10-17-2020, 08:53 PM | #1 |
obsessed
Join Date: Nov 2013
Location: fucka idiyote
Posts: 5,716
Battle Record: Faggot-1
Accomplishments - can recite entirety of shrek 2
Champed - tangoed with spider man behind scenes in spider-man 2
- was candidate for gerber baby 3x
- smush parker like bb comment on instagram saying "u fucka suck idiyote"
- smush beer on head and didn't cry
- parallel parked in between 2 ferrari's in tonky truck once
- when saying pledge of allegiance i said "i don't" lmao deadass bb satan
- won tshirt from taco bell saying "taco cat" is the same backwards for filling out 500 surveys in a
- neighbor house caught on fire i call FIRE department and saved lives, was in newspaper
- set neighbor house on fire lmao
- fuck neighbor husband and wife
- first fish caught resembled david ortiz
- colin kaepernick
- related to genghis khan
- elected assistant to the vice president assistant to the president for regional chess club
- never lost game of hide and seek
Rep Power: 8599678 |
super conservative
if…
I get to the point where no ones’ love embroiders me, I’d mix the oils, clay, and color coordinate the sordid seams avoid distaste. annointed is the day shes holding me hoist your rose colored lies on a crown of thorny leaves hearing voices, and all of them enjoy to scream tend to open wounds, forget the ointment and gauze nirvanas intensely consoling. and im pointing to God for answers. for pensive motions, for something to want memorized medusas feet, & my neck is at odds alleged moments, you put me through in the dark memory wash, collective dullness, deafness and sob took years to look at you in the eye, and your tear ducts the only thing set to stone was the mountain between us consider the fact, were considering redacting whats upsetting to me isnt your lack of attention you could whisper sweet nothings, molasses infested but that wouldnt matter. instead its your ignorance your palid irreverence against my calloused dejection your beg to differs, go figures, your knack for these idioms perhaps, its your undercut mouthing of idiot the teeth grind to the bone you experience perhaps, its that motherfucking tone its delivered in your no holds bargain, your zone defense, the hole in my heart crayola waxy pastels, bargain wine, oily art watery eyes and no control is as close to oblivion as broken hearts, ash tray and continued bewilderment embark through the shadow, the only thing keeping’ me going apart from fleeting emotion, is gravity from this blackhole swear to god i got a disease in my bones called squeezing inanimate objects and pretend its your palm they say deceit can be told from your eyes but my god, the green in them brings me closer to god i just want to be normal. i want to be calm what bothers me is you couldnt be honest wallowing like diogenes as a prophet covering half truths, misinformative topics performative love. banker turned art major sharp razor, broadway liberal con finagle how are you able? to resort to untrue resourcefullness now all of a sudden youre super conservative? save it.
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10-18-2020, 08:01 AM | #3 |
consults Lloyd
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I liked this a lot
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10-19-2020, 02:57 PM | #4 |
obsessed
Join Date: Nov 2013
Location: fucka idiyote
Posts: 5,716
Battle Record: Faggot-1
Accomplishments - can recite entirety of shrek 2
Champed - tangoed with spider man behind scenes in spider-man 2
- was candidate for gerber baby 3x
- smush parker like bb comment on instagram saying "u fucka suck idiyote"
- smush beer on head and didn't cry
- parallel parked in between 2 ferrari's in tonky truck once
- when saying pledge of allegiance i said "i don't" lmao deadass bb satan
- won tshirt from taco bell saying "taco cat" is the same backwards for filling out 500 surveys in a
- neighbor house caught on fire i call FIRE department and saved lives, was in newspaper
- set neighbor house on fire lmao
- fuck neighbor husband and wife
- first fish caught resembled david ortiz
- colin kaepernick
- related to genghis khan
- elected assistant to the vice president assistant to the president for regional chess club
- never lost game of hide and seek
Rep Power: 8599678 |
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10-19-2020, 02:58 PM | #5 |
obsessed
Join Date: Nov 2013
Location: fucka idiyote
Posts: 5,716
Battle Record: Faggot-1
Accomplishments - can recite entirety of shrek 2
Champed - tangoed with spider man behind scenes in spider-man 2
- was candidate for gerber baby 3x
- smush parker like bb comment on instagram saying "u fucka suck idiyote"
- smush beer on head and didn't cry
- parallel parked in between 2 ferrari's in tonky truck once
- when saying pledge of allegiance i said "i don't" lmao deadass bb satan
- won tshirt from taco bell saying "taco cat" is the same backwards for filling out 500 surveys in a
- neighbor house caught on fire i call FIRE department and saved lives, was in newspaper
- set neighbor house on fire lmao
- fuck neighbor husband and wife
- first fish caught resembled david ortiz
- colin kaepernick
- related to genghis khan
- elected assistant to the vice president assistant to the president for regional chess club
- never lost game of hide and seek
Rep Power: 8599678 |
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10-19-2020, 05:48 PM | #6 |
Everything's Connected
Join Date: Nov 2017
Location: Niagara Falls, Canada
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I echo Scar's sentiments... but if you need to hear it again...
Wow. Your talent is wasted here, bb. Fly away.
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10-19-2020, 08:00 PM | #7 |
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This is deep. Definitely on another level than most cats as intellect goes. Most cats here probably can't understand most of it. LOL.
Reminds me of when I use to rap on the Lyricists Lounge back in the day. I can't remember when, but I use to be in OMNI, OWV and maybe that's it. It was eons ago. I mean if you just sit back and just understand your first 2 lines, its sick. I even like the forth line "hoist your rose colored lies on a crown of thorny leaves" I think here your saying you'll put em back from where they came from? Anyways I don't have time to go thru it all,but I definitely dig it. One up. |
10-25-2020, 12:21 AM | #8 |
living
Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 3,465
Battle Record: 33-18
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swear to god i got a disease in my bones
called squeezing inanimate objects and pretend its your palm loved truth is everything. its simple and cliche as can be. the breach of this breaks apart everything and makes our spaces vulnerable. in ourselves and others. sometimes we write about it. i think @Universe is mistaken saying your talents are wasted here. its a space to express. the audience is secondary. a different recourse is always an option but there's no wasted effort to worry about. we all know that habit is hard to break. thanks
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