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Old 05-25-2020, 06:25 PM   #1
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Default Week 8 Contendership Match: Allen Knight (3-1) vs. Adverse (4-2) - AK wins

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Due Dates:
• Verses are due FRIDAY by 11:59 PM PST.
• Voting ends MONDAY ideally
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours, anything longer is a DQ and/or Double DQ
• To avoid issues, you are encouraged to PM me your verse in advance

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• The max. can be higher if different is agreed upon by both.

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Old 05-25-2020, 07:14 PM   #2
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Oh man, let's do this.

10-12? Unless you wanna do more?
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Old 05-25-2020, 09:17 PM   #3
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Old 05-29-2020, 01:13 PM   #4
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Old 05-29-2020, 10:27 PM   #5
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Ext plz.

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Old 05-31-2020, 02:57 AM   #6
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No show verse shame shame

From a couple NS wins to contenders, they prob in Blue PM like "he didn't deserve this!"
Funny, Allen family yelling the same thing, hysterical around his casket at the end of the service
Who’s the first person he call when he see Iron, Pigs?! Well that’s fine by me
Irony - pull up to Allentown and bash em with the bat, cuz just like THAT team he’s been minor league
You ain't never had a bad bitch, nah fam never been player
Closest to a Pam Anderson he's been is when i give Al the tool like Tim Taylor
Gun bar after gun bar you ain't gonna show and I'm bored boy
Execution style, put that cap in the back your neck dude can't breathe - George Floyd
Shots shred his mug won't even be able to tell this herbs identity
You gon wish I never Metaknight, metal all on his face like a Kirby enemy
Good you no showed, you wouldn't even stand a chance, sir..
Put the Dread in Allen, I will be the one who's facing Answer
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Old 05-31-2020, 03:11 AM   #7
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I had my verse I sent it to blue.
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Old 05-31-2020, 03:12 AM   #8
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ya Alma mater been doin gay shit, leavin u torn & ravaged
the amount of Boise State been in that ass could fill every dorm on campus
id rob ya w/ the uzi & hollows leave ya memory blank w nonsense
Cuz Adobe snatched in a Flashdrive off Till his last memory can't be processed
How the fuck u in the contenders? Ur wack & it's ova ock
Ironic u beatin Forklift ur career but that material u spit shoulda placed u in a lower spot
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Pop up on Adblock, twin shotti's aimed at ya face..ill point an click till ya disappear
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I'm pushin 100 Gramophone call while ur an informant trying to record my cell convos
Ur to stupid to show how to write bars, this cunt isn't nice
it isn't easy to teach Adolescent, faggot couldnt develop a decent punch in his life
ya verse last week was the only good shit u ever dropped..believe me whore
you couldn't channel that state of mind again during a all nighter w/ a Ouija board
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Old 05-31-2020, 03:15 AM   #9
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Bruh. Close.

I shall be back
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Old 05-31-2020, 11:19 AM   #10
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Who’s the first person he call when he see Iron, Pigs?! Well that’s fine by me
Irony - pull up to Allentown and bash em with the bat, cuz just like THAT team he’s been minor league
You ain't never had a bad bitch, nah fam never been player
Closest to a Pam Anderson he's been is when i give Al the tool like Tim Taylor

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ya Alma mater been doin gay shit, leavin u torn & ravaged
the amount of Boise State been in that ass could fill every dorm on campus
How the fuck u in the contenders? Ur wack & it's ova ock
Ironic u beatin Forklift ur career but that material u spit shoulda placed u in a lower spot
Ur to stupid to show how to write bars, this cunt isn't nice
it isn't easy to teach Adolescent, faggot couldnt develop a decent punch in his life


v-allen

he was just more consistent all around, went a little overkill on the nameplays felt some of em' were forced. but he still edged it with more punches that connected imo.
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Old 06-01-2020, 06:49 AM   #11
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Damn. I got 3 to 4 here. Allen with the edge. Ad had some dope concepts. Intro was fire plus his last two but Allen had his first three and closer.

Fucking close
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Old 06-01-2020, 02:07 PM   #12
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Old 06-01-2020, 02:57 PM   #13
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This was a pretty close and decent battle.

But, maaaan. More of these weird word combination punches (adolescent... forklift.. etc). I guess that’s what this site has decided it likes, and that is what it is, but I don’t see the appeal at all.. unless there’s a clear double meaning that works both ways. Typing words that happen to sound like several other words combined together, by itself, isn’t witty. It comes off so forced.

That said, the second verse (Chamber or Allen Knight or whomever) was the better verse of the two. Leaving aside the issue above, he had some cool concepts and it read/flowed much better than the first verse. Maybe the only thing worse than those odd word combos are back to back bars that are really long. There’s just no way to read that in any kind of natural way. And the first verse’s ideas/concepts weren’t quite as good as the second, anyway. So, Chamber wins, in a close one.
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Old 06-01-2020, 04:35 PM   #14
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From a couple NS wins to contenders, they prob in Blue PM like "he didn't deserve this!"
Funny, Allen family yelling the same thing, hysterical around his casket at the end of the service
nice opener
Who’s the first person he call when he see Iron, Pigs?! Well that’s fine by me
Irony - pull up to Allentown and bash em with the bat, cuz just like THAT team he’s been minor league
seems a bit simple
You ain't never had a bad bitch, nah fam never been player
Closest to a Pam Anderson he's been is when i give Al the tool like Tim Taylor
home improvement? bit of a reach
Gun bar after gun bar you ain't gonna show and I'm bored boy
Execution style, put that cap in the back your neck dude can't breathe - George Floyd
don't like this, Im guessing this is just no show filler?
Shots shred his mug won't even be able to tell this herbs identity
You gon wish I never Metaknight, metal all on his face like a Kirby enemy
wording is awkard and the ending could've been a lot better
Good you no showed, you wouldn't even stand a chance, sir..
Put the Dread in Allen, I will be the one who's facing Answer
opening bar was real nice but I don't think anything else was on that level tbh


ya Alma mater been doin gay shit, leavin u torn & ravaged
the amount of Boise State been in that ass could fill every dorm on campus
decent opener, could've been worded slightly better I think
id rob ya w/ the uzi & hollows leave ya memory blank w nonsense
Cuz Adobe snatched in a Flashdrive off Till his last memory can't be processed
don't get what youre going for with 'Adobe'? is it a name play? don't get it
How the fuck u in the contenders? Ur wack & it's ova ock
Ironic u beatin Forklift ur career but that material u spit shoulda placed u in a lower spot
decent this is better
I'm always down for drama w/ heat, got clips to rip this queer
Pop up on Adblock, twin shotti's aimed at ya face..ill point an click till ya disappear
wayyy better, like this
Druggy I'm causing u hell pronto, snitchin is this frail's motto
I'm pushin 100 Gramophone call while ur an informant trying to record my cell convos
100 gram a phone call? this only works if the word Gramophone has any relevance which I cant see? also for the setup rhyme to be that awkward when it doesn't even fully rhyme isn't great
Ur to stupid to show how to write bars, this cunt isn't nice
it isn't easy to teach Adolescent, faggot couldnt develop a decent punch in his life
name play is decent but could've been worded better I think
ya verse last week was the only good shit u ever dropped..believe me whore
you couldn't channel that state of mind again during a all nighter w/ a Ouija board
decent finish


I think Adverse's opener was nice but he was disappointing after that. Allen Knight had more interesting ideas and concepts, some of them were worded a bit off for me AdBlock maybe LOTB.

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