04-02-2020, 12:22 PM | #1 |
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Week 3: dead man vs orrie (dead man wins via NS) OPEN FOR FEED
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04-02-2020, 03:08 PM | #2 |
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04-02-2020, 03:51 PM | #3 |
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04-10-2020, 11:07 AM | #4 |
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you're like
a shaman. a shepherd. a guru. a sage a humanist, ancient in years, youthful in days your shoes are always converse and your sweaters are fading back in 1998 is when you got 'em, i wager rolling stones and parliament in heavy rotation writing songs in notebooks that you kept in the basement you're my favorite. but it goes without. closing shutters open house dusty carpet moldy grout, underpaid, overwhelmed lonely often, stoned to the gills. 12-pack cold ginger ale dreamt of homes on the range. felt more at home on the rail coping mechanisms carried over. rebellion. i would sneak into your room for roaches, bogus as hell we talked through tears at length about whatever we felt deconstructing patterns we created ourselves tracing back abandonment and trauma and fear all these years, never told you what you wanted to hear we're different in so many ways, its painfully clear. but i still see you every single time i look in a mirror sorry papa
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04-11-2020, 11:16 AM | #5 |
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What else can I say? You make it look easy... and it was for you this week lol, but regardless. Flow was smooth as usual, some thought provoking lines and a nice touch at the end. Clean, simple, compact... good job.
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