Camp Bell vs. Flo Real {Camp Bell wins}

[Sn00p]

Round 2 Rules

Due Dates:
Verses are due Tuesday,
March 5th 2013 11:59 PM PST.
Voting ends Friday 11:59 PM PST.
(Battles that lack votes may close later.)
(One sided battles may get closed early.)
(Extensions can be no longer than 36 hours
and have to be granted by your opponent.)

Line Limit:
Min. = 10 lines
Max. = 16 lines
(The max. can be higher if different is agreed upon by both.)

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2nd person can't edit after a vote has been made.
Feeding = DQ.
Recycling = DQ.
Biting = DQ.
No freeposting, swaying or bitching.
Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in.
If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post
MUST match the 1st person's line amount.

@Camp Bell @Flo Real

[Camp Bell]

nike sign.

[Flow]

checkin for 14

[Flow]

Im 3 steps up from you - unlike meth ill humour ya witta contribution
your 3 steps down from me - in skill, wins and fucking stages in evolution
on the topic of 3's bitch look at yo loss count - you steppin upto flo?!
niggas won 3 matches but never once where it wasnt titled - CB wins by no show
Your teams full of feelings So team Orc dont have a chance to champ
There's feeling sik, rayge, bordom an I have to face the one feelin camp
You'll never have a big hit yo shit overplayed Yo concepts White noise
Nike tick yo loss to win ratio it lacks the frequency for that fight voice
Tweetin bout how he'll make it big but yo shit could be free n still Wont sell
I'll be a mod one day an tweeting this one time @banned camp I dropped this fucking bell
"your existence is basic"- You do know startin beef with il-Nik is bad for your health?
Doesnt respect his elders but then hes biting lines that older then himself
your flow is shit your punches are weak your concepts are simply played
Ultimate writer? Bitch leave this shit to cats that actually have skill in this trade

[Camp Bell]

"Waynes world where you think he's lost garth but then...he hasn't." - 'Movies that make you cry' thread



you cant stomach puns as i savor this bountiful meal
wrote this with the bubble guts, im not playing, shit about to get real
your not getting out of this deal, admit it then forfeit
i'm busting flo's, he was stumbling for gold BEFORE jennifer lawrence
my whispering skills raw, it brings attention to war
but when somebody says real talk, its usually dismissed and ignored
i'll stab this prick with a fork then your done bitch
if wayne get tears to come, wat brings ya spirit up, suckin dick for trukfit?
your not geared enough to compose trouble dude
no way this lame name wins, leaving the way he came in, flo with no W
your controlled and so gullible, its such a shame kid
Orc's pick just gift bagged a corpse quick, you was playing wit a saint nik
all i do is work on grave digs, this jerk is makeshift
if real recognized real, your worthless is a personal statement, not a nameflip

[Sharp]

Originally Posted by Flo Real

Im 3 steps up from you - unlike meth ill humour ya witta contribution
your 3 steps down from me - in skill, wins and fucking stages in evolution
okay
on the topic of 3's bitch look at yo loss count - you steppin upto flo?!
niggas won 3 matches but never once where it wasnt titled - CB wins by no show
more of a statement, coulda been done well
Your teams full of feelings So team Orc dont have a chance to champ
There's feeling sik, rayge, bordom an I have to face the one feelin camp
Could've been a lot slicker, but I felt like this came from a good spot. I prolly woulda put something along the lines of you feeling a mixture of those 3 that you have to face camp. idk. still okay hit leaving something to be desired since it was kinda predictable
You'll never have a big hit yo shit overplayed Yo concepts White noise
Nike tick yo loss to win ratio it lacks the frequency for that fight voice
I'm pretty sure I get this line, but it really didn't have much to it and wasn't conveyed too hard
Tweetin bout how he'll make it big but yo shit could be free n still Wont sell
I'll be a mod one day an tweeting this one time @banned camp I dropped this fucking bell
think this went for too much, you had a workable idea with banned camp but I feel like it got away from you
"your existence is basic"- You do know startin beef with il-Nik is bad for your health?
Doesnt respect his elders but then hes biting lines that older then himself
A quote to back this up woulda made it pretty solid, unless I missed something. Defintely coulda tied respecting the elderly into the older lines a little smoother, but this was pretty statementish
your flow is shit your punches are weak your concepts are simply played
Ultimate writer? Bitch leave this shit to cats that actually have skill in this trade
More statementy, meh concept

Originally Posted by Camp Bell

"Waynes world where you think he's lost garth but then...he hasn't." - 'Movies that make you cry' thread



you cant stomach puns as i savor this bountiful meal
wrote this with the bubble guts, im not playing, shit about to get real
I think this is a flex... I think. if thats a nameflip at the end of your bar it kinda comes out of nowhere
your not getting out of this deal, admit it then forfeit
i'm busting flo's, he was stumbling for gold BEFORE jennifer lawrence
Like the tie-in but it coulda been a lot better - maybe using medals like places in this tourney and talking about how he's clumsily approaching it
my whispering skills raw, it brings attention to war
but when somebody says real talk, its usually dismissed and ignored
alright, nice flip
i'll stab this prick with a fork then your done bitch
if wayne get tears to come, wat brings ya spirit up, suckin dick for trukfit?
Dug the tie in, but the punch just kinda killed it. wasn't really set up well, coulda been cleaner
your not geared enough to compose trouble dude
no way this lame name wins, leaving the way he came in, flo with no W
Kinda liked it... kinda corny
your controlled and so gullible, its such a shame kid
Orc's pick just gift bagged a corpse quick, you was playing wit a saint nik
more of a flow thing and more directed at nika. Not a bad concept... but the whole saint nik thing coulda been harder. maybe like something elves/Ls... idk. this wasn't as well prepared to make saint nik a punch
all i do is work on grave digs, this jerk is makeshift
if real recognized real, your worthless is a personal statement, not a nameflip

First off, nice job for two new guys - Flo, you seem pretty good as far as picking out ammo but you could benefit a lot if you were to try to start using some wordplay. Camp, you've come a pretty long way with how you were on NC. Your style's still got that swaggy flowy shit at times which can be great for delivery and wording, but you need to focus on setting up the punchlines a lot better. So both of you keep at it.

This is a tough call. Seems to be statements vs wordplay that coulda been a lot stronger. I think I have a decision but I'd like to sit on it for a bit first

Basically boiled down to

Your teams full of feelings So team Orc dont have a chance to champ
There's feeling sik, rayge, bordom an I have to face the one feelin camp

v

my whispering skills raw, it brings attention to war
but when somebody says real talk, its usually dismissed and ignored


but I feel like beyond those two bars they were all attempts... and some of camp's were closer?

really close battle that i can see going either way, but I felt like Camp took it with better attempts

v/ Campbell

keep at it guys

[Malachi]

Im 3 steps up from you - unlike meth ill humour ya witta contribution
your 3 steps down from me - in skill, wins and fucking stages in evolution
eh, shoulda came with harder opener
on the topic of 3's bitch look at yo loss count - you steppin upto flo?!
niggas won 3 matches but never once where it wasnt titled - CB wins by no show
okay.
Your teams full of feelings So team Orc dont have a chance to champ
There's feeling sik, rayge, bordom an I have to face the one feelin camp
You could flipped this really well but it turned out being just aight.
You'll never have a big hit yo shit overplayed Yo concepts White noise
Nike tick yo loss to win ratio it lacks the frequency for that fight voice
nah
Tweetin bout how he'll make it big but yo shit could be free n still Wont sell
I'll be a mod one day an tweeting this one time @banned camp I dropped this fucking bell
ok
"your existence is basic"- You do know startin beef with il-Nik is bad for your health?
Doesnt respect his elders but then hes biting lines that older then himself
ok i guess
your flow is shit your punches are weak your concepts are simply played
Ultimate writer? Bitch leave this shit to cats that actually have skill in this trade
Nah bad closer.

VS


you cant stomach puns as i savor this bountiful meal
wrote this with the bubble guts, im not playing, shit about to get real
cool opener i guess
your not getting out of this deal, admit it then forfeit
i'm busting flo's, he was stumbling for gold BEFORE jennifer lawrence
ok
my whispering skills raw, it brings attention to war
but when somebody says real talk, its usually dismissed and ignored
Aight coo, hit a bit
i'll stab this prick with a fork then your done bitch
if wayne get tears to come, wat brings ya spirit up, suckin dick for trukfit?
lol ok
your not geared enough to compose trouble dude
no way this lame name wins, leaving the way he came in, flo with no W
Pretty nice lotb
your controlled and so gullible, its such a shame kid
Orc's pick just gift bagged a corpse quick, you was playing wit a saint nik
Coo but i think you could have worded it better to make it hit harder
all i do is work on grave digs, this jerk is makeshift
if real recognized real, your worthless is a personal statement, not a nameflip
eh closer

This was an eh battle pretty much. Kinda dissapointed but I have to give it to
V/Campbell Yall just have to try and use more personals and word them better to hit your opponent.

[Camp Bell]

2-0 camp. upping

[Utmost]

Im 3 steps up from you - unlike meth ill humour ya witta contribution
your 3 steps down from me - in skill, wins and fucking stages in evolution
Your teams full of feelings So team Orc dont have a chance to champ
There's feeling sik, rayge, bordom an I have to face the one feelin camp


vs


your not getting out of this deal, admit it then forfeit
i'm busting flo's, he was stumbling for gold BEFORE jennifer lawrence
your not geared enough to compose trouble dude
no way this lame name wins, leaving the way he came in, flo with no W

i dunno here, both had pretty decent attempts at concepts but the execution wasnt there. Too many nameflips as well here. when it comes down to is its close,

v/ Camp


I'll say work on personals tie ins, and make sure punches come off with that snap.. because alot lines from both off came off statementish then kinda fell flat. good battle guys

[Sn00p]

3-0, Camp Bell. Up for more votes.

[Witty]

Im 3 steps up from you - unlike meth ill humour ya witta contribution
your 3 steps down from me - in skill, wins and fucking stages in evolution
Statementish - Came across as pretty simple
on the topic of 3's bitch look at yo loss count - you steppin upto flo?!
niggas won 3 matches but never once where it wasnt titled - CB wins by no show
Too simple man
Your teams full of feelings So team Orc dont have a chance to champ
There's feeling sik, rayge, bordom an I have to face the one feelin camp
This was nice, lol'd...good shit
You'll never have a big hit yo shit overplayed Yo concepts White noise
Nike tick yo loss to win ratio it lacks the frequency for that fight voice
Not bad, wording hurt it though
Tweetin bout how he'll make it big but yo shit could be free n still Wont sell
I'll be a mod one day an tweeting this one time @banned camp I dropped this fucking bell
Nice idea, decent execution...could have been better
"your existence is basic"- You do know startin beef with il-Nik is bad for your health?
Doesnt respect his elders but then hes biting lines that older then himself
nah
your flow is shit your punches are weak your concepts are simply played
Ultimate writer? Bitch leave this shit to cats that actually have skill in this trade
Weakest bar of your verse imo, way too simple

vs

you cant stomach puns as i savor this bountiful meal
wrote this with the bubble guts, im not playing, shit about to get real
No
your not getting out of this deal, admit it then forfeit
i'm busting flo's, he was stumbling for gold BEFORE jennifer lawrence
Decent
my whispering skills raw, it brings attention to war
but when somebody says real talk, its usually dismissed and ignored
Cool...could have been worded better though
i'll stab this prick with a fork then your done bitch
if wayne get tears to come, wat brings ya spirit up, suckin dick for trukfit?
Ehh
your not geared enough to compose trouble dude
no way this lame name wins, leaving the way he came in, flo with no W
Lol lotb so far imo
your controlled and so gullible, its such a shame kid
Orc's pick just gift bagged a corpse quick, you was playing wit a saint nik
Weak
all i do is work on grave digs, this jerk is makeshift
if real recognized real, your worthless is a personal statement, not a nameflip
Saw what you tried, didn't come off right though

Some cool hits, and some bad misses on both sides of this battle. I think it was even enough for the most part, flo had the camp line which made me lol, and camp had the flo with no w line which I thought was definitely lotb....so I gotta give it to him.

Vote - Camp Bell