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05-25-2020, 06:25 PM | #1 |
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Week 8 Contendership Match: Allen Knight (3-1) vs. Adverse (4-2) - AK wins
NBL Season XIV Rules Due Dates: • Verses are due FRIDAY by 11:59 PM PST. • Voting ends MONDAY ideally • Battles that lack votes may close later. • One sided battles may get closed early. • Extensions are 24 hours, anything longer is a DQ and/or Double DQ • To avoid issues, you are encouraged to PM me your verse in advance Line Limit: • Min. = 14 lines • Max. = 20 lines • The max. can be higher if different is agreed upon by both. Voting: • I do not have time to count links, and I know nobody wants to post them because it’s tedious. Do your part and vote or I’m making house calls. General Rules: • 1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts. • 2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made. • Feeding = DQ. • Recycling = DQ. • Biting = DQ. • No freeposting, swaying or bitching. • Unless a picture battle is agreed upon, linking to your opponent's picture or posting it means you will disqualified. • A check in isn't mandatory, but it is encouraged. • If your opponent doesn't check in, you still have to post a verse. • Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in. • If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post must match the 1st person's line amount, and can’t post more lines. @Allen Knight @Adverse
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05-25-2020, 07:14 PM | #2 |
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Oh man, let's do this.
10-12? Unless you wanna do more? |
05-25-2020, 09:17 PM | #3 |
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12's good.
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05-29-2020, 01:13 PM | #4 |
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Ext plz.
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05-29-2020, 10:27 PM | #5 |
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05-31-2020, 02:57 AM | #6 |
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No show verse shame shame
From a couple NS wins to contenders, they prob in Blue PM like "he didn't deserve this!" Funny, Allen family yelling the same thing, hysterical around his casket at the end of the service Who’s the first person he call when he see Iron, Pigs?! Well that’s fine by me Irony - pull up to Allentown and bash em with the bat, cuz just like THAT team he’s been minor league You ain't never had a bad bitch, nah fam never been player Closest to a Pam Anderson he's been is when i give Al the tool like Tim Taylor Gun bar after gun bar you ain't gonna show and I'm bored boy Execution style, put that cap in the back your neck dude can't breathe - George Floyd Shots shred his mug won't even be able to tell this herbs identity You gon wish I never Metaknight, metal all on his face like a Kirby enemy Good you no showed, you wouldn't even stand a chance, sir.. Put the Dread in Allen, I will be the one who's facing Answer |
05-31-2020, 03:11 AM | #7 |
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I had my verse I sent it to blue.
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05-31-2020, 03:12 AM | #8 |
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ya Alma mater been doin gay shit, leavin u torn & ravaged
the amount of Boise State been in that ass could fill every dorm on campus id rob ya w/ the uzi & hollows leave ya memory blank w nonsense Cuz Adobe snatched in a Flashdrive off Till his last memory can't be processed How the fuck u in the contenders? Ur wack & it's ova ock Ironic u beatin Forklift ur career but that material u spit shoulda placed u in a lower spot I'm always down for drama w/ heat, got clips to rip this queer Pop up on Adblock, twin shotti's aimed at ya face..ill point an click till ya disappear Druggy I'm causing u hell pronto, snitchin is this frail's motto I'm pushin 100 Gramophone call while ur an informant trying to record my cell convos Ur to stupid to show how to write bars, this cunt isn't nice it isn't easy to teach Adolescent, faggot couldnt develop a decent punch in his life ya verse last week was the only good shit u ever dropped..believe me whore you couldn't channel that state of mind again during a all nighter w/ a Ouija board
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05-31-2020, 03:15 AM | #9 |
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Bruh. Close.
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05-31-2020, 11:19 AM | #10 |
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Who’s the first person he call when he see Iron, Pigs?! Well that’s fine by me
Irony - pull up to Allentown and bash em with the bat, cuz just like THAT team he’s been minor league You ain't never had a bad bitch, nah fam never been player Closest to a Pam Anderson he's been is when i give Al the tool like Tim Taylor vs ya Alma mater been doin gay shit, leavin u torn & ravaged the amount of Boise State been in that ass could fill every dorm on campus How the fuck u in the contenders? Ur wack & it's ova ock Ironic u beatin Forklift ur career but that material u spit shoulda placed u in a lower spot Ur to stupid to show how to write bars, this cunt isn't nice it isn't easy to teach Adolescent, faggot couldnt develop a decent punch in his life v-allen he was just more consistent all around, went a little overkill on the nameplays felt some of em' were forced. but he still edged it with more punches that connected imo. |
06-01-2020, 06:49 AM | #11 |
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Damn. I got 3 to 4 here. Allen with the edge. Ad had some dope concepts. Intro was fire plus his last two but Allen had his first three and closer.
Fucking close |
06-01-2020, 02:07 PM | #12 |
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Uppp
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06-01-2020, 02:57 PM | #13 |
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This was a pretty close and decent battle.
But, maaaan. More of these weird word combination punches (adolescent... forklift.. etc). I guess that’s what this site has decided it likes, and that is what it is, but I don’t see the appeal at all.. unless there’s a clear double meaning that works both ways. Typing words that happen to sound like several other words combined together, by itself, isn’t witty. It comes off so forced. That said, the second verse (Chamber or Allen Knight or whomever) was the better verse of the two. Leaving aside the issue above, he had some cool concepts and it read/flowed much better than the first verse. Maybe the only thing worse than those odd word combos are back to back bars that are really long. There’s just no way to read that in any kind of natural way. And the first verse’s ideas/concepts weren’t quite as good as the second, anyway. So, Chamber wins, in a close one. |
06-01-2020, 04:35 PM | #14 |
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From a couple NS wins to contenders, they prob in Blue PM like "he didn't deserve this!"
Funny, Allen family yelling the same thing, hysterical around his casket at the end of the service nice opener Who’s the first person he call when he see Iron, Pigs?! Well that’s fine by me Irony - pull up to Allentown and bash em with the bat, cuz just like THAT team he’s been minor league seems a bit simple You ain't never had a bad bitch, nah fam never been player Closest to a Pam Anderson he's been is when i give Al the tool like Tim Taylor home improvement? bit of a reach Gun bar after gun bar you ain't gonna show and I'm bored boy Execution style, put that cap in the back your neck dude can't breathe - George Floyd don't like this, Im guessing this is just no show filler? Shots shred his mug won't even be able to tell this herbs identity You gon wish I never Metaknight, metal all on his face like a Kirby enemy wording is awkard and the ending could've been a lot better Good you no showed, you wouldn't even stand a chance, sir.. Put the Dread in Allen, I will be the one who's facing Answer opening bar was real nice but I don't think anything else was on that level tbh ya Alma mater been doin gay shit, leavin u torn & ravaged the amount of Boise State been in that ass could fill every dorm on campus decent opener, could've been worded slightly better I think id rob ya w/ the uzi & hollows leave ya memory blank w nonsense Cuz Adobe snatched in a Flashdrive off Till his last memory can't be processed don't get what youre going for with 'Adobe'? is it a name play? don't get it How the fuck u in the contenders? Ur wack & it's ova ock Ironic u beatin Forklift ur career but that material u spit shoulda placed u in a lower spot decent this is better I'm always down for drama w/ heat, got clips to rip this queer Pop up on Adblock, twin shotti's aimed at ya face..ill point an click till ya disappear wayyy better, like this Druggy I'm causing u hell pronto, snitchin is this frail's motto I'm pushin 100 Gramophone call while ur an informant trying to record my cell convos 100 gram a phone call? this only works if the word Gramophone has any relevance which I cant see? also for the setup rhyme to be that awkward when it doesn't even fully rhyme isn't great Ur to stupid to show how to write bars, this cunt isn't nice it isn't easy to teach Adolescent, faggot couldnt develop a decent punch in his life name play is decent but could've been worded better I think ya verse last week was the only good shit u ever dropped..believe me whore you couldn't channel that state of mind again during a all nighter w/ a Ouija board decent finish I think Adverse's opener was nice but he was disappointing after that. Allen Knight had more interesting ideas and concepts, some of them were worded a bit off for me AdBlock maybe LOTB. Vote - Allen Knight |
06-01-2020, 05:16 PM | #15 |
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AK wins
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