Week 5: Wanderer (2-0) vs. Flow (2-1) - FLOW WINS

[Blue Bayou]

NBL Season XIV

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@Wanderer
@Flow

[Wanderer]

Yup. Got anything 12-20

[Wanderer]

Sent 16 to Blue @Flow

[Flow]

Ext

[Flow]

Originally Posted by on dischord

who the fuck is wanderer??

I used to be unheard of too...

Til I stepped up wit dem heavy hits, even rookie champ summin youll never be thought of kid
Shit... you'll be living under my feat longer then Fritzls daughter did
cus If Wonderland a hit I'll grab his face an press up the gat
An pistol whip his grill till it's spread across his face like the Cheshire cat
Too whack to construct a line, youd need a guide to teach you why shmuck
Wandering concepts until it's no wonder why they all look so dried up
Bitch you been trash for a heavy min, an still as wack as you’ve ever been
if this your Final Form, then imma make it your Last Will & Testament
But since you love gun bars, imma let the heat wave bitch
You’ll get the message from the toaster like Sabrina The Teenage Witch
bitch i ain’t need name flips, the one your known as is fitting see
Cuz a Wanderers just a Wayfarer way of saying you’ve Nomad ability
Bitch you’ve beat no one respectable, im the 1-2 champ
Your more Andy Warhol.. career defined by a bunch of fuckin’ soup cans
Such a broke fuck I searched the Vault an all your battles were a poor bout
But if you want a "lone wanderer" I've got 100 caps for you when we fallout

[Blue Bayou]

Wanderers Verse

U never see wand coming. Cruise to his crib via side routes and off him
There’s metal on the road in a country lane but believe there’s still an animal crossing
Cos ur a bitch, dont try & fool me. I’ll just grab the M9 & pull b
That plant in ur hair with shells surrounding ur neck, it’s Hawaiian jewellery
I’m balls deep in sluts & when the moment’s right I’m bustin in
We know any girl flowin’s just excusing herself from fuckin him
Chicks text me “I’ve cooked ur fave baby” u take abuse. Ur a fuckin disgrace
If ur girl leave u a lip smacking message it’s “when I get home, I’m punching ur face”
But no one cares about ur affairs, scrape out ur innards before u hurtin me
Hook knife journalism.. it get the scoop on ur internals for the world to see
Roll up my cuffs, fists make u scream & do 360’s til ur spine is severed
Pull the sleeves up & proceed to put u in a noisy spin, that’s a vinyl record
Broke ass mid tier at best! U’ll never get a champ match dropping them bars
Sorta like a girls options hooking up with u... cash/flow not on the cards

[Neighbor]

I’m balls deep in sluts & when the moment’s right I’m bustin in
We know any girl flowin’s just excusing herself from fuckin him
Chicks text me “I’ve cooked ur fave baby” u take abuse. Ur a fuckin disgrace
If ur girl leave u a lip smacking message it’s “when I get home, I’m punching ur face”
But no one cares about ur affairs, scrape out ur innards before u hurtin me
Hook knife journalism.. it get the scoop on ur internals for the world to see

vs.

Til I stepped up wit dem heavy hits, even rookie champ summin youll never be thought of kid
Shit... you'll be living under my feat longer then Fritzls daughter did
Bitch you been trash for a heavy min, an still as wack as you’ve ever been
if this your Final Form, then imma make it your Last Will & Testament
But since you love gun bars, imma let the heat wave bitch
You’ll get the message from the toaster like Sabrina The Teenage Witch
bitch i ain’t need name flips, the one your known as is fitting see
Cuz a Wanderers just a Wayfarer way of saying you’ve Nomad ability
Bitch you’ve beat no one respectable, im the 1-2 champ
Your more Andy Warhol.. career defined by a bunch of fuckin’ soup cans


Damn, another great match here. Good to see that the ppl showing up for the League are still dropping flames. You both had an array of quality lines, some concepts executed better than others, & a couple of misses. I think Wanderer's misses were a little more noticeable than Flow's, who pretty much brought shots in volume on this one. The bars I bolded from you 2 went hard, but I think Flow outpunched Wand here

v/ Flow

[slecht]

Originally Posted by Flow

I used to be unheard of too...

Til I stepped up wit dem heavy hits, even rookie champ summin youll never be thought of kid
Shit... you'll be living under my feat longer then Fritzls daughter did
-Not familiar with this one here tbh. Wording was decent.
cus If Wonderland a hit I'll grab his face an press up the gat
An pistol whip his grill till it's spread across his face like the Cheshire cat
-Dope.
Too whack to construct a line, youd need a guide to teach you why shmuck
Wandering concepts until it's no wonder why they all look so dried up
-Decent, light jab.
Bitch you been trash for a heavy min, an still as wack as you’ve ever been
if this your Final Form, then imma make it your Last Will & Testament
-Not bad -
But since you love gun bars, imma let the heat wave bitch
You’ll get the message from the toaster like Sabrina The Teenage Witch
-Cool-
bitch i ain’t need name flips, the one your known as is fitting see
Cuz a Wanderers just a Wayfarer way of saying you’ve Nomad ability
-Ok
Bitch you’ve beat no one respectable, im the 1-2 champ
Your more Andy Warhol.. career defined by a bunch of fuckin’ soup cans
Lol - I like this. wording is eh but the idea is there
Such a broke fuck I searched the Vault an all your battles were a poor bout
But if you want a "lone wanderer" I've got 100 caps for you when we fallout

Not really as familiar with this one either, I get it though.

vs

Originally Posted by Blue Bayou

Wanderers Verse

U never see wand coming. Cruise to his crib via side routes and off him
There’s metal on the road in a country lane but believe there’s still an animal crossing
Eh - Not really a fan
Cos ur a bitch, dont try & fool me. I’ll just grab the M9 & pull b
That plant in ur hair with shells surrounding ur neck, it’s Hawaiian jewellery
Very outdated concept tbh. Wording and set up hurt you.
I’m balls deep in sluts & when the moment’s right I’m bustin in
We know any girl flowin’s just excusing herself from fuckin him
-Nah.
Chicks text me “I’ve cooked ur fave baby” u take abuse. Ur a fuckin disgrace
If ur girl leave u a lip smacking message it’s “when I get home, I’m punching ur face”
-Nah
But no one cares about ur affairs, scrape out ur innards before u hurtin me
Hook knife journalism.. it get the scoop on ur internals for the world to see
-DOPE.
Roll up my cuffs, fists make u scream & do 360’s til ur spine is severed
Pull the sleeves up & proceed to put u in a noisy spin, that’s a vinyl record
Lol eh, fair
Broke ass mid tier at best! U’ll never get a champ match dropping them bars
Sorta like a girls options hooking up with u... cash/flow not on the cards
no

Decent match up here. Both came with some good concepts, some outdated - some fresh. Giving this to the one who was more consistent with his hits. MGVT Flow

[Cashius]

Til I stepped up wit dem heavy hits, even rookie champ summin youll never be thought of kid
Shit... you'll be living under my feat longer then Fritzls daughter did
-Can’t give you points for a feat line. Had to google the reference. Not a great start for me.


cus If Wonderland a hit I'll grab his face an press up the gat
An pistol whip his grill till it's spread across his face like the Cheshire cat
-Would’ve rather you use the Wonderland as the main concept and build around that. The way you did it is just ok to me.



Too whack to construct a line, youd need a guide to teach you why shmuck
Wandering concepts until it's no wonder why they all look so dried up
-Not feeling this.


Bitch you been trash for a heavy min, an still as wack as you’ve ever been
if this your Final Form, then imma make it your Last Will & Testament
-Not bad. Haven’t seen this.


But since you love gun bars, imma let the heat wave bitch
You’ll get the message from the toaster like Sabrina The Teenage Witch
-I dig this. Like I said in another battle the message thing has been done to death but it’s a cool spin on it even though the reference is mad old. Liked it tho.


bitch i ain’t need name flips, the one your known as is fitting see
Cuz a Wanderers just a Wayfarer way of saying you’ve Nomad ability
-Nomad ability is cool but I wish you could’ve done this in a much cleaner fashion. Just ok to me.


Bitch you’ve beat no one respectable, im the 1-2 champ
Your more Andy Warhol.. career defined by a bunch of fuckin’ soup cans
-Light to me


Such a broke fuck I searched the Vault an all your battles were a poor bout
But if you want a "lone wanderer" I've got 100 caps for you when we fallout
-I don’t get this. Sorry.



U never see wand coming. Cruise to his crib via side routes and off him
There’s metal on the road in a country lane but believe there’s still an animal crossing
-Nothing stands out here.


Cos ur a bitch, dont try & fool me. I’ll just grab the M9 & pull b
That plant in ur hair with shells surrounding ur neck, it’s Hawaiian jewellery
-Yeh, I like this.


I’m balls deep in sluts & when the moment’s right I’m bustin in
We know any girl flowin’s just excusing herself from fuckin him
-Decent. Nice little jab.


Chicks text me “I’ve cooked ur fave baby” u take abuse. Ur a fuckin disgrace
If ur girl leave u a lip smacking message it’s “when I get home, I’m punching ur face”
-Lol kinda funny.


But no one cares about ur affairs, scrape out ur innards before u hurtin me
Hook knife journalism.. it get the scoop on ur internals for the world to see
-Pretty light.


Roll up my cuffs, fists make u scream & do 360’s til ur spine is severed
Pull the sleeves up & proceed to put u in a noisy spin, that’s a vinyl record
-Noisy spin is just too loose for me. Not really feeling this.


Broke ass mid tier at best! U’ll never get a champ match dropping them bars
Sorta like a girls options hooking up with u... cash/flow not on the cards
-Didn’t really like this.



Had to read this a few times because it was really close for me. This wasn’t the Flow I’ve been reading the past month. First verse I’ve read from Wanderer. I think I have to give it to Wanderer for being slightly more consistent and having 2 of the best 3 lines in the battle. Nice read guys.

Vote-Wanderer

[Zaddy]

Til I stepped up wit dem heavy hits, even rookie champ summin youll never be thought of kid
Shit... you'll be living under my feat longer then Fritzls daughter did
who? I don’t get the reference
cus If Wonderland a hit I'll grab his face an press up the gat
An pistol whip his grill till it's spread across his face like the Cheshire cat
ok lol
Too whack to construct a line, youd need a guide to teach you why shmuck
Wandering concepts until it's no wonder why they all look so dried up
nah
Bitch you been trash for a heavy min, an still as wack as you’ve ever been
if this your Final Form, then imma make it your Last Will & Testament
ok
But since you love gun bars, imma let the heat wave bitch
You’ll get the message from the toaster like Sabrina The Teenage Witch
you already knew I was gonna like this, nice
bitch i ain’t need name flips, the one your known as is fitting see
Cuz a Wanderers just a Wayfarer way of saying you’ve Nomad ability
decent
Bitch you’ve beat no one respectable, im the 1-2 champ
Your more Andy Warhol.. career defined by a bunch of fuckin’ soup cans
nooo
Such a broke fuck I searched the Vault an all your battles were a poor bout
But if you want a "lone wanderer" I've got 100 caps for you when we fallout
i don’t get it


1 good
2 ok
1 decent
4 misses


Vs


U never see wand coming. Cruise to his crib via side routes and off him
There’s metal on the road in a country lane but believe there’s still an animal crossing
nah
Cos ur a bitch, dont try & fool me. I’ll just grab the M9 & pull b
That plant in ur hair with shells surrounding ur neck, it’s Hawaiian jewellery
not feelin this either
I’m balls deep in sluts & when the moment’s right I’m bustin in
We know any girl flowin’s just excusing herself from fuckin him
haha this was cool
Chicks text me “I’ve cooked ur fave baby” u take abuse. Ur a fuckin disgrace
If ur girl leave u a lip smacking message it’s “when I get home, I’m punching ur face”
kinda corny here
But no one cares about ur affairs, scrape out ur innards before u hurtin me
Hook knife journalism.. it get the scoop on ur internals for the world to see
ehh barely decent
Roll up my cuffs, fists make u scream & do 360’s til ur spine is severed
Pull the sleeves up & proceed to put u in a noisy spin, that’s a vinyl record
alright
Broke ass mid tier at best! U’ll never get a champ match dropping them bars
Sorta like a girls options hooking up with u... cash/flow not on the cards
decent

1 good
1 ok
2 decent
3 misses


Super close battle, both had some good material, flow had 1 more bar than wanderer did, I guess people can’t count these days.

Vote Flow by a hair

[Answer]

Til I stepped up wit dem heavy hits, even rookie champ summin youll never be thought of kid
Shit... you'll be living under my feat longer then Fritzls daughter did

a bit of an old reference at this point but this is okay

cus If Wonderland a hit I'll grab his face an press up the gat
An pistol whip his grill till it's spread across his face like the Cheshire cat

a bit simple but i like the overall idea

Too whack to construct a line, youd need a guide to teach you why shmuck
Wandering concepts until it's no wonder why they all look so dried up

this one is a miss for me

Bitch you been trash for a heavy min, an still as wack as you’ve ever been
if this your Final Form, then imma make it your Last Will & Testament

Nah im not really digging this

But since you love gun bars, imma let the heat wave bitch
You’ll get the message from the toaster like Sabrina The Teenage Witch

lol this was funny and creative. i thought this was hot

bitch i ain’t need name flips, the one your known as is fitting see
Cuz a Wanderers just a Wayfarer way of saying you’ve Nomad ability

the set-up is kinda weirded wordly, the idea is cool but the execution fell short imo

Bitch you’ve beat no one respectable, im the 1-2 champ
Your more Andy Warhol.. career defined by a bunch of fuckin’ soup cans

this is okay, ive seen a fair amount of andy warhol bars over the years

Such a broke fuck I searched the Vault an all your battles were a poor bout
But if you want a "lone wanderer" I've got 100 caps for you when we fallout

I never played fallout, but I get the general idea. This is cool, mightve landed harder if I was more familiar with the game




U never see wand coming. Cruise to his crib via side routes and off him
There’s metal on the road in a country lane but believe there’s still an animal crossing

The wording on this is somewhere on the line of good and kinda corny. This bar's okay, but think the idea couldve been pulled off better

Cos ur a bitch, dont try & fool me. I’ll just grab the M9 & pull b
That plant in ur hair with shells surrounding ur neck, it’s Hawaiian jewellery

Nah, this general idea is super super old. I remember puka shell bars being done in like 2004 and 2005

I’m balls deep in sluts & when the moment’s right I’m bustin in
We know any girl flowin’s just excusing herself from fuckin him

I never really like period bars but the execution is solid, and overall this is decent

Chicks text me “I’ve cooked ur fave baby” u take abuse. Ur a fuckin disgrace
If ur girl leave u a lip smacking message it’s “when I get home, I’m punching ur face”

lol this is funny, i like this overall

But no one cares about ur affairs, scrape out ur innards before u hurtin me
Hook knife journalism.. it get the scoop on ur internals for the world to see

Nah this bar's just kinda weird and I think you could've executed and worded it better

Roll up my cuffs, fists make u scream & do 360’s til ur spine is severed
Pull the sleeves up & proceed to put u in a noisy spin, that’s a vinyl record

Having him spin around in circles while he's screaming is just too specific and weird of a description

Broke ass mid tier at best! U’ll never get a champ match dropping them bars
Sorta like a girls options hooking up with u... cash/flow not on the cards

okay closer, but generally if you're gonna do a cash bar I'd suggest trying to think more out of the box than this


overall the sabrina bar was fire imo and line of the battle, followed by lip smacking which was also pretty good. Solid showing from both sides, I think one of the main difference makers in my voting choice is simply that flow had more creative angles that I haven't seen before.

mvgt - Flow

[Adverse]

Flow:

Til I stepped up wit dem heavy hits, even rookie champ summin youll never be thought of kid
Shit... you'll be living under my feat longer then Fritzls daughter did
^obscure reference not a great way to start a verse tbh

cus If Wonderland a hit I'll grab his face an press up the gat
An pistol whip his grill till it's spread across his face like the Cheshire cat
^ decent liked the angle

Too whack to construct a line, youd need a guide to teach you why shmuck
Wandering concepts until it's no wonder why they all look so dried up
^ wording needed work here

Bitch you been trash for a heavy min, an still as wack as you’ve ever been
if this your Final Form, then imma make it your Last Will & Testament
^ I liked this probably best bar of your verse

But since you love gun bars, imma let the heat wave bitch
You’ll get the message from the toaster like Sabrina The Teenage Witch
^decent enough

bitch i ain’t need name flips, the one your known as is fitting see
Cuz a Wanderers just a Wayfarer way of saying you’ve Nomad ability
^ could have been worded a little better but i liked the play

Bitch you’ve beat no one respectable, im the 1-2 champ
Your more Andy Warhol.. career defined by a bunch of fuckin’ soup cans
^ehh alright

Such a broke fuck I searched the Vault an all your battles were a poor bout
But if you want a "lone wanderer" I've got 100 caps for you when we fallout
^BANG good closer if you're familiar

Wanderer:
U never see wand coming. Cruise to his crib via side routes and off him
There’s metal on the road in a country lane but believe there’s still an animal crossing
^ could have used some better wording imo

Cos ur a bitch, dont try & fool me. I’ll just grab the M9 & pull b
That plant in ur hair with shells surrounding ur neck, it’s Hawaiian jewellery
^ decent bar

I’m balls deep in sluts & when the moment’s right I’m bustin in
We know any girl flowin’s just excusing herself from fuckin him
^ loool

Chicks text me “I’ve cooked ur fave baby” u take abuse. Ur a fuckin disgrace
If ur girl leave u a lip smacking message it’s “when I get home, I’m punching ur face”
^lmao dope

But no one cares about ur affairs, scrape out ur innards before u hurtin me
Hook knife journalism.. it get the scoop on ur internals for the world to see
^ i liked this

Roll up my cuffs, fists make u scream & do 360’s til ur spine is severed
Pull the sleeves up & proceed to put u in a noisy spin, that’s a vinyl record
^ decent

Broke ass mid tier at best! U’ll never get a champ match dropping them bars
Sorta like a girls options hooking up with u... cash/flow not on the cards
^ think i seen a cash flow bar couple weeks ago, not the best closer

Overall was an entertaining match but I've got Wanderer taking it, Flow lacked in execution more consistently

V/Wanderer

[UPN Zuch]

That Sabrina the teenage witch bar was filthy.

Flow is getting my vote based on consistent hits. Definitely some misses in there too but slightly better than Wand and you had the LOTB.

Some constructive criticism for you, clean up your setups. They are too long and by the time I get to the punch I’m losing interest. I wouldn’t be telling you this if I didn’t think you have some potential. I like what I see.

Vote flow

[Aura]

both verses had hits & misses but this string of bars pulled it out for 1;

Bitch you been trash for a heavy min, an still as wack as you’ve ever been
if this your Final Form, then imma make it your Last Will & Testament
But since you love gun bars, imma let the heat wave bitch
You’ll get the message from the toaster like Sabrina The Teenage Witch




V/flow

[Blue Bayou]

6-2 flow wins