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Flailing Flex
All I know is death cos I murda ERYTING
Wit a pandemic flow and a deadly melody I been ready to release a fever on these beats Til there's zombies in the streets and I got the C.D.C. On helicopters to Belize droppin bodies in the sea Cos their shoddy quarantines are overflowin wit disease Open soars & pores that bleed. Royal Forces on the scene Wit NO remorse or loyalty for the victims as they grieve Mostly poor or refugees gettin cornered by police Cos they can't afford the fees at the ports or shores to leave So they pour into the streets like a swarm of poison bees Waging war on the Marines and their fortress of machines Morphin corpses into fiends - I'm like Morpheus - my dream Is to lead a revolution for the future of emcees So my musical influence is included wit the kings I'm the best that eva did it, one of few who really lived it Was a menace-to-society before I dodged conviction Man, I'm fly without a ticket and you high as Shia Leboeuf If you thinkin you can fuck wit my rhymes than try ya luck Cos I'm dyin to line em up and leave em slumped in pints of blood Right in front of eyes they love such as wives and tiny sons I'm a diamond in the rough, but I got the 'Midas Touch' Wit an underground style like I found it in the mud I'm as foul wit these vowels as they muthafukin come! Blowin loud by the ounce as I lounge in the sun Wit a mountain of bud, I'm the falcon above You're the mouse on the ground lookin out for my lunch If a challenger comes there'll be gallons of blood Every calendar-month I be baggin em up Nigga what?!?!
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06-16-2018, 09:33 PM | #2 |
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Yo SELF my homie...I've been away a minute but glad to see when I pop up your still dropping that fire.
"On helicopters to Belize droppin bodies in the sea Cos their shoddy quarantines are overflowin wit disease Open soars & pores that bleed. Royal Forces on the scene Wit NO remorse or loyalty for the victims as they grieve Mostly poor or refugees gettin cornered by police Cos they can't afford the fees at the ports or shores to leave So they pour into the streets like a swarm of poison bees Waging war on the Marines and their fortress of machines Morphin corpses into fiends - I'm like Morpheus - my dream" --Lmao the flow was superb for the most part. I might have switched a word or 2 around but that's just me. I love these type of flex pieces. Especially when you get out there on the content. I love the way you expand your content mentally even on a flex piece. That's my type of shit. "Man, I'm fly without a ticket and you high as Shia Leboeuf If you thinkin you can fuck wit my rhymes than try ya luck Cos I'm dyin to line em up and leave em slumped in pints of blood Right in front of eyes they love such as wives and tiny sons---yeah that shit is hard as fuck. What a statement!... " Blowin loud by the ounce as I lounge in the sun Wit a mountain of bud, I'm the falcon above You're the mouse on the ground lookin out for my lunch If a challenger comes there'll be gallons of blood"---The ouse looking out for my lunch? haha...dope flex piece here. It's not your usual topical top of the line awesomeness but You killed it for a flex piece. It was just grimey and gritty and I'm all about that. Good shit SELF |
06-17-2018, 11:17 PM | #3 |
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Mostly poor or refugees gettin cornered by police
Cos they can't afford the fees at the ports or shores to leave So they pour into the streets like a swarm of poison bees Waging war on the Marines and their fortress of machines Morphin corpses into fiends - I'm like Morpheus - my dream Is to lead a revolution for the future of emcees So my musical influence is included wit the kings I'm the best that eva did it, one of few who really lived it Was a menace-to-society before I dodged conviction Man, I'm fly without a ticket and you high as Shia Leboeuf If you thinkin you can fuck wit my rhymes than try ya luck Cos I'm dyin to line em up and leave em slumped in pints of blood ^^Tight... When you really hit your stride, the multies & flow be awesome...seems real effortless.I dug what was before what I quoted just didn't feel content wise it matched the rest...don't get me wrong, it was straight & set the tone well just felt the middle section thru to the closin' were a lot nicer then the start...liked it all though, as a whole it's sweet no doubt... Good spit SELF, stay uppity fam. |
06-24-2018, 07:56 PM | #4 |
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Your flow is crazy... You got the Juice now cuzz..
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10-10-2021, 10:38 PM | #5 | |
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Prophetic?
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10-11-2021, 11:28 AM | #6 |
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Nice. And yeah prophetic
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