Easy as Cake

Pharaohs Army · 02-13-2023, 09:12 PM

Sup Lars.

Lol, check Diode's wall.

Well, as usual even without trying you've managed to capture a dark sibling / mother - child relationship... with clean technics MINUS the (likely purposeful) slant rhymes or near rhymes...

Hope it wasn't a true Psych-depth of your OWN childhood, and that it was just dreamed up or exaggerated for the purposes of story. Lol. moving on,

The emotion was good... Thought you could have cut a bit of the last 1/3rd but that's just a nitpick...I understand when u get in the flow of rhyming the length is just the length.

Anyways, this looks like you have a knack for keying/writing/rappn after all these years... pleasure to see @Diablo.... Took me 20 years of experimenting...but you've had a good formula for quite a while

Full disclosure...not sure if this is the best of your recent OM drops.. but wanted to see1
@MMLP still good too..

02-13-2023, 09:12 PM	#1
Pharaohs Army Banned Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 2,962 Battle Record: 6 - 14 Rep Power: 0	Sup Lars. Lol, check Diode's wall. Well, as usual even without trying you've managed to capture a dark sibling / mother - child relationship... with clean technics MINUS the (likely purposeful) slant rhymes or near rhymes... Hope it wasn't a true Psych-depth of your OWN childhood, and that it was just dreamed up or exaggerated for the purposes of story. Lol. moving on, The emotion was good... Thought you could have cut a bit of the last 1/3rd but that's just a nitpick...I understand when u get in the flow of rhyming the length is just the length. Anyways, this looks like you have a knack for keying/writing/rappn after all these years... pleasure to see @Diablo.... Took me 20 years of experimenting...but you've had a good formula for quite a while Full disclosure...not sure if this is the best of your recent OM drops.. but wanted to see1 @MMLP still good too.. Last edited by Pharaohs Army; 02-14-2023 at 04:33 AM.