lol

CopyPat · 07-13-2016, 01:01 PM

My rhymin steez is lime disease, I kinda keeps it rugged. Your style is weak you smiling quiffe, vaginas need this fuckin. I ride the beat percussions on time with each combustion. And I could chew up Every rapper, but I don’t eat Mcmuffins. You guys are easy targets, so why compete? Retarded? I’m fire with speech, you’re dying of heat, my dialect leaves ya gutted. I’m higher than being a hundred, I’m higher than queens in London, I’m higher than even fuckin Ireland seems from Russia.…Which is basically a lateral so I’m kinda confused…My brain just seems illogical when rhyming these tunes. Cause I am the dude with the poisonous pen, writing improved, turnin boys into men. And that last part was weak and a little bit wack, so let me trash talk you geeks wearin feminine pads. I’m a grass sparkin genius when I get in the hash. So let me hashtag my penis like #GETINDATASS. I’m a rap star, I’m Venus to you lesser of planets, like I’m from Asgard the leader of the rest of these fags. I’m like a Nascar competer way I'm reppin these tracks. You need a flash smart computer just to settle my laps. I never act hard, the ruler says I’m 10 when I'm flaccid, so if your math’s smart you truly know this gentleman’s stacked. BUT NO @Certain THIS ISN’T ABOUT ME WIENER. The flows perfect. Forget about it: Senior. I wrote verses to getcha out ya seaters, like a cold surface when ya sittin by some heaters. I live a lie, it’s secret. I’m civilized, I'm decent. I'm kidding guys, I mean it. I’m sitting by, I’m FIENDISH!! I’m spitting rhymes from deep in my little mind and weaving a million styles; you even consider trying to equal my shitty kinds you’d freeze up. Let alone the nice ones… The vet of open mic’s come to settle this. Goodnight, done.

Witty · 07-13-2016, 07:21 PM

Beast mode.

Too good.

Stop it.

Quarter O · 07-15-2016, 04:22 AM

Proper as fuck

sral · 07-15-2016, 06:41 AM

Its fire I breath in lines like these, my minds a dreary dungeon. Try to beef? you'll find it seasoned by the heat I'm cooking. I'll ignite the greasy oven that your wifey keeps your bun in. Texts Ron Jeremy, always someone that you like to see, butt fuck it. You try to be regarded like a trapeze artist. Your lines are weak, find your feet or die competing for nothing. This kind of egos destructive but you guys been sleeping on son since I write for me and just jump in every cypher, league or discussion! No rhyme or reasons the culprit, it's just fire I breathe like a Vulpix and I've no time to read up your bullshit, your fave writer seen I'm above him, then retired clean once I won shit.

I might come back haha my appointment at works here

dope sauce bruh

UnbornBuddha · 07-17-2016, 12:52 AM

Entertaining, albeit it seems like a keystyle. Well a lot of your pieces read like keystyles. Good fun keystyles though, filled with melodic rhythm and hip hop extravaganza. I enjoy the manipulation of the schemes and how you mesh them with a braggadocio flair. It is entertaining. Its something that captivates, but it is a captivation that is superficial. It doesn't penetrate into the core of a person's heart. It doesn't give hope, or bring insight to how you think or how that can relate to their experiences. Rather it fills the reader's mind with a flurry of comedic streams of thoughts. And doing this well is commendable. It is its own style. For me, it amuses me but doesn't really do much else. It's has semblance to some of MC Juice's renditions, stylistically speaking.
Thanks.

Split Eight · 07-23-2016, 06:43 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by CopyPat

You guys are easy targets, so why compete? Retarded? I’m fire with speech, you’re dying of heat, my dialect leaves ya gutted. I’m higher than being a hundred, I’m higher than queens in London, I’m higher than even fuckin Ireland seems from Russia.…Which is basically a lateral so I’m kinda confused…My brain just seems illogical when rhyming these tunes. Cause I am the dude with the poisonous pen, writing improved, turnin boys into men. And that last part was weak and a little bit wack, so let me trash talk you geeks wearin feminine pads. I’m a grass sparkin genius when I get in the hash. So let me hashtag my penis like #GETINDATASS.

LMAO

my dad is alive btw

This was dope though, I can't even critique haha it's all so necessary to being a CopyPat verse. Schemes were dope especially in this part, not so much the end. KEEP WRITING

Mr. J · 07-27-2016, 02:54 AM

this was some nice work right here...nice seeing that mole head pop out haha
nice work with the rhyming as usual that fluid flow makes this work oh so well
really enjoyable ride nonetheless...keep it up

07-13-2016, 01:01 PM	#1
CopyPat Mic Check Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Calgary Alberta Canada Posts: 707 Battle Record: 13-10 Rep Power: 3742221	lol My rhymin steez is lime disease, I kinda keeps it rugged. Your style is weak you smiling quiffe, vaginas need this fuckin. I ride the beat percussions on time with each combustion. And I could chew up Every rapper, but I don’t eat Mcmuffins. You guys are easy targets, so why compete? Retarded? I’m fire with speech, you’re dying of heat, my dialect leaves ya gutted. I’m higher than being a hundred, I’m higher than queens in London, I’m higher than even fuckin Ireland seems from Russia.…Which is basically a lateral so I’m kinda confused…My brain just seems illogical when rhyming these tunes. Cause I am the dude with the poisonous pen, writing improved, turnin boys into men. And that last part was weak and a little bit wack, so let me trash talk you geeks wearin feminine pads. I’m a grass sparkin genius when I get in the hash. So let me hashtag my penis like #GETINDATASS. I’m a rap star, I’m Venus to you lesser of planets, like I’m from Asgard the leader of the rest of these fags. I’m like a Nascar competer way I'm reppin these tracks. You need a flash smart computer just to settle my laps. I never act hard, the ruler says I’m 10 when I'm flaccid, so if your math’s smart you truly know this gentleman’s stacked. BUT NO @Certain THIS ISN’T ABOUT ME WIENER. The flows perfect. Forget about it: Senior. I wrote verses to getcha out ya seaters, like a cold surface when ya sittin by some heaters. I live a lie, it’s secret. I’m civilized, I'm decent. I'm kidding guys, I mean it. I’m sitting by, I’m FIENDISH!! I’m spitting rhymes from deep in my little mind and weaving a million styles; you even consider trying to equal my shitty kinds you’d freeze up. Let alone the nice ones… The vet of open mic’s come to settle this. Goodnight, done. __________________ My syllable count approximately a billion, bounce. You cannot compete.

07-13-2016, 07:21 PM	#2
Witty Lime Life Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 16,794 Battle Record: 30-41 Accomplishments - Only Slightly Retarded Champed - Lyric Olympics - Summer Classic Rep Power: 82986458	Beast mode. Too good. Stop it. __________________ He listens to voices inside of his mind Explicit and poisonous violent crime.

07-15-2016, 06:41 AM	#4
sral Shrewd as evearthed Join Date: Aug 2014 Location: Wolverhampton, England Posts: 8,255 Battle Record: 28-3 Champed - Gimmick Battle League - The Winter Topical - Topical Martyrs - Lime Green Poetry Association - Lyric Olympics - Art of Writing League - Guerrilla Writing League (2x) - Black August II Rep Power: 85899391	Its fire I breath in lines like these, my minds a dreary dungeon. Try to beef? you'll find it seasoned by the heat I'm cooking. I'll ignite the greasy oven that your wifey keeps your bun in. Texts Ron Jeremy, always someone that you like to see, butt fuck it. You try to be regarded like a trapeze artist. Your lines are weak, find your feet or die competing for nothing. This kind of egos destructive but you guys been sleeping on son since I write for me and just jump in every cypher, league or discussion! No rhyme or reasons the culprit, it's just fire I breathe like a Vulpix and I've no time to read up your bullshit, your fave writer seen I'm above him, then retired clean once I won shit. I might come back haha my appointment at works here dope sauce bruh __________________ - Netcees Rebuttal Tourney - Art of Writing League (x 4) - AOWL Season 11 Champion (Undefeated Season) Last edited by sral; 07-15-2016 at 07:58 AM.

07-27-2016, 02:54 AM	#7
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,025 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349678	this was some nice work right here...nice seeing that mole head pop out haha nice work with the rhyming as usual that fluid flow makes this work oh so well really enjoyable ride nonetheless...keep it up __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you

07-15-2016, 04:22 AM	#3
Quarter O Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2015 Posts: 109 Rep Power: 0	Proper as fuck

07-17-2016, 12:52 AM	#5
UnbornBuddha Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 1,008 Battle Record: 23-10 Champed - Art of Writing League - AOWL Season 5 Rep Power: 23856375	Entertaining, albeit it seems like a keystyle. Well a lot of your pieces read like keystyles. Good fun keystyles though, filled with melodic rhythm and hip hop extravaganza. I enjoy the manipulation of the schemes and how you mesh them with a braggadocio flair. It is entertaining. Its something that captivates, but it is a captivation that is superficial. It doesn't penetrate into the core of a person's heart. It doesn't give hope, or bring insight to how you think or how that can relate to their experiences. Rather it fills the reader's mind with a flurry of comedic streams of thoughts. And doing this well is commendable. It is its own style. For me, it amuses me but doesn't really do much else. It's has semblance to some of MC Juice's renditions, stylistically speaking. Thanks.