WK2: bleak 1-0 vs. GUDELJ 1-0 - GUDELJ WINS!!

Incredible · 05-14-2018, 11:37 AM

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Verses are due FRIDAY MAY 18th and will be open until Sunday.
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One sided battles may get closed early.
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Minimum of 8, maximum of 16
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@bleak @GUDELJ

GUDELJ · 05-14-2018, 11:53 AM

Edit: nvm

bleak · 05-14-2018, 03:29 PM

Edit: nvm

bleak · 05-17-2018, 04:46 PM

crew's never fake. We'll have ur block like Gaza Strip u light fuck
&you'll know the claims Israel when my Palestine ur wife up
no grudge, just a 5 shell Judge I'm holding against u.
W/o the lawyer dead, throwin shots over books of paper & knowing it hits u
Gun bars only, getn Childish w/ a choppa clip
I'm just preaching to the choir. Dance behind me &30 come off the hip
Bitch, IF you grow up: aspire to be a higher level boarder
the force was plan B, u wanted to be a lip model for cleft disorders.

GUDELJ · 05-18-2018, 01:07 AM

My guns crazy. One false move it’ll end ur life, u dumb baby
1st slugs chase em.. then u’ll have the chrome in ur smile like a lunch lady
Dudes pie. Weak n pathetic, ur momma wish she had her tubes tied
Two nines! Blastin away at a soft cracka.. typa shit that’ll make boof cry!
When I kill I leave no traces. IA can kiss my ass I lose no cases
True statement, this metal in ur mouth’ll set u str8 like new braces
Ur lines r forever played. Weird wp’s that never work in this place
u drop akbar after akbar.. no wonder why ur verses always blow up in ur face

BodySnatcher · 05-18-2018, 10:55 AM

crew's never fake. We'll have ur block like Gaza Strip u light fuck
&you'll know the claims Israel when my Palestine ur wife up
ok
no grudge, just a 5 shell Judge I'm holding against u.
W/o the lawyer dead, throwin shots over books of paper & knowing it hits u
didnt get it?
Gun bars only, getn Childish w/ a choppa clip
I'm just preaching to the choir. Dance behind me &30 come off the hip
could be worded better
Bitch, IF you grow up: aspire to be a higher level boarder
the force was plan B, u wanted to be a lip model for cleft disorders.
nah

My guns crazy. One false move it’ll end ur life, u dumb baby
1st slugs chase em.. then u’ll have the chrome in ur smile like a lunch lady
meh
Dudes pie. Weak n pathetic, ur momma wish she had her tubes tied
Two nines! Blastin away at a soft cracka.. typa shit that’ll make boof cry!
nah
When I kill I leave no traces. IA can kiss my ass I lose no cases
True statement, this metal in ur mouth’ll set u str8 like new braces
alright, played a bit
Ur lines r forever played. Weird wp’s that never work in this place
u drop akbar after akbar.. no wonder why ur verses always blow up in ur face
nah

good shit on showin fellas...I got GJ winning barely in a weaker battle with not much too quote but again at least you guys showed and gave people something read.

Twodrop · 05-18-2018, 01:16 PM

crew's never fake. We'll have ur block like Gaza Strip u light fuck
&you'll know the claims Israel when my Palestine ur wife up
coo WP even if stolen from disc
no grudge, just a 5 shell Judge I'm holding against u.
W/o the lawyer dead, throwin shots over books of paper & knowing it hits u
So your saying ur accurate w/ a gun? Because it'll hit him W/O the lawyer being dead? I didn't get it, if I did, it's reach
Gun bars only, getn Childish w/ a choppa clip
I'm just preaching to the choir. Dance behind me &30 come off the hip
light
Bitch, IF you grow up: aspire to be a higher level boarder
the force was plan B, u wanted to be a lip model for cleft disorders.
You coulda played the cleft angle harsher imo, this line was ok

My guns crazy. One false move it’ll end ur life, u dumb baby
1st slugs chase em.. then u’ll have the chrome in ur smile like a lunch lady
na...
Dudes pie. Weak n pathetic, ur momma wish she had her tubes tied
Two nines! Blastin away at a soft cracka.. typa shit that’ll make boof cry!
didn't get the boof tie-in, nah
When I kill I leave no traces. IA can kiss my ass I lose no cases
True statement, this metal in ur mouth’ll set u str8 like new braces
ook
Ur lines r forever played. Weird wp’s that never work in this place
u drop akbar after akbar.. no wonder why ur verses always blow up in ur face
this missed for me

I have bleak winning here. I thought his wording was a little harsher, and his opener was LOTB for me, played or not. Decent showing for both. I feel GUDELJ is slacking, and bleak did enough to take this one.

Joe Boston · 05-18-2018, 04:11 PM

bleak

crew's never fake. We'll have ur block like Gaza Strip u light fuck
&you'll know the claims Israel when my Palestine ur wife up
ok dope wordplay creative

no grudge, just a 5 shell Judge I'm holding against u.
W/o the lawyer dead, throwin shots over books of paper & knowing it hits u
this was worded weirdly I didn't get the finisher

Gun bars only, getn Childish w/ a choppa clip
I'm just preaching to the choir. Dance behind me &30 come off the hip
dope

Bitch, IF you grow up: aspire to be a higher level boarder
the force was plan B, u wanted to be a lip model for cleft disorders.
ok jab

gudelj

My guns crazy. One false move it’ll end ur life, u dumb baby
1st slugs chase em.. then u’ll have the chrome in ur smile like a lunch lady
this didn't hit wasn't sensible a lunch lady with chrome in her smile?it didn't refer to every lunch lady

Dudes pie. Weak n pathetic, ur momma wish she had her tubes tied
Two nines! Blastin away at a soft cracka.. typa shit that’ll make boof cry!
didn't get the concept here

When I kill I leave no traces. IA can kiss my ass I lose no cases
True statement, this metal in ur mouth’ll set u str8 like new braces
pretty played hit

Ur lines r forever played. Weird wp’s that never work in this place
u drop akbar after akbar.. no wonder why ur verses always blow up in ur face
nah

this was an ok battle GudeJ had all misses to me just felt like the hits weremt there. Bleak had a cool opener good wordplay. the preaching to the choir bar was pretty dope also. I'm gonna give this to bleak because his two hits were enough consistenly to take take this.

V/bleak

Barcotic · 05-18-2018, 09:01 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by GUDELJ

My guns crazy. One false move it’ll end ur life, u dumb baby
1st slugs chase em.. then u’ll have the chrome in ur smile like a lunch lady
nahhh
Dudes pie. Weak n pathetic, ur momma wish she had her tubes tied
Two nines! Blastin away at a soft cracka.. typa shit that’ll make boof cry!
miss
When I kill I leave no traces. IA can kiss my ass I lose no cases
True statement, this metal in ur mouth’ll set u str8 like new braces
good
Ur lines r forever played. Weird wp’s that never work in this place
u drop akbar after akbar.. no wonder why ur verses always blow up in ur face
LOL lotb & clearly going over heads

2 gd punches
0 jabs
2 misses

vs

Bleak
crew's never fake. We'll have ur block like Gaza Strip u light fuck
&you'll know the claims Israel when my Palestine ur wife up
israel=played, palestine=dope despite it being bitten from a recent discussions thread title. decent overall
no grudge, just a 5 shell Judge I'm holding against u.
W/o the lawyer dead, throwin shots over books of paper & knowing it hits u
miss, this was awkward
Gun bars only, getn Childish w/ a choppa clip
I'm just preaching to the choir. Dance behind me &30 come off the hip
sort of a reach to make this concept work but aight, average gun bar here
Bitch, IF you grow up: aspire to be a higher level boarder
the force was plan B, u wanted to be a lip model for cleft disorders.
liked the concept but hated the wording. ill give it a pass tho

0 gd punches
3 jabs
1 miss

close
v/gj

Amen · 05-19-2018, 04:11 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by bleak

crew's never fake. We'll have ur block like Gaza Strip u light fuck
&you'll know the claims Israel when my Palestine ur wife up
Isreal/Is real plays are over kill, like done to the max flipped every which way. Even with your tie in - it doesn't help because you worded it terribly. I mean, Palestine was a reach, man.
no grudge, just a 5 shell Judge I'm holding against u.
W/o the lawyer dead, throwin shots over books of paper & knowing it hits u
Didn't do nothing here. Concept was ok at best but the execution did nothing. It was mad soft... NO substance.
Gun bars only, getn Childish w/ a choppa clip
I'm just preaching to the choir. Dance behind me &30 come off the hip
Meh, not feeling this one either... Not creative gun bar... I don't fuck with gun bars like these other idiots do... They died a long time ago for me.
Bitch, IF you grow up: aspire to be a higher level boarder
the force was plan B, u wanted to be a lip model for cleft disorders.
This was wack. I think you would have went in a better route with a played plan B concept, IMO... This was just wack not to mention cleft bars on him are beyond played. Only Bags and his son Destroyer enjoy them because they enjoy making fun of him lol...

vs

Quote:

Originally Posted by Zelph

My guns crazy. One false move it’ll end ur life, u dumb baby
1st slugs chase em.. then u’ll have the chrome in ur smile like a lunch lady
Gun Bar, wack to me.
Dudes pie. Weak n pathetic, ur momma wish she had her tubes tied
Two nines! Blastin away at a soft cracka.. typa shit that’ll make boof cry!
Another one using a disco vegan faggot as the pun, not feeling it... Not really effective to me... and indirect.
When I kill I leave no traces. IA can kiss my ass I lose no cases
True statement, this metal in ur mouth’ll set u str8 like new braces
Metal to mouth and braces has been flipped a million times back in the early days of text battling... In fact when gun bars were mainly popular during that era of text you saw these flips often.
Ur lines r forever played. Weird wp’s that never work in this place
u drop akbar after akbar.. no wonder why ur verses always blow up in ur face
LOTB, good bar.

v/Zelph - Actually had a bar I enjoyed. Wasn't really feeling bleak verse at all. Had maybe 1 or 2 concepts but failed to effectively execute them.

DynamiCz · 05-20-2018, 01:04 PM

crew's never fake. We'll have ur block like Gaza Strip u light fuck
&you'll know the claims Israel when my Palestine ur wife up

Coo opener

no grudge, just a 5 shell Judge I'm holding against u.
W/o the lawyer dead, throwin shots over books of paper & knowing it hits u

Didn't get this one fam

Gun bars only, getn Childish w/ a choppa clip
I'm just preaching to the choir. Dance behind me &30 come off the hip

Nice!

Bitch, IF you grow up: aspire to be a higher level boarder
the force was plan B, u wanted to be a lip model for cleft disorders.

Ight closer here!

---------

My guns crazy. One false move it’ll end ur life, u dumb baby
1st slugs chase em.. then u’ll have the chrome in ur smile like a lunch lady

Nahhh

Dudes pie. Weak n pathetic, ur momma wish she had her tubes tied
Two nines! Blastin away at a soft cracka.. typa shit that’ll make boof cry!

Tawkkkk

When I kill I leave no traces. IA can kiss my ass I lose no cases
True statement, this metal in ur mouth’ll set u str8 like new braces

Nice

Ur lines r forever played. Weird wp’s that never work in this place
u drop akbar after akbar.. no wonder why ur verses always blow up in ur face

Dope!!

This battle is fairly even until you get to Zelph close out bar on his verse. That Akbar line was crazy fam and it kinda gave you a haymaker to a win here imo. Nice read on both ends. Bleak verse was nice too, had some bars I didn't quite understand which gave me the miss for him. Props!

V-GJ

Jabari Black · 05-20-2018, 07:59 PM

crew's never fake. We'll have ur block like Gaza Strip u light fuck
&you'll know the claims Israel when my Palestine ur wife up

(Yeah this is fire. You almost caught the short end of the stick cus Enbomz had the same Isreal wp, but the Palestine wp is nice and the tie ins were good)

no grudge, just a 5 shell Judge I'm holding against u.
W/o the lawyer dead, throwin shots over books of paper & knowing it hits u

(Dang you was on to something but the punch fell a little flat. The set up alone was almost Don Demarco worthy with the Judge lawyer flip but like I said punch wasn’t quite there. This was decent)

Gun bars only, getn Childish w/ a choppa clip
I'm just preaching to the choir. Dance behind me &30 come off the hip

(Pretty good. Probably prob could have used a better phrase that had a more direct tie in to the video than ‘30 come off the hip’ but you had a lot of tie ins)

Bitch, IF you grow up: aspire to be a higher level boarder
the force was plan B, u wanted to be a lip model for cleft disorders.

(Eh not too bad but felt kinda all over the place. Okay closer)

My guns crazy. One false move it’ll end ur life, u dumb baby
1st slugs chase em.. then u’ll have the chrome in ur smile like a lunch lady

(Pretty good opener. I liked this one)

Dudes pie. Weak n pathetic, ur momma wish she had her tubes tied
Two nines! Blastin away at a soft cracka.. typa shit that’ll make boof cry!

(Sorry I didn’t catch this one)

When I kill I leave no traces. IA can kiss my ass I lose no cases
True statement, this metal in ur mouth’ll set u str8 like new braces

(Simple concept but I liked he punch. Good line.)

Ur lines r forever played. Weird wp’s that never work in this place
u drop akbar after akbar.. no wonder why ur verses always blow up in ur face

(Lol dope way to close. I think the fact that bleak went all gun bars and he fact that it’s Ramadan made this hit hard lol.)

This was a good battle esp. for only 8 bars. Bleak’s were a bit more complex but I think that was a double edge sword. I liked all the tie ins but they also made a couple of his punches seem a bit scattered b/c his wording wasn’t extremely crisp. I do think he set up his punches a bit better than Zelph though and his concepts were a bit more ambitious and as a result came off as more creative. I think Bleak slightly edged this one.

Mvgt: Bleak

Good showing from both of y’all though. Salute.

Blue Bayou · 05-20-2018, 11:37 PM

crew's never fake. We'll have ur block like Gaza Strip u light fuck
&you'll know the claims Israel when my Palestine ur wife up
like he Palestine flip, and I get theres a thread...but seen too many Isreal in the day for this to be a quote... like 20+
no grudge, just a 5 shell Judge I'm holding against u.
W/o the lawyer dead, throwin shots over books of paper & knowing it hits u
hmm, dece
Gun bars only, getn Childish w/ a choppa clip
I'm just preaching to the choir. Dance behind me &30 come off the hip
cool concept, needed to word it harder & at him
Bitch, IF you grow up: aspire to be a higher level boarder
the force was plan B, u wanted to be a lip model for cleft disorders.
nah

vs

My guns crazy. One false move it’ll end ur life, u dumb baby
1st slugs chase em.. then u’ll have the chrome in ur smile like a lunch lady
okay okay
Dudes pie. Weak n pathetic, ur momma wish she had her tubes tied
Two nines! Blastin away at a soft cracka.. typa shit that’ll make boof cry!
nah,
When I kill I leave no traces. IA can kiss my ass I lose no cases
True statement, this metal in ur mouth’ll set u str8 like new braces
the 'straight' flip i okay but this has been done.. and ur third gun bar in a row in an 8 line battle is no bueno to me
Ur lines r forever played. Weird wp’s that never work in this place
u drop akbar after akbar.. no wonder why ur verses always blow up in ur face
dope...

Okay short battle.... to me there is 2 dece wordplay flips by both guys, but GUD has by far the best bar here.. i have a similar w/p never got to use it, never will now haha... that edged it

V/ GUD

El Muffin · 05-21-2018, 04:49 AM

crew's never fake. We'll have ur block like Gaza Strip u light fuck
&you'll know the claims Israel when my Palestine ur wife up
(pal 'll stine your wife up? i dont like the israel wp..done too much)
no grudge, just a 5 shell Judge I'm holding against u.
W/o the lawyer dead, throwin shots over books of paper & knowing it hits u
(ok)
Gun bars only, getn Childish w/ a choppa clip
I'm just preaching to the choir. Dance behind me &30 come off the hip
(idgi)
Bitch, IF you grow up: aspire to be a higher level boarder
the force was plan B, u wanted to be a lip model for cleft disorders.
(nah)

My guns crazy. One false move it’ll end ur life, u dumb baby
1st slugs chase em.. then u’ll have the chrome in ur smile like a lunch lady
(kinda like this)
Dudes pie. Weak n pathetic, ur momma wish she had her tubes tied
Two nines! Blastin away at a soft cracka.. typa shit that’ll make boof cry!
(fuck no)
When I kill I leave no traces. IA can kiss my ass I lose no cases
True statement, this metal in ur mouth’ll set u str8 like new braces
(decent flip on old concept)
Ur lines r forever played. Weird wp’s that never work in this place
u drop akbar after akbar.. no wonder why ur verses always blow up in ur face
(fuckno)

v/gudelj

what were u saying w/ the closer? like ak's bars? eghhhhhh
I get the akbar/ blow up in your face part but the wp itself is Eghhh

anyways..v/zelph lookin at my breakdown

Exis · 05-21-2018, 05:41 AM

Bleak's opener sealed the deal...He also out punched his opponent, not by much...but enough.

Vote - Bleak.

GUDELJ · 05-21-2018, 05:45 AM

7-4 in flavor of GUDELJ

Flow · 05-21-2018, 05:56 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by bleak

crew's never fake. We'll have ur block like Gaza Strip u light fuck
&you'll know the claims Israel when my Palestine ur wife up
i cant get it. Read it like 8 times. I know its in there but i just canna see it sorry bro
no grudge, just a 5 shell Judge I'm holding against u.
W/o the lawyer dead, throwin shots over books of paper & knowing it hits u
lawyer is coo fuck wit that but execution at end failed to land for me sorry
Gun bars only, getn Childish w/ a choppa clip
I'm just preaching to the choir. Dance behind me &30 come off the hip
creative shit again man. Solid
Bitch, IF you grow up: aspire to be a higher level boarder
the force was plan B, u wanted to be a lip model for cleft disorders.
this would be good if lips wasnt played out tf on zelph. Id probs let it go if there had been another few bars but at a 8 line battle think you could of used a less played angle tbh man

vS

Quote:

Originally Posted by GUDELJ

My guns crazy. One false move it’ll end ur life, u dumb baby
1st slugs chase em.. then u’ll have the chrome in ur smile like a lunch lady
miss for me sorry not sure i get the lunch lady reference
Dudes pie. Weak n pathetic, ur momma wish she had her tubes tied
Two nines! Blastin away at a soft cracka.. typa shit that’ll make boof cry!
nah bro
When I kill I leave no traces. IA can kiss my ass I lose no cases
True statement, this metal in ur mouth’ll set u str8 like new braces
lot of gun nars in this battle. This was the lotb gunbar wise dope shit
Ur lines r forever played. Weird wp’s that never work in this place
u drop akbar after akbar.. no wonder why ur verses always blow up in ur face
pahahahaha loved this. Brilliant last 2 bars mf

close af battle but edging it to Zelph for having two haymakers.

Vote zelph

05-14-2018, 11:37 AM	#1
Incredible Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2016 Posts: 1,482 Battle Record: 6-15 Rep Power: 25972892	WK2: bleak 1-0 vs. GUDELJ 1-0 - GUDELJ WINS!! Rules Due Dates: Verses are due FRIDAY MAY 18th and will be open until Sunday. Battles that lack votes may close later. One sided battles may get closed early. Extensions are 24 hours Line Limit: Minimum of 8, maximum of 16 If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first. Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ FAILURE TO VOTE ON 3 BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON 3 BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE! THERE’S BEEN A LOT OF COMPLAINTS ABOUT VOTING RECENTLY, IF THERE IS SOMEONE WHO YOU DON’T WANT TO VOTE IN YOUR BATTLE YOU MUST STATE THEIR NAME IN YOUR CHECK IN. IF IT’S A CRAZY AMOUNT OF PEOPLE THEN SORRY YOU’RE JUST A BITCH AND ALL VOTES WILL COUNT. AS PER INCREDIBLE @bleak @GUDELJ

05-18-2018, 10:55 AM	#6
BodySnatcher Hail Mary Haymakers Join Date: Mar 2018 Location: You know where I be at Posts: 1,785 Battle Record: 17-7 Champed - BAL Roast - Battle Arena League - BAL Season Champ Rep Power: 3840895	crew's never fake. We'll have ur block like Gaza Strip u light fuck &you'll know the claims Israel when my Palestine ur wife up ok no grudge, just a 5 shell Judge I'm holding against u. W/o the lawyer dead, throwin shots over books of paper & knowing it hits u didnt get it? Gun bars only, getn Childish w/ a choppa clip I'm just preaching to the choir. Dance behind me &30 come off the hip could be worded better Bitch, IF you grow up: aspire to be a higher level boarder the force was plan B, u wanted to be a lip model for cleft disorders. nah My guns crazy. One false move it’ll end ur life, u dumb baby 1st slugs chase em.. then u’ll have the chrome in ur smile like a lunch lady meh Dudes pie. Weak n pathetic, ur momma wish she had her tubes tied Two nines! Blastin away at a soft cracka.. typa shit that’ll make boof cry! nah When I kill I leave no traces. IA can kiss my ass I lose no cases True statement, this metal in ur mouth’ll set u str8 like new braces alright, played a bit Ur lines r forever played. Weird wp’s that never work in this place u drop akbar after akbar.. no wonder why ur verses always blow up in ur face nah good shit on showin fellas...I got GJ winning barely in a weaker battle with not much too quote but again at least you guys showed and gave people something read. __________________ Bang Bang. Don Demarco. It's shit like that....

05-20-2018, 01:04 PM	#11
DynamiCz ..GunbaR MessiaH.. Join Date: Jan 2018 Location: GuN RanGe Posts: 762 Battle Record: 16-10 Champed - Battle Arena League Rep Power: 9829178	crew's never fake. We'll have ur block like Gaza Strip u light fuck &you'll know the claims Israel when my Palestine ur wife up Coo opener no grudge, just a 5 shell Judge I'm holding against u. W/o the lawyer dead, throwin shots over books of paper & knowing it hits u Didn't get this one fam Gun bars only, getn Childish w/ a choppa clip I'm just preaching to the choir. Dance behind me &30 come off the hip Nice! Bitch, IF you grow up: aspire to be a higher level boarder the force was plan B, u wanted to be a lip model for cleft disorders. Ight closer here! --------- My guns crazy. One false move it’ll end ur life, u dumb baby 1st slugs chase em.. then u’ll have the chrome in ur smile like a lunch lady Nahhh Dudes pie. Weak n pathetic, ur momma wish she had her tubes tied Two nines! Blastin away at a soft cracka.. typa shit that’ll make boof cry! Tawkkkk When I kill I leave no traces. IA can kiss my ass I lose no cases True statement, this metal in ur mouth’ll set u str8 like new braces Nice Ur lines r forever played. Weird wp’s that never work in this place u drop akbar after akbar.. no wonder why ur verses always blow up in ur face Dope!! This battle is fairly even until you get to Zelph close out bar on his verse. That Akbar line was crazy fam and it kinda gave you a haymaker to a win here imo. Nice read on both ends. Bleak verse was nice too, had some bars I didn't quite understand which gave me the miss for him. Props! V-GJ __________________ ...ThA New ErA...

05-21-2018, 04:49 AM	#14
El Muffin DOHpe since 02' Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Surrounded by white ppl Posts: 14,693 Battle Record: 43-24 Champed - Netcees Battle League - 1-2 Punch Onslaught - 1-2 Punch League - Hot or Thot Roast - Hot or Thot 2018 - Fight Night 11 - NPL Roast Rep Power: 34230531	crew's never fake. We'll have ur block like Gaza Strip u light fuck &you'll know the claims Israel when my Palestine ur wife up (pal 'll stine your wife up? i dont like the israel wp..done too much) no grudge, just a 5 shell Judge I'm holding against u. W/o the lawyer dead, throwin shots over books of paper & knowing it hits u (ok) Gun bars only, getn Childish w/ a choppa clip I'm just preaching to the choir. Dance behind me &30 come off the hip (idgi) Bitch, IF you grow up: aspire to be a higher level boarder the force was plan B, u wanted to be a lip model for cleft disorders. (nah) My guns crazy. One false move it’ll end ur life, u dumb baby 1st slugs chase em.. then u’ll have the chrome in ur smile like a lunch lady (kinda like this) Dudes pie. Weak n pathetic, ur momma wish she had her tubes tied Two nines! Blastin away at a soft cracka.. typa shit that’ll make boof cry! (fuck no) When I kill I leave no traces. IA can kiss my ass I lose no cases True statement, this metal in ur mouth’ll set u str8 like new braces (decent flip on old concept) Ur lines r forever played. Weird wp’s that never work in this place u drop akbar after akbar.. no wonder why ur verses always blow up in ur face (fuckno) v/gudelj what were u saying w/ the closer? like ak's bars? eghhhhhh I get the akbar/ blow up in your face part but the wp itself is Eghhh anyways..v/zelph lookin at my breakdown __________________ It’s like weed in Highschool- w/ the cans I’ll smoke you Bitch I floss . I Got the chain out to see like Constantinople Last edited by El Muffin; 05-21-2018 at 05:19 AM.

05-21-2018, 05:45 AM	#16
GUDELJ Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2016 Posts: 661 Rep Power: 0	7-4 in flavor of GUDELJ Last edited by GUDELJ; 05-21-2018 at 06:07 AM.

05-18-2018, 01:16 PM	#7
Twodrop Unknown Join Date: Mar 2018 Posts: 673 Battle Record: 2-2 Rep Power: 0	crew's never fake. We'll have ur block like Gaza Strip u light fuck &you'll know the claims Israel when my Palestine ur wife up coo WP even if stolen from disc no grudge, just a 5 shell Judge I'm holding against u. W/o the lawyer dead, throwin shots over books of paper & knowing it hits u So your saying ur accurate w/ a gun? Because it'll hit him W/O the lawyer being dead? I didn't get it, if I did, it's reach Gun bars only, getn Childish w/ a choppa clip I'm just preaching to the choir. Dance behind me &30 come off the hip light Bitch, IF you grow up: aspire to be a higher level boarder the force was plan B, u wanted to be a lip model for cleft disorders. You coulda played the cleft angle harsher imo, this line was ok My guns crazy. One false move it’ll end ur life, u dumb baby 1st slugs chase em.. then u’ll have the chrome in ur smile like a lunch lady na... Dudes pie. Weak n pathetic, ur momma wish she had her tubes tied Two nines! Blastin away at a soft cracka.. typa shit that’ll make boof cry! didn't get the boof tie-in, nah When I kill I leave no traces. IA can kiss my ass I lose no cases True statement, this metal in ur mouth’ll set u str8 like new braces ook Ur lines r forever played. Weird wp’s that never work in this place u drop akbar after akbar.. no wonder why ur verses always blow up in ur face this missed for me I have bleak winning here. I thought his wording was a little harsher, and his opener was LOTB for me, played or not. Decent showing for both. I feel GUDELJ is slacking, and bleak did enough to take this one.

05-18-2018, 04:11 PM	#8
Joe Boston Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 929 Battle Record: 8-11 Rep Power: 11092528	bleak crew's never fake. We'll have ur block like Gaza Strip u light fuck &you'll know the claims Israel when my Palestine ur wife up ok dope wordplay creative no grudge, just a 5 shell Judge I'm holding against u. W/o the lawyer dead, throwin shots over books of paper & knowing it hits u this was worded weirdly I didn't get the finisher Gun bars only, getn Childish w/ a choppa clip I'm just preaching to the choir. Dance behind me &30 come off the hip dope Bitch, IF you grow up: aspire to be a higher level boarder the force was plan B, u wanted to be a lip model for cleft disorders. ok jab gudelj My guns crazy. One false move it’ll end ur life, u dumb baby 1st slugs chase em.. then u’ll have the chrome in ur smile like a lunch lady this didn't hit wasn't sensible a lunch lady with chrome in her smile?it didn't refer to every lunch lady Dudes pie. Weak n pathetic, ur momma wish she had her tubes tied Two nines! Blastin away at a soft cracka.. typa shit that’ll make boof cry! didn't get the concept here When I kill I leave no traces. IA can kiss my ass I lose no cases True statement, this metal in ur mouth’ll set u str8 like new braces pretty played hit Ur lines r forever played. Weird wp’s that never work in this place u drop akbar after akbar.. no wonder why ur verses always blow up in ur face nah this was an ok battle GudeJ had all misses to me just felt like the hits weremt there. Bleak had a cool opener good wordplay. the preaching to the choir bar was pretty dope also. I'm gonna give this to bleak because his two hits were enough consistenly to take take this. V/bleak

05-20-2018, 07:59 PM	#12
Jabari Black Sun Tzu Join Date: Mar 2018 Location: Atlanta, GA Posts: 550 Battle Record: 13-6 Champed - Battle Arena League - 1-2 Punch League - Netcees Battle League - Netcees SOL Rep Power: 12764495	crew's never fake. We'll have ur block like Gaza Strip u light fuck &you'll know the claims Israel when my Palestine ur wife up (Yeah this is fire. You almost caught the short end of the stick cus Enbomz had the same Isreal wp, but the Palestine wp is nice and the tie ins were good) no grudge, just a 5 shell Judge I'm holding against u. W/o the lawyer dead, throwin shots over books of paper & knowing it hits u (Dang you was on to something but the punch fell a little flat. The set up alone was almost Don Demarco worthy with the Judge lawyer flip but like I said punch wasn’t quite there. This was decent) Gun bars only, getn Childish w/ a choppa clip I'm just preaching to the choir. Dance behind me &30 come off the hip (Pretty good. Probably prob could have used a better phrase that had a more direct tie in to the video than ‘30 come off the hip’ but you had a lot of tie ins) Bitch, IF you grow up: aspire to be a higher level boarder the force was plan B, u wanted to be a lip model for cleft disorders. (Eh not too bad but felt kinda all over the place. Okay closer) My guns crazy. One false move it’ll end ur life, u dumb baby 1st slugs chase em.. then u’ll have the chrome in ur smile like a lunch lady (Pretty good opener. I liked this one) Dudes pie. Weak n pathetic, ur momma wish she had her tubes tied Two nines! Blastin away at a soft cracka.. typa shit that’ll make boof cry! (Sorry I didn’t catch this one) When I kill I leave no traces. IA can kiss my ass I lose no cases True statement, this metal in ur mouth’ll set u str8 like new braces (Simple concept but I liked he punch. Good line.) Ur lines r forever played. Weird wp’s that never work in this place u drop akbar after akbar.. no wonder why ur verses always blow up in ur face (Lol dope way to close. I think the fact that bleak went all gun bars and he fact that it’s Ramadan made this hit hard lol.) This was a good battle esp. for only 8 bars. Bleak’s were a bit more complex but I think that was a double edge sword. I liked all the tie ins but they also made a couple of his punches seem a bit scattered b/c his wording wasn’t extremely crisp. I do think he set up his punches a bit better than Zelph though and his concepts were a bit more ambitious and as a result came off as more creative. I think Bleak slightly edged this one. Mvgt: Bleak Good showing from both of y’all though. Salute.

05-20-2018, 11:37 PM	#13
Blue Bayou Ukrainian Howlitzers Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 5,091 Battle Record: 41-24 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - NBL Season 3 - Alias Tournament II - Fight Night XLVIII - Fight Night XXV - Fight Night XV - Fight Night (3x) - Netcees Battle League (4x) - NBL Tag Team Season 3 - Lyric Olympics - 1-2 Punch League (3x) - Battle Arena League (2x) - Key Grand Prix 2018 1/2 - BA Tag - NPL Roast - Netcees Pic League Rep Power: 17502332	crew's never fake. We'll have ur block like Gaza Strip u light fuck &you'll know the claims Israel when my Palestine ur wife up like he Palestine flip, and I get theres a thread...but seen too many Isreal in the day for this to be a quote... like 20+ no grudge, just a 5 shell Judge I'm holding against u. W/o the lawyer dead, throwin shots over books of paper & knowing it hits u hmm, dece Gun bars only, getn Childish w/ a choppa clip I'm just preaching to the choir. Dance behind me &30 come off the hip cool concept, needed to word it harder & at him Bitch, IF you grow up: aspire to be a higher level boarder the force was plan B, u wanted to be a lip model for cleft disorders. nah vs My guns crazy. One false move it’ll end ur life, u dumb baby 1st slugs chase em.. then u’ll have the chrome in ur smile like a lunch lady okay okay Dudes pie. Weak n pathetic, ur momma wish she had her tubes tied Two nines! Blastin away at a soft cracka.. typa shit that’ll make boof cry! nah, When I kill I leave no traces. IA can kiss my ass I lose no cases True statement, this metal in ur mouth’ll set u str8 like new braces the 'straight' flip i okay but this has been done.. and ur third gun bar in a row in an 8 line battle is no bueno to me Ur lines r forever played. Weird wp’s that never work in this place u drop akbar after akbar.. no wonder why ur verses always blow up in ur face dope... Okay short battle.... to me there is 2 dece wordplay flips by both guys, but GUD has by far the best bar here.. i have a similar w/p never got to use it, never will now haha... that edged it V/ GUD

05-21-2018, 05:41 AM	#15
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,938 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	Bleak's opener sealed the deal...He also out punched his opponent, not by much...but enough. Vote - Bleak.