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gods are stolen. all my records are scratched. it feels like all my friends have children. all my relatives, cancer. never once confessed to a pastor, this i admit Ba'hai agnostic secular bastard. dumb as a brick painted gold. freckle-toed. statuesque in your posture i'd crawl through broken glass to pick you up at a concert voluntary respondent survey our bond summarized tell me jump. i'll run a marathon and wrestle a tiger there's mud in the grinder blades, we're scrubbing it dry chewing on our gums until our hunger subsides choke down pluses and minuses. snowdrift rupturing sinus windfall rustles behind us. shaky branch restructuring climate i've been waiting for a moment in private, like most of us rooted in uncomfortable silences growing up tobacco in my arteries, sprouting another lung soaking up bacteria, staring into the sun screaming tongues of Judah through speakerboxes in traffic channeling Beelzebub. bleeding onto a mattress comforter Eddie Bauer. day-trip solo for 7 hours wondering which kills me first: privileges or power paper bill crystal powder. our messenger was a profit, He burned every plant we harvested and sent us a dollar it all makes sense why empires fall and kingdoms survive when Prince died our fentanyl sold for triple the price forgotten slice of paradise. our country to fight for. unloading trucks at dawn and playing numbers at night lotto ticket, pot to piss in. our apartment was mine i signed for it and told my folks our marriage was final iCloud memory side-scroll tragedy for yearly revival all I wanted was a glimpse of what it could've been like Anotherside on shiny glass and ripples in lakes pleading with us, please, to make an early escape. intrusive thoughts like fungus in a riverbed lately skip a stone to drown my most immediate hatred sonic wave us into a station when my oxygen's low you shock me into existence just by checking my pulse wretched vermin. vulture flying close to a corpse bottom-feeding empathy and getting results so where can we go to copy and paste our younger approach if i got a second chance i'd let it go /
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12-13-2020, 04:37 PM | #2 |
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the edit at 5:07 made this for me. will comment later for sure
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12-13-2020, 11:15 PM | #4 |
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dumb as a brick painted gold. freckle-toed. statuesque in your posture i'd crawl through broken glass to pick you up at a concert A: so you are white? B: damn, the raw vusuals and feeling of desparity/loyalty i get from this. Unngghh son Jesus. This is so good black. You are everything i always wanted to be in a writer. Amazing. Glad ur still active homie. One day, maybe soon, i might actually try to write. Idk. But artwork like this always trys to motivate me.
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12-14-2020, 08:23 AM | #5 |
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- parallel parked in between 2 ferrari's in tonky truck once
- when saying pledge of allegiance i said "i don't" lmao deadass bb satan
- won tshirt from taco bell saying "taco cat" is the same backwards for filling out 500 surveys in a
- neighbor house caught on fire i call FIRE department and saved lives, was in newspaper
- set neighbor house on fire lmao
- fuck neighbor husband and wife
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if you read deadman you could put together that he was atleast not black- if that was your presumption. even though he doesn't say it, his mystique is rather blatant if you read closely. though it shouldn't and doesn't matter. i guess for connectivity purposes maybe it does to some. also I'm pretty sure his family is somewhat religious, or pertains to a certain religion, culturally. his views on religion and his own self apathy towards god and atheistic themes seeem to waver very frequently. either way, he could be invisible and id still fuck with it.
"rooted in uncomfortable silences growing up tobacco in my arteries, sprouting another lung soaking up bacteria, staring into the sun screaming tongues of Judah through speakerboxes in traffic channeling Beelzebub. bleeding onto a mattress" i hated beelzebub. but everything else was nice. beelze seems to be a common theme for you to describe evil or angst. i've noticed. "skip a stone to drown my most immediate hatred" sigh. there's mud in the grinder blades, we're scrubbing it dry chewing on our gums until our hunger subsides choke down pluses and minuses. snowdrift rupturing sinus windfall rustles behind us. shaky branch restructuring climate i really liked this. rhyming-cool. but the detail was pretty- i enjoyed it. hunger subsided, and the depiction of climate set a overall mood. i like setting the mood with climate. cold climate, loud noises. crazy combination. funny how hot and silent is paradise, but cold and loud is tumultuous. hot and loud is a festival and cold and silent is despondent, pensive. hmm. any who. liked the completeness of this. it felt complete. thanks for giving me motivation to write something else. |
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Veritas, at least feed his shit, come on now...
Dope as always. Do I need to say anything that hasn't been said already? "wretched vermin. vulture flying close to a corpse bottom-feeding empathy and getting results" This hit me on a personal level, good stuff DeadMan.
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"agnostic stupid bastard"
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God I see so much relevancy in this . Highly identifiable early on.. with the observations about how your life is going as opposed to your peers .
Even stuff like this . “tell me jump. i'll run a marathon and wrestle a tiger” Sheesh. Fucking AMEN This is chock full of gems idek where to begin . The fentanyl / prince kingdom bit was something else . I’m busy but I couldn’t help but log in & show this appreciation Probably one of my favorite pieces from you for sure
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Not sure if misquote or subtle dig. Maybe both in separate minds
Fair? edit: all praises due to muff obj geno and bb
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I just don’t get it, I’m sorry. I don’t understand why you are still at the same level?
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its cause i never called you bro
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- when saying pledge of allegiance i said "i don't" lmao deadass bb satan
- won tshirt from taco bell saying "taco cat" is the same backwards for filling out 500 surveys in a
- neighbor house caught on fire i call FIRE department and saved lives, was in newspaper
- set neighbor house on fire lmao
- fuck neighbor husband and wife
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level content or skill wise? both have changed. to understand why the former changed, you'd have to have the latter changed in you as well.
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Even now you are separated from the truth? And why? What is the lesson you still need to learn?
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i dont know but i am truly curious to hear what you think
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After all this time, I think that we are both of a sufficient level of game respects game and that even though we are totally different we could be of each other’s benefit.
Synthesis: I want to be friends. And I want to understand you, because you are unique and fascinating. 2021. Our year.
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As for what I think it starts with questions: tell me your relationship to the word “hope” please? And spare no mental expense. Only type an answer if you really feel like it.
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