DEAD MAN VS. LARS: THE TOPOCALYPSE IS OPEN FOR VOTES - Page 2

Certain · 03-02-2014, 12:37 AM

@Mael and @Trademark, vote or don't comment on a match. What are you, new?

03-02-2014, 12:50 AM

Yup, noob status, bruh.

03-02-2014, 12:52 AM

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Originally Posted by Mael

I agree with this. A dead man verse is almost like a compilation of metaphorical one-liners. The problem I have, as you mentioned, is finding direction. I feel as though the content of his writing holds a lot of substance and wit, but isn't grounded to a topic, instead drifts off into a series of reflective thoughts that make his work entirely conclusive, opposed to depth and participatory value, leaving little to no room for interpretation. He sort of tells us the moral(s) of the story in greater details than the story itself. More swag, less objectivity. Abstract. Lateral thinker. That whole lack of capitalization and intentional broken grammar. I picture dead man as a person interested in the more grotesque nature of life. Semi-introverted and extremely specific. His sometimes over abusive usage of exotic & obscure words, I find, gains its aesthetic value from sound rather than syntax.

Lars, on the other hand, is the complete opposite of everything I just said. He's more the mathematician. Cold, formulaic, open-ended. The Armchair bandit.

Either way, I'm just a mid tier topicalist having a little rant. Both are part of the GOATs.

Word.

Seyance · 03-02-2014, 11:03 AM

i'm glad you're thinking about critique that deep mael, gives me up for this generation.

this is a match up worthy of the final and the verses haven't disappointed either, great showing from both, real dope verses. i'll vote later tonight, win/win for the crew thoo..

PancakeBrah · 03-03-2014, 10:35 AM

Upwards

PancakeBrah · 03-04-2014, 11:13 AM

Up

Mael · 03-04-2014, 11:16 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Seyance

i'm glad you're thinking about critique that deep mael, gives me up for this generation.

I didn't get the second part..

Seyance · 03-04-2014, 11:18 AM

hope

Mael · 03-04-2014, 11:20 AM

Word. That must be a British thing.

Seyance · 03-04-2014, 11:21 AM

naa, just me being too high type properly thing.

PancakeBrah · 03-04-2014, 08:45 PM

To the top, even though it's on the first page still?

Yes.

Ghost1 · 03-04-2014, 08:47 PM

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Originally Posted by Seyance

naa, just me being too high type properly thing.

Lol. This sentence tho.....

Certain · 03-05-2014, 09:52 PM

Up.

Seyance · 03-06-2014, 07:03 AM

haha that amnesia haze had me sat planted for ages. it also made me forget to vote, i will get at it today, so should everyone else,

PancakeBrah · 03-06-2014, 12:49 PM

To the top

Certain · 03-07-2014, 04:06 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by El Pancake

To the top

03-02-2014, 12:37 AM	#21
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,072 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899402	@Mael and @Trademark, vote or don't comment on a match. What are you, new? __________________ I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws.

03-02-2014, 11:03 AM	#24
Seyance - Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 1,060 Battle Record: 0-4 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (2x) Champed - Fight Night VII Rep Power: 0	i'm glad you're thinking about critique that deep mael, gives me up for this generation. this is a match up worthy of the final and the verses haven't disappointed either, great showing from both, real dope verses. i'll vote later tonight, win/win for the crew thoo.. __________________ i'm truely renaissance.. dominate the web, television, movies and beyond when a leader gets to speaking, it's your duty to respond.. i'm a leave these niggas leaking like i'm julian assange.

03-04-2014, 11:18 AM	#28
Seyance - Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 1,060 Battle Record: 0-4 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (2x) Champed - Fight Night VII Rep Power: 0	hope __________________ i'm truely renaissance.. dominate the web, television, movies and beyond when a leader gets to speaking, it's your duty to respond.. i'm a leave these niggas leaking like i'm julian assange.

03-04-2014, 11:21 AM	#30
Seyance - Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 1,060 Battle Record: 0-4 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (2x) Champed - Fight Night VII Rep Power: 0	naa, just me being too high type properly thing. __________________ i'm truely renaissance.. dominate the web, television, movies and beyond when a leader gets to speaking, it's your duty to respond.. i'm a leave these niggas leaking like i'm julian assange.

03-04-2014, 08:45 PM	#31
PancakeBrah SOBER Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 13,052 Battle Record: 2-5 Champed - AOWL Season 2 Rep Power: 85899406	To the top, even though it's on the first page still? Yes. __________________ If I ventured in the slipstream Between the viaducts of your dreams Where immobil steel rims crack And the ditch in the back road stop Could you find me?

03-02-2014, 12:50 AM	#22
Sicc Guest Posts: n/a	Yup, noob status, bruh.

03-03-2014, 10:35 AM	#25
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03-04-2014, 11:20 AM	#29
Mael Almighty Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 580 Battle Record: 2-3 Rep Power: 428841	Word. That must be a British thing.

03-05-2014, 09:52 PM	#33
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,072 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899402	Up.

03-06-2014, 07:03 AM	#34
Seyance - Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 1,060 Battle Record: 0-4 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (2x) Champed - Fight Night VII Rep Power: 0	haha that amnesia haze had me sat planted for ages. it also made me forget to vote, i will get at it today, so should everyone else, __________________ i'm truely renaissance.. dominate the web, television, movies and beyond when a leader gets to speaking, it's your duty to respond.. i'm a leave these niggas leaking like i'm julian assange.

03-06-2014, 12:49 PM	#35
PancakeBrah SOBER Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 13,052 Battle Record: 2-5 Champed - AOWL Season 2 Rep Power: 85899406	To the top