Contender Match: Dominate vs Saint - DOMINATE WINS

[Sharp]

Netcees SOL Season II
Week 4

Due Thursday, July 21st at Midnight PST

Minimum: 8 Lines
Maximum: 12 Lines
24hr ext given on request

NO biting
NO swaying
NO feeding
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@Dominate @Saint

[Dominate]

Good luck buddy. How many you want?

[Saint]

Hey my man... 10? You choose

[Dominate]

10’s good

[Dominate]

Ext?

[Saint]

Originally Posted by Dominate

Ext?

Of course. You need to console yourself after that L from the 'Cog.

[Dominate]

Exactly. I’m reeling.

[Dominate]

Look,

There isn’t a problem here I can’t get the Draco to solve
When that ringggg light up Saint’s head trust there’s no halo involved
I’ll beat you in every category. That’s nothing but honesty fam
Your idea of a competitive edge is jerking off for as long as you can
At this point I’d be stunned if your phrasing was actually crisp dawg
Wp like a defibrillator - if what you say is CLEAR then it’s gonna be a bigggg shock
You’ve seen my name in every top ten - I’m murder with it sucker
20 years in, YOUR name still as Listless as your girl is when you fuck her
Bitch loves it when I choke her, always calling my dick boss
I got her working graveyard shift - she seeing stars when she gets off

[Saint]

Originally Posted by Dominate

Highlights, but there was maybe 4-5 bars I didn’t like in the whole thing.

Reaffirming GOAT status.

Ayy. dick measuring contest vs Ryan's NOT gonna happen
Watchmen: this Ozymandias never beating the Blue God, no Dr Manhattan
How you lecture w/ that gay accent? Kids got their eyes wide
Bet them long readings got more palms to faces than psychics showing life lines
We KNOW Austin carries the team. & keeps this faggot monitored
U'd lose ur shit without getting an Aer Tag.. plus he doubles as an apple polisher
Still living fantasies in moms basement free. had ur fun yet?
Fitting roleplaying goes down in a Domme Dungeon... 'cept the switch to sublet
Ya girl went down while I played w/ her clit. said I'm better in bed
It signaled the bitch was psycho by taking a digit in a circle motion next to da head

[Adverse]

Dom:
There isn’t a problem here I can’t get the Draco to solve
When that ringggg light up Saint’s head trust there’s no halo involved
^ decent personal connection but as a general punchline this is dated to me.

I’ll beat you in every category. That’s nothing but honesty fam
Your idea of a competitive edge is jerking off for as long as you can
^ lol alright

At this point I’d be stunned if your phrasing was actually crisp dawg
Wp like a defibrillator - if what you say is CLEAR then it’s gonna be a bigggg shock
^ dope here

You’ve seen my name in every top ten - I’m murder with it sucker
20 years in, YOUR name still as Listless as your girl is when you fuck her
^ haha this is cool.

Bitch loves it when I choke her, always calling my dick boss
I got her working graveyard shift - she seeing stars when she gets off
^ cool closer

Saint:
Ayy. dick measuring contest vs Ryan's NOT gonna happen
Watchmen: this Ozymandias never beating the Blue God, no Dr Manhattan
^ this is decent I get what you’re going for, kinda wordy though

How you lecture w/ that gay accent? Kids got their eyes wide
Bet them long readings got more palms to faces than psychics showing life lines
^ alright cool

We KNOW Austin carries the team. & keeps this faggot monitored
U'd lose ur shit without getting an Aer Tag.. plus he doubles as an apple polisher
^ I mean decent, again kinda long winded and the punch isn’t heavy

Still living fantasies in moms basement free. had ur fun yet?
Fitting roleplaying goes down in a Domme Dungeon... 'cept the switch to sublet
^ alright here

Ya girl went down while I played w/ her clit. said I'm better in bed
It signaled the bitch was psycho by taking a digit in a circle motion next to da head
^ I get it but didn’t feel like it connected very well

In my opinion, Saint was kind of lost in the wording of some of his lines which took away the impact, and some didn’t really have hard punches in the first place. So those two things together killed any momentum he’d gather. Dom wasn’t in top form here but he did connect the jabs he threw out there, only thing I can even consider not good was maybe the opener because the overall concept is played? Nonetheless I think Dom won easily here

V/Dom

[Dope girl]

I felt like some of Saint bars a lil choppy but isn't a bad vs
Dom came stronger to the win


Vote-Dom

[Wanderer]

Originally Posted by Dominate

Look,

There isn’t a problem here I can’t get the Draco to solve
When that ringggg light up Saint’s head trust there’s no halo involved
Only downside is I’ve seen a lot of halo bars but with the saint np tie in it’s decent
I’ll beat you in every category. That’s nothing but honesty fam
Your idea of a competitive edge is jerking off for as long as you can
I’m not feeling this
At this point I’d be stunned if your phrasing was actually crisp dawg
Wp like a defibrillator - if what you say is CLEAR then it’s gonna be a bigggg shock
Fire
You’ve seen my name in every top ten - I’m murder with it sucker
20 years in, YOUR name still as Listless as your girl is when you fuck her
Think I’m missing something here
Bitch loves it when I choke her, always calling my dick boss
I got her working graveyard shift - she seeing stars when she gets off
thats cool

Vs

/B]

Originally Posted by Saint

Ayy. dick measuring contest vs Ryan's NOT gonna happen
Watchmen: this Ozymandias never beating the Blue God, no Dr Manhattan
Not overly feeling
How you lecture w/ that gay accent? Kids got their eyes wide
Bet them long readings got more palms to faces than psychics showing life lines
That’s dope
We KNOW Austin carries the team. & keeps this faggot monitored
U'd lose ur shit without getting an Aer Tag.. plus he doubles as an apple polisher
Y
Still living fantasies in moms basement free. had ur fun yet?
Fitting roleplaying goes down in a Domme Dungeon... 'cept the switch to sublet
Errm I’m not getting it
Ya girl went down while I played w/ her clit. said I'm better in bed
It signaled the bitch was psycho by taking a digit in a circle motion next to da head
I get what you’re going for there’s almost too much going on with the wording

I’m gonna vote Dom, clearer (lol) and heavier overall. The defrib line LOTB closely followed by palm reading

Good shit fellas

[evaD]

Competitive edge lmaoo, Defib, Listless all fire. Opener and closer were cool

Dr Manhattan, psychics and aero bar was cool. Domme dungeon wording was off and didn’t like closer

Dom had some bangers here in the middle part. Saint I enjoyed it but Dom took this

Vote dominate

[Mac]

There isn’t a problem here I can’t get the Draco to solve
When that ringggg light up Saint’s head trust there’s no halo involved
At this point I’d be stunned if your phrasing was actually crisp dawg
Wp like a defibrillator - if what you say is CLEAR then it’s gonna be a bigggg shock
Bitch loves it when I choke her, always calling my dick boss
I got her working graveyard shift - she seeing stars when she gets off

vs

How you lecture w/ that gay accent? Kids got their eyes wide
Bet them long readings got more palms to faces than psychics showing life lines
Still living fantasies in moms basement free. had ur fun yet?
Fitting roleplaying goes down in a Domme Dungeon... 'cept the switch to sublet

dom was pretty consistent while saint was hit or miss for me.. not a reaallly close battle as Dominate hit most of his bars

v . dom

[Sharp]

There isn’t a problem here I can’t get the Draco to solve
When that ringggg light up Saint’s head trust there’s no halo involved
nice
I’ll beat you in every category. That’s nothing but honesty fam
Your idea of a competitive edge is jerking off for as long as you can
funny
At this point I’d be stunned if your phrasing was actually crisp dawg
Wp like a defibrillator - if what you say is CLEAR then it’s gonna be a bigggg shock
lmao. Dope
You’ve seen my name in every top ten - I’m murder with it sucker
20 years in, YOUR name still as Listless as your girl is when you fuck her
simple execution but the personal is so nice
Bitch loves it when I choke her, always calling my dick boss
I got her working graveyard shift - she seeing stars when she gets off
nice

Imo the last bar is kind of a let down after the two personals after



Ayy. dick measuring contest vs Ryan's NOT gonna happen
Watchmen: this Ozymandias never beating the Blue God, no Dr Manhattan
aussie man/ozyman for sure... I'm not understanding where D comes from

Didn't think of D for dominate lmao. My bad, early morning train ride vote. Yeah this is nice
How you lecture w/ that gay accent? Kids got their eyes wide
Bet them long readings got more palms to faces than psychics showing life lines
cool
We KNOW Austin carries the team. & keeps this faggot monitored
U'd lose ur shit without getting an Aer Tag.. plus he doubles as an apple polisher
is this dissing Aero more than dom? I get the air tag/apple connection but this sounds like Aero is orbiting dom imo
Still living fantasies in moms basement free. had ur fun yet?
Fitting roleplaying goes down in a Domme Dungeon... 'cept the switch to sublet
roleplay/dom dungeon is cool. Execution is a little hard to understand
Ya girl went down while I played w/ her clit. said I'm better in bed
It signaled the bitch was psycho by taking a digit in a circle motion next to da head
bro I swear I have sex but I'm struggling with the logistics on this one

I'm gonna come back after I figure out what Ozymandias is supposed to be

Figured it out. That was my bad. Ozymandias works. I think dom was just more consistent and had lotb with defibrillator. Good battle though

V/Dom