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Lyfzin Shambles vs Camp Bell (S&F) [Camp Bell WINS]
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08-18-2014, 01:56 PM | #2 |
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...yup.
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08-22-2014, 11:14 PM | #4 |
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....aite, drop.
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08-22-2014, 11:31 PM | #6 |
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With raps I continue to excel.. I do creativity well
And listen facts is u getting Cracked, for having No Liberty................................ Bell. Precision is swell, aim perfected cave ya chest in... Basic segment of rage with weapons.................. displayed on this slain contestant. Angry message... I'm a problem.. He ain't getting no fire started, with his endeavor Now it's time.. I show 'Camp Out of his mind'.. next time try 'visioning rubbing two sticks together'. Maybe that's what's better for this dick to b clever... I bring this guy danger ......................................... I give this fucking peasant sudden death like a tie breaker. Trust me for a second... This is something u mustn't get in.. Break his damn leg............ I'm Giving Campaign.... like he was Running for Election.
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ya writing strong when you strike a poem?
blood pumps through my cryo'd heart, son my typos might go hard got my stripes twice by snatching the life of pi from that tigers jaws you a vet on the netcee wave? lets see, jet ski race with tritons drawn i'll end lyfe at the finish line, thats a dead sea grave in poseidons lawn visually, the chemistry in my ability to enter keys is too hype for words literally, lyfez blue sky was nice an calm til walter white met heisenberg my threads special, i'm the next electro to this max dillon inspired nerd obnoxious as harry osborne, breaking the bars of oscorps psycho ward we in the dungeon wit double dragons, gambling trouble, ya dice is short i brought hammer and spike to war, bludgeoned action, you'll die for sure
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Gamble..
Precision is swell, aim perfected cave ya chest in... Basic segment of rage with weapons.................. displayed on this slain contestant. Angry message... I'm a problem.. He ain't getting no fire started, with his endeavor Now it's time.. I show 'Camp Out of his mind'.. next time try 'visioning rubbing two sticks together'. Maybe that's what's better for this dick to b clever... I bring this guy danger ......................................... I give this fucking peasant sudden death like a tie breaker. Trust me for a second... This is something u mustn't get in.. Break his damn leg............ I'm Giving Campaign.... like he was Running for Election. Campbell.. blood pumps through my cryo'd heart, son my typos might go hard got my stripes twice by snatching the life of pi from that tigers jaws you a vet on the netcee wave? lets see, jet ski race with tritons drawn i'll end lyfe at the finish line, thats a dead sea grave in poseidons lawn visually, the chemistry in my ability to enter keys is too hype for words literally, lyfez blue sky was nice an calm til walter white met heisenberg we in the dungeon wit double dragons, gambling trouble, ya dice is short i brought hammer and spike to war, bludgeoned action, you'll die for sure Soooo.. i have it 4 bars a piece, 1 miss by both. cool metaphors/nameplays in Gambles verse. while Camp dropped a nearly flawless verse. One of the better swag & flow verses ive read. opener and closer were fire Vote-Campbell |
08-27-2014, 03:31 PM | #13 |
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With raps I continue to excel.. I do creativity well And listen facts is u getting Cracked, for having No Liberty................................ Bell. Precision is swell, aim perfected cave ya chest in... Basic segment of rage with weapons.................. displayed on this slain contestant. ^ Nice opener! The multi-work and transitioning rhyme schemes are awesome, which is what I like to see almost ABUSED in swag-and-flow battles, haha. That "No Liberty" punch was ill, too. Angry message... I'm a problem.. He ain't getting no fire started, with his endeavor Now it's time.. I show 'Camp Out of his mind'.. next time try 'visioning rubbing two sticks together'. ^ Wasn't feeling this section too much. Felt forced IMO. I saw the connection you were trying to make, though. Some re-wording and it could have been something dope. Maybe that's what's better for this dick to b clever... I bring this guy danger ......................................... I give this fucking peasant sudden death like a tie breaker. ^ Clever simile. I dig it. Trust me for a second... This is something u mustn't get in.. Break his damn leg............ I'm Giving Campaign.... like he was Running for Election. ^ Decently executed. Once again, a tweaking of the wording and this would've hit so much harder. Still a pretty cool bar, though. Camp Bell: blood pumps through my cryo'd heart, son my typos might go hard got my stripes twice by snatching the life of pi from that tigers jaws you a vet on the netcee wave? lets see, jet ski race with tritons drawn i'll end lyfe at the finish line, thats a dead sea grave in poseidons lawn ^ Explosive opening. I'm feeling the complex rhyme schemes...it gives a very interesting, but enjoyable edge. Very nice. visually, the chemistry in my ability to enter keys is too hype for words literally, lyfez blue sky was nice an calm til walter white met heisenberg we in the dungeon wit double dragons, gambling trouble, ya dice is short i brought hammer and spike to war, bludgeoned action, you'll die for sure ^ Not much to say besides DOPE shit. Complex concepts weaved together with off-kilter rhyme-patterns. Makes for a great read... Vote: Camp. His verse was more "Swag-and-Flow"-ish, overall. Sham seemed to take a Text Battle approach, rather than the latter. But, besides that, Camp's verse was quite an enjoyable read and sparked my interest a lot more. |
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Thanks fellas 0-2 Camp up
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Camp Bell wins 3-0.
Lyfza Gamble 2-2-15pts Camp Bell 0-3-0pts Gamble: 15 -8L+6Links=13pts (You voted on championship and league battles and those are worth more please label those links in the future) Camp Bell: 0+8W+2links=10pts |
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