Lotto Smirk (2-1) vs Mr. J (2-1) - Lotto Smirk WINS

Cred · 12-06-2016, 07:18 PM

NBL Season 10
Week 4

Due SUNDAY 12/11/16

Minimum - 10 lines
Max - 20 lines

- NO BITING
- NO FEEDING
- NO SWAYING
- AGREE ON LINE LIMIT
- IF NOT AGREED, MATCH 1st VERSE

Don't edit after your opponent has posted.
2nd person to post can't edit after the 1st vote comes in.
Don't be an idiot.
Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle.
May God have mercy on your souls!

Mr. J · 12-12-2016, 03:09 AM

EDIT:....I'll think of something tomorrow...ya fruit

Lotto Smirk · 12-12-2016, 05:48 AM

You want to go more then or keep it at 12 I thought I messaged last night to say how many n that I was posting but musnt of sent it my bad mr. J take as long as u need.

Lotto Smirk · 12-12-2016, 05:06 PM

slacking lately but I'm prepped now that I've stopped fuckin ya hoe
got 20 for any head I get,n ironically that's how ur slut earns her dough
Catch me in mazaratti's ur a smack head who can't afford a lift
im driving like I'm on top gear while only thing ur racin for is ur next fix
act gangster n hard, all we see is wack bars when ya mouth start
cus we don't understand when u talkin hood like ur kenny from South Park
gun w/ extended barrel'll for all that made up talk u hoe
For all that lying you can catch the long nose like Pinocchio
Slaughted u 2 weeks ago,now again what a shitty hand Cred dealt u
Beating! U'll get that second coming even the return of Jesus wouldn't help u
shotty at waist height give him stage freight , blast at this fag
dump shit from the hip but he'll be the one left needing a colostomy bag

12...

Mr. J · 12-13-2016, 03:05 AM

Lotto needs to give up his rap career and get him a job
even 2tripple0 was upset in BA chat cause you wouldnt give him a loss
& this frauds the MOD? bruh...even your tourney flopped.
that's literally a trip how you continuosly just journey off..
s'all good though, one punch & ya obituary will be placed in journals
one swing of this bat...shiiiet I'll send ya flying like Ace Ventura.
with the way the years turning out you better feel bad, chump.
cause I'll body ya outcome, double entendre that Skillz wrap up
I don't have time to add four more lines so fuck your win
Ya body ain't big enough for the box they put chicken nuggets in
you a fag fa'real
plus you always smell like happy meals

Cred · 12-13-2016, 10:50 AM

Lotto had kenny/hood and his closer.

Vs

Mr J had some cool opening personals, ace ventura cuda been dope if worded better.

Match was a bit of a let down tbh. I thought J coulda prolly made this a bit better if wuda dropped a full verse. But lotto got this one

Vote - Lotto Smirk

Aero · 12-13-2016, 11:07 AM

Lotto - long nose was cool, dump shit from the hip was nice

Mr J - 2trip made me smirk, chuckled at happy meals but it wasn't good.

Nice little battle here. Think Lotto was slightly more consistent.Mr J went light at the end.

Vote Lotto

Jayson Fresh · 12-13-2016, 11:57 AM

slacking lately but I'm prepped now that I've stopped fuckin ya hoe
got 20 for any head I get,n ironically that's how ur slut earns her dough

Slaughted u 2 weeks ago,now again what a shitty hand Cred dealt u
Beating! U'll get that second coming even the return of Jesus wouldn't help u

I thought those two lines did for it Lotto who I believe won by a comfortable margin here. I am however diggin' J's swag tho it makes for an entertaining read. strong work fellas.

Maximus · 12-13-2016, 12:30 PM

lotto had some cool jabs here and there and i thought the dump shit line was dope, seen better from u buy decent verse non the less. mj had me lol'ing with the tripple and happy meal lines but i felt u didn't put in effort here man, couple of lines coulda been worded better
i got Lotto for the W here..

Schadenfreude · 12-13-2016, 03:10 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Lotto Smirk

slacking lately but I'm prepped now that I've stopped fuckin ya hoe
got 20 for any head I get,n ironically that's how ur slut earns her dough
Pretty basic
Catch me in mazaratti's ur a smack head who can't afford a lift
im driving like I'm on top gear while only thing ur racin for is ur next fix
OK
act gangster n hard, all we see is wack bars when ya mouth start
cus we don't understand when u talkin hood like ur kenny from South Park
Decent
gun w/ extended barrel'll for all that made up talk u hoe
For all that lying you can catch the long nose like Pinocchio
Super played
Slaughted u 2 weeks ago,now again what a shitty hand Cred dealt u
Beating! U'll get that second coming even the return of Jesus wouldn't help u
Played again
shotty at waist height give him stage freight , blast at this fag
dump shit from the hip but he'll be the one left needing a colostomy bag
Played

VERSUS

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mr. J

Lotto needs to give up his rap career and get him a job
even 2tripple0 was upset in BA chat cause you wouldnt give him a loss
Personal, but just a statement
& this frauds the MOD? bruh...even your tourney flopped.
that's literally a trip how you continuosly just journey off..
Personal, but basic
s'all good though, one punch & ya obituary will be placed in journals
one swing of this bat...shiiiet I'll send ya flying like Ace Ventura.
Lol, decent
with the way the years turning out you better feel bad, chump.
cause I'll body ya outcome, double entendre that Skillz wrap up
Soft jab
I don't have time to add four more lines so fuck your win
Ya body ain't big enough for the box they put chicken nuggets in
Terrible
you a fag fa'real
plus you always smell like happy meals
Even worse

So it's the choice between decent, yet play concepts, as opposed to personal yet stale jabs.., I'm giving it to LOTTO SMIRK, cuz Mr. J pretty much gave up w/ those last two bars & the personals were damaging enough to hold up the verse.

R!canTheoryz · 12-13-2016, 05:33 PM

act gangster n hard, all we see is wack bars when ya mouth start
cus we don't understand when u talkin hood like ur kenny from South Park
Pinochio bar
Vs

Nothing

Very basic lines from j and the ones he attempted we're just weak indirect IMO. He drops way better in 1-2

Vote - smirk

12-06-2016, 07:18 PM	#1
Cred The Biggest Join Date: Jan 2015 Posts: 3,254 Battle Record: 67-32 Accomplishments - Gun Bar King Champed - Fight Night 3 - Fight Night 10 - Fight Night 12 - Battle Arena League Rep Power: 85899380	Lotto Smirk (2-1) vs Mr. J (2-1) - Lotto Smirk WINS NBL Season 10 Week 4 Due SUNDAY 12/11/16 Minimum - 10 lines Max - 20 lines - NO BITING - NO FEEDING - NO SWAYING - AGREE ON LINE LIMIT - IF NOT AGREED, MATCH 1st VERSE Don't edit after your opponent has posted. 2nd person to post can't edit after the 1st vote comes in. Don't be an idiot. Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle. May God have mercy on your souls!

12-12-2016, 03:09 AM	#2
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,025 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349678	EDIT:....I'll think of something tomorrow...ya fruit __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you Last edited by Mr. J; 12-12-2016 at 03:28 AM.

12-12-2016, 05:06 PM	#4
Lotto Smirk Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,153 Battle Record: 37-49 Rep Power: 2665829	slacking lately but I'm prepped now that I've stopped fuckin ya hoe got 20 for any head I get,n ironically that's how ur slut earns her dough Catch me in mazaratti's ur a smack head who can't afford a lift im driving like I'm on top gear while only thing ur racin for is ur next fix act gangster n hard, all we see is wack bars when ya mouth start cus we don't understand when u talkin hood like ur kenny from South Park gun w/ extended barrel'll for all that made up talk u hoe For all that lying you can catch the long nose like Pinocchio Slaughted u 2 weeks ago,now again what a shitty hand Cred dealt u Beating! U'll get that second coming even the return of Jesus wouldn't help u shotty at waist height give him stage freight , blast at this fag dump shit from the hip but he'll be the one left needing a colostomy bag 12... Last edited by Lotto Smirk; 12-12-2016 at 07:56 PM.

12-13-2016, 03:05 AM	#5
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,025 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349678	Lotto needs to give up his rap career and get him a job even 2tripple0 was upset in BA chat cause you wouldnt give him a loss & this frauds the MOD? bruh...even your tourney flopped. that's literally a trip how you continuosly just journey off.. s'all good though, one punch & ya obituary will be placed in journals one swing of this bat...shiiiet I'll send ya flying like Ace Ventura. with the way the years turning out you better feel bad, chump. cause I'll body ya outcome, double entendre that Skillz wrap up I don't have time to add four more lines so fuck your win Ya body ain't big enough for the box they put chicken nuggets in you a fag fa'real plus you always smell like happy meals __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you

12-13-2016, 11:07 AM	#7
Aero GOAT Join Date: Jul 2015 Posts: 4,825 Battle Record: 14-17 Champed - Site Diss Competition - Tag Tournament III - Lyric Olympics - Tag Tournament: "Omicron Variant" Rep Power: 0	Lotto - long nose was cool, dump shit from the hip was nice Mr J - 2trip made me smirk, chuckled at happy meals but it wasn't good. Nice little battle here. Think Lotto was slightly more consistent.Mr J went light at the end. Vote Lotto __________________ Too Rich IRL to Be Here. I'm Out.

12-12-2016, 05:48 AM	#3
Lotto Smirk Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,153 Battle Record: 37-49 Rep Power: 2665829	You want to go more then or keep it at 12 I thought I messaged last night to say how many n that I was posting but musnt of sent it my bad mr. J take as long as u need.

12-13-2016, 10:50 AM	#6
Cred The Biggest Join Date: Jan 2015 Posts: 3,254 Battle Record: 67-32 Accomplishments - Gun Bar King Champed - Fight Night 3 - Fight Night 10 - Fight Night 12 - Battle Arena League Rep Power: 85899380	Lotto had kenny/hood and his closer. Vs Mr J had some cool opening personals, ace ventura cuda been dope if worded better. Match was a bit of a let down tbh. I thought J coulda prolly made this a bit better if wuda dropped a full verse. But lotto got this one Vote - Lotto Smirk

12-13-2016, 11:57 AM	#8
Jayson Fresh Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 22 Battle Record: 3-2 Rep Power: 9122	slacking lately but I'm prepped now that I've stopped fuckin ya hoe got 20 for any head I get,n ironically that's how ur slut earns her dough Slaughted u 2 weeks ago,now again what a shitty hand Cred dealt u Beating! U'll get that second coming even the return of Jesus wouldn't help u I thought those two lines did for it Lotto who I believe won by a comfortable margin here. I am however diggin' J's swag tho it makes for an entertaining read. strong work fellas.

12-13-2016, 12:30 PM	#9
Maximus Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 923 Battle Record: 25-26 Champed - NBL Cypher Rep Power: 11169469	lotto had some cool jabs here and there and i thought the dump shit line was dope, seen better from u buy decent verse non the less. mj had me lol'ing with the tripple and happy meal lines but i felt u didn't put in effort here man, couple of lines coulda been worded better i got Lotto for the W here..

12-13-2016, 05:33 PM	#11
R!canTheoryz Bullying Yall Bitches. Join Date: Feb 2013 Location: Not That Far Posts: 1,204 Battle Record: 9-22 Rep Power: 5738545	act gangster n hard, all we see is wack bars when ya mouth start cus we don't understand when u talkin hood like ur kenny from South Park Pinochio bar Vs Nothing Very basic lines from j and the ones he attempted we're just weak indirect IMO. He drops way better in 1-2 Vote - smirk