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Old 03-15-2021, 09:24 AM   #1
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Old 03-17-2021, 10:26 AM   #2
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Old 03-20-2021, 10:36 AM   #3
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Old 03-21-2021, 12:00 AM   #4
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If I post 10 random lines, is that fine?
Like, ext if he shows cus no check in?
If so, that's what I'm doing.
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Ten, if he doesn't show, gimme Diablo, bro
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Old 03-21-2021, 04:34 AM   #5
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Old 03-21-2021, 06:05 AM   #6
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The revolution’s never televised
Just skeletised in a broadsheet
and fleshed out with a better set of lies
The work-shy must go unfed
Pick your side of a perfect circle
Then lurch right til nothings left
any integrity up in tatters, keep thinking nothing matters
Just so long as we’re column-inching up the ladder
With no way to separate some truth from the lies
Spilling hate and digging graves one scoop at a time
The celeb culture death vulture’s Distract tactics
Ensure the empathy levels low and lacks practice
With hacks descending a patterns pending
Invent tragedy and massage egos for unhappy endings
Perfection as religion, daily bread is the worst
Force feeding the perfect body, stay ahead of the curves
Death seekers with words of misery
The ink dries before the blood
Fresh meat for a butchered obituary
Mother natures unheard whimper under the whirr of printers
So as the world burns to cinders, newspapers the perfect tinder
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Old 03-21-2021, 04:28 PM   #7
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Old 03-22-2021, 12:17 AM   #8
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Okay this is a weird one

Since Objective kind of posted a classic “no show 12345678910” thing since he thought Dave was going to no show. But then he gave Dave an extension? And also he never came back to post actual lines, and posted a minute after the deadline anyways.

Dave didn’t check in until late, but the rules we’ve been going by all season states “no check in = DQ” He did check in albeit late. He was also the only one who posted an actual verse.

Soooo Dave wins by no show? I believe that’s the right decision
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Ye, as in "posts on time" for the actual date. When I saw that he didn't check in or meet the original deadline I figured "fuck it" and went and did something else. I didn't give him an ext if that's what you're asking cus it was never asked for, so basically if it should be fair none of the verses should count if they were posted too late (I thought I posted my 1-10 shit within the time frame so that's on me) and at that point it should go by who checked in and who didn't. If that ain't cool, gimme 12 hours from now and I'll write something up later today cus I haven't seen him post around the forum, chat or anything indicating that he would show.
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Old 03-22-2021, 09:07 AM   #10
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Ye, as in "posts on time" for the actual date. When I saw that he didn't check in or meet the original deadline I figured "fuck it" and went and did something else. I didn't give him an ext if that's what you're asking cus it was never asked for, so basically if it should be fair none of the verses should count if they were posted too late (I thought I posted my 1-10 shit within the time frame so that's on me) and at that point it should go by who checked in and who didn't. If that ain't cool, gimme 12 hours from now and I'll write something up later today cus I haven't seen him post around the forum, chat or anything indicating that he would show.
I usually wouldn’t but if you could post something by the end of the day, I’ll accept it as it’s the playoffs. @evaD this battle will still be open so if you need to make any changes, add on until then feel free

This is a little unorthodox but the playoffs have been shitty and I don’t want to see three no shows in one round.
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