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Old 04-28-2019, 09:35 PM   #1
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I got a beast smith n' wesson' - the teacher's pet known to teach you a lesson
I'm evil in sessions; 'blue will cop out' like police with depression
I have a uzi and techs' bitch; I have the answer - you're losing the question
Floozy' and reckless; If 'blue's block on top' we're talking losing in Tetris
I have a book of psalms; donkey kicks make your face hotter than the sun
I'll diminish your plot; and I know why you 'horse around with woman a lot' - because all your bitches look like one
My rhyme exceed's this kid; speed of light rhymes of appeasing glitz'
When I rhymed; you got ghost; and I'll 'bury you in a plot hole' so your life is meaningless
This dude's awful; if you're 'feeling blue' you're gloom got ghost
I'll leave you a doomed fossil; when I put 'blue in a box' like blue waffle
I'll turn your crew to mince meat; I'll 'steal the show' like split thief
How can you lick these? The tech'll put 'holes in blue' like old swiss cheese
I'm goku's father; bardock with a flow fuse to hold the bombs
I have matics that are sharp; and I'll 'stab you with a shot' like serial killers in photobombs
This rook is wack; this is song; my rhymes will hook this fag
My rhymes are dapper; and you're such a 'wack white rapper' - eminem is looking black
you're weak; it's evident; you were born elite? I'm seeking jargon'
Please, you were' 'born special' - you were born freaking' mentally retarded...

TIME!!

Now here I go; banana knife severing his chin; the embellishment of sin
You lost at 18...maybe that's the age you're wack white ass found out you'll never be EMINEM!
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Old 04-29-2019, 12:26 AM   #2
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gonna commentate now and use this to vote later

I got a beast smith n' wesson' - the teacher's pet known to teach you a lesson
I'm evil in sessions; 'blue will cop out' like police with depression

meh, I find no gripe except its general lack of skill.


I have a uzi and techs' bitch; I have the answer - you're losing the question
Floozy' and reckless; If 'blue's block on top' we're talking losing in Tetris


doesn't work as a wordplay and isn't s/p, just 2 1 liners


I have a book of psalms; donkey kicks make your face hotter than the sun
I'll diminish your plot; and I know why you 'horse around with woman a lot' - because all your bitches look like one


same here, also I could cut out allot of the bar and it would still work. filler never helps,

My rhyme exceed's this kid; speed of light rhymes of appeasing glitz'
When I rhymed; you got ghost; and I'll 'bury you in a plot hole' so your life is meaningless


I don't get it. your vocab and meter are ass backwards btw. lots of filler here


This dude's awful; if you're 'feeling blue' you're gloom got ghost
I'll leave you a doomed fossil; when I put 'blue in a box' like blue waffle


this was better but still isn't that good, just less fundamentally lacking.


I'll turn your crew to mince meat; I'll 'steal the show' like split thief
How can you lick these? The tech'll put 'holes in blue' like old swiss cheese

cool


I'm goku's father; bardock with a flow fuse to hold the bombs
I have matics that are sharp; and I'll 'stab you with a shot' like serial killers in photobombs

in shot do you mean medical shots? also this bar doesn't work as a wordplay, its far beyond a stretch, the elastic broke a couple feet of separation ago.

This rook is wack; this is song; my rhymes will hook this fag
My rhymes are dapper; and you're such a 'wack white rapper' - eminem is looking black

once again, fillery. okay bar here

you're weak; it's evident; you were born elite? I'm seeking jargon'
Please, you were' 'born special' - you were born freaking' mentally retarded...

TIME!!

cut off "you were born" the second go around this bar is allot better,

Now here I go; banana knife severing his chin; the embellishment of sin
You lost at 18...maybe that's the age you're wack white ass found out you'll never be EMINEM!


the best bar being last helps wrap it up nicely, even tho it wasn't all that good or original. overall trash wording and meh concepts with more filler than not.
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Old 04-29-2019, 12:52 AM   #3
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Old 04-30-2019, 11:52 AM   #4
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I took a walk on mars, cock was hard; cum splotched the stars while I hummed soliloquies
My tongues virility, in the slums of Italy drinking rum in Sicily; i ‘rap battled the pope’ & proved I’m the one divinity!!
I’m the serpent tongue with nervous cum; an unruly peasant with the tooly’s present
Groovy ruby pendants the jewlry’s endless; hollow tips spread ‘sin across the wall’ like the movie seven
My snake sword turns into a snake and hisssses leaving indians stunned
Infinite guns = intimate fun; imminent grunge plus you got a ‘small booty’ that’s Sin a min buns!
This guy’s Floridian; I’m on the prime meridian snorting lines of cinnamon with a tickle me elmo
Hells no these shelltoes ain’t drizzled in velcro; ubiquitous elf nose so tell me NC who have you felt mo’?!
My dick is the grapes of wrath, with Aids in fact; blazing staffs cause panther calamities
My tongue is a cancerous tragedy; white panther mentality, pussy I’m ‘more fly’ then prancer’s anatomy
I’m a dole fruit eater rockin' an old blue t shirt and I'm sharpening gats!
Harpening fact i sharted a match; that’s how you know my ‘shits fire’ bitch your heart will collapse
Edamame salami, Bacardi with Cardi; it's a party at Harvey's now that this punk is damaged
Hilary Duff will vanish, what’s tough in Spanish?! Whatever man think seths wife, I’m feeding you a ‘knuckle sandwich’
With cometh' songs you’ve cometh' wrong; I’m a primate and my face is splotchy
Irate I don’t like the taste of coffee! Your basic watch me; plus your bitch stays ‘rubbin this white ball’ like an ace in bocce

FINISH HIM!!

A born rival; sworn pyro, orange vitals; george michael cuz you gotta have faith to beat me
Smoked an eighth of PC, p while draped in seaweed; wont ‘embrace sin’ with death you have a date believe me

NAHH JUST KIDDING LOL THIS WILL FINISH HIM LOL

Mock a sin wearing moccasins; stop n’ grin while my cum level tops to brim
Chamber on my cocks glock will spin; not talkin NFL picks when I say Colts will ‘Rock Ya-Sin’
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I took a walk on mars, cock was hard; cum splotched the stars while I hummed soliloquies
My tongues virility, in the slums of Italy drinking rum in Sicily; i ‘rap battled the pope’ & proved I’m the one divinity!!


liked this one... well worded... had the essentials... lol

I’m the serpent tongue with nervous cum; an unruly peasant with the tooly’s present
Groovy ruby pendants the jewlry’s endless; hollow tips spread ‘sin across the wall’ like the movie seven

dope.. had the fundamentals... everything needed I guess... good... lol

My snake sword turns into a snake and hisssses leaving indians stunned
Infinite guns = intimate fun; imminent grunge plus you got a ‘small booty’ that’s Sin a min buns!

I liked it... good bar.. cool I guess... lol

This guy’s Floridian; I’m on the prime meridian snorting lines of cinnamon with a tickle me elmo
Hells no these shelltoes ain’t drizzled in velcro; ubiquitous elf nose so tell me NC who have you felt mo’?!

could have been better... decent concept... haven't seen this... many...times... before... LLOOLL

My dick is the grapes of wrath, with Aids in fact; blazing staffs cause panther calamities
My tongue is a cancerous tragedy; white panther mentality, pussy I’m ‘more fly’ then prancer’s anatomy


cool ig… maybe dope.. lol

I’m a dole fruit eater rockin' an old blue t shirt and I'm sharpening gats!
Harpening fact i sharted a match; that’s how you know my ‘shits fire’ bitch your heart will collapse


decent.. lol

Edamame salami, Bacardi with Cardi; it's a party at Harvey's now that this punk is damaged
Hilary Duff will vanish, what’s tough in Spanish?! Whatever man think seths wife, I’m feeding you a ‘knuckle sandwich’


fire... lol...lmao...

With cometh' songs you’ve cometh' wrong; I’m a primate and my face is splotchy
Irate I don’t like the taste of coffee! Your basic watch me; plus your bitch stays ‘rubbin this white ball’ like an ace in bocce


...water tribe type shit... right here... lol...

FINISH HIM!! (noice touch)

A born rival; sworn pyro, orange vitals; george michael cuz you gotta have faith to beat me
Smoked an eighth of PC, p while draped in seaweed; wont ‘embrace sin’ with death you have a date believe me


this was...dope... lol

NAHH JUST KIDDING LOL THIS WILL FINISH HIM LOL (even noicer)

Mock a sin wearing moccasins; stop n’ grin while my cum level tops to brim
Chamber on my cocks glock will spin; not talkin NFL picks when I say Colts will ‘Rock Ya-Sin’



very noice… lol... lol...lmao lol...


not really close here. blue mcked his style perfectly and still had good wordplays and originality.


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