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Old 08-23-2014, 05:03 PM   #21
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All 3 did have good verses tbh Gamble surprised me, the content was kinda random and all over the place but the flow was cool and it rhymed well. Then Black's verse was super dope, maybe a little shorter than I would have hoped but everything about it was crazy, from the flow to the rhymes to the wordplay. Camp Bell was dope too, there were some very clever lines in there and again the flow was on point.

This was an awesome read dudes, f'rillz.
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Old 08-23-2014, 05:05 PM   #22
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Old 08-23-2014, 06:40 PM   #23
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What's it all mean? No mercy. *takes drag of cigarette* *laughs* I don't know. What is mercy? We're all on a flat line. You're me. It's all the same. You wrote those verse. But through space and time someone else wrote them already. Someone else is going to write them later. It's all the same. *cuts figure of a tree out of a coffe mug*. We're all just a tree. The branches. The leaves. They'll brown and fall sooner or later. There's no mercy in that, if that's what you mean. *looks around bored*. dead man. We're all a dead man. Cold turkey life. Why? It all fizzles out anyway, might as well eat the leaves while you're at it. Everything crushes to a single dot in the time plane. Up is green, blue in north. It's all random. Your personas. A card from the deck assigned at random. So what is it then? dead man's the best, he got that card? Gamble is the faggot, that his? Campbell irrelevant? So arbitrary. You say it's skill based. *smokes* I think that's a crock of shit. Cosmic dust *rubs fingers together* having a little joke for it's carbon. That's all. Thanks for letting this out into the world, for it to die. Not that it matters. *drinks beer*
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Old 08-23-2014, 11:26 PM   #24
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LMAOOOO wait....


so, we all purposely overlook shambles verse
then ride blacks dick like he dropped the hottest
shit of 2014? smh. wow. this shit was dope. can
we get real feed please? i hate yall man. good shit
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not really riding. It's just because black's the best writer here and both of you are nobodies. he's smart and drops creative bars, you're both not as smart and drop lame and mediocre bars...

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And your name is seemore buts

I rest my case
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Old 08-24-2014, 12:34 AM   #26
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not really riding. It's just because black's the best writer here and both of you are nobodies. he's smart and drops creative bars, you're both not as smart and drop lame and mediocre bars...

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oh?...but...umm, he, he...he did the piece with us?
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uhhh

he's collabed with dozens, wack and dope.

please return to being irrelevant

bitching about feed makes you seem even lamer
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Old 08-24-2014, 12:37 AM   #28
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@Camp Bell

Don't even bother my G.

This is what they do. They have no respect for the craft. Black barely even tried most likely was joking around keying that and still if he coughed on this shit they'd say the same shit
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Old 08-24-2014, 12:38 AM   #29
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uhhh

he's collabed with dozens, wack and dope.

please return to being irrelevant

bitching about feed makes you seem even lamer
I'm sure he just wants some real feed homie. Can u blame him?
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Old 08-24-2014, 12:40 AM   #30
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All 3 did have good verses tbh Gamble surprised me, the content was kinda random and all over the place but the flow was cool and it rhymed well. Then Black's verse was super dope, maybe a little shorter than I would have hoped but everything about it was crazy, from the flow to the rhymes to the wordplay. Camp Bell was dope too, there were some very clever lines in there and again the flow was on point.

This was an awesome read dudes, f'rillz.
Perfect example of someone who doesn't let their personal feelings overshadow the craft at hand.
This guy hates me and still gave an honest breakdown
Witty repped for this.

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Old 08-24-2014, 12:41 AM   #31
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uhhh

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please return to being irrelevant

bitching about feed makes you seem even lamer

never bitched about feed. all of the relevant feed was positive anyway
stop being a dick rider, this shit was dope regardless of who was in it.
and hop off my sack since im so irrelevant. im free to comment as i please.
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Old 08-24-2014, 12:47 AM   #32
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never bitched about feed. all of the relevant feed was positive anyway
stop being a dick rider, this shit was dope regardless of who was in it.
and hop off my sack since im so irrelevant. im free to comment as i please.
I would stop but you're doing it to yourself tbh. You state that I'm a dickrider, then state an opinion of your own verse (inference that urs and gamble's was dope). Then, using one line of your own opinion of yourself as proof, you proceed to tell me to hop off, and that you're free to be a narcissist. Not a good look on yourself dawg. To come clean I only read black's and skimmed (10 seconds each) the other verses, b/c knew they'd be inferior.
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Ay Nycspits I go way back wit u son lol

I always loved readin ya stuff.

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What's it all mean? No mercy. *takes drag of cigarette* *laughs* I don't know. What is mercy? We're all on a flat line. You're me. It's all the same. You wrote those verse. But through space and time someone else wrote them already. Someone else is going to write them later. It's all the same. *cuts figure of a tree out of a coffe mug*. We're all just a tree. The branches. The leaves. They'll brown and fall sooner or later. There's no mercy in that, if that's what you mean. *looks around bored*. dead man. We're all a dead man. Cold turkey life. Why? It all fizzles out anyway, might as well eat the leaves while you're at it. Everything crushes to a single dot in the time plane. Up is green, blue in north. It's all random. Your personas. A card from the deck assigned at random. So what is it then? dead man's the best, he got that card? Gamble is the faggot, that his? Campbell irrelevant? So arbitrary. You say it's skill based. *smokes* I think that's a crock of shit. Cosmic dust *rubs fingers together* having a little joke for it's carbon. That's all. Thanks for letting this out into the world, for it to die. Not that it matters. *drinks beer*
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Ay why gamble.got.time to reply 50 timez.in here but cant comment on other dropz in here....come on son....
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