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Old 01-22-2018, 02:47 PM   #1
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Default Flo Real vs. Orc - ORC WINS

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Due Dates:
  • Verses are due Thursday Jan 25th and will be open until Sunday.
  • Battles that lack votes may close later.
  • One sided battles may get closed early.
  • Extensions are 24 hours


Line Limit:
  • Minimum of 8, maximum of 16
  • If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first.

Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ

FAILURE TO VOTE ON 3 BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON 3 BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE!
THERE’S BEEN A LOT OF COMPLAINTS ABOUT VOTING RECENTLY, IF THERE IS SOMEONE WHO YOU DON’T WANT TO VOTE IN YOUR BATTLE YOU MUST STATE THEIR NAME IN YOUR CHECK IN. IF IT’S A CRAZY AMOUNT OF PEOPLE THEN SORRY YOU’RE JUST A BITCH AND ALL VOTES WILL COUNT. AS PER ORC

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Old 01-23-2018, 07:32 PM   #2
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Fucking potato lover got the win anyway

Look

Thinks cus he irish he got that boss level banter state
How you proud of a people defeated by complex carbohydrates
Fake rollin in cash, wearin suits to seem flash
He looks like fuckin Paul Walker....after the crash
Im lightning with the AK, you a flash in the pan
Leavin him white faced as i put the rounds to his body like the michelin man
I got my clips loaded, youtube got nothing on my mac brah
Giving you more face shots then pornhub could ever show ya
I could bring hof level fire, but to his fan club it dont matter what i say
I could fire off every AK line for battling an theyd both vote for you anyway
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Old 01-26-2018, 06:50 PM   #3
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Thinks cus he irish he got that boss level banter state
How you proud of a people defeated by complex carbohydrates
this could have been pretty cool but I don’t like how you did it
Fake rollin in cash, wearin suits to seem flash
He looks like fuckin Paul Walker....after the crash
nah man
Im lightning with the AK, you a flash in the pan
Leavin him white faced as i put the rounds to his body like the michelin man
somethings tells me this is played but can’t pin it so it’s prrtty cool
I got my clips loaded, youtube got nothing on my mac brah
Giving you more face shots then pornhub could ever show ya
decent
I could bring hof level fire, but to his fan club it dont matter what i say
I could fire off every AK line for battling an theyd both vote for you anyway
uh not quite sure what you’re going for here

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GOD par, I brought back the site eaaasy cuz I got bars,
&&& If you doing it for the Culture II... then that Migos shit will flop hard
ok
Adapt quicker... you gottaa up that tempo twerp
Right now you posting that old shit nobody cares about. Boy you KempoMRK
ok again
Ya girl foulll. I whipped out my Penis but I ain't hit, damnit bro
Trustt I took those Balls outta there quicker than Lavar did Melo & LiAngelo
lol nah man
Been passed ya girl around. I don't hide her
&&& it's real Ironic I Got A Good Feeling but she never letting Flo Rida
lol cool
Been a fact since beginning that u're wack.. is u kidding!?
It's pathetic that writing for you was wayy harder than actually winning
decent

I’ve got flo with 3 misses and orc with 1


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Old 01-28-2018, 09:45 AM   #4
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Originally Posted by Flo Real View Post
Fucking potato lover got the win anyway

Look

Thinks cus he irish he got that boss level banter state
How you proud of a people defeated by complex carbohydrates

Stretched and didn't connect

Fake rollin in cash, wearin suits to seem flash
He looks like fuckin Paul Walker....after the crash

Simple but funny

Im lightning with the AK, you a flash in the pan
Leavin him white faced as i put the rounds to his body like the michelin man

Weak

I got my clips loaded, youtube got nothing on my mac brah
Giving you more face shots then pornhub could ever show ya

Trash

I could bring hof level fire, but to his fan club it dont matter what i say
I could fire off every AK line for battling an theyd both vote for you anyway

Good


GOD par, I brought back the site eaaasy cuz I got bars,
&&& If you doing it for the Culture II... then that Migos shit will flop hard

Off

Adapt quicker... you gottaa up that tempo twerp
Right now you posting that old shit nobody cares about. Boy you KempoMRK

K.o.

Ya girl foulll. I whipped out my Penis but I ain't hit, damnit bro
Trustt I took those Balls outta there quicker than Lavar did Melo & LiAngelo

Awkward wording

Been passed ya girl around. I don't hide her
&&& it's real Ironic I Got A Good Feeling but she never letting Flo Rida

Good

Been a fact since beginning that u're wack.. is u kidding!?
It's pathetic that writing for you was wayy harder than actually winning

Nice


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Old 01-26-2018, 02:25 PM   #5
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GOD par, I brought back the site eaaasy cuz I got bars,
&&& If you doing it for the Culture II... then that Migos shit will flop hard
Adapt quicker... you gottaa up that tempo twerp
Right now you posting that old shit nobody cares about. Boy you KempoMRK
Ya girl foulll. I whipped out my Penis but I ain't hit, damnit bro
Trustt I took those Balls outta there quicker than Lavar did Melo & LiAngelo
Been passed ya girl around. I don't hide her
&&& it's real Ironic I Got A Good Feeling but she never letting Flo Rida
Been a fact since beginning that u're wack.. is u kidding!?
It's pathetic that writing for you was wayy harder than actually winning
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Old 01-28-2018, 05:00 AM   #6
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Originally Posted by Flo Real View Post
Fucking potato lover got the win anyway

Look

Thinks cus he irish he got that boss level banter state
How you proud of a people defeated by complex carbohydrates
Meh. 'Banter state' seems like really weird wording. And I'm assuming this is a reference to the Potato Famine, which means they weren't defeated by complex carbs, but by the lack of them. The idea was there, but it didn't work for me
Fake rollin in cash, wearin suits to seem flash
He looks like fuckin Paul Walker....after the crash
Alrightish
Im lightning with the AK, you a flash in the pan
Leavin him white faced as i put the rounds to his body like the michelin man
I liked it
I got my clips loaded, youtube got nothing on my mac brah
Giving you more face shots then pornhub could ever show ya
Eh, I feel like you lose impact writing two such similar lines in a row. The first one was better anyway
I could bring hof level fire, but to his fan club it dont matter what i say
I could fire off every AK line for battling an theyd both vote for you anyway
I liked the idea but the wording was off
Quote:
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GOD par, I brought back the site eaaasy cuz I got bars,
&&& If you doing it for the Culture II... then that Migos shit will flop hard
Not bad
Adapt quicker... you gottaa up that tempo twerp
Right now you posting that old shit nobody cares about. Boy you KempoMRK
Eh, alrightish
Ya girl foulll. I whipped out my Penis but I ain't hit, damnit bro
Trustt I took those Balls outta there quicker than Lavar did Melo & LiAngelo
Meh, I feel like I've read a bunch of Lavar related lines lately
Been passed ya girl around. I don't hide her
&&& it's real Ironic I Got A Good Feeling but she never letting Flo Rida
This was alright
Been a fact since beginning that u're wack.. is u kidding!?
It's pathetic that writing for you was wayy harder than actually winning
I liked this, had good swag
This was closer than I expected. It came down to consistency for me, with Orc having fewer misses, but Flo was right in this.

Vote - Orc
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Old 01-26-2018, 03:56 PM   #7
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Flo real.. that paul walker ish was decent, closer was clever.. overall u had a cuple decent hits jus lacked consistency.

Orc.. opener was coo, the kempomrk shit hit, that balls line was clever as fuck.. closer was a simple concept but worded good. Prolly the best verse ive read this week tbh

V/ orc
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Old 01-27-2018, 07:02 AM   #8
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Orc wins

Flo had the Michelin man.

Orc Besides the ball line. Pretty solid verse.
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Old 01-27-2018, 09:01 PM   #9
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flo, looking at the paul walker line & your avy pretty much screams u're cynical. use that ta ur advantage as a strength & def build offf that. I feel the sick mind will get u far as you develop into ur own w.punchlines. read some battles as well. the M man line is played, ive actually seen that very similar somewhere else before i feel but might be trippin. read some battle & def grow. look fwrd to seeing it

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