Bust 1-1 vs Trag. 1-2 - BUST WINS BY DQ

[Sharp]

Netcees Battle League Season VIII

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Thursday, June 18th 2015 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

• Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
• If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

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First to 5, win by at least two votes
Good luck!

@Bust @Trag.

[Bust]

10 fine?

[Trag.]

I'm not showing

dgaf

[Bust]

Quickly,


He ain't holding Guap, smoking rocks got his bank flattened,
On some beginner shit, it's why ur cash flow like broken blocks dawg.. it ain't stackin,
N when he see my doe he wanna be my bro, droolin over half a stack
But I told u 6000 times when I rip out ya spine..I'll have ya back
Quit the faggit act, I'll pull a knife but first spit till snot hits this dudes cheek
Then put the blade in ya mouth as phlegm makes its way out...that's hawk in a loogie
I'm poppin a toolie, got glocks n them uzis what u thought this a movie?
CRIMES REAL! n I know u stay cooped up in ya room but damn, chickens see alot mo than you, b
U the only homo lurking, so either drop or log off, that phony pose don't work, g
Talk tough n my click'll surround ur upper body wit 9's like a Tony Romo jersey
My hommies show no mercy, n u might trade shots but with aim off ur nothin, fam
See u can buck cans, but when ur targets missed shouldn't ur focus be ur Fuckin cants'
I trust u to show, wait, hed rather have a popular opponent then get it on wit bust,
Hey @Sharp since he's lookin for a big name, I think iamrhetoric is long enuff

[Trag.]

mom wished u were a titty fuck, a stream rollin down her neck
u never measured up in life...the only GOOD bust belongs around her chest
ill flip that line again, n have the ruger getchya slumped wit ease
the gun buxom bitches - other words stretch bust like some big double d's
watch me make a prediction how the leagues in for the worse...
cause we all caught a glimpse of the wk 14, just from skimming that verse
ya name inspires nothin but doubt, too crazy for fuckin around
voters yell "Trag wins", even muff had a bad taste with a nut bust in his mouth
seen what this fgt writes? ya have the baddest wife, i cant deny
she came over to borrow my sugar, daddy - n b4 I left she gave my saccharide
set fire to his squad, wont have anyone left to carry ya casket
I'll dustbust... then have what's left of ya homies vacuum up the ashes
just shut it down. pump off tha holster, left slumped on ya sofa
after i dump tre's its all vegetables in a bag....so you KNOW the parties over

[El Muffin]

Bust
opener. Simplistic but ok I guess. A money punch. Eh
I'll have ya back really played bro
hawk n a loogie was a cool visual. Not hard but sum Kool horror core shit. #Larkin
coop good flow. Prolly be good live. It's ok as I'm reading it
Tony romo. Don't like lines like this. Could use anyone who wears #9
Not feeling cants. Think I missed sumthin
closer was kinda weird. I dint get wat they had to do w/ it other than long name.

Iono bust I've seen u come better. Interesting verse but I think u dropped the ball w/ the back line and closer

Trag
open ok
buxom ..cool wp. Big ass boobies kinda cheesy but concept is nice
lol at bust in my mouth. Yall never gon let me live huh
sack a ride was cool too
nm follow soot was eh. The dust trail shit was ehhhh. I thought u were goin in another direction
closer was eh


Pretty good. Picked up steam in the middle

I got Trag here by lookin at my breakdown

Cool shit fellas

V/trag

Wait did u edit that bust line

Coz now it look gay wtf? Lmaaaao

Why is nut in there

Now u mk my vote look gay it's a subtle change.

[Hush]

Originally Posted by Bust

Quickly,


He ain't holding Guap, smoking rocks got his bank flattened,
On some beginner shit, it's why ur cash flow like broken blocks dawg.. it ain't stackin,
this is really simplistic , too be so simple and so over worded really hurts it
N when he see my doe he wanna be my bro, droolin over half a stack
But I told u 6000 times when I rip out ya spine..I'll have ya back
this is verrry basic dude. its like rap101
Quit the faggit act, I'll pull a knife but first spit till snot hits this dudes cheek
Then put the blade in ya mouth as phlegm makes its way out...that's hawk in a loogie
lol thats a fire concept but the wording was really janky
I'm poppin a toolie, got glocks n them uzis what u thought this a movie?
CRIMES REAL! n I know u stay cooped up in ya room but damn, chickens see alot mo than you, b
what?
U the only homo lurking, so either drop or log off, that phony pose don't work, g
Talk tough n my click'll surround ur upper body wit 9's like a Tony Romo jersey
nah
My hommies show no mercy, n u might trade shots but with aim off ur nothin, fam
See u can buck cans, but when ur targets missed shouldn't ur focus be ur Fuckin cants
nah'
I trust u to show, wait, hed rather have a popular opponent then get it on wit bust,
Hey @Sharp since he's lookin for a big name, I think iamrhetoric is long enuff
creative but not a great diss

Originally Posted by Trag.

mom wished u were a titty fuck, a stream rollin down her neck
u never measured up in life...the only GOOD bust belongs around her chest
cool
ill flip that line again, n have the ruger getchya slumped wit ease
the gun buxom bitches - other words stretch bust like some big double d's
better
watch me make a prediction how the leagues in for the worse...
cause we all caught a glimpse of the wk 14, just from skimming that verse
eh, old
ya name inspires nothin but doubt, too crazy for fuckin around
voters yell "Trag wins", even muff had a bad taste with a bust-nut in his mouth
haha wording sucked on this tho
seen what this fgt writes? ya have the baddest wife, i cant deny
she came over to borrow my sugar, daddy - n b4 I left she gave my saccharide
would be lying if I said I knew what saccharide meant
set fire to his squad, wont have anyone left to carry the casket
I'll bang bust then have ya homies follow soot, except 1 who'll bury the ashes
suit and soot? iunno bout that
just shut it down. pump off tha holster, left slumped on ya sofa
after i dump tre's its all vegetables in a bag....so you KNOW the parties over
what? is this some school lunch shit

this was close
but trag had better technical skill

dudes was even on concepts and lines


but trag was way cleaner

dope punches can beat a better put together verse imho but bust aint have enough new shit


v trag

[IAmRhetoric]

He ain't holding Guap, smoking rocks got his bank flattened,
On some beginner shit, it's why ur cash flow like broken blocks dawg.. it ain't stackin,
meh

N when he see my doe he wanna be my bro, droolin over half a stack
But I told u 6000 times when I rip out ya spine..I'll have ya back
kinda meh too

Quit the faggit act, I'll pull a knife but first spit till snot hits this dudes cheek
Then put the blade in ya mouth as phlegm makes its way out...that's hawk in a loogie
good

I'm poppin a toolie, got glocks n them uzis what u thought this a movie?
CRIMES REAL! n I know u stay cooped up in ya room but damn, chickens see alot mo than you, b
okay

U the only homo lurking, so either drop or log off, that phony pose don't work, g
Talk tough n my click'll surround ur upper body wit 9's like a Tony Romo jersey
i feel you

My hommies show no mercy, n u might trade shots but with aim off ur nothin, fam
See u can buck cans, but when ur targets missed shouldn't ur focus be ur Fuckin cants'
bruh

I trust u to show, wait, hed rather have a popular opponent then get it on wit bust,
Hey @Sharp since he's lookin for a big name, I think iamrhetoric is long enuff
makes no sense
but set it up if you wun beef bruh

trag

mom wished u were a titty fuck, a stream rollin down her neck
u never measured up in life...the only GOOD bust belongs around her chest
good

ill flip that line again, n have the ruger getchya slumped wit ease
the gun buxom bitches - other words stretch bust like some big double d's
lmao okay

watch me make a prediction how the leagues in for the worse...
cause we all caught a glimpse of the wk 14, just from skimming that verse
meh

ya name inspires nothin but doubt, too crazy for fuckin around
voters yell "Trag wins", even muff had a bad taste with a bust-nut in his mouth
uh wut

seen what this fgt writes? ya have the baddest wife, i cant deny
she came over to borrow my sugar, daddy - n b4 I left she gave my saccharide
why do you even know that word lol

set fire to his squad, wont have anyone left to carry the casket
I'll bang bust then have ya homies follow soot, except 1 who'll bury the ashes
pause

just shut it down. pump off tha holster, left slumped on ya sofa
after i dump tre's its all vegetables in a bag....so you KNOW the parties over
okay

v/ Trag

Trag was way consistent but went homo like halfway through his verse

[Junto]

Quit the faggit act, I'll pull a knife but first spit till snot hits this dudes cheek
Then put the blade in ya mouth as phlegm makes its way out...that's hawk in a loogie

vs.

mom wished u were a titty fuck, a stream rollin down her neck
u never measured up in life...the only GOOD bust belongs around her chest
watch me make a prediction how the leagues in for the worse...
cause we all caught a glimpse of the wk 14, just from skimming that verse
seen what this fgt writes? ya have the baddest wife, i cant deny
she came over to borrow my sugar, daddy - n b4 I left she gave my saccharide

These were all solid to me... Hawk in a loogie was a little off conceptually but decent.
Good bust kinda predictable, still cool. Week 14 kinda old but not bad & saccharide I liked.
Bust had some bars too that I thought needed work on concepts - blocks, spine, closer...
Trag didn't connect on everything but overall the ideas & wording were more polished.

V/ Tragic

[Sn00p]

Quit the faggit act, I'll pull a knife but first spit till snot hits this dudes cheek
Then put the blade in ya mouth as phlegm makes its way out...that's hawk in a loogie
U the only homo lurking, so either drop or log off, that phony pose don't work, g
Talk tough n my click'll surround ur upper body wit 9's like a Tony Romo jersey

vs.

mom wished u were a titty fuck, a stream rollin down her neck
u never measured up in life...the only GOOD bust belongs around her chest
ill flip that line again, n have the ruger getchya slumped wit ease
the gun buxom bitches - other words stretch bust like some big double d's
seen what this fgt writes? ya have the baddest wife, i cant deny
she came over to borrow my sugar, daddy - n b4 I left she gave my saccharide

bust had some more solid ideas (like his closer) that woulda been pretty dope w/ a slightly better execution. trag had rly good execution but some lines felt kinda played, like wk 14. this was a good read tho. i was kinda picky w/ quotes. so yea, props to both. but i got trag kinda clearly, based on consistency and delivery.
v/trag

[fraze]

Originally Posted by Bust

He ain't holding Guap, smoking rocks got his bank flattened,
On some beginner shit, it's why ur cash flow like broken blocks dawg.. it ain't stackin,
ok concept. a little wordy but ok
N when he see my doe he wanna be my bro, droolin over half a stack
But I told u 6000 times when I rip out ya spine..I'll have ya back
little simple for me. would have like a better setup
Quit the faggit act, I'll pull a knife but first spit till snot hits this dudes cheek
Then put the blade in ya mouth as phlegm makes its way out...that's hawk in a loogie
this was cool
I'm poppin a toolie, got glocks n them uzis what u thought this a movie?
CRIMES REAL! n I know u stay cooped up in ya room but damn, chickens see alot mo than you, b
this hits
U the only homo lurking, so either drop or log off, that phony pose don't work, g
Talk tough n my click'll surround ur upper body wit 9's like a Tony Romo jersey
ok but light to me. didn't like 'upper body with 9s' wording
My hommies show no mercy, n u might trade shots but with aim off ur nothin, fam
See u can buck cans, but when ur targets missed shouldn't ur focus be ur Fuckin cants'
didn't like this
I trust u to show, wait, hed rather have a popular opponent then get it on wit bust,
Hey @Sharp since he's lookin for a big name, I think iamrhetoric is long enuff
i get it but iamrhetoric isn't a big name on NC, so this falls a little flat

Originally Posted by Trag.

mom wished u were a titty fuck, a stream rollin down her neck
u never measured up in life...the only GOOD bust belongs around her chest
cool concept, but could have been directed better
ill flip that line again, n have the ruger getchya slumped wit ease
the gun buxom bitches - other words stretch bust like some big double d's
cool concept, but wording in punch is off
watch me make a prediction how the leagues in for the worse...
cause we all caught a glimpse of the wk 14, just from skimming that verse
eh. i guess. light tho.
ya name inspires nothin but doubt, too crazy for fuckin around
voters yell "Trag wins", even muff had a bad taste with a nut bust in his mouth
i think you messed up the execution here, but the concept is straight
seen what this fgt writes? ya have the baddest wife, i cant deny
she came over to borrow my sugar, daddy - n b4 I left she gave my saccharide
concept is fire but you messed up the direction. you should have been borrowing sugar if she's giving saccharide
set fire to his squad, wont have anyone left to carry ya casket
I'll dustbust... then have what's left of ya homies vacuum up the ashes
nice
just shut it down. pump off tha holster, left slumped on ya sofa
after i dump tre's its all vegetables in a bag....so you KNOW the parties over
nah

Cool battle. Bust surprised me here with some nice quotes. Liked blocks, hawking a loogie, and cooped up. Trag had dope concepts for the most part but didn't always have wording to match. His best bars were double Ds, saccharide, and dustbust.

This was a cool battle but I feel like Bust had worse misses and Trag had better concepts in general. Looking forward to reading more from both of you.

Vote: Trag.

[sral]

Bust has a style I like better than the majority of text heads, seems more the OTBVA/RMBVA type but I like it

Hawk in a loogie was dope

Closer I liked too actually, shot like the 'got ya back' line are played out though and sadly you had more of those than you did lines I liked here

not bad at all though, I'd def peep for you again

Trags first four were nice, liked DustBust too as well as his closer

I've got Trag winning this one, he was just more consistent with more lines I liked and less I thought were played

good battle fellas!

[Allen Knight]

Quit the faggit act, I'll pull a knife but first spit till snot hits this dudes cheek
Then put the blade in ya mouth as phlegm makes its way out...that's hawk in a loogie
U the only homo lurking, so either drop or log off, that phony pose don't work, g
Talk tough n my click'll surround ur upper body wit 9's like a Tony Romo jersey

Vs

ill flip that line again, n have the ruger getchya slumped wit ease
the gun buxom bitches - other words stretch bust like some big double d's
seen what this fgt writes? ya have the baddest wife, i cant deny
she came over to borrow my sugar, daddy - n b4 I left she gave my saccharide
set fire to his squad, wont have anyone left to carry ya casket
I'll dustbust... then have what's left of ya homies vacuum up the ashes



V/trag, this was a good battle tbh, bust has alot of potential tbh that romo line imo
was dope, but i think trag was just alot more consistent here & that dustbust line was hard...enjoyed reading this one, props to both.

[Sharp]

wtffffffff trag changed a bar after muff voted

Bust wins by DQ

all votes placed are appreciated


lmaoooooooooo