Week 2: Ender (1-0) vs. Allen Knight (1-0) - AK WINS

[Blue Bayou]

NBL Season XIV

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@Ender
@Allen Knight

[Ender]

Check.

[Allen Knight]

Here, goin 10.

[Ender]

10 it is then.

All ya verses use a quote, weak, ya skills are regressin’
So here’s a quote for you: 50 dollars for each battling lesson
Lazy battlers on NC, they all post in battles after they’re due
So I’m waiting for a tardy verse from AK... he may even submit late too!
I’m gonna stomp him, he’s a hasbeen; washed-up trash
I’ll show you Allen alda way past his prime after the Ender mash
AK’s broke ass got no TV, his apartment don’t have space
But once I’m done with him suddenly plasma’s all over the place
Girls like real thugs and Allen tries but just seems cheesy
The only time girls say Al a G is when they want to let him down easy

[Allen Knight]

im at the marriot w/ ur wife &...

wen i remove my robe ur ho's suckin dick dude, it got u sick too
face permanenty printed on my crotch while i swivel my hips like Ravishin Rick Rude
readin ur borin spits got me snorin quick, ur worthless & a gimmick bitch
Endure wack the amount of energy needed to suffer thru one of ya verses is limitless
ur a alcohlic coke dealer faggot, id rob u & let the 8 squeeze
ur drunk as fuck & im not tryna be a good friend when i take ur keys
sluts wanna marry me, while u can't even bang hoes
cuz Endgame weak & couldnt put a ring on a bitch the size of Thanos
been fuckin ur moms, im better than ur dad would ever be
i hit that Hotspot till we connected on a level no Wifi could ever reach

[FGR]

Enders opener was cool... I thought the concept was nicer than the bar..it just wasn't flipped strong enough but it still hit.
Tardy verse was a okay jab..
Your last 3 bars were jabs also.. nothing that really pack heat but you was jabbing.. not a bad verse..
Allen starting off jabbing but got stronger the more it went on... I wasn't feeling 'take ur keys' but that closer was nice..and that thanos line was LOTB.. shit hit for me
VOTE ALLEN

Stronger hits

[SMaSH]

Vote Allen

Clearly.... Again. Allen wording and flow was just on a different level than Ender. At least to me IDK. I had no quotables from Ender but Allen opener was nice. Thanos line was alright.... Coulda been better but enough to get the win imo

[Wanderer]

Ender:

Plasma

Allen:

Ravishing Rick & Take Your Keys

My favourite bars from the battle but overall, Allen had the better angle and was more consistent throughout

Vote: Allen for the harder verse

[Flow]

All ya verses use a quote, weak, ya skills are regressin’
So here’s a quote for you: 50 dollars for each battling lesson
you flip the quote so that's ok I guess, would have preferred a quote to go along with the personal to give it more sting. Overall think you could of done more with the punchline

Lazy battlers on NC, they all post in battles after they’re due
So I’m waiting for a tardy verse from AK... he may even submit late too!
tardy verse. I know tardy means lateness over the pond. But I don't get what your flipping here. Are you suggesting his verses are retarded? Feels a reach and would of come across weak regardless. Appreciate I may have missed something here

I’m gonna stomp him, he’s a hasbeen; washed-up trash
I’ll show you Allen alda way past his prime after the Ender mash
not feeling

AK’s broke ass got no TV, his apartment don’t have space
But once I’m done with him suddenly plasma’s all over the place
this was better. The set up was spot on and you can get into the flip neatly in the punch. It's also a nice visual which aids the strength of the hit. This is your best bar so far. More of these please

Girls like real thugs and Allen tries but just seems cheesy
The only time girls say Al a G is when they want to let him down easy
this was an ok bar. Polly could of hit the allergy idea harder then just a girl making a excuse but that's not picking. You closed strong with two bars I'd of quoted

VS


im at the marriot w/ ur wife &...

wen i remove my robe ur ho's suckin dick dude, it got u sick too
face permanenty printed on my crotch while i swivel my hips like Ravishin Rick Rude
had to Google the wrestler but the first image that came.up was just fucking lolz considering the angle of the bar. Probably got this more props then it deserved but lol

readin ur borin spits got me snorin quick, ur worthless & a gimmick bitch
Endure wack the amount of energy needed to suffer thru one of ya verses is limitless
nice name play attempt but fell flat for me, wording threw me off and didn't like the ending


ur a alcohlic coke dealer faggot, id rob u & let the 8 squeeze
ur drunk as fuck & im not tryna be a good friend when i take ur keys
ok, on the simple side but hits


sluts wanna marry me, while u can't even bang hoes
cuz Endgame weak & couldnt put a ring on a bitch the size of Thanos
meh, your winning so far for having formulated actual punches but your better then this for sure

been fuckin ur moms, im better than ur dad would ever be
i hit that Hotspot till we connected on a level no Wifi could ever reach
must be played by now but it was worded crisp and hits nice. I enjoyed this the most probably



Think Allan took this comfortably despite not bringing his A game


Vote Allan

[Aura]

Lazy battlers on NC, they all post in battles after they’re due
So I’m waiting for a tardy verse from AK... he may even submit late too!
I’m gonna stomp him, he’s a hasbeen; washed-up trash
I’ll show you Allen alda way past his prime after the Ender mash

Vs.

wen i remove my robe ur ho's suckin dick dude, it got u sick too
face permanenty printed on my crotch while i swivel my hips like Ravishin Rick Rude
sluts wanna marry me, while u can't even bang hoes
cuz Endgame weak & couldnt put a ring on a bitch the size of Thanos
been fuckin ur moms, im better than ur dad would ever be
i hit that Hotspot till we connected on a level no Wifi could ever reach



Vote - Allen

[Destroyer]

Pretty sure Ender was going for “Al, ah, gee...” which I thought was clever. That and plasma
Rick rude and endgame were dope

I have Allen here but it’s probably closer than the votes will show

[Cashius]

Man, this is close to me. I’ve read it a couple of times. I think Allen was just slightly more consistent. I had Ender with 2 misses (All ah gee and tardy) and Allen with 1(hotspot). Neither one had any lines that were really dope but constant jabs. I like Enders style. I’d like it more if he rhymed more than one syllable. If he had one less miss I would’ve gave it to him. But I got Allen in a close one.

[Blue Bayou]

Allen wins