04-24-2014, 09:47 PM | #1 |
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schizoaffective. difficult answers for your simplest question
you can find me like anyone, lost in liquor dementia pouring Cobras onto graves like it's a fitting remembrance when it only made them weaker like a biblical reference does to a verse. wrists shackled but i'm cutting them first open mic is purgatory and discussion is church i'm the sum of all totals. symbols, sun and the earth improv-ing. Chris Walken when he doesn't rehearse semi-functional - worse, i function fully. the worst drunk in the car. drunk when i'm home. drunk when i work flask, ready at hand, latex gloves to a nurse the reason she decides to keep a gun in her purse. BANG
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04-24-2014, 11:12 PM | #2 |
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entered the world/developed the germ from hoes on a mattress. audio's plastic -- Van Gogh with an aural attachment had the smell of sunflowers grow through the nose's olfaction. infinite. intimate. English just made an anime reference. he's lazy. but not for his lack of brain effort. i'm a null morpheme, love morphine, done morphing faces: picked one mask but found the conversion basic. converse with ancients - unlearning patience, sun, urn and fragrance. if i stay the brothers'll blaze, busy self-destructing with sweethearts on motherless bays with a lover's decay. why? i don't know. son couldn't say. BLAM |
04-25-2014, 12:04 AM | #3 |
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Psychotic. I smash faces with radio waves, my iPod's gay,
Saigon rape, I wipe my dick with a white broad's cape, I type all day. None of it reflects a sentence, intelligent, mentally deficient, menace, My self perception's diminished, blemished, So fuck my image ... lettuce. I'm the guy who doesn’t recognize a grimace, felons, When a cunt’s at it’s limit, Imma stuff stuff in it, lemons, I'm a character, I don't mind a gimmick , fap it, chemist, Sometimes I dress up in denims and rape under sevens. I'm Dennis. HUH? Last edited by Illume; 04-25-2014 at 02:00 AM. |
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to me, what sets dead apart is his ability to piece together stark sayings, things, nouns and make them tangible to a motive of a person and his emotions behind them...it's all in that expression in his thought into an action
this opening is a good example Quote:
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Dead man makes good use of his sentences. I like the opening couple lines, but the biblical reference part fell flat for me. ENG's 'un-learning patience' section was genius. |
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04-25-2014, 02:17 PM | #6 |
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Thanks I try to use sentences
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I wish I could use sentences like you.
Anyways, this was dope. Short, but dope. lol'd @ it turning into a cypher thread.
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04-26-2014, 09:00 AM | #10 |
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discussion is church
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04-26-2014, 10:37 AM | #11 |
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True wise. My bad og
Geno you already KNO
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04-26-2014, 10:56 AM | #12 |
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that wasn't disrespectful yo. it was a nod. js.
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04-26-2014, 11:53 AM | #13 |
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Say it out loud
they say om died well so did every soul that writes haikus, poems and rhymes under the guise of - a message board. no face no trace, don't say you haven't been a little misplaced. in your life - i know you had, depression. maybe psychosis maybe lonely & looking for some way of closure, i can't judge. i was that kid back 10 years ago no place for my tears to go. rap game my vendetta, but nobody heard like silent letters. im better now, havent heard from old friends in forever now, started to give up. but i still got this hope - now when i write its not bitter, twisted fiction the world wants connection. no, the worlds wants - to be lied to. fed grapes and deprived of thought. and us writers are all damaged cause we think alot. and us writers are damaged cause we drink alot, no friends at this depth so you sink alot. yeah, i know. its cliche but i bet you relate, cause you keep coming back even if you changed. and then you wonder why. maybe its promise of glory if some record exec read my story, or yet- you could still be repressed. too scared to scream so you swallow every word into the screen. damn, whats your life mean? can't hide in the veil, the curtains gotta retract you can't bail. nah, im tired of hiding. im tired of the schemers, i know my shit goes harder than most mainstreamers, i know my shit goes harder and i won't give in, us writers got that empty bottle in our vis-ion, shit what if the bottle reversed from your hand, the liquor filled up to the brim, the words spilled all over your chin, not into your gut. and you told em' you ready to fuck. you told em you had enough. what then? would you turn to om? or would you, turn to the mic or a publisher. become of worth - see, you got two choices as a maverick like me, you can either drown or bleed. blood is ink, pain is a pen. i'd like you to tell me whats it worth when im dead . . . .
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that brittle protective. initials whittled in benches.
I'm a little self-referential. you can tell I use stencils, I'm still in detention, I've gotten my fill of correction with the pills and the lessons, the thick of these lenses, I'm quick to attention when I'm all focused up. Im sick of sending these sentences. Think I'll go for a run, then I write till my head hurts til these rhymes run together, til these finals are done, til the fine in the weather has sighed into dusk.
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Throw em imto Vinegar tubs...
Amoxicillin just not real enough, let this fizzle in your cut. Like that scene in Fight Club "his name was Robert Paulson you ignorant fuck Sinister stuff, sounds vivid enough. couple crills sit in my gut, while I sit, fingerprinted in cuffs. Joker smile. villanly crimsony blush - ear to ear stitches, split open cuz I'm grinning too much
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pull you closer, magnum opus. glimmer glamorous gem
bestowed. scarlet begonias with a lavender stem engaged to contentment, while i'm content with a snack i ate the dingo with babies in her intestinal tract no leftover scraps, no tupperware. it's fresher than that fresher than residue on my vegetable rack tried to overdose in 7th grade in chemistry class i was summoned for a minute but i'm ready to pass.
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