08-14-2018, 01:16 AM | #1 |
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I am miraculous, a christian at birth - with a vision of earth
A decision of worth, Wisdom of Solomon, dismissing a curse Making submissive a fiend, with the gracious I gleam I am sedated and sheik, turning the tables in every situation I be I am a guardian Angel, securing my family with gleam and miracle I take down every seer in my path, for I am spiritual I have the Holy Spirit, and I will always be a protector Taking down every bad entity, destroying the center I am the son of two fathers, influenced by religious martyrs I am a good spirit, using my blood to give water I am a disciple, using the Bible's teachings for miraculous teaching's I am a good person, admiring the Apple of Eden Last edited by Dragon; 08-19-2018 at 06:20 AM. |
08-14-2018, 06:50 PM | #2 |
rhyme capsule.
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post more pieces please
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Post more. Excellent.
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08-14-2018, 08:06 PM | #4 |
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Of course I'll post more, you post less. You're on a message board, and you troll. Go away.
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08-14-2018, 09:19 PM | #5 |
rhyme capsule.
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i am yomi, nigga.
you're kuwabara. jesus loves togashi! |
08-14-2018, 09:47 PM | #6 |
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Almost all of the lines/thought in your pieces start with I, my, me. Gets tiring.
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Interesting response. I never troll. I will keep watching you. Carry on.
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