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Old 07-16-2019, 11:42 PM   #1
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Old 07-18-2019, 01:00 PM   #2
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Body vs the Fresh man.
or is it?


Punchline king vs amateur hour naaahh he cant stop me
When it comes to skills. like stage diving I got the upper hand on Body.
ur last win questionable.. sway much? lets inspect all those stupid votes..
gotta Check for every one for Body then pay mortgage to ur funeral home
line by line breakdown got voters stating.. "played". "whack". the fact is-
ya punchlines sooooo old. It could rival an ill-nika’s faceapp challenge
call a townhall 'n gather all witnesses for this faaks beheading
noose around ya neck. fresh oversees tieing the knot. destination wedding.
funny ya girl bears next to fresh I stay giving it hard
if she Bears next to Body. its delivered to the ICU with a sympathy card.

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Old 07-18-2019, 11:00 PM   #3
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Bum bitch.



U must a comedian. I got guns for sport. This nigga is st8 up soft & weak...
But all jokes aside,
If I see 'Jason Kidd on the block'...I'll shoot around & lift'em off his feet/
U know I'm surgical w/this bitch! Always down to give an imposter slugs...
Or I'll smash ur hands w/a hammer until ur 'wrist snap' like puttin on doctor gloves,
He couldn't pay me to fuck his slut. I bet the fat slob drools whenever son bake...
He let her sit on his face but I wouldn't 'liquor for the bread' if I was makin rumcake,
Scope w/ the long range. Hit his ass from blocks away w/o warnin & no sign...
I saw the bullet 'em split'em before it caught more hang time than a sheet dryin on a clothesline,
I wont just leave Jay Rock. It'll be a homi after y'all peep his body & the condition...
Cuz all we'll see is 'blood leakin from the Top Dawg' like a early copy of Redemption.
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Old 07-19-2019, 02:35 AM   #4
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Punchline king vs amateur hour naaahh he cant stop me
When it comes to skills. like stage diving I got the upper hand on Body.
Dope opener
ur last win questionable.. sway much? lets inspect all those stupid votes..
gotta Check for every one for Body then pay mortgage to ur funeral home
Another body play... not feeling as much as the last
line by line breakdown got voters stating.. "played". "whack". the fact is-
ya punchlines sooooo old. It could rival an ill-nika’s faceapp challenge
Coz Ill-nika’s been around for ages and the new face app challenge thing.. It’s not very creative imo, well worded but felt bland
call a townhall 'n gather all witnesses for this faaks beheading
noose around ya neck. fresh oversees tieing the knot. destination wedding.
That’s nice
funny ya girl bears next to fresh I stay giving it hard
if she Bears next to Body. its delivered to the ICU with a sympathy card.
Body play again but this is dope

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U must a comedian. I got guns for sport. This nigga is st8 up soft & weak...
But all jokes aside,
If I see 'Jason Kidd on the block'...I'll shoot around & lift'em off his feet/
Not feeling
U know I'm surgical w/this bitch! Always down to give an imposter slugs...
Or I'll smash ur hands w/a hammer until ur 'wrist snap' like puttin on doctor gloves,
Kinda obscure but I like it. Felt fresh
He couldn't pay me to fuck his slut. I bet the fat slob drools whenever son bake...
He let her sit on his face but I wouldn't 'liquor for the bread' if I was makin rumcake,
Lol.. but nah not really dude
Scope w/ the long range. Hit his ass from blocks away w/o warnin & no sign...
I saw the bullet 'em split'em before it caught more hang time than a sheet dryin on a clothesline,
Do not get it
I wont just leave Jay Rock. It'll be a homi after y'all peep his body & the condition...
Cuz all we'll see is 'blood leakin from the Top Dawg' like a early copy of Redemption.
Decent

I’ve seen body drop better. Although he was more creative I felt J was more effective. I got 3 from Jfresh that I really liked as opposed to 2 from body which were weaker imo.

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Old 07-20-2019, 07:35 PM   #5
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It’s cool to see Jayson Fresh back. Good competition. Opener was
tight. Probably my fav from your verse. Body had the doctors
gloves line which was pretty dope to me. I think Body had a few more
lines I thought were decent. Wasn’t feeling all the NPs by JF besides the
opener.

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Old 07-20-2019, 11:33 PM   #6
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Body vs the Fresh man.
or is it?


Punchline king vs amateur hour naaahh he cant stop me
When it comes to skills. like stage diving I got the upper hand on Body.
decent body flip
ur last win questionable.. sway much? lets inspect all those stupid votes..
gotta Check for every one for Body then pay mortgage to ur funeral home
well he wouldnt have to pay mortgage at a funeral home, i would let it slide but it's the punch
line by line breakdown got voters stating.. "played". "whack". the fact is-
ya punchlines sooooo old. It could rival an ill-nika’s faceapp challenge
nik hasn't been around so this feels really dated, although it is saved because the faceapp thing is new. idk anyone else old on this site, nik is tbe usual suspect when it comes to this.
call a townhall 'n gather all witnesses for this faaks beheading
noose around ya neck. fresh oversees tieing the knot. destination wedding.
ok took me a second but this is pretty dope, wording could be better but it always can.
funny ya girl bears next to fresh I stay giving it hard
if she Bears next to Body. its delivered to the ICU with a sympathy card.
another body flip, meh. Body has a lot of personals you could have dug up, would have liked to see you take advantage of that
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Bum bitch.



U must a comedian. I got guns for sport. This nigga is st8 up soft & weak...
But all jokes aside,
If I see 'Jason Kidd on the block'...I'll shoot around & lift'em off his feet/
the kid part could have been tied in better in the setup. w/o the tie in, something about his kids or w/e, it reads a bit awkward and sounds like you just chose a famous Jason and wrote basketball things.
U know I'm surgical w/this bitch! Always down to give an imposter slugs...
Or I'll smash ur hands w/a hammer until ur 'wrist snap' like puttin on doctor gloves,
fire
He couldn't pay me to fuck his slut. I bet the fat slob drools whenever son bake...
He let her sit on his face but I wouldn't 'liquor for the bread' if I was makin rumcake,
decent wordplay
Scope w/ the long range. Hit his ass from blocks away w/o warnin & no sign...
I saw the bullet 'em split'em before it caught more hang time than a sheet dryin on a clothesline,
a sheet on a clothesline gets about 6 feet of hangtime but i still like this. why does it say bullet em tho? Doesnt take anything away, might be a typo
I wont just leave Jay Rock. It'll be a homi after y'all peep his body & the condition...
Cuz all we'll see is 'blood leakin from the Top Dawg' like a early copy of Redemption.
ur calling him the top dawg but the tie ins are decent. punch was lacking, could have been more direct but decent.
Body takes it w/ that wrist snap shit over destination wedding
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Old 07-22-2019, 05:01 AM   #7
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Body vs the Fresh man.
or is it?


Punchline king vs amateur hour naaahh he cant stop me
When it comes to skills. like stage diving I got the upper hand on Body.
ur last win questionable.. sway much? lets inspect all those stupid votes..
gotta Check for every one for Body then pay mortgage to ur funeral home
line by line breakdown got voters stating.. "played". "whack". the fact is-
ya punchlines sooooo old. It could rival an ill-nika’s faceapp challenge
call a townhall 'n gather all witnesses for this faaks beheading
noose around ya neck. fresh oversees tieing the knot. destination wedding.
funny ya girl bears next to fresh I stay giving it hard
if she Bears next to Body. its delivered to the ICU with a sympathy card.
i liked stage diving, the wording on check body needed tweaking slightly but okay idea, i liked so old tbh, destination wedding is dope, bears next to the body i could kinda see but kinda not as well. mixed feelings about that one tbh.
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Old 07-22-2019, 05:02 AM   #8
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Bum bitch.



U must a comedian. I got guns for sport. This nigga is st8 up soft & weak...
But all jokes aside,
If I see 'Jason Kidd on the block'...I'll shoot around & lift'em off his feet/
U know I'm surgical w/this bitch! Always down to give an imposter slugs...
Or I'll smash ur hands w/a hammer until ur 'wrist snap' like puttin on doctor gloves,
He couldn't pay me to fuck his slut. I bet the fat slob drools whenever son bake...
He let her sit on his face but I wouldn't 'liquor for the bread' if I was makin rumcake,
Scope w/ the long range. Hit his ass from blocks away w/o warnin & no sign...
I saw the bullet 'em split'em before it caught more hang time than a sheet dryin on a clothesline,
I wont just leave Jay Rock. It'll be a homi after y'all peep his body & the condition...
Cuz all we'll see is 'blood leakin from the Top Dawg' like a early copy of Redemption.
not to keen on Kidd, wrist snap doctor gloves was okay, rum cake was okay conceptually but worded weird to me. clothesline was way too wordy and convoluted. Redemption okay.

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Old 07-22-2019, 07:47 AM   #9
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Upper hand was cool. I fucked with nika face app. Destination wedding overseas was clever and closer could have been worded better


Thought Jason Kidd was savage.. doctor gloves was fire rum ale was nice and your closer was cool.

Thought body’s first two bars were fire jayson had some cool stuff here but I got body edging this as they’re tied in quotes but body had the two fire bars


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Old 07-24-2019, 12:53 AM   #10
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Man this was a FUCKING dope bsttle


Pretty close Jason was impressive for sure nik line was fire but if I'm honest body got this I mean Dan that rumcake line was hilarious and fire


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