Week 8: Snitchin is gangsta (1-1) vs. Mac (0-2) - SNIT WINS

[Blue Bayou]

NBL Season XIV

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@Snitchin is gangsta
@Mac

[Mac]

Sup! let's go for 10 lines

[White LGI]

Yup

[White LGI]

I don't switch guns, this tha Majors everyday I go to war with the same Nine
Mac Aint gang gang...but next week his record will be throwing a bloods gang sign
Aim, bust shots, hit target, ok the Job is done,
Grab cloth, wipe weapon, then dump tha mac that'll get rid of the body n tha gun
Bitch desperate for friends, wants lessons from Titans of texting
Mac stay running behind his teacher like Tyson punch out training sessions
Stop crying, bitter bitch, you suck, u don't get votes..To Bad
We can't help ya verses are a combination of everything wrong with text like Coops Mag
You love my style, you follow my every move...a real Snitch Stan
Piss me off I'll slap ya with ya notepad....but only if shit hits the fan....

[Mac]

Originally Posted by Snitching is gangsta

Everyone go vote for me in my battle and pm me your cash app info
Good shit zuch.......I should of taken your old ass more seriously

like Dr. Strange, wont let this end any differently
1 in 14 million scenarios u win, will need a large amount of cash to buy peoples dignity
bitch you're over, surprise... want a last dish?
last you'll see are Stars before closing your eyes.. call me Make-a-Wish
i'll murder him without moving an inch, like i'm cancer
i don't always grab a typewriter, but when I do it's a Tommy gun vs. a gangster
snitchs a tragedy i'll murder, hoping he passed away fast
ur love life's a last summer classic.. a bunch of noshows and buried in the past
i'll allow you a few words at last.. before i take u to the bosses
they say dead men have no friends.. is that why snitchs a walking corpse??

[White LGI]

@votes

[Blue Bayou]

Can we get some votes on this before I ERUPT?

[Plot]

Snitch
Gangsign is ok, a bit vague to me
Dump the mac was kinda simple
Tyson idk get the feeling this is a video game bar
Coops mag was ok. Funny and current diss of a diss at both
Notepad was ok with the fan/stan flip

Mac
Dr. Strange bar was ok. Kinda wordy and weak
Last dish worded weird didnt pull off the stars/wish flip
Typewriter idk not getring
Summer classic was weak
Corpse/bosses dont rhyme for me weak diss too.

Felt like both keyyed.
Snitch was slightly better

[Answer]

I don't switch guns, this tha Majors everyday I go to war with the same Nine
Mac Aint gang gang...but next week his record will be throwing a bloods gang sign

cool opener

Aim, bust shots, hit target, ok the Job is done,
Grab cloth, wipe weapon, then dump tha mac that'll get rid of the body n tha gun

concept is played, but i dig the execution

Bitch desperate for friends, wants lessons from Titans of texting
Mac stay running behind his teacher like Tyson punch out training sessions

eh ok

Stop crying, bitter bitch, you suck, u don't get votes..To Bad
We can't help ya verses are a combination of everything wrong with text like Coops Mag

nah this is a miss for me, too simple

You love my style, you follow my every move...a real Snitch Stan
Piss me off I'll slap ya with ya notepad....but only if shit hits the fan....

nah


like Dr. Strange, wont let this end any differently
1 in 14 million scenarios u win, will need a large amount of cash to buy peoples dignity

not feeling this

bitch you're over, surprise... want a last dish?
last you'll see are Stars before closing your eyes.. call me Make-a-Wish

wording could be harsher, ive seen the stars in eyes concept done a lot but make a wish is an ok angle on it, just think the execution is lacking

i'll murder him without moving an inch, like i'm cancer
i don't always grab a typewriter, but when I do it's a Tommy gun vs. a gangster

not feeling this

snitchs a tragedy i'll murder, hoping he passed away fast
ur love life's a last summer classic.. a bunch of noshows and buried in the past

eh its ok

i'll allow you a few words at last.. before i take u to the bosses
they say dead men have no friends.. is that why snitchs a walking corpse??

nah not feeling this, and ending a punch with a question mark is usually going to take some of the sting out of it. I'm not saying there aren't some times and places where it may be appropriate, but that's something you should probably try to avoid until you're more advanced, with all due disrespect.


overall, gang signs was lotb. I think snitching had better wording and execution throughout

mvgt snitch

[evaD]

vote - snitch

Snitch's gang signs opener was nice but kinda fell off after that but Mac didn't have any lines that reached that level

[Steve Fox]

I don't switch guns, this tha Majors everyday I go to war with the same Nine
Mac Aint gang gang...but next week his record will be throwing a bloods gang sign

vs

nothing

v - snitch. Both didn't drop anything of note for me, outside of the gang sign bar, which was a witty observation. It was okay and worded enough to get the point across, but the bars between you two were not too good. Mac's punches and wording were not interesting, while the concepts lacked any sort of wit or imaginative items for me to see as a quotable. Snitch was in the same sort of category, dropping the opener, but then falling off right after and not really delivering anything else of interest. I would suggest both go read up on older NBL battles and sift through the archives to get more into how to connect punches at a better rate, but the effort of showing is appreciated.

[Blue Bayou]

Snit wins