Bust 1-0 Vs Ill nik-A 2-1 - NIK WINS

[Allen Knight]

Netcees Battle League Season VIII

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Thursday, June 18th 2015 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

• Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
• If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

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First to 5, win by at least two votes
Good luck!

@Bust @ill nik-A

[Bust]

10 good

[ill nik-A]

Welcome!

[ill nik-A]

10 sent to Sharp @Bust

[Bust]

Nikka aka thirteen

I don't polish pistols, ain't nuttin sweet bout bustin heat,
I mean JESUS! pieces kill, n id rather use a shiny chain to choke this fuckin geek,
Legend? Never, HOF'r? U musta blown guys dicks for that shit,
But idgaf what Nik names himself, to us he's goes by bitch or faggit,
U ain't clappin a Nina, in fact kid u'll crap if a gats in the scene, nerd
The temps 90 n he havin a heat stroke,see yo, hes uncomfortable blastin the heater.
This grown man shit, u could move that childsplay back to ya Vizio,
Cos it ain't a kids game when I say that I'm taggin ur shitty hoe
She actually pretty tho, she just want a man that can finally get her cherry popped,
Forget about u, n not notice 13 pass by like its already 14 on military clocks

[ill nik-A]

u can talk sneakers, age, even go as far as describin my dressin style
BUT this battle is like a car lease… u gonna pay for goin the extra mile
go address denial, this thread was made for me to fuck ya pride quick
they didn’t need to click to know this was a sonning… cuz nik/ Bust inside it
what I mean’s basically u don’t have a shot, concepts lack the props
ur creativity deserted u… & all u see’s tumbleweed blowin past ur thoughts
trust I’ll win! what makes u different from everyone I crushed right in?
u don’t get a pass… cuz my style’s money like Manziel u just a Bust like him
my guns droppin thugs, dare ya to come in my crib & flaunt the snub
…If u invite anyone to bring it in… it’s cuz ur faggot ass wants a hug

[Tic]

Bust - opener was nice, 90s could've been nice but execution lacked. You really fell off after that. Not feeling anything else. Taggin was nah, names himself was more of a statement. That closer? No.

Nik - Not really feeling the opener, just not that hard hitting. But Nik/bust and tumbleweed were both fire. Manziel I didn't get and the closer was ok.

Nik takes this easily IMO with 2/3 top lines and consistency.

[Ronin]

This battle was pretty lame. Nika obviously dropped soft cause of his opponents verse. Bust pretty much nothing after the opener and I really don't even wanna give u that. Nika had some cool concepts with good wording, enough to win anyway.

Vote - nik

[Amen.]

Bust opener was ok, at best. Rest was off to me/fell flat. Nothing worth quoting and/or effective, IMO.

Nika opener, sonning and deserted bars were all good. Wasn't feeling the last 2, lack luster. Other bars were nice, tho. Props...

Nik-a got it

[IAmRhetoric]

Bust your opener was your only jab, and heater was your strongest miss. Everything else was kind of wack.

Nik you got some consistent bars, one or two that fell off but solid verse.

mvgt/ Nik

[Clutbuck]

lmao Nik in a landslideeeeeee

completely one sided battle

I've known Nik forever and ain't never seen him post under the name 13? Wtf

I don't usually peep battles here but the few I do I vote on

mods if you want something more elaborate then PM me or whatever but it's pretty clear Nik got this lol

- Lars/Baron

[Junto]

I don't polish pistols, ain't nuttin sweet bout bustin heat,
I mean JESUS! pieces kill, n id rather use a shiny chain to choke this fuckin geek,
this is cool... not a real out of the box idea wit pieces/chain but decent execution
Legend? Never, HOF'r? U musta blown guys dicks for that shit,
But idgaf what Nik names himself, to us he's goes by bitch or faggit,
too simple, nah
U ain't clappin a Nina, in fact kid u'll crap if a gats in the scene, nerd
The temps 90 n he havin a heat stroke,see yo, hes uncomfortable blastin the heater.
this type of bar seem like old school battle shit. ok, not a great concept
This grown man shit, u could move that childsplay back to ya Vizio,
Cos it ain't a kids game when I say that I'm taggin ur shitty hoe
wasn't feelin this
She actually pretty tho, she just want a man that can finally get her cherry popped,
Forget about u, n not notice 13 pass by like its already 14 on military clocks
ehh... Never seen nik-A called 13 either so didn't work for me in a couple ways

vs.

u can talk sneakers, age, even go as far as describin my dressin style
BUT this battle is like a car lease… u gonna pay for goin the extra mile
haha nice
go address denial, this thread was made for me to fuck ya pride quick
they didn’t need to click to know this was a sonning… cuz nik/ Bust inside it
decent... kinda simple though
what I mean’s basically u don’t have a shot, concepts lack the props
ur creativity deserted u… & all u see’s tumbleweed blowin past ur thoughts
I like this
trust I’ll win! what makes u different from everyone I crushed right in?
u don’t get a pass… cuz my style’s money like Manziel u just a Bust like him
not a strong connection wit 'a Bust like him'... coulda worded it better here
my guns droppin thugs, dare ya to come in my crib & flaunt the snub
…If u invite anyone to bring it in… it’s cuz ur faggot ass wants a hug
ok

nik-A took this one pretty decisively. Bust opener & heater lines weren't bad...
but nik-A's car lease & deserted were tight. nik/bust solid. & other 2 still creative
Just better execution and concepts from the veteran in this one

V/ nik-A

[Greed]

I don't polish pistols, ain't nuttin sweet bout bustin heat,
I mean JESUS! pieces kill, n id rather use a shiny chain to choke this fuckin geek,
Sick

Legend? Never, HOF'r? U musta blown guys dicks for that shit,
But idgaf what Nik names himself, to us he's goes by bitch or faggit
O okay you not playing

U ain't clappin a Nina, in fact kid u'll crap if a gats in the scene, nerd
The temps 90 n he havin a heat stroke,see yo, hes uncomfortable blastin the heater.
Oh noo this would have been sick but i think the delivery was off. See yo sounded weird, and something about the temp being 90 seems wrong to me.

This grown man shit, u could move that childsplay back to ya Vizio,
Cos it ain't a kids game when I say that I'm taggin ur shitty hoe
Ehh

She actually pretty tho, she just want a man that can finally get her cherry popped,
Forget about u, n not notice 13 pass by like its already 14 on military clocks
Weak



u can talk sneakers, age, even go as far as describin my dressin style
BUT this battle is like a car lease

My vote got cut off ill come back and finish it

[Greed]

u can talk sneakers, age, even go as far as describin my dressin style
BUT this battle is like a car lease… u gonna pay for goin the extra mile
Okay

go address denial, this thread was made for me to fuck ya pride quick
they didn’t need to click to know this was a sonning… cuz nik/ Bust inside it
Okay

what I mean’s basically u don’t have a shot, concepts lack the props
ur creativity deserted u… & all u see’s tumbleweed blowin past ur thoughts
Lol

trust I’ll win! what makes u different from everyone I crushed right in?
u don’t get a pass… cuz my style’s money like Manziel u just a Bust like him
Lol

my guns droppin thugs, dare ya to come in my crib & flaunt the snub
…If u invite anyone to bring it in… it’s cuz ur faggot ass wants a hug
Slick

Got it on consistency. Started off cool bust but fell flat

V nik

[fraze]

Originally Posted by Bust

I don't polish pistols, ain't nuttin sweet bout bustin heat,
I mean JESUS! pieces kill, n id rather use a shiny chain to choke this fuckin geek,
you're working really hard for not much effect b/c the setup doesn't really help your punch, which you need b/c the wordplay isn't very clever
Legend? Never, HOF'r? U musta blown guys dicks for that shit,
But idgaf what Nik names himself, to us he's goes by bitch or faggit,
this is cool, but very simple
U ain't clappin a Nina, in fact kid u'll crap if a gats in the scene, nerd
The temps 90 n he havin a heat stroke,see yo, hes uncomfortable blastin the heater.
would have worked better as an old man bar. this was meh.
This grown man shit, u could move that childsplay back to ya Vizio,
Cos it ain't a kids game when I say that I'm taggin ur shitty hoe
please don't do this again
She actually pretty tho, she just want a man that can finally get her cherry popped,
Forget about u, n not notice 13 pass by like its already 14 on military clocks
this is also pretty bad

Originally Posted by ill nik-A

u can talk sneakers, age, even go as far as describin my dressin style
BUT this battle is like a car lease… u gonna pay for goin the extra mile
cool but doesn't hit hard
go address denial, this thread was made for me to fuck ya pride quick
they didn’t need to click to know this was a sonning… cuz nik/ Bust inside it
nice. and like the flow.
what I mean’s basically u don’t have a shot, concepts lack the props
ur creativity deserted u… & all u see’s tumbleweed blowin past ur thoughts
nice imagery. this is almost a topical lol
trust I’ll win! what makes u different from everyone I crushed right in?
u don’t get a pass… cuz my style’s money like Manziel u just a Bust like him
this is cool. manziel didn't do shit
my guns droppin thugs, dare ya to come in my crib & flaunt the snub
…If u invite anyone to bring it in… it’s cuz ur faggot ass wants a hug
i'll pass on the closer

bust, you seem to have been around long enough to know the basics, but you're stalling out on the concepts and wording. need to hit harder. go for the kill. be meaner. pass up the simple concepts.

clearly a win for nik without trying very hard.


Vote: Ill nik-A

[Cred]

Jesus pieces

Vs

Nik bust, manziel

Nik did enough for the dub here. Bust didnt really have shit but the jesus joint n even thst cuda been worded better.

V/ - Nik

[~RustyGunZ~]

I don't polish pistols, ain't nuttin sweet bout bustin heat,
I mean JESUS! pieces kill, n id rather use a shiny chain to choke this fuckin geek,
Too wordy and cut up bro
Legend? Never, HOF'r? U musta blown guys dicks for that shit,
But idgaf what Nik names himself, to us he's goes by bitch or faggit,
Cool, not harshly worded though
U ain't clappin a Nina, in fact kid u'll crap if a gats in the scene, nerd
The temps 90 n he havin a heat stroke,see yo, hes uncomfortable blastin the heater.
Nah, heat stroke played.
This grown man shit, u could move that childsplay back to ya Vizio,
Cos it ain't a kids game when I say that I'm taggin ur shitty hoe
No, simple and just kind of lame
She actually pretty tho, she just want a man that can finally get her cherry popped,
Forget about u, n not notice 13 pass by like its already 14 on military clocks
His name isn't 13, first off. Second, this wasn't good. Saying someone/something past by a number, to connect it with the literal number after it is dull. Very simple and has no sting at all.

vs

u can talk sneakers, age, even go as far as describin my dressin style
BUT this battle is like a car lease… u gonna pay for goin the extra mile
Cool
go address denial, this thread was made for me to fuck ya pride quick
they didn’t need to click to know this was a sonning… cuz nik/ Bust inside it
Eh wording was kind of forced. I hate when people use the / between words that don't make a grammatically correct connection.
what I mean’s basically u don’t have a shot, concepts lack the props
ur creativity deserted u… & all u see’s tumbleweed blowin past ur thoughts
Okay
trust I’ll win! what makes u different from everyone I crushed right in?
u don’t get a pass… cuz my style’s money like Manziel u just a Bust like him
Cool, wording could have been harsher
my guns droppin thugs, dare ya to come in my crib & flaunt the snub
…If u invite anyone to bring it in… it’s cuz ur faggot ass wants a hug
Lol word


v/nik

[Wanderer]

Originally Posted by Bust

Nikka aka thirteen

I don't polish pistols, ain't nuttin sweet bout bustin heat,
I mean JESUS! pieces kill, n id rather use a shiny chain to choke this fuckin geek,
ok
Legend? Never, HOF'r? U musta blown guys dicks for that shit,
But idgaf what Nik names himself, to us he's goes by bitch or faggit,
no
U ain't clappin a Nina, in fact kid u'll crap if a gats in the scene, nerd
The temps 90 n he havin a heat stroke,see yo, hes uncomfortable blastin the heater.
doesn't rhyme to me & a miss anyway
This grown man shit, u could move that childsplay back to ya Vizio,
Cos it ain't a kids game when I say that I'm taggin ur shitty hoe
not feeling
She actually pretty tho, she just want a man that can finally get her cherry popped,
Forget about u, n not notice 13 pass by like its already 14 on military clocks
meh

Vs

Originally Posted by ill nik-A

u can talk sneakers, age, even go as far as describin my dressin style
BUT this battle is like a car lease… u gonna pay for goin the extra mile
nah
go address denial, this thread was made for me to fuck ya pride quick
they didn’t need to click to know this was a sonning… cuz nik/ Bust inside it
nice
what I mean’s basically u don’t have a shot, concepts lack the props
ur creativity deserted u… & all u see’s tumbleweed blowin past ur thoughts
fresh ok
trust I’ll win! what makes u different from everyone I crushed right in?
u don’t get a pass… cuz my style’s money like Manziel u just a Bust like him
don't get it
my guns droppin thugs, dare ya to come in my crib & flaunt the snub
…If u invite anyone to bring it in… it’s cuz ur faggot ass wants a hug
not feeling

Bust didn't come hard enough at all and nik was taking this all day with a couple cool lines & the rest which wasn't missing as bad as first dudes misses.

V/ill-nik A