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10-16-2020, 06:47 PM
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WEEK 3: TOP iLL 2-0 VS iSpaz 1-0 TOP iLL WINS
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Rules Line limit Minimum: 10 Maximum: 16 Verses due 11:59pm EST October 20, 2020 (Tuesday) Extensions are granted automatically. 24-hour max. MUST BE REQUESTED BY DEADLINE Good luck, gentlemen __________________
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10-17-2020, 12:36 AM
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Gang shit on my brain
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** 14 breh
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But don't say I can't rap like I'm not a Rap God,
Like I won't break your fucking favorite rapper's rap jaw Last edited by iSpaz; 10-18-2020 at 12:17 AM. |
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10-19-2020, 04:28 PM
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Gang shit on my brain
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Top ILL aka Zuch.......
You just a nerd. You ain't ever bust the bird or been mad slangin. ..Your girl wanting everyone's dick is the closest you'll ever be to GangBangin. Is your girl really on here or are you frontin trying to do it all. Don't lie.."Top ill Dragster's" just to show the bad bitch inside like Ru Paul. No sting in your wording. Been in the Game but still lack what vets got. You can try a Run against me.. I'll end your season faster than Dak Prescott's. Horror season. Stab you til the floor is leakin. Draggin your body's a whole hassle. ..So when I tell your family 'he over there lyin on the front door'; it's cuz you dead - no castle. This is the wild west. You mild at best why are you such a bafoon for? You can try to push me all you want. I swing back hard.. saloon door. You Brainless and I'm aiming at your head for talking. Load up the Tommy.. Zombie; In other words you nothin but a dead man walking. You think you top skilled? I'll let the glocks spill just watch the lead ensue. When I separate your neck from your body.. that's just my way to get ahead of you. Cold world.
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But don't say I can't rap like I'm not a Rap God,
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10-19-2020, 11:54 PM
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I <3 girls an good at sex
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Real quick I gotta shit...
Fuck the stick talk, I LIVE a life where it’s the BLADOW burning Trust me, this mag will be the last thing you see like it’s the shadow tourney Your originality lacks, it might take a while to blow Them bars are Incredible. Not the adjective, I mean the guy who’s style you stole This is a victory lap, I’m a product of Rudge1 The only lapping you do is with your tongue when you mop up a dude’s cum I’ll knock you down the rankings, I know you’re scared of Matthew That shit will be a trust fall, Sinacog promised he will be right there to catch you Your mom fucked for cash on cam and it’s a bare skin concept Her found footage has more plot holes than the Blair Witch Project Voters read your shit and you know they got some patience ^^ That’s just a statement. Like your bars. Dogg you are NOT creative
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They think I’m dope and I Cedar Point Last edited by UPN Zuch; 10-19-2020 at 11:59 PM. |
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10-19-2020, 11:56 PM
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10-20-2020, 11:52 AM
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Everything's Connected
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iSpaz:
"Is your girl really on here or are you frontin trying to do it all. Don't lie.."Top ill Dragster's" just to show the bad bitch inside like Ru Paul." "This is the wild west. You mild at best why are you such a bafoon for? You can try to push me all you want. I swing back hard.. saloon door." TOP iLL: "Your originality lacks, it might take a while to blow Them bars are Incredible. Not the adjective, I mean the guy who’s style you stole" "I’ll knock you down the rankings, I know you’re scared of Matthew That shit will be a trust fall, Sinacog promised he will be right there to catch you" "Voters read your shit and you know they got some patience ^^ That’s just a statement. Like your bars. Dogg you are NOT creative" Good battle. Top iLL coming with some funny ass personals. iSpaz had more general stuff, but he has some creative schemes and wordplay (except for "ahead of you"... c'mon man) - I think if he focused it more towards his opponent, like the ruPaul bar, he will find success. But for now though... (and even more impressive because he did it pre-bowel movement...) Vote - TOP iLL DRAGSTER (while taking a number) TWO
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10-20-2020, 01:08 PM
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Honestly the way Spazz started off I thought this would be a close one, but he devolved into either cool ideas with failed execution or just tired concepts. Plus using two door plays in a row was bleh, Ru-Paul was good wording was still a little ehh but I liked it. Just be more direct like Uni said and you’ll be golden.
Ill was far from his best verse but he had some dope stuff here incredible, Blair witch and trust fall bars were all legit he did more than enough here V/Ill |
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10-20-2020, 04:14 PM
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LOL @ fake Rudge1 showing up outta the blue.
Anyway, this was really close and pretty entertaining. Closer than I expected, frankly, after the last few verses Ive read from Zuch. Each was concisely executed and relatively well worded. I think Zuch's was slightly more original/witty, although not by much. The problem with Ispaz's verse is that he had a bunch of punchline concepts that have been done a million times... so, even though they were modestly creative, they were never better than a B or B minus. Zuch's weren't much more creative this time around, but they were by a hair. And enough for him to take this. Unrelated side note... I have no clue what this "statement" issue is, as if its some kind of knock against a line/style. Battles are about upping yourself and dissing the opponent. You can do that by talking about how great you are and/or how awful the other guy is... as long as its creatively done, it doesn't really matter which way you do it. Great verses will have a mixture of both. I've literally never read a good battle verse that doesn't have a ton of "statements" in it. Anyway, side rant over. Zuch won this by a hair. Cheers to both.
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10-22-2020, 03:04 PM
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You just a nerd. You ain't ever bust the bird or been mad slangin.
..Your girl wanting everyone's dick is the closest you'll ever be to GangBangin. nope Is your girl really on here or are you frontin trying to do it all. Don't lie.."Top ill Dragster's" just to show the bad bitch inside like Ru Paul. another bitch inside bar and i will erupt No sting in your wording. Been in the Game but still lack what vets got. You can try a Run against me.. I'll end your season faster than Dak Prescott's. cool Horror season. Stab you til the floor is leakin. Draggin your body's a whole hassle. ..So when I tell your family 'he over there lyin on the front door'; it's cuz you dead - no castle. ok This is the wild west. You mild at best why are you such a bafoon for? You can try to push me all you want. I swing back hard.. saloon door. lollllllllllll i like this.. kinda corny tho You Brainless and I'm aiming at your head for talking. Load up the Tommy.. Zombie; In other words you nothin but a dead man walking. ehh You think you top skilled? I'll let the glocks spill just watch the lead ensue. When I separate your neck from your body.. that's just my way to get ahead of you. ok vs. Fuck the stick talk, I LIVE a life where it’s the BLADOW burning Trust me, this mag will be the last thing you see like it’s the shadow tourney lol i tried to do a line like this but i couldnt pull it off.. hoow you do it so easily mf Your originality lacks, it might take a while to blow Them bars are Incredible. Not the adjective, I mean the guy who’s style you stole lol nice This is a victory lap, I’m a product of Rudge1 The only lapping you do is with your tongue when you mop up a dude’s cum hah I’ll knock you down the rankings, I know you’re scared of Matthew That shit will be a trust fall, Sinacog promised he will be right there to catch you eh Your mom fucked for cash on cam and it’s a bare skin concept Her found footage has more plot holes than the Blair Witch Project ok Voters read your shit and you know they got some patience ^^ That’s just a statement. Like your bars. Dogg you are NOT creative ok well ispaz definitely did better than me compared to last week agisnt zuch.. it wasnt going to be easy ispaz.. kinda one sided battle here tho top ill did a decent work and i got him on the winning side v/top |
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10-22-2020, 06:04 PM
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Saloon door
Ahead of you Mag Lapping Kinda disappointed with top ill here but he had enough to take it, just. Vote - top
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10-23-2020, 01:15 AM
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Spaz
I can’t quote anything I’m afraid. Your verse is smooth and reads well but as far as punches go, you need to get more creative. I can elaborate on this more if you ever want that Top ill Incredible was cool Victory lap lol ok This was a disappointing battle. Top ill brings enough to take the win Vote top |
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10-23-2020, 02:47 PM
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Spaz- I enjoyed reading your bars all sound great nothing make go wow like Top
Top ill - I'm impress with your bars they are so amazing vote- Top ill his bars more complex compare to spaz |
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10-23-2020, 06:48 PM
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You Brainless and I'm aiming at your head for talking.
Load up the Tommy.. Zombie; In other words you nothin but a dead man walking. vs. Your originality lacks, it might take a while to blow Them bars are Incredible. Not the adjective, I mean the guy who’s style you stole This is a victory lap, I’m a product of Rudge1 The only lapping you do is with your tongue when you mop up a dude’s cum Top ILL's come better but he did enough to win here with some cool hits.. Dak was too easy, i hated the wording on saloon door personally and it's s&f esque... Ru Paul needed to be executed better Props to both TOP got it |
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