cataclysm; massive victims

[Just Write]

Just Write..
you think that you nice?, step up and fight in the cage
i'm lible to end your life tonight, with a nine or a gauge
get a knife to the face for those acceptant of gore
nah, fuck it.. i'd rather choke you to death wit an electrical cord
closet's full of picks, axes, a sledge hammer and swords
a shovel to spread remains underneath the depths of my floor
step into madness and dance with the lords..
of gore, passion, fillin caskets.. linin bodies in rows
ungodly, swingin hachets to disembody our foes
people abandon all hope as i drag their souls through hades
then lose all control and smash the skulls of babies
a pupil of satan, carvin a petagram into wood in my basement
reciting incantations, spewin your usual hatred feuled statements
no patient for bitches, laughed as i stood at the tip of the abyss
...thinkin how bodies look better when woodchippered to bits
fuck the usual script, here's the part where everyone dies
and i pass it to genocide and watch him put'cha head on a spike.

Geno..
The edge of a knife cuts better when its dull as a fuck
it don't carve as nice, but the body parts fall off into chunks
Sausages, chum, and your nothing but fish food to the sharks
Or spray your remains on the wall, caligraphy's a hooligans art
The pit of me is ghoulish and dark, the very root of me's gone
I try to read my rap sheet, but there's way too many songs
Your talking to a man who can evolve, from hard times to worse
I carry the knowledge with me that the hard times unearthed
Crosseyed, reversed, looking at shit cocked and screwed
Out of the box, its how I make hard shit seem less impossible
Just break an old man down into fossil fuel, no stab at nik-a
Ill scrape your fuckin flesh off, pull the giant scab nd lick it
Wicked, pullover with picket signs screaming fuck the world
Kick shit in my timberlands, but save enough to hurl
Punchin the pearly gates when they lock me the fuck out
Hurtin my hands, damn, nothing left to do but get drunk now

[dead man]

get a knife to the face for those acceptant of gore
nah, fuck it.. i'd rather choke you to death wit an electrical cord

nice.

then lose all control and smash the skulls of babies

got sorta sick with it here..


i think geno overpowered JW personally on this one, but thats cause he had a presence in his writing that closed it with impact. this was something i could see a person labeling as a horrocore verse but i have trouble with that sort of text genre micromanagement.

your nothing but fish food to the sharks
Or spray your remains on the wall, caligraphy's a hooligans art
The pit of me is ghoulish and dark, the very root of me's gone
I try to read my rap sheet, but there's way too many songs

liked this. especially the first two lines, second was something vicious


im often reminded of your baphomet days where a lot of your verses seem to run together for me as tales of infidelity and heartbreak. letters to a woman that would never read them. this is when i paid less attention to your name on the boards, but its interesting to see how as time went on and the old wounds heal, its clear through the content of your written work how you've learned to cope and move on from what was obviously a trauma and furthermore what you have learned from it. feel free to correct me if im completely off-base here but i just calls em how i sees em.

anyway, ill probably skim this through a couple more times.. but this was good work on both ends.

thanks.

[CopyPat]

well flow and rhyming wise this was obviously really good. you both also meshed together nicely with the same style of verse. brought in some emotion to it aswell so that parts cool. its the topic itself that i really think is pointless tho. i mean writing about killing dudes i just honestly don't get. cause unless u 2 are actually real serial killers moonlighting as text mc's than you're just lying and the whole thing is just way too fake for me. i guess to me there's a difference between writing about actually killing a dude and then writing about killing him with ur rhymes, or with ur words, u know?? Not hating on u guys because i generally enjoy reading both of your work but this one did not do it for me at all

hit me back with some feed if u guys can thanks

[Just Write]

Originally Posted by CopyPat

well flow and rhyming wise this was obviously really good. you both also meshed together nicely with the same style of verse. brought in some emotion to it aswell so that parts cool. its the topic itself that i really think is pointless tho. i mean writing about killing dudes i just honestly don't get. cause unless u 2 are actually real serial killers moonlighting as text mc's than you're just lying and the whole thing is just way too fake for me. i guess to me there's a difference between writing about actually killing a dude and then writing about killing him with ur rhymes, or with ur words, u know?? Not hating on u guys because i generally enjoy reading both of your work but this one did not do it for me at all

hit me back with some feed if u guys can thanks

I have really killed people, no biggie. (although never with an electrical cord so touche') no prob pat, pm me a link or whatever

[Geno]

I think jw is a soldier for real, as for myself.. well, who am I to comment on anything like that around here. And furthermore -why would if I had killed a man.

But word. Thanks for the feed cp
Returned the favor already. Pz

@deadman
Your pretty on point. When I was baphomet my shit was more about the satanism and things I was studying at the time.

Those threads you mentioned were more so geno posts. Adolf was usually mty more hardcore style of writing but I've come to realize that I'm geno.. not either of those two -and that's what people know me by

As far as you callingem how's you seesem. Well.. your a pretty smart man and very observant. Thanks for feeding sir.

[Vulgar]

JW, lol the baby skull smashing part was cool, but very mild horrorcore. If you'd have given a reason why you smash the skulls of babies, like a humorous reason, it might've been a stronger line.

get a knife to the face for those acceptant of gore
nah, fuck it.. i'd rather choke you to death wit an electrical cord
closet's full of picks, axes, a sledge hammer and swords
a shovel to spread remains underneath the depths of my floor
^was dope.

Geno

Or spray your remains on the wall, caligraphy's a hooligans art
^Ha.

Your talking to a man who can evolve, from hard times to worse
I carry the knowledge with me that the hard times unearthed
^I really like how your rhyme patterns make impact.

Punchin the pearly gates when they lock me the fuck out
Hurtin my hands, damn, nothing left to do but get drunk now
^grimey.

Decent collab overall. If you have time, check out my latest drop on page 1.

Keep doin' it

[Coup]

a pupil of satan, carvin a petagram into wood in my basement

brO. be very careful with what you play around in...not having the knowledge and understanding is dangerous....trust me, there is a truth that bares witness that you surly do not want to be those things. It's not cool. Believe that. I'd be a hypocrite if I said I never said similar things...so just be careful cat.

That said, impressed at your flow and delivery. Good job and a solid tune setter for Geno

what a somber read....


I need to go shave my head and dawn sack cloth and ash after reading this...

[Coup]

excuse any pretentiousness fellas...