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Summer Classic Round 2 Mag
SUMMER CLASSIC ROUND 2 INTRO Yo it's bleak i'm going solo round 2. Sharp has to deal with yall so I figured it's only fair. BATTLE REVIEWS INCREDIBLE VS SN00P Man I really like how Incredible doesn't stick to a usual script when he writes. I just feel like... He writes as if he is a British KOTD battle rapper writing a live battle verse against someone he doesn't know. Go read it in that voice, you know the voice. That's not necessarily a bad thing but sometimes it doesn't translate to text. This verse could have beaten low to mid tier battlers probably. Sn00p doesn't seem like he's changed much tbh. Maybe a bit of rust affected wording but it was enough here. Mo' ease was vastly underappreciated, maybe another more obvious connection would have helped. His personals weren't exactly refined or well thought out but if we're being honest the only personals on Incredible were driven deep into the ground within a month of their reveal. Sn00p picks up the W here and moves on. BATTLE OF THE WEEK: UNIVERSE VS SWERVE While maybe not being the most technically sound battle that's ever been posted on green pages, this was still fun to read. Universe brings a different style that is very easy to digest. Unfortunately he doesn't quite form concepts that hit hard enough to be successful around here. I'm not in his notepad but I think a more structured approach to writing battle verses may be the disconnect. If he starts with a strong concept and marries it to his solid wording, his jabs will become real punches. Swerve came w more of a traditional style verse, but like his opponent, lacked the other half of the formula. However, in Swerve's case, it came down to the wording. He lacked the concise combination of words that makes a reader follow along. His concepts were all solid. He had a couple wordplays which we all love, maybe leaned on name flips a bit too much. He whipped out 16 in a short amount of time. Now he has a full week to write, as he picked up the win in a battle that was probably closer than the votes say. METASIN VS CEREAL I think Cereal is just way too cool to ever be good at attack poems. Metasin is another return that showed they can still form a punch. It also seemed like he phoned this one in expecting an easy win. Amending worked just fine, showing he can also produce fresh flips. The 3 line punches are fun and i wanna try them all the time but always feel like I'll get roasted in the votes. I guess you just gotta be good at them? DEFIANT VS MAC (FORFEIT/NS) Yo Def has gotten a lot better. BOMB BARD VS SINACOG Yo Spree wrote a real verse and Godkin Sin still got a vote smh Wtf @Cred? THROWBACK BATTLE KNUCKLEHEAD VS MURDA SHO SUMMER CLASSIC '18 FINALS KNUCKLEHEAD: Remember when we you agreed to have a gunbar battle & then dropped half personals after I dropped by the guidelines? Won last time cus ya shady, & now how u gettin killed is just dumb son Go head & pull the skeletons out my closet, ya just making room to become one This queers smacked. It's game time! vs. Sho? I'll never fear that These two cans to ya head leave ya drinkin' out've straws like a beer hat Had to cut the dreads off for time, but it was quick - neva weight or a homi Next time someone catch a sentence when ya wig pushed back, I caught a body Bout slaughter I'm passionate, gon get bloody when ya ass get kicked U ain't just gettin' smoked, I'm finna bash ya fuckin' head in til I can ash in it U won't be remembered. No tears when 44 44s hit what ya ride in You ain't ever get Cred, you just got ur whole style stolen & elevated by him Cupids aim, this AR got me feelin' the love when the lead blow One ring'll put ya on ya knees & then ruin ya life like she said no Rip ya heart out mid dinner, carve ya chest til ya dead on site Have him at the table with some free space in the middle like bingo night Ya girl is all over the place,cot damn that whore is drama Have her jumpin' on every single piece of furniture like the floor is lava Snitch ass faggot, I don't need to sing so don't test me When I pull the plug it's death, when u pull the plug ya got out early for the SC Price on ya head - step in my city & a shadow on ya, so come 'round Leave a body on the ground with these long arms like it's sunrise or sundown MURDA SHO: Look punk... Y’all hyped the shit so if we fight for this I want that check Spree After I sneak up on him like Friday did and knock him into next week Y’all got this fag amped for the champ match like he that bad at this If I’m where Knuckle is I’ll have no choice but to back-hand this bitch This geek’s souls getting murked, the shots just go off and lift it Watch as ‘he rose from the earth’ like Yamcha Gohan and Krillin Your queen’s a monster so when this beam hit y’all shirts... Shots’ll enter that plate in ur chest while she licks the one clean that’s on hers I’m mean in all verses which is why I get dinero when I spit Watch me Dominate you so much it’ll make Zelph & Aero say I bit Your wife’s a pug so we don’t ask what you like to fuck or ur type of slut We’d rather our eyes get dug so we just leave knuckles out like biker gloves I’m shootin at skeletons with the goriest guns come talk bold I’ll have his Bone’s hit more than Notorious Thugs and Crossroads Rock him in a round like a cave man & after I whoop him it’s simple Start draggin Knuckle on the ground like the Neanderthal his woman resembles He’s seeing red from my schemes of his white Queen and her slight problem So i’ll hold the 19 over his face like visine before I drop him Then lock your fat ass in a car in your garage while it’s on bitch Since you went on a run through this tourney now you’ll die of exhaustion Zip Him Up!! NO SHOW (UHOH) SHINE MAC? AINT YOU VENEZUELAN OR PERUVIAN? FUCKING HUMAN MOUNTAIN GOAT ASS NIGGA IMA DO HIM IN -yo got his ass w the fire opener plus his team lost in soccer i think I WAS RAISED BY WOLVES IN A CITY FULL OF HOOLIGANS, YOU WERE RAISED BY COYOTES WHO TRAFFICKED HUMANS TRYNA MOVE EM IN -YO my man is definitely hispanic get oN HIS ASSSSSS MY MEDULA IS OBLONG. EACH WORD FROM DA GOD GETS YA BOMBED ON YOU ARE GEN TINA. LIKE YOUR GENDER IS TINA CUZ YOUR A TRANNY. -wordplay on point this is lotb I DO WORDPLAY TOO I COULD BE DIP MY DICK INTO THIS BIRDS GREAT POOP- CHUTE, OR SHOOT BUT INSTEAD I GOTTA MURK GAY DUDES WHOS JOB IS TO CODE SHIT IN MICROSOFT WORD, EH? WHOO -what a fuckin nerd u so right plus the wording here was flawless IF ITS STRETCHED LIKE YA MOMS BOX I DONT CARE IM DA GOD OCK I CANT WRITE PUNCHES BUT IM NOT WATCHING THIS TV SHOW WITH THE BROAD, STOP -i bet his mama watch fuck grey's anatomy bro i aint watching that shit either. dope attack line IM SAVING DA CULTURE. BITCH COOKED CHICKEN TIKI MASALA NOT KNOWING SHES GONNA GET RAPED ON THIS SOFA BRING UP THOSE DAYS WHEN HER OLDER GRAMPS USED TO PLAY WITH HER CHOCHA MAC IS GAY, THIS IS OVA -end his fuckn bitch ass w the fire personal? stop honestly idk how Mac advanced with a no show verse? this was verse of the week by far idk why dictator sharp didnt let us vote on a fair battle. - b CYPHER HIGHLIGHTS NOTHING YALL ARE FUCKN TRASH BATTLE PREVIEWS & PREDICTIONS FINALLY WE GET TO SOME REAL BATTLES -b USERNAME VS BOMB BARD Spree aka Bomb Bard knocked off Sinacog to make it here, which is basically the same thing User did last week with his BYE. He actually did write a solid verse in his showing which makes me think he's got plenty in the tank for his opponent. This an interesting matchup in itself but I feel like Spree has been much more active in the scene. User and I have a grand old time in discord but i don't think I've read a recent verse from him. That being said, I haven't read much of anything in the last 2 years so he could have had like 50 battles and I wouldn't fuckin know. Yet I write the mags lol. Anyways I think I'm gonna pick an underdog here. BOMB BARD 50/50 SIKE USER 100/0 I TOLD YALL IT'S V/USERNAME ROUND HERE ONE TO WATCH: BLUE BAYOU VS SN00P Sn00p showed he's still got it but now he's matched against the face of that ideal. Idk if this battle has happened anywhere else (I'm sure it has) but I'm looking forward to reading 60 lines from both of them. Not much else needs to be said here, Blue has proven himself in 3 different decades now. This could easily be a final four or finals matchup in this very tournament, and instead we get it in round 2. For better or worse, I can speak for all of us saying that we're looking forward to it. 50/50 JOHN HENSLEY VS ALLEN KNIGHT I asked Sharp to send me AK's verse vs Cred, but he refused, which is ridiculous. I think we maybe expected Cred to no show, but it's still disappointing. Now we get another matchup we can all look forward to in John Hensley. But can I say that hensley is kind of a boring persona? Maybe I'm just not a subscriber but writing about this guy two weeks in a row is such a struggle. AK 70/30 ORC VS SWERVE Swerve pulled out a solid victory in round 1 on like zero notice. I hope the extra time can polish out some of the gripes that voters had about his wording. W/o that fix, he faces a tough challenge in Orc. Haven't seen much from Orc lately but this tournament is a fine example of that shit not mattering at all. Hope this can live up to some type of expectation. ORC 70/30 FRACTURE VS BLEAK b 100/0 INFILTRATE VS METASIN Meta slides into round 2, past Cereal, and gets his first test in Inf. Both of these guys are a part of NCs fabric. The fact that in 2021 we see this battle is really kinda weird? Inf has been around since I logged in I think, he's probably featured is some way or another in every mag I've ever written. Gotta pick him here, I don't read battles from 99. Loot showed he's got something in the tank still but Inf has been consistently winning his first battle and then subsequently losing for like 10 years now. INF 50/50 ZUCH VS MAC I feel like Zuch is always ready to write max and just kinda body you. Idk if Mac has the gas in the tank for this one. He did somehow make it to round 2 past that fire uhoh/defiant verse by posting 1-10? Idk what I'm missing but v/Defiant tbh. As if Def would show to a round 2 he's never made it to a round 2 in his fucking life. ZUCH 75/25 DAVE VS WANDERER Wanderer looks like he is ready for this matchup after posting last week. Dave has been battling here for a while now and just can't breach the glass ceiling. I think this battle gives him a chance to pick up some rhythm but he can't take his opponent lightly. I like this battle to become a style preference split among the voters. Or maybe Dave just 5-0's him DAVE 55/45 SORRY IT'S A BIT SHORT THIS WEEK, MAYBE AN AUDIO/VIDEO INTERVIEW NEXT WEEK IF THIS GETS SOME INTERACTION. SHOUT OUT TO SHARP FOR KEEPING THIS TRAIN ROLLING.
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07-14-2021, 09:51 PM | #2 |
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lol good looks.. thanks for the mag
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07-14-2021, 10:15 PM | #3 |
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Nice mag broski. Appreciate the hard work.
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Yep good read
I miss the Jamie predictions
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07-15-2021, 01:42 AM | #5 |
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Thank you for mag
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Wand mask line vs Zelph was fire
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07-15-2021, 11:14 AM | #7 |
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Dope job bleak
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niiiiiiiiice.. thank you for the effort
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