FINAL WEEK: Destroyer 5-4 VS Wanderer 5-4 DESTROYER WINS

[UPN Zuch]

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Good luck, gentlemen

[Wanderer]

10?

[Wanderer]

Yikes..

Old age not holding u back.. u really try n give it ur all
Go ahead & smash it at 60 but PLEASE let it be into a brick wall
Wand grown now. I own u cuz my shits all swag
my property; only time u made a name for urself was sowing one into ya schoolbag
My body’s a temple. Treating it right gets me girls I’m pleased to hit
Ur bodies a temple.. fucking ancient & men get on their knees for it
violent with whiskey in my system so u don’t wanna see me switch
Last time u got buzzed & made threats local kids were playing ding dong ditch
empathy for ur history? Nah. I laugh cuz It’s fucking unreal..
Ur style got the kind of undeveloped features even ya wife would struggle to kill

[Destroyer]

Bollocks.

we all keep waiting for that dope wand verse... but yeah, not yet...
the fetus my wife lost at 6 weeks was more fleshed out than ur concepts
i do admit that it’s at least admirable that u keep trying
the nice guy who shows up to consistently lose, ur the 2020 version of Defiant
u got no magic in ur bars and u lack passion as well
last time we saw wand light up the scene it was with a lumos maxima spell
give up. sign out. bottom line is u whack son
i mean fucking Trump gonna fire barr long before u ever craft one
ur amateur in a ring with a beast. ur obv gonna get murdered geek
cuz ‘there’s just no pro available here’ like what i’ve been saying at work for weeks

[UserName]

Wand -

My body’s a temple. Treating it right gets me girls I’m pleased to hit
Ur bodies a temple.. fucking ancient & men get on their knees for it
violent with whiskey in my system so u don’t wanna see me switch
Last time u got buzzed & made threats local kids were playing ding dong ditch

Opener was a bit simple, the smash angle is fine, but you could've done more with it. Sewing line was a no. undeveloped features was a decent attempt at a good miscarriage line, but it fell flat with your wording.

Des -

we all keep waiting for that dope wand verse... but yeah, not yet...
the fetus my wife lost at 6 weeks was more fleshed out than ur concepts
give up. sign out. bottom line is u whack son
i mean fucking Trump gonna fire barr long before u ever craft one

fire barr was probably LOTB for me. The opening counter was niiice as well. The others weren't as strong, and nobody should do wand/magic lines anymore - but still - solid verse, and enough to win it in my eyes.

Cool battle guys, good luck in the playoffs

V - Des

[UPN Zuch]

Good battle guys


Wanderer you had a good ass run in the league this year. Your wording is getting crisper each week and you are starting to adapt with the concepts as well. Could see a deep playoff run next year.


Des you came pretty nice. Trump bar was cool and fetus deprecation was lol. Couple references I didn’t get.


Wanderer you were consistent but didn’t have anything that really hit hard. Like your concepts though.


Vote Des

[fraze]

Originally Posted by Wanderer

Old age not holding u back.. u really try n give it ur all
Go ahead & smash it at 60 but PLEASE let it be into a brick wall
ok.
Wand grown now. I own u cuz my shits all swag
my property; only time u made a name for urself was sowing one into ya schoolbag
light
My body’s a temple. Treating it right gets me girls I’m pleased to hit
Ur bodies a temple.. fucking ancient & men get on their knees for it
ok-ish
violent with whiskey in my system so u don’t wanna see me switch
Last time u got buzzed & made threats local kids were playing ding dong ditch
ok but light
empathy for ur history? Nah. I laugh cuz It’s fucking unreal..
Ur style got the kind of undeveloped features even ya wife would struggle to kill
these bars are getting kinda old. this is a pretty simple take on an overdone concept

Quotes: smash it at 60
Close: bodies a temple, ding dong ditch

Nothing was really bad but also didn't have anything that stood out to me. made a name was too light as a punch for me. closer was ok but need to be more creative with well tread subject matter.

Originally Posted by Destroyer

we all keep waiting for that dope wand verse... but yeah, not yet...
the fetus my wife lost at 6 weeks was more fleshed out than ur concepts
kinda ok. better angle than wands closer but still overdone
i do admit that it’s at least admirable that u keep trying
the nice guy who shows up to consistently lose, ur the 2020 version of Defiant
light
u got no magic in ur bars and u lack passion as well
last time we saw wand light up the scene it was with a lumos maxima spell
ok
give up. sign out. bottom line is u whack son
i mean fucking Trump gonna fire barr long before u ever craft one
definitely hits since barr just "resigned"
ur amateur in a ring with a beast. ur obv gonna get murdered geek
cuz ‘there’s just no pro available here’ like what i’ve been saying at work for weeks
not feeling this

Quotes: lumos maxima, fire barr
Close: more fleshed out

Fire barr was LOTB. Not much else stood out. Ok verse for 10

Vote: Destroyer Destro had a slightly better verse.

[Ghost1]

Yikes..

Old age not holding u back.. u really try n give it ur all
Go ahead & smash it at 60 but PLEASE let it be into a brick wall

Smash what........it's ok

Wand grown now. I own u cuz my shits all swag
my property; only time u made a name for urself was sowing one into ya schoolbag

Gay

My body’s a temple. Treating it right gets me girls I’m pleased to hit
Ur bodies a temple.. fucking ancient & men get on their knees for it

Eh I guess

violent with whiskey in my system so u don’t wanna see me switch
Last time u got buzzed & made threats local kids were playing ding dong ditch

Wording is dogshit concept is ok

empathy for ur history? Nah. I laugh cuz It’s fucking unreal..
Ur style got the kind of undeveloped features even ya wife would struggle to kill

Too bad the rest of the verse wasn't like this. This was fire.


]Bollocks.

we all keep waiting for that dope wand verse... but yeah, not yet...
the fetus my wife lost at 6 weeks was more fleshed out than ur concepts

LMAO this was better than wands

i do admit that it’s at least admirable that u keep trying
the nice guy who shows up to consistently lose, ur the 2020 version of Defiant

Aw I like def....sweet kid

u got no magic in ur bars and u lack passion as well
last time we saw wand light up the scene it was with a lumos maxima spell

Exsellseahorse

give up. sign out. bottom line is u whack son
i mean fucking Trump gonna fire barr long before u ever craft one

Crack

ur amateur in a ring with a beast. ur obv gonna get murdered geek
cuz ‘there’s just no pro available here’ like what i’ve been saying at work for weeks

This was eh

I got des with one more hit. Barr shit was dope. Both miscarriage bars were fire. Des wording was way crisper and the content was less cheesy imo.

V destroyer