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Old 09-01-2021, 06:32 PM   #1
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Old 09-02-2021, 05:50 PM   #2
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@Saint aka Inf aka Doc Savage

Ayo you better say ya prayers when that semi let it fly
Body get found in the boondocks, Saint- with 2 pennies in ya eyes!
Imma menace w/ these lines! Its known Im prone w/ the flips
When it comes to punches? Im thinking inf a miss...cuz hes known for that shit!
Ill "pull the tool from my ankle"..Pistol whip n knock his face in..
Just to prove you "pretending, Doc" & couldn't get a buzz playing Operation!
Bet there'll be "butterflies in yo stomach" when the verses are on display
Cuz the surgeon is on the way,
... n this scrubs getting washed like nurses on laundry day!
You arrogant fuck face, you cant compare when the puns weighed.
Your dreams being "top tier? Fantasy, Saint" like Alvin Kamara on Sundays!
This "fake fuck" still a virgin..hoes just offer palms to the face...
So to say Inf late to the party?
...is ironic cuz he the type to bring a blow up doll as a date!
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Old 09-04-2021, 10:28 PM   #3
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It's been said..


ur bland & boring. i'd give you a thou to stop it, dude
i'll show ya what Arrakis to spice it up like Melange in Dune
just look at his stuff! basic ideas worded so rough
my styles Cool n Crisp. Arnold in Kindergarten Cop put it in cuffs
sex life non existent, you're not so good with hoes
u wanna Pork u Pine. girls rather take Quill prick from one of those
his wife likes shit on her chest; my scat's addicting
knockers ima cop a squat over like evicting past due tenants
aim the colt 1911 atch'ya window, ride & let it crack
maxell commercial; a classic blowin in ur seat have u catchin glass
ur growing cancer w/ played lines on NC, i go off feel
screened u early stage on-set, cuz ur concepts go back to Vaudeville
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Old 10-30-2021, 11:28 PM   #4
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This is tough vote for me both had heavy hitters
Slick punchlines from both vs
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Quill started strong the 1st half of his verse then kinda fell off the 2nd half. Saint was all over the place, only liked a couple bars

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Old 08-05-2022, 12:47 PM   #6
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A good battle..

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Old 09-17-2022, 03:03 AM   #7
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Quill's hot lines
Line 10 : Your dreams...
Line 11 : This fake fuck...
Line 12 : So to say...

Saints hot lines
Line 5 : Sex life...
Line 9 : Aim da colt...
Line 10 : Maxell Comercial...

Those are the nicest lines I seen in this battle.
My vote goes to Saint


Is this battle over ?

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Old 09-21-2022, 01:47 PM   #8
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None of these votes count. Only my vote will count so far.


Quill:

Ayo you better say ya prayers when that semi let it fly
Body get found in the boondocks, Saint- with 2 pennies in ya eyes!
concept might be okay the delivery isn't
Imma menace w/ these lines! Its known Im prone w/ the flips
When it comes to punches? Im thinking inf a miss...cuz hes known for that shit!
lol cool
Ill "pull the tool from my ankle"..Pistol whip n knock his face in..
Just to prove you "pretending, Doc" & couldn't get a buzz playing Operation!
again, concept good but the execution is off
Bet there'll be "butterflies in yo stomach" when the verses are on display
Cuz the surgeon is on the way,
... n this scrubs getting washed like nurses on laundry day!
nah man
You arrogant fuck face, you cant compare when the puns weighed.
Your dreams being "top tier? Fantasy, Saint" like Alvin Kamara on Sundays!
delivery is awful
This "fake fuck" still a virgin..hoes just offer palms to the face...
So to say Inf late to the party?
...is ironic cuz he the type to bring a blow up doll as a date!
lol silly

Overall I can tell you've battled before it's just the delivery of the concepts really hurt the verse.


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ur bland & boring. i'd give you a thou to stop it, dude
i'll show ya what Arrakis to spice it up like Melange in Dune
concept ok, execution terrible
just look at his stuff! basic ideas worded so rough
my styles Cool n Crisp. Arnold in Kindergarten Cop put it in cuffs
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sex life non existent, you're not so good with hoes
u wanna Pork u Pine. girls rather take Quill prick from one of those
FIRE
his wife likes shit on her chest; my scat's addicting
knockers ima cop a squat over like evicting past due tenants
this was cool, worded weird but sufficiently
aim the colt 1911 atch'ya window, ride & let it crack
maxell commercial; a classic blowin in ur seat have u catchin glass
So we've all seen the Maxell or Maxwell commercial?
ur growing cancer w/ played lines on NC, i go off feel
screened u early stage on-set, cuz ur concepts go back to Vaudeville
I want to like it but I cant

Saint had line of the battle and another bar that was just a little better than all of Quill's verse. Had Quill delivered better it'd be a toss-up.
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Old 09-22-2022, 02:13 AM   #9
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Aero close this already... BS',in
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This is tough for me
Both had slick lines and heavy hitters
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Old 02-16-2023, 09:16 PM   #12
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Quill:
You arrogant fuck face, you cant compare when the puns weighed.
Your dreams being "top tier? Fantasy, Saint" like Alvin Kamara on Sundays!

His LOTB, by far.
He's got a good rhyme on the setup bar...cursing diss/ writing diss
Followed by a sports reference WITH a nameplay to go w/ the writing brag.

I thought ALOT of the rest of Quill's verse, while technically sound for the most part [nice], had somewhat of a corny/generic "tone", to some of the bars...
It's hard to criticize that--- SINCE HALF MY LINES R CORNBALL & I'm not a traditional battler either...but when I see a verse like this it just makes me think he is warming up/trying the BA (much like myself & others who dabble)...
Long story short...I've seen 2 of Quill's verses and based on that small sample-size I am led to believe he is more experienced in the topical arena, and is just holding his own here-- droppin' disses for the culture on his opponent,

Saint:
Who reads more like a pure battle-vet....In grading I MIGHT dock him on that bar where he explains (on line #3) how Quill is not polished/just warming up....onnnnly because he dropped 2 days after, based on timestamps...If he had dropped same night/ maybe it doesn't look so much like a "read&react"...
Sure he could have generically dropped it no matter what....I'm just saying if I have to nitpick what I consider to be a more traditional polished battle verse....
With the wordplay and punches/metaphors being more of a brag-swag tone & a bit less corny, OVERALL [i guess that's how i'm "hypocritically" judging battlez these dayz. lol.]...there's still a few bars that r not gr8...this certainly wasn't a "longterm written", but he brought a good verse, better battle verse:
sex life non existent, you're not so good with hoes
u wanna Pork u Pine. girls rather take Quill prick from one of those
"Veteran" nameplay bar and his LOTB I thought.

Interesting how I thought both nameplays were Lotbs.

I donno
Quill
7/10
Saint: /V 1 point Higher out of 10
8/10

Last edited by Pharaohs Army; 02-17-2023 at 11:45 PM. Reason: VOTE - not declaring W yet Aer,, if u keep open up2u
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