Milk Chocolate [VS] Name Pending [Name Pending wins 6-0]

[Paradigm]

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due THURSDAY,
  September 18th 2014 11:59 PM PST.
• Check Ins are due TUESDAY, Sept 16th 2014
• Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

• Min. = 24 lines
• Max. = 48 lines
• Limit MUST be agreed upon

General Rules:

• First to 11, Win by 2, 7-0=KO
• 1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts.
• 2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made.
• Feeding = DQ.
• Recycling = DQ.
• Biting = DQ.
• No freeposting, swaying or bitching.
• Unless a picture battle is agreed upon,
  linking to your opponent's picture or posting it
  means you will be disqualified.
• A check in ISmandatory.
• Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in.
• If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post
  must match the 1st person's line amount.

@Orc @King Karaoke @murda sho @Alvin Karpis

[King Karaoke]

Hi...

Alvin's known to pm for votes, that's sleazy bro
Stays doing shady shit, he couldnt be a stand up guy at a Yeezy show
Youre dying to be me, maybe in another life
I fathered your style, youre just Pan trying to stab me with a butter knife
Sho's scrawny, one look at the faggot I can tell that he cant brawl
Doesnt know if he wants to be Chief Keef, Tyga or a Raggedy Anne doll
Ive seen the videos with the fake guns, youre on some sucker shit
U walk with so much of a switch, Adrian Peterson could beat his son with it
Sho, If your crew ever gets signed, then nigga its luck
Why spell Squadd with 2d's when you guys are one dimensional as fuck?
The Planes couldve been the next Dohpe, maybe Im not thinking right
But its pretty ironic how Sho getting high stopped us from ever taking flight
We beat these addicts so many times I stopped trying to keep tab
Its straight to Vegas after this, we'll be at Rehab while u guys are in rehab

Originally Posted by Murda Sho

Well I know I read it... I'm too conceited to not read mags with my name in it

Sho I don't read mags but the ppl adore me, maggot
Yea u Conceited.. aka a 5 foot black rapper who's also a corny faggot
Karp we seen the jersey but u don't play ball or kick it son
You only be hearing ''Hut Hut Hut!'' because ya girlfriend lives in one
Maaan those tattoos. Bad news.. it's shitty fam
I'm talkin' about how wack Murda Ink is, guess u can call me a 50 fan
i'ma bury you in the Graveyard for all of ya recent shit
we'll see A Walk Among the Tombstones. & I ain't talking no Neeson Flick
On Illesty I beat Sho's crew & he emerged as a joke
.. & now it's like i'm doing Doughnuts how that entire Circle is Smoke
They still remember our old verses cuz we're better, fact..
Ur lines fade after a wk or 2. Y'all r Global Ambassadors for Henna Tats
They say I'm oldschool w/ the hits when I post drops
Ima put an Axe to this Square head.. now that's a Chip off the Old Block

Bye...

[murda sho]

Fuck these niggas b


Now the plan's to conquer, with grown up bars that have to land & slaughter
Grab revolvers & get Chocolate wasted like Adam Sandler's daughter
Kar’s been holding down the team and he was quick to have that voiced
Homey you might be the Anchorman but even Ron knows Milk was a bad choice
I'd beat Orc's face in with my fists while they're bare till they're drippin wet
His eyes'll be where the ice is so much they'd be America's biggest threat
Orc why the fuck you always call Butler out like you’re the damn champ?
Stick to ya man cramps, only time we’ll see Burd above But is ya tramp stamp
King's a clown & bitch, showing all tough & writing rounds for shit
While Orc hits the town with men blowin out bucks worst than the Falcons did
What's ferris wheel take u on a ride clear to hell don't be scared to bail
Cause while he horses around all u'll get from battling us carousel's
Orc reminds me of B Rabbit cuz he grew up with the same trash
Both wanted to be rappers & his mom slept with kids in his same class
Shoulda named yall Milfs, shit all I gotta do is call that dame to pipe
I’d bag her easy and have that Cougar all over Kar like it's Talladega Nights
You're queens of this sport, in Planes we were cool now I don't team up with dorks
I'm ready to get rid of Kar so much this battle was almost me vs Orc
Irish faggot, his heritage is dying rapid and the shits ugly
Shit I bet you watch the Brady bunch Potato sack race & get hungry
These damn average lames will get scored on when we clap macs & tre's
Y'all better play some D MC or u're gonna end up like Jam Master J
Ask sho we strapped though, no games you’ll see how I do
Orc wears the tights so shit we’ll have more dots on yall than a CGI shoot

Originally Posted by Orc

sho post a normal pic of u i wana peep the tattoos

We don't hang around the same crowd, my niggas can't wait to chalk this jerk
See my peeps are gangstas while ur peeps involve me taking off my shirt
I know Kare be snitching and that’s why I wanna bring this fake harm
He’s known for talking to the Jakes so much he got insurance from State Farm
U see we're too much y'all won't be able to stand in need of a crutch
Medics will be holding up O K, like they just dropped a three in the clutch


ZIP EM UP!!

[BROKE LESNAR]

Originally Posted by King Karaoke

Hi...

Alvin's known to pm for votes, that's sleazy bro
Stays doing shady shit, he couldnt be a stand up guy at a Yeezy show - 9/10

Youre dying to be me, maybe in another life
I fathered your style, youre just Pan trying to stab me with a butter knife - 9/10

Sho's scrawny, one look at the faggot I can tell that he cant brawl
Doesnt know if he wants to be Chief Keef, Tyga or a Raggedy Anne doll - 8/10

Ive seen the videos with the fake guns, youre on some sucker shit
U walk with so much of a switch, Adrian Peterson could beat his son with it - 9/10

Sho, If your crew ever gets signed, then nigga its luck
Why spell Squadd with 2d's when you guys are one dimensional as fuck? - 10/10 lotb

The Planes couldve been the next Dohpe, maybe Im not thinking right
But its pretty ironic how Sho getting high stopped us from ever taking flight - 10/10 lotb

We beat these addicts so many times I stopped trying to keep tab
Its straight to Vegas after this, we'll be at Rehab while u guys are in rehab - 1/10

Sho I don't read mags but the ppl adore me, maggot
Yea u Conceited.. aka a 5 foot black rapper who's also a corny faggot - 8/10

Karp we seen the jersey but u don't play ball or kick it son
You only be hearing ''Hut Hut Hut!'' because ya girlfriend lives in one - 10/10 lotb

Maaan those tattoos. Bad news.. it's shitty fam
I'm talkin' about how wack Murda Ink is, guess u can call me a 50 fan - 10/10

i'ma bury you in the Graveyard for all of ya recent shit
we'll see A Walk Among the Tombstones. & I ain't talking no Neeson Flick - 8/10

On Illesty I beat Sho's crew & he emerged as a joke
.. & now it's like i'm doing Doughnuts how that entire Circle is Smoke - 10/10 lotb

They still remember our old verses cuz we're better, fact..
Ur lines fade after a wk or 2. Y'all r Global Ambassadors for Henna Tats - 5/10

They say I'm oldschool w/ the hits when I post drops
Ima put an Axe to this Square head.. now that's a Chip off the Old Block - 10/10

Bye...

117

Originally Posted by murda sho

Fuck these niggas b


Now the plan's to conquer, with grown up bars that have to land & slaughter
Grab revolvers & get Chocolate wasted like Adam Sandler's daughter - 10/10

Kar’s been holding down the team and he was quick to have that voiced
Homey you might be the Anchorman but even Ron knows Milk was a bad choice - 9/10

I'd beat Orc's face in with my fists while they're bare till they're drippin wet
His eyes'll be where the ice is so much they'd be America's biggest threat - 8/10

Orc why the fuck you always call Butler out like you’re the damn champ?
Stick to ya man cramps, only time we’ll see Burd above But is ya tramp stamp - 8/10

King's a clown & bitch, showing all tough & writing rounds for shit
While Orc hits the town with men blowin out bucks worst than the Falcons did - 10/10 lotb

What's ferris wheel take u on a ride clear to hell don't be scared to bail
Cause while he horses around all u'll get from battling us carousel's - 10/10 lotb

Orc reminds me of B Rabbit cuz he grew up with the same trash
Both wanted to be rappers & his mom slept with kids in his same class - 1/10

Shoulda named yall Milfs, shit all I gotta do is call that dame to pipe
I’d bag her easy and have that Cougar all over Kar like it's Talladega Nights - 10/10 lotb

You're queens of this sport, in Planes we were cool now I don't team up with dorks
I'm ready to get rid of Kar so much this battle was almost me vs Orc - 8/10

Irish faggot, his heritage is dying rapid and the shits ugly
Shit I bet you watch the Brady bunch Potato sack race & get hungry - 9/10
T
hese damn average lames will get scored on when we clap macs & tre's
Y'all better play some D MC or u're gonna end up like Jam Master J - 8/10

Ask sho we strapped though, no games you’ll see how I do
Orc wears the tights so shit we’ll have more dots on yall than a CGI shoot - 8/10

We don't hang around the same crowd, my niggas can't wait to chalk this jerk
See my peeps are gangstas while ur peeps involve me taking off my shirt - 10/10 lotb

I know Kare be snitching and that’s why I wanna bring this fake harm
He’s known for talking to the Jakes so much he got insurance from State Farm - 7/10

U see we're too much y'all won't be able to stand in need of a crutch
Medics will be holding up O K, like they just dropped a three in the clutch - 5/10


ZIP EM UP!!

121

I have this scored 121-117 Name Pending. Both teams had the same amount of lotbs. Great battle.

v-NP

[El Muffin]

now that im ona laptop..i can get at this


Alvin's known to pm for votes, that's sleazy bro
Stays doing shady shit, he couldnt be a stand up guy at a Yeezy show
(decent open)
Youre dying to be me, maybe in another life
I fathered your style, youre just Pan trying to stab me with a butter knife
(ok)
Sho's scrawny, one look at the faggot I can tell that he cant brawl
Doesnt know if he wants to be Chief Keef, Tyga or a Raggedy Anne doll
(nice)
Ive seen the videos with the fake guns, youre on some sucker shit
U walk with so much of a switch, Adrian Peterson could beat his son with it
(nice)
Sho, If your crew ever gets signed, then nigga its luck
Why spell Squadd with 2d's when you guys are one dimensional as fuck?
(ok)
The Planes couldve been the next Dohpe, maybe Im not thinking right
But its pretty ironic how Sho getting high stopped us from ever taking flight
(lol)
We beat these addicts so many times I stopped trying to keep tab
Its straight to Vegas after this, we'll be at Rehab while u guys are in rehab
(nah)

straight segment..nothing too overwhelming..only line I didn't rly like was the closer..the rest was ok tonice





Quote:
Originally Posted by Murda Sho
Well I know I read it... I'm too conceited to not read mags with my name in it

Sho I don't read mags but the ppl adore me, maggot
Yea u Conceited.. aka a 5 foot black rapper who's also a corny faggot
(ha)
Karp we seen the jersey but u don't play ball or kick it son
You only be hearing ''Hut Hut Hut!'' because ya girlfriend lives in one
(playyyyed..I had concept like this back in 08 @rm)
Maaan those tattoos. Bad news.. it's shitty fam
I'm talkin' about how wack Murda Ink is, guess u can call me a 50 fan
(pretty cool)
i'ma bury you in the Graveyard for all of ya recent shit
we'll see A Walk Among the Tombstones. & I ain't talking no Neeson Flick
(eh)
On Illesty I beat Sho's crew & he emerged as a joke
.. & now it's like i'm doing Doughnuts how that entire Circle is Smoke
(pretty good)
They still remember our old verses cuz we're better, fact..
Ur lines fade after a wk or 2. Y'all r Global Ambassadors for Henna Tats
(nice)
They say I'm oldschool w/ the hits when I post drops
Ima put an Axe to this Square head.. now that's a Chip off the Old Block
(cool close)

similar results..mebe 1 o2 lines I absolutely didn't like the rest was ok to nice



Now the plan's to conquer, with grown up bars that have to land & slaughter
Grab revolvers & get Chocolate wasted like Adam Sandler's daughter
(nice open)
Kar’s been holding down the team and he was quick to have that voiced
Homey you might be the Anchorman but even Ron knows Milk was a bad choice
(cool)
I'd beat Orc's face in with my fists while they're bare till they're drippin wet
His eyes'll be where the ice is so much they'd be America's biggest threat
(no)
Orc why the fuck you always call Butler out like you’re the damn champ?
Stick to ya man cramps, only time we’ll see Burd above But is ya tramp stamp
(lol)
King's a clown & bitch, showing all tough & writing rounds for shit
While Orc hits the town with men blowin out bucks worst than the Falcons did
(nice)
What's ferris wheel take u on a ride clear to hell don't be scared to bail
Cause while he horses around all u'll get from battling us carousel's
(decent)
Orc reminds me of B Rabbit cuz he grew up with the same trash
Both wanted to be rappers & his mom slept with kids in his same class
(nice)
Shoulda named yall Milfs, shit all I gotta do is call that dame to pipe
I’d bag her easy and have that Cougar all over Kar like it's Talladega Nights
(cool)
You're queens of this sport, in Planes we were cool now I don't team up with dorks
I'm ready to get rid of Kar so much this battle was almost me vs Orc
(ok)
Irish faggot, his heritage is dying rapid and the shits ugly
Shit I bet you watch the Brady bunch Potato sack race & get hungry
(decent)
These damn average lames will get scored on when we clap macs & tre's
Y'all better play some D MC or u're gonna end up like Jam Master J
(nice)
Ask sho we strapped though, no games you’ll see how I do
Orc wears the tights so shit we’ll have more dots on yall than a CGI shoot
(ok)

the last 6 were ok.


iono this was close

mc were consistent but I think that verse sho dropped had the heavier lines overall tbh

like the hits were better for the most part

v/np

[Certain]

Milk Chocolate: This was a solid showing, of the caliber of a championship battle. I really liked the line about The Planes because, even though "getting high"/"taking flight" wordplay normally is played, it was worded well and felt very distinctly personal, not just in the sense that it was a personal but in the same way that Nas' "You sold your soul for riches" line felt like a personal affront. The first stanza as a whole was better than the second pretty clearly, though the closer on the first stanza was one of the weakest lines in the verse. The line about murda sho's looks was harsh, and the 2d line was clever. In that second stanza, the Smoke line was good and personal, but there weren't many standouts as a whole. Mostly it was a bit generic, maybe lazy.

Name Pending: The opening four lines felt almost like a checklist, coming up with the best Chocolate line followed by the best Milk line. But they were really, really good lines, just would have been more effective if spread apart a little in such a long verse. The tramp stamp line was interesting, but my research shows that Orc mostly references Butler as the best text battler ever. The Falcons line was so slick and sort of a throwback to a time when writing was valued more in battling.It's interesting that you both had Will Ferrell movie references. At least, I assume each of you wrote one of those. The Anchorman one was much better. The me vs. Orc line was clever. The Jam Master J and B Rabbit lines were pretty bad, and a different, worse Jake from State Farm line was just used in the Summer Classic championship.

Both verses slipped in the second halves, but I thought Name Pending was a little more consistent and had better wording and delivery (though both teams are very good at wording). In essence, I enjoyed it more.

Vote: Name Pending

[Unfukwitable]

Alvin's known to pm for votes, that's sleazy bro
Stays doing shady shit, he couldnt be a stand up guy at a Yeezy show
Ive seen the videos with the fake guns, youre on some sucker shit
U walk with so much of a switch, Adrian Peterson could beat his son with it
Sho, If your crew ever gets signed, then nigga its luck
Why spell Squadd with 2d's when you guys are one dimensional as fuck?
Karp we seen the jersey but u don't play ball or kick it son
You only be hearing ''Hut Hut Hut!'' because ya girlfriend lives in one
On Illesty I beat Sho's crew & he emerged as a joke
.. & now it's like i'm doing Doughnuts how that entire Circle is Smoke
They say I'm oldschool w/ the hits when I post drops
Ima put an Axe to this Square head.. now that's a Chip off the Old Block

vs.

Now the plan's to conquer, with grown up bars that have to land & slaughter
Grab revolvers & get Chocolate wasted like Adam Sandler's daughter
Kar’s been holding down the team and he was quick to have that voiced
Homey you might be the Anchorman but even Ron knows Milk was a bad choice
Orc why the fuck you always call Butler out like you’re the damn champ?
Stick to ya man cramps, only time we’ll see Burd above But is ya tramp stamp
King's a clown & bitch, showing all tough & writing rounds for shit
While Orc hits the town with men blowin out bucks worst than the Falcons did
What's ferris wheel take u on a ride clear to hell don't be scared to bail
Cause while he horses around all u'll get from battling us carousel's
We don't hang around the same crowd, my niggas can't wait to chalk this jerk
See my peeps are gangstas while ur peeps involve me taking off my shirt

This was a dope display of talent no joke, I think this came down to consistency, I feel one team came a bit more sharp overall but I can't knock neither squad.. Dope ass finals v/..NamePending

[Tomb]

Alvin's known to pm for votes, that's sleazy bro
Stays doing shady shit, he couldnt be a stand up guy at a Yeezy show
Ive seen the videos with the fake guns, youre on some sucker shit
U walk with so much of a switch, Adrian Peterson could beat his son with it
Sho, If your crew ever gets signed, then nigga its luck
Why spell Squadd with 2d's when you guys are one dimensional as fuck?
Karp we seen the jersey but u don't play ball or kick it son
You only be hearing ''Hut Hut Hut!'' because ya girlfriend lives in one
On Illesty I beat Sho's crew & he emerged as a joke
.. & now it's like i'm doing Doughnuts how that entire Circle is Smoke
They say I'm oldschool w/ the hits when I post drops
Ima put an Axe to this Square head.. now that's a Chip off the Old Block

vs.

Now the plan's to conquer, with grown up bars that have to land & slaughter
Grab revolvers & get Chocolate wasted like Adam Sandler's daughter
Kar’s been holding down the team and he was quick to have that voiced
Homey you might be the Anchorman but even Ron knows Milk was a bad choice
Orc why the fuck you always call Butler out like you’re the damn champ?
Stick to ya man cramps, only time we’ll see Burd above But is ya tramp stamp
King's a clown & bitch, showing all tough & writing rounds for shit
While Orc hits the town with men blowin out bucks worst than the Falcons did
What's ferris wheel take u on a ride clear to hell don't be scared to bail
Cause while he horses around all u'll get from battling us carousel's
Orc reminds me of B Rabbit cuz he grew up with the same trash
Both wanted to be rappers & his mom slept with kids in his same class
We don't hang around the same crowd, my niggas can't wait to chalk this jerk
See my peeps are gangstas while ur peeps involve me taking off my shirt


This was a good ass battle both came with good shit, consistency n everything both teams showed up but I got np by a quote close as shit match thou good shit fellas

V/np

[Tic]

First thing's first....this match was DOPE AF.

Originally Posted by King Karaoke

Hi...

Alvin's known to pm for votes, that's sleazy bro
Stays doing shady shit, he couldnt be a stand up guy at a Yeezy show
This was alright.
Youre dying to be me, maybe in another life
I fathered your style, youre just Pan trying to stab me with a butter knife
Ok, this was cool.
Sho's scrawny, one look at the faggot I can tell that he cant brawl
Doesnt know if he wants to be Chief Keef, Tyga or a Raggedy Anne doll
Eh, this was ok.
Ive seen the videos with the fake guns, youre on some sucker shit
U walk with so much of a switch, Adrian Peterson could beat his son with it
Lol cool.
Sho, If your crew ever gets signed, then nigga its luck
Why spell Squadd with 2d's when you guys are one dimensional as fuck?
Dope.
The Planes couldve been the next Dohpe, maybe Im not thinking right
But its pretty ironic how Sho getting high stopped us from ever taking flight
Nice.
We beat these addicts so many times I stopped trying to keep tab
Its straight to Vegas after this, we'll be at Rehab while u guys are in rehab
Nah.





Sho I don't read mags but the ppl adore me, maggot
Yea u Conceited.. aka a 5 foot black rapper who's also a corny faggot
Ehh, ok.
Karp we seen the jersey but u don't play ball or kick it son
You only be hearing ''Hut Hut Hut!'' because ya girlfriend lives in one
Not bad.
Maaan those tattoos. Bad news.. it's shitty fam
I'm talkin' about how wack Murda Ink is, guess u can call me a 50 fan
Cool.
i'ma bury you in the Graveyard for all of ya recent shit
we'll see A Walk Among the Tombstones. & I ain't talking no Neeson Flick
This was ok.
On Illesty I beat Sho's crew & he emerged as a joke
.. & now it's like i'm doing Doughnuts how that entire Circle is Smoke
Dope.
They still remember our old verses cuz we're better, fact..
Ur lines fade after a wk or 2. Y'all r Global Ambassadors for Henna Tats
Ok, not bad.
They say I'm oldschool w/ the hits when I post drops
Ima put an Axe to this Square head.. now that's a Chip off the Old Block
Eh.
Bye...

Originally Posted by murda sho

Fuck these niggas b


Now the plan's to conquer, with grown up bars that have to land & slaughter
Grab revolvers & get Chocolate wasted like Adam Sandler's daughter
Nice.
Kar’s been holding down the team and he was quick to have that voiced
Homey you might be the Anchorman but even Ron knows Milk was a bad choice
Cool.
I'd beat Orc's face in with my fists while they're bare till they're drippin wet
His eyes'll be where the ice is so much they'd be America's biggest threat
Lol execution is a bit sloppy but I like this.
Orc why the fuck you always call Butler out like you’re the damn champ?
Stick to ya man cramps, only time we’ll see Burd above But is ya tramp stamp
This was ok.
King's a clown & bitch, showing all tough & writing rounds for shit
While Orc hits the town with men blowin out bucks worst than the Falcons did
Dope.
What's ferris wheel take u on a ride clear to hell don't be scared to bail
Cause while he horses around all u'll get from battling us carousel's
I liked this NP.
Orc reminds me of B Rabbit cuz he grew up with the same trash
Both wanted to be rappers & his mom slept with kids in his same class
Nah.
Shoulda named yall Milfs, shit all I gotta do is call that dame to pipe
I’d bag her easy and have that Cougar all over Kar like it's Talladega Nights
This was ok.
You're queens of this sport, in Planes we were cool now I don't team up with dorks
I'm ready to get rid of Kar so much this battle was almost me vs Orc
Eh, ok.
Irish faggot, his heritage is dying rapid and the shits ugly
Shit I bet you watch the Brady bunch Potato sack race & get hungry
Lol ok.
These damn average lames will get scored on when we clap macs & tre's
Y'all better play some D MC or u're gonna end up like Jam Master J
Not bad.
Ask sho we strapped though, no games you’ll see how I do
Orc wears the tights so shit we’ll have more dots on yall than a CGI shoot
Ok.



We don't hang around the same crowd, my niggas can't wait to chalk this jerk
See my peeps are gangstas while ur peeps involve me taking off my shirt
Nice.
I know Kare be snitching and that’s why I wanna bring this fake harm
He’s known for talking to the Jakes so much he got insurance from State Farm
Nah.
U see we're too much y'all won't be able to stand in need of a crutch
Medics will be holding up O K, like they just dropped a three in the clutch
Eh.

ZIP EM UP!!

This battle was dope AF, tbh. Both came consistent but I feel like NP just had just a littleee more consistency throughout. Both teams went hard, but I feel like there was a clear winner, despite it being a small margin.

NP

[Paradigm]

6-0 Name Pending