it up hard for a rock
aint no Life Guard but she couch surfs till High Waves got her givin CPR to a cock

this is dope, funny. 8.5/10

ur pimp games weak faggot, girls rather take the dike route
should change ya name to Nolan, Ryan every time u pitch a line u strike out

I think you could've done something more with "Nolan" to make this stronger, but this is solid. 7.5/10



when you see a GOD AWFUL wordplay, a line so bad ur head shakes & spins
there’s a 99% chance you can ‘call it A. Knight’.. like girls do an hour into dates w/ him

Nah not feeling this. I'm sure the general "a night/a knight" play has been done plenty of times and the overall angle didn't feel fresh or complex enough for me to ignore that. 6/10

Al your HOF accomps are laughable, real talk man your rappin is weak
i ‘looked into those records’ & find it Audits a buncha shitty verses that are Taxin’ to read

this doesn't come off crazy smooth, but it just barely works syntactically. The idea is cool, but I think this should hit harder in theory than it actually does. It's still a solid jab imo. 8/10

it’s your coke or your life bitch. that’s my demand & it’s well in reason
give up the drugs or i’ll have the ‘Chopper Drop you Over some White’ no Heli-Skiin’

I've seen a lot of chopper/helicopter bars and this one doesn't feel innovative enough. I also don't like the idea of referring to "Snow" as just "white". 7.5/10

Body smashed you! i didn’t know you had riders that empowered you
but after that ShamWowww - that’s proof you got more Rings then the Towels do

I like the general idea. I've never owned a shamwow, but to my understanding they don't have rings on them. You can say you'll "ring them out" but that doesn't mean the same thing as "having rings". I think you could've executed that part better. 7/10

gun in hand & one on the hip...two nines gaurentees you bleed tonight
first one jams, the ‘Side Piece is Up in your Grill’ screamin you should leave ya wife

this is cool, I think I like the wording more than the actual concept. 7.5/10

this loser needs drugs to get laid, he’s droppin roofies every forty minutes
it should come as no a surprise any girl Allays was ‘put to rest’ before he hit it

Phonetically this just doesn't have the right emphasis on "Al" to make the wp work. Overall it's ok. 7/10

& your fiancé’s a slut homie. can’t call your relationships the stable type
she sees other men & Takes the Ring-Off so fast Clorox branding it a table wipe

This one's dope. Still think you could've done just a bit more with it, but no other complaints. 8.5/10

on your front lawn calling you out, weapon in hand pussy tonight it’s death
if u won't come outside – One-Click i’ll let it ‘Ring on Your Front Door’ w/ another type a Tech

eh to be honest im not seeing the implied meaning unless it's just a doorbell which kinda seems kinda simplified to me. Also, like 3 out of your 5 last bars have been different types of rings. At least the wedding ring bar wasn't a gunplay, but I think you could spread them throughout the verse more. 7/10

just keep your mouth shut faggit. don't even try flossin’ in here
anything you Recital prove when putting on a show you come across as a queer

Nah I'm not really digging this syntactically and I feel like the wording could've been better either way. 6.5/10

top bars from AK

lipwaxed
CPR

top from BB

audits
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overall it's neck & neck to me but i got


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Answer seemingly didn’t get familiar / familia / relate. I got you, bruh. It was good, mostly wording wise rather than conceptually or anything, but I liked it.

Lip Waxed was made better because of the face of the site tie-in. Again, the wording made this sound better than I felt it was conceptually. Good shit.

I don’t get the Ryan Hurst thing to be honest, I get that Ryan is his first name and you’re going for Hurst/hearse which isn’t clean to me in my accent but I can see what you’re hinting at. No idea who RH is for the laying pipe tie-in but I think I can get the gist without caring to google it.

I wasn’t a big fan of the Gangrel line in truth

LMFAO @ how bad Stadiumming/ stay DMing me is. That is one horrible as fuck reach to me personally, bruh. I can’t look past it. Legit garbage juice lolololol

I’ve seen similar to the piggy bank / metal in its stomach before tbh so conceptually it wasn’t that fresh to me, wording wise it lacked some of that AK aggression we love IMO. I liked it, still, just wasn’t mind blowing or anything.

I thought Ewer was solid, not seen the play before and I liked what you did with the line. It’s simple, direct and straight to the point.

I wasn’t such a fan of the homeless druggy mom line, especially following the last one. All the tie-ins were there, maybe too many for me in truth, it felt like you attempted to do too much with and the payoff wasn’t all that great (to me)

I wasn’t feeling the comma between Nolan and Ryan in the closer, I find it really odd that people do that in text to be honest, to me it’s like you’re really reaching hard for the concept. I dunno. Maybe these other dudes will like it, but it’s not for me. It’s one of those lines that only really works in text IMO


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lmao Blue beginning right where I left over with AK on ‘lines that sound weird when read aloud”. I don’t say “call it a night,” with a hard A sound in there. It also only works if (to me) if his name was A Knight and not Allen. I like it conceptually, just not so much in its execution. It could just be me being nitpicky, but I hold everyone to my ridiculously high standards and that’s one thing
I can’t look past here

Audits/odd it’s doesnt work in my accent but I can see it in yours. I’ll give you that one.

I fucked with heli-skiing tbh, it’s a bit of an obscure one (to me) but I liked it enough.

I don’t get Shamwow and don’t feel like googling it. At least that evens out the one I didn’t get by AK to keep the scores clean and even here.

Side piece in your grill reminded me of Jabari’s “loyal friend” somewhat wording wise but I liked this one even though I’ve seen side piece and grill stuff done before, the wording made it feel fresher I guess.

Allays was a bit of a miss to me in truth, again it could be one of those text lines that don’t work well enough when sounded out for me to enjoy as much as some people might do. I can kind of see it, but it’s not my thing.

Takes the rings off was fire, not seen that concept done before. I’d have probably worded the second half of the line different to “branded them as table wipes” but I won’t dwell on that here - this was nice.

Not feeling the tech line, wording wise it had too much going on with associative words and the end meant it didn’t land with any real sting (for me). Especially following the last line, maybe it caused this one to lose some of its impact given how clean the couplet before it felt. I dunno. It wasn’t bad, just lacked some zing to it maybe?

I’ve seen recital / recite’ll done before. This one wasn’t bad but wasn’t great, it just felt a bit flat to me in truth - especially as a closing line. I’d have expected more of an ATTACK from the master of attack lines. Lol. Again, it was decent enough, just seemed like a kind of BB throwaway type line to me in truth. That’s it.


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faggot u been a fan of me, stealin concepts is screwed an sick
my bars only look Familia cuz u scroll thru my archives findin shit u relate too & flip
Okay coolish..
Zelph fuckin annihilated ur career, now txt is a waste in ur life
moment 'Lip Waxed' u he ripped all of ur credibility clean off the face of the site
Lip is already played at this point
acouple days after i killed ya, i fucked ya girl & worked her mean
while 'Ryan Hurst" goin to the funeral im 'Laying Pipe' till the box a murder scene
I wanted to like it
i'll do a drive-by on ya crews spot, uzi leavin ya set ugly
Gangrel w/ the cup, wen i let it spit out in ya crowd everyones left bloody
a Gangrel reference man, I forgot all about him I appreciate the reference.. the punch is cool
ur slut direct message me to fuck, comes home w/ beat cheeks
she Stadiuming me & my sex game gets VIP Box while urs get nose bleed seats
what's Stadiumming? explain this
walk up on u & spray the heat in ur torso, gun wreckin ya image
u aint a Piggy Bank but ur gut'll change around wen i drop sum metal in it
alright alright.. predictable though
every chick at the strip club can tell u homo...dudes a scrub
them sluts knew Ewer a faggot & they wouldn't bother showin u there jugs
I'm not a fan of wordplay with weak tie-ins it's lazy but this was alright
& ur moms a homeless druggy, hoeing it up hard for a rock
aint no Life Guard but she couch surfs till High Waves got her givin CPR to a cock
awful.. you tried though
ur pimp games weak faggot, girls rather take the dike route
should change ya name to Nolan, Ryan every time u pitch a line u strike out
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when you see a GOD AWFUL wordplay, a line so bad ur head shakes & spins
there’s a 99% chance you can ‘call it A. Knight’.. like girls do an hour into dates w/ him
cute
Al your HOF accomps are laughable, real talk man your rappin is weak
i ‘looked into those records’ & find it Audits a buncha shitty verses that are Taxin’ to read
I mean it's okay. This is an AK type of bar but done decently
it’s your coke or your life bitch. that’s my demand & it’s well in reason
give up the drugs or i’ll have the ‘Chopper Drop you Over some White’ no Heli-Skiin’
nice
Body smashed you! i didn’t know you had riders that empowered you
but after that ShamWowww - that’s proof you got more Rings then the Towels do
like a voter ring? like voting circles? Shamwow is corny wp
gun in hand & one on the hip...two nines gaurentees you bleed tonight
first one jams, the ‘Side Piece is Up in your Grill’ screamin you should leave ya wife
nice.. would've been better like "the side piece is in up in your grill" forcing you to leave your wife
this loser needs drugs to get laid, he’s droppin roofies every forty minutes
it should come as no a surprise any girl Allays was ‘put to rest’ before he hit it
it's UH LAYS here in my accent but I wont knock it.. this is another AK type bar though, not feeling
& your fiancé’s a slut homie. can’t call your relationships the stable type
she sees other men & Takes the Ring-Off so fast Clorox branding it a table wipe
come on man.. what is this? it's lazy
on your front lawn calling you out, weapon in hand pussy tonight it’s death
if u won't come outside – One-Click i’ll let it ‘Ring on Your Front Door’ w/ another type a Tech
PREDICTABLE
just keep your mouth shut faggit. don't even try flossin’ in here
anything you Recital prove when putting on a show you come across as a queer
terrible



This battle was underwhelming.. AK was himself with the wordplays and weak tie-ins and blue tried to be Allen. Egh, I'm mad I wasted my time voting on this. This is the Semi-Finals and this is what you guys pull. Side Piece and Heli -Skiin win this for me... It's a lot closer than I thought and
I was going to do a numbers break down so I can be objective as possible but looking back at the Stadium bar I think that might be the worst thing I've seen.


MVGT Blue.



To be clear if the verses are wack next round I'm definitely not voting.
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AKA Ryan AKA Steals my concepts AKA Bitch made.

faggot u been a fan of me, stealin concepts is screwed an sick
my bars only look Familia cuz u scroll thru my archives findin shit u relate too & flip

fire

Zelph fuckin annihilated ur career, now txt is a waste in ur life
moment 'Lip Waxed' u he ripped all of ur credibility clean off the face of the site

I like the clean carryover...subtle

acouple days after i killed ya, i fucked ya girl & worked her mean
while 'Ryan Hurst" goin to the funeral im 'Laying Pipe' till the box a murder scene

idk wtf this is. I googled it even. I guess hes in walking dead. maybe this is from an episode? wack

i'll do a drive-by on ya crews spot, uzi leavin ya set ugly
Gangrel w/ the cup, wen i let it spit out in ya crowd everyones left bloody

gone at gangrel lol...this was light

ur slut direct message me to fuck, comes home w/ beat cheeks
she Stadiuming me & my sex game gets VIP Box while urs get nose bleed seats

ehhhh lmao

walk up on u & spray the heat in ur torso, gun wreckin ya image
u aint a Piggy Bank but ur gut'll change around wen i drop sum metal in it

wordings off

every chick at the strip club can tell u homo...dudes a scrub
them sluts knew Ewer a faggot & they wouldn't bother showin u there jugs

u wasted ur one google on ryan hurst sorry

& ur moms a homeless druggy, hoeing it up hard for a rock
aint no Life Guard but she couch surfs till High Waves got her givin CPR to a cock

LMAO gone

ur pimp games weak faggot, girls rather take the dike route
should change ya name to Nolan, Ryan every time u pitch a line u strike out

ok


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smh… guys,


when you see a GOD AWFUL wordplay, a line so bad ur head shakes & spins
there’s a 99% chance you can ‘call it A. Knight’.. like girls do an hour into dates w/ him

played, boring

Al your HOF accomps are laughable, real talk man your rappin is weak
i ‘looked into those records’ & find it Audits a buncha shitty verses that are Taxin’ to read

awdits. audits and taxing correlation played regardless of phonetic discrepancy.

it’s your coke or your life bitch. that’s my demand & it’s well in reason
give up the drugs or i’ll have the ‘Chopper Drop you Over some White’ no Heli-Skiin’

knock it off

Body smashed you! i didn’t know you had riders that empowered you
but after that ShamWowww - that’s proof you got more Rings then the Towels do

like....ringing them out I guess? when last time u were discussing a towels durability and considered its ringability? GOT ABOUT 347 RINGS TO IT. im not gonna stand for this shit.

gun in hand & one on the hip...two nines gaurentees you bleed tonight
first one jams, the ‘Side Piece is Up in your Grill’ screamin you should leave ya wife

side piece is the only actual flip an leave ur girl is too blunt to make this pop

this loser needs drugs to get laid, he’s droppin roofies every forty minutes
it should come as no a surprise any girl Allays was ‘put to rest’ before he hit it

how u make fun of vitiligo and use the word allay

& your fiancé’s a slut homie. can’t call your relationships the stable type
she sees other men & Takes the Ring-Off so fast Clorox branding it a table wipe

another fuckin ring flip might stop reading tbh

on your front lawn calling you out, weapon in hand pussy tonight it’s death
if u won't come outside – One-Click i’ll let it ‘Ring on Your Front Door’ w/ another type a Tech

LMFAO am I being trolled?

just keep your mouth shut faggit. don't even try flossin’ in here
anything you Recital prove when putting on a show you come across as a queer

one of ur better bars but the flip was too obvious again and not funny to me

18.
thought this battle was pretty not good. allen had a wider array of creativity and conceptual exploration while blue had some old ideas either worded too obviously or meticulous to the point of mundaneness.. blue had a couple that might qualify as having landed but allen had more and they were cleaner

v ak
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AKA Ryan AKA Steals my concepts AKA Bitch made.

faggot u been a fan of me, stealin concepts is screwed an sick
my bars only look Familia cuz u scroll thru my archives findin shit u relate too & flip... lol no don’t even sound similar . It’s like audios /adios to me . Just no
Zelph fuckin annihilated ur career, now txt is a waste in ur life
moment 'Lip Waxed' u he ripped all of ur credibility clean off the face of the site
.. nice
acouple days after i killed ya, i fucked ya girl & worked her mean
while 'Ryan Hurst" goin to the funeral im 'Laying Pipe' till the box a murder scene
... sorry don’t know who that is
i'll do a drive-by on ya crews spot, uzi leavin ya set ugly
Gangrel w/ the cup, wen i let it spit out in ya crowd everyones left bloody
.... fire
ur slut direct message me to fuck, comes home w/ beat cheeks
she Stadiuming me & my sex game gets VIP Box while urs get nose bleed seats
... ok
walk up on u & spray the heat in ur torso, gun wreckin ya image
u aint a Piggy Bank but ur gut'll change around wen i drop sum metal in it
... dope . Never saw it done like this
every chick at the strip club can tell u homo...dudes a scrub
them sluts knew Ewer a faggot & they wouldn't bother showin u there jugs
... yeah I don’t watch tv
& ur moms a homeless druggy, hoeing it up hard for a rock
aint no Life Guard but she couch surfs till High Waves got her givin CPR to a cock
... don’t get it
ur pimp games weak faggot, girls rather take the dike route
should change ya name to Nolan, Ryan every time u pitch a line u strike out
... nah


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smh… guys,


when you see a GOD AWFUL wordplay, a line so bad ur head shakes & spins
there’s a 99% chance you can ‘call it A. Knight’.. like girls do an hour into dates w/ him
... ok
Al your HOF accomps are laughable, real talk man your rappin is weak
i ‘looked into those records’ & find it Audits a buncha shitty verses that are Taxin’ to read
... don’t get how the audits wp is supposed to work
it’s your coke or your life bitch. that’s my demand & it’s well in reason
give up the drugs or i’ll have the ‘Chopper Drop you Over some White’ no Heli-Skiin’
... ok I guess
Body smashed you! i didn’t know you had riders that empowered you
but after that ShamWowww - that’s proof you got more Rings then the Towels do
... like to ring it out over and over ? Not feeling
gun in hand & one on the hip...two nines gaurentees you bleed tonight
first one jams, the ‘Side Piece is Up in your Grill’ screamin you should leave ya wife
.... lol simple but funny
this loser needs drugs to get laid, he’s droppin roofies every forty minutes
it should come as no a surprise any girl Allays was ‘put to rest’ before he hit it
.... huh
& your fiancé’s a slut homie. can’t call your relationships the stable type
she sees other men & Takes the Ring-Off so fast Clorox branding it a table wipe
... ok
on your front lawn calling you out, weapon in hand pussy tonight it’s death
if u won't come outside – One-Click i’ll let it ‘Ring on Your Front Door’ w/ another type a Tech
... huh
just keep your mouth shut faggit. don't even try flossin’ in here
anything you Recital prove when putting on a show you come across as a queer
.... um ok

18.

A lot of wp here . Basically what I expected . A lot of references I didn’t get as well



To me it comes down to the best line which for me was the gangrel joint


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AKA Ryan AKA Steals my concepts AKA Bitch made.

faggot u been a fan of me, stealin concepts is screwed an sick
my bars only look Familia cuz u scroll thru my archives findin shit u relate too & flip

dope

Zelph fuckin annihilated ur career, now txt is a waste in ur life
moment 'Lip Waxed' u he ripped all of ur credibility clean off the face of the site

dope


acouple days after i killed ya, i fucked ya girl & worked her mean
while 'Ryan Hurst" goin to the funeral im 'Laying Pipe' till the box a murder scene

nope - no idea

i'll do a drive-by on ya crews spot, uzi leavin ya set ugly
Gangrel w/ the cup, wen i let it spit out in ya crowd everyones left bloody

dont get the reference again

ur slut direct message me to fuck, comes home w/ beat cheeks
she Stadiuming me & my sex game gets VIP Box while urs get nose bleed seats

tbh seems similar.to.the one before an also just feels a bit sport reference for sport reference sake. she stay dming ? she stay de umming me? im guessing thats a wordplay for stay dming? thats coo. i pronounce different but i get it. but the punch after lacklustre

walk up on u & spray the heat in ur torso, gun wreckin ya image
u aint a Piggy Bank but ur gut'll change around wen i drop sum metal in it

simple change concept but i enjoyed it regardless here

every chick at the strip club can tell u homo...dudes a scrub
them sluts knew Ewer a faggot & they wouldn't bother showin u there jugs

i dont get the reference but regardless cslling someone a faggot is meh even it it can be read another way

& ur moms a homeless druggy, hoeing it up hard for a rock
aint no Life Guard but she couch surfs till High Waves got her givin CPR to a cock

dope and lols

ur pimp games weak faggot, girls rather take the dike route
should change ya name to Nolan, Ryan every time u pitch a line u strike out
meh not a fan


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smh… guys,


when you see a GOD AWFUL wordplay, a line so bad ur head shakes & spins
there’s a 99% chance you can ‘call it A. Knight’.. like girls do an hour into dates w/ him

A/a... that aside its just too simple an weak for yhis level of the tourny.

Al your HOF accomps are laughable, real talk man your rappin is weak
i ‘looked into those records’ & find it Audits a buncha shitty verses that are Taxin’ to read

audits... audits... i am missing the wordplay here bro

it’s your coke or your life bitch. that’s my demand & it’s well in reason
give up the drugs or i’ll have the ‘Chopper Drop you Over some White’ no Heli-Skiin’
meeeh

Body smashed you! i didn’t know you had riders that empowered you
but after that ShamWowww - that’s proof you got more Rings then the Towels do
the actual.fuck is a shamwow lmao. a guess is a novelty towel thing. either or i dunno how i feel about this here

gun in hand & one on the hip...two nines gaurentees you bleed tonight
first one jams, the ‘Side Piece is Up in your Grill’ screamin you should leave ya wife
ok


this loser needs drugs to get laid, he’s droppin roofies every forty minutes
it should come as no a surprise any girl Allays was ‘put to rest’ before he hit it
allays to mean put down etc. clever nameflip

& your fiancé’s a slut homie. can’t call your relationships the stable type
she sees other men & Takes the Ring-Off so fast Clorox branding it a table wipe

this is total.dope..i dont know the brand but i dont need too. i feel it should be played it seems so simple when you think about it but ive never seen it done before.
enjoyed that one. dope



on your front lawn calling you out, weapon in hand pussy tonight it’s death
if u won't come outside – One-Click i’ll let it ‘Ring on Your Front Door’ w/ another type a Tech

that like the 3rd ring bar lol? are you on about a door bell? i dunno about this one bro


just keep your mouth shut faggit. don't even try flossin’ in here
anything you Recital prove when putting on a show you come across as a queer
meh

18.
on first read i thought i was voting blue but when i really broke it down by each bar its clear to me that i preferred aks. i missed a number of aks references but where i knew what he was on about he hit hard. i liked Allay and i really liked the ring off bar by blue but wasnt enough to take it for me.


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faggot u been a fan of me, stealin concepts is screwed an sick
my bars only look Familia cuz u scroll thru my archives findin shit u relate too & flip
I like it but the wording is a lil cluttered for me
Zelph fuckin annihilated ur career, now txt is a waste in ur life
moment 'Lip Waxed' u he ripped all of ur credibility clean off the face of the site
okay
acouple days after i killed ya, i fucked ya girl & worked her mean
while 'Ryan Hurst" goin to the funeral im 'Laying Pipe' till the box a murder scene
Ryan 'hearsed'? The flip is too awkward

Edit:googled it, hearsed is a word

i'll do a drive-by on ya crews spot, uzi leavin ya set ugly
Gangrel w/ the cup, wen i let it spit out in ya crowd everyones left bloody
lol. Dope
ur slut direct message me to fuck, comes home w/ beat cheeks
she Stadiuming me & my sex game gets VIP Box while urs get nose bleed seats
stay dmming/stadiuming? Not a fan tbh
walk up on u & spray the heat in ur torso, gun wreckin ya image
u aint a Piggy Bank but ur gut'll change around wen i drop sum metal in it
okay
every chick at the strip club can tell u homo...dudes a scrub
them sluts knew Ewer a faggot & they wouldn't bother showin u there jugs
had to google but okay
& ur moms a homeless druggy, hoeing it up hard for a rock
aint no Life Guard but she couch surfs till High Waves got her givin CPR to a cock
lol... Light tho
ur pimp games weak faggot, girls rather take the dike route
should change ya name to Nolan, Ryan every time u pitch a line u strike out
cool




when you see a GOD AWFUL wordplay, a line so bad ur head shakes & spins
there’s a 99% chance you can ‘call it A. Knight’.. like girls do an hour into dates w/ him
think I've seen this done almost exactly
Al your HOF accomps are laughable, real talk man your rappin is weak
i ‘looked into those records’ & find it Audits a buncha shitty verses that are Taxin’ to read
audits/odd it's barely works for me. Well constructed bar tho
it’s your coke or your life bitch. that’s my demand & it’s well in reason
give up the drugs or i’ll have the ‘Chopper Drop you Over some White’ no Heli-Skiin’
okay
Body smashed you! i didn’t know you had riders that empowered you
but after that ShamWowww - that’s proof you got more Rings then the Towels do
okay
gun in hand & one on the hip...two nines gaurentees you bleed tonight
first one jams, the ‘Side Piece is Up in your Grill’ screamin you should leave ya wife
funny but kinda light
this loser needs drugs to get laid, he’s droppin roofies every forty minutes
it should come as no a surprise any girl Allays was ‘put to rest’ before he hit it
stop making me Google stuff guys
& your fiancé’s a slut homie. can’t call your relationships the stable type
she sees other men & Takes the Ring-Off so fast Clorox branding it a table wipe
ring/cleaning rag twice in one verse? Better than shamwow
on your front lawn calling you out, weapon in hand pussy tonight it’s death
if u won't come outside – One-Click i’ll let it ‘Ring on Your Front Door’ w/ another type a Tech
ok but pls no more ring bars
just keep your mouth shut faggit. don't even try flossin’ in here
anything you Recital prove when putting on a show you come across as a queer
recite'll prove when putting is awkward to read


I'm torn with this one... Didn't particularly like either... Lemme come back to it

Highlights
Ak
Familiar
Gangrel
Nolan Ryan

Blue
Audit
Side piece
Front door

I'm torn, I got AK by the sliiiiiighest margin. Blue's call it A knight and closer outweighed stadiuming to me, but fuck, this I close

Honestly I'd vote tie if I could, but

V/AK
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