11-10-2018, 04:30 PM | #1 |
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Razah vs Mr. J[RAZAH WINS NS]
NWL:Season I: Week VI
Verses ares due: FRIDAY at 11:59 PM EST Voting ends: SUNDAY at 11:59 PM EST Line Limit: Minimum:10 lines, Max: 30 Voting on 2 battles is required. TOPIC: “Lies set in truth” @Mr. J @Razah Last edited by Inno; 11-27-2018 at 10:16 PM. |
11-13-2018, 05:41 PM | #2 |
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11-13-2018, 06:35 PM | #3 |
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11-16-2018, 06:05 PM | #4 |
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Lies set in truth.
You'd be surprised at all the lies I ever told & that surprises me, since my eyes will always know Who's lying to me. Honest, not something I'm dying to be I just need food on the table plus I'm trying to sleep I might be on edge, it's likely that life seems upset But I can't quite grasp why - It might just be a joke, maybe I should laugh twice What's life when you are broke, practically shattered It's concerning how concerned you are, does empathy matter - My own dreams will batter me, it's seen as tragedy You know that story; is it wrong to steal to feed your family & that's just real, I'm an honest man facing dark times I should've had this ambition- Hunger had to spark mine I promise it's for the good of us, my word's forever Since I'm living life where truth & lies blur together |
11-17-2018, 02:00 PM | #5 |
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I have time today. but you can give it to Razah if you want.
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11-18-2018, 08:00 PM | #7 |
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Was that this morning? Or tomorrow morning?
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11-18-2018, 08:54 PM | #8 |
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That's a "Post something right now and stop being that guy"
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11-19-2018, 02:35 AM | #9 |
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You opened well, gr8 imagery...the whole middle Section was nice...endin' was solid bro...
Glad you showed, easy win Raz...like mine but vice versa lol. |
11-19-2018, 01:36 PM | #10 |
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Didn't know you were in charge here bruv.
If one of them gave the go ahead I'd pop in and drop but no word so ..
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11-27-2018, 08:30 AM | #12 |
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Too much time has transpired.
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