XI WK VI: ACTIVATE SELF (1-0) vs. Pharaohs Army (2-1) (PHARAOHS ARMY WINS)

Frank · 01-21-2023, 06:50 PM

Season 11 XI

VERSES: Friday, January, 27th, 11:59 P.M. Western / 2:59 A.M. Eastern / 7:59 A.M. UK. 24 Hour Ext: Mod/Opponent Discretion

VOTES: Monday, January 30th, 11:59 P.M. Western / 2:59 A.M. Eastern / 7:59 A.M. UK. 3 Vote Requirement Enforced/Penalty

MAXIMUM: 48 Lines: 64 IF AGREED UPON!

Goodluck! @ACTIVATE SELF @Pharaohs Army

TOPIC:

Pharaohs Army · 01-29-2023, 12:22 AM

[I've](Been told I’m)dark and aggressive.
hardly guessing,so let’s start with the lesson(s),
pardon the question,harbor my message,
stark & i'm edgy
diligent w/ my art ‘n im pesky
smartly investing.
i'm a Writing machine
who fights Mean.
Got a loyal team, every1 w/ a green -laser-beam!

your girls @ a club
Right w/ Me w/a vodka-mixed-Drink.

allegory? had a story answer for me
(this is the) warm up; (it) shor sucked; (na)i am the shore shot
[FIREBOMBED CAR LIKE-
Damage on the scene, ashes on the scene, car-bombed like Danny Green
Irish mobsters. Car bombing. Carburetor. car next to ya.cya lata.
(Car)Starter / ignition/ (put the) switch 'n (mercury), ignite the piston, for the spark-fer thee explosion
(‘ta)endtha snitchin
bitchin bout a loan ‘e Owed-me/
only the cash he gave was phony that’s why he’s ashes
expulsion/ emcees givme revulsion
&This ain’t Cleveland but we’ll blow you up, outside tha cluub. With a bomb - or a gun...

These days I walk around in a Manic Phase.
Happy days (Passive gains)-I hope Things Don’t Change!
(I will not stand 4these micro aggressions.
Got me stressin' -w/ my Hand on my weapon!
Rap is tha essence, [SO]-
I’m ambitious. Kick it. Hit it.
I’m not Bad 4an amateur!
Not the same.(I’m)On top-of-my-game.
My place at the front is firmly in place. But you’ve made me irate. Until I tear up the place. No more smile on your face.
Maybe you’ll say
- that I Copied Say Drilly,
but I’m sui-cidal if ‘e Wants ‘e can Kill me.
(‘Cuz)’m on the Track w/ Willie & Sharif…we got tha MacMille countin’sheep - (so) we don’t Fall asleep (so) ifya Act Silly? - ya Can’t Kill me!
Choppers .357s all over West Philly.
Code 'a the Streets
-You cheat!where’d ya Get that Beat?!
What a feat.
It’s complete - when we eat. With the heat - we will creep.
Make-a-Hit; Taylor Swift!
Make-a-Hit;Taylor Swift!
…Roll sticky w/ Nicki. Poursome bacardi w/ Cardi
’s How-we start the-party.
Winnin’ like Lombardi, ‘n neva sayin’ sorry!

We pick it. We choose it.
We listen to music.
So re-examine this. Fathom this. Put ’n asterisk.
“It’s Masochism,for a math’matician”*,but you have’ta listen,cuz i had a vision..
Ta make a Rap Track 4 Fast Stacks. Buy shit w/ Cash App cuz my Lines ‘r like Anthrax!

I’m a Top Tier rapper droppin’ tracks this year
‘n the year after! - w/higher standards.
I’m a unicorn. With symbolic texts that date back taCuneiform.
Soldiers in uniform, ready fer Duty-‘n the morn’…
Combine some Dance, w/ New Rap, & Boom-bap.
Move back;
Last second adjustments
4-any1 who’s frontin it’s the Lead that I’m Dumpin’
Her First Born;she didn’t know’e started Turf Wars—[Ain’t that Somethin’!]
-
Adds Up ta Bad Luck.
Get your Cash Up -‘n drop bars on the next Mash-up.
Make-a-Hit; Taylor Swift!
Make-a-Hit;Taylor Swift!
[mainSTREAM- make-me Sick!]

…Roll sticky w/ Nicki. Poursome bacardi w/ Cardi
’s How-we start the-party.
Winnin’like Lombardi - ‘n neva sayin’ sorry!

*Chaos

Frank · 01-29-2023, 09:07 AM

@Pharaohs Army
WINS!

Dope girl · 01-29-2023, 09:10 AM

This vs was sick

Multies illy

Flow nicely done

Keep up the good work!

Pharaohs Army · 01-29-2023, 01:46 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Pharaohs Army

Got a loyal team, every1 w/ a green -laser-beam!

@Kill Spree
Rip this written, man.

@corleone
This is true audio brotha. Enjoy. @Sinacog @Neighbor

You guys gonna battle?
Or make up?

Quote:

Originally Posted by Pharaohs Army

Choppers .357s all over West Philly.
Code 'a the Streets

@White Earl

@Dope girl
Thanks hun. I'm glad you like the gems, when I try. (It's the next track..heh heh.)

@big baby peep this man,
http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=152388
when you get time. show it to your prose buddies too.
This "article" last week had your influence written all over it BB...But mainly that opener sentence. That's years of seeing your style. (Plus partly influenced by a fellow writer pissing me off&[motivating me]...Enjoy it bud! Or don't?. lol, eitha way. hagd.
Edit:
Oats "sewed the seed" of the idea 6 yrs ago....

brokenhal0 · 01-30-2023, 08:47 AM

versatility is the key
slick word play ,abstractions,subjections, ...very different
then your usual style it has more charisma then what you normally write
some bars came off a bit '' a.i :ish::'; a few momentum breaks
but I could hear this being recorded enjoyable read slick style of writing ..

01-21-2023, 06:50 PM	#1
Frank Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 3,228 Champed - NWL Season 2 - Art of Writing League (5x) - Lime Green Poetry Association - AOWL Season 6 - AOWL Season 10 Rep Power: 3853343	XI WK VI: ACTIVATE SELF (1-0) vs. Pharaohs Army (2-1) (PHARAOHS ARMY WINS) *Season 11* XI *VERSES:* Friday, January, 27th, 11:59 P.M. Western / 2:59 A.M. Eastern / 7:59 A.M. UK. 24 Hour Ext: Mod/Opponent Discretion VOTES: Monday, January 30th, 11:59 P.M. Western / 2:59 A.M. Eastern / 7:59 A.M. UK. 3 Vote Requirement Enforced/Penalty *MAXIMUM:* 48 Lines: 64 IF AGREED UPON! Goodluck! @ACTIVATE SELF @Pharaohs Army *TOPIC:* __________________ *VETWORK*

01-29-2023, 09:07 AM	#3
Frank Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 3,228 Champed - NWL Season 2 - Art of Writing League (5x) - Lime Green Poetry Association - AOWL Season 6 - AOWL Season 10 Rep Power: 3853343	Open For Feed! @Pharaohs Army WINS! __________________ *VETWORK*

01-29-2023, 12:22 AM	#2
Pharaohs Army Banned Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 2,962 Battle Record: 6 - 14 Rep Power: 0	[I've](Been told I’m)dark and aggressive. hardly guessing,so let’s start with the lesson(s), pardon the question,harbor my message, stark & i'm edgy diligent w/ my art ‘n im pesky smartly investing. i'm a Writing machine who fights Mean. Got a loyal team, every1 w/ a green -laser-beam! your girls @ a club Right w/ Me w/a vodka-mixed-Drink. allegory? had a story answer for me (this is the) warm up; (it) shor sucked; (na)i am the shore shot [FIREBOMBED CAR LIKE- Damage on the scene, ashes on the scene, car-bombed like Danny Green Irish mobsters. Car bombing. Carburetor. car next to ya.cya lata. (Car)Starter / ignition/ (put the) switch 'n (mercury), ignite the piston, for the spark-fer thee explosion (‘ta)endtha snitchin bitchin bout a loan ‘e Owed-me/ only the cash he gave was phony that’s why he’s ashes expulsion/ emcees givme revulsion &This ain’t Cleveland but we’ll blow you up, outside tha cluub. With a bomb - or a gun... These days I walk around in a Manic Phase. Happy days (Passive gains)-I hope Things Don’t Change! (I will not stand 4these micro aggressions. Got me stressin' -w/ my Hand on my weapon! Rap is tha essence, [SO]- I’m ambitious. Kick it. Hit it. I’m not Bad 4an amateur! Not the same.(I’m)On top-of-my-game. My place at the front is firmly in place. But you’ve made me irate. Until I tear up the place. No more smile on your face. Maybe you’ll say - that I Copied Say Drilly, but I’m sui-cidal if ‘e Wants ‘e can Kill me. (‘Cuz)’m on the Track w/ Willie & Sharif…we got tha MacMille countin’sheep - (so) we don’t Fall asleep (so) ifya Act Silly? - ya Can’t Kill me! Choppers .357s all over West Philly. Code 'a the Streets -You cheat!where’d ya Get that Beat?! What a feat. It’s complete - when we eat. With the heat - we will creep. Make-a-Hit; Taylor Swift! Make-a-Hit;Taylor Swift! …Roll sticky w/ Nicki. Poursome bacardi w/ Cardi ’s How-we start the-party. Winnin’ like Lombardi, ‘n neva sayin’ sorry! We pick it. We choose it. We listen to music. So re-examine this. Fathom this. Put ’n asterisk. “It’s Masochism,for a math’matician”,but you have’ta listen,cuz i had a vision.. Ta make a Rap Track 4 Fast Stacks. Buy shit w/ Cash App cuz my Lines ‘r like Anthrax! I’m a Top Tier rapper droppin’ tracks this year ‘n the year after! - w/higher standards. I’m a unicorn. With symbolic texts that date back taCuneiform. Soldiers in uniform, ready fer Duty-‘n the morn’… Combine some Dance, w/ New Rap, & Boom-bap. Move back; Last second adjustments 4-any1 who’s frontin it’s the Lead that I’m Dumpin’ Her First Born;she didn’t know’e started Turf Wars—[Ain’t that Somethin’!] - Adds Up ta Bad Luck. Get your Cash Up -‘n drop bars on the next Mash-up. Make-a-Hit; Taylor Swift!* Make-a-Hit;Taylor Swift! [mainSTREAM- make-me Sick!] …Roll sticky w/ Nicki. Poursome bacardi w/ Cardi ’s How-we start the-party. Winnin’like Lombardi - ‘n neva sayin’ sorry! *Chaos

01-29-2023, 09:10 AM	#4
Dope girl Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: I live in Florida Posts: 4,705 Battle Record: 3-8 Rep Power: 55521416	This vs was sick Multies illy Flow nicely done Keep up the good work!

01-30-2023, 08:47 AM	#6
brokenhal0 Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 492 Battle Record: 12-12=4 Champed - AOWL Season IX Rep Power: 455117	versatility is the key slick word play ,abstractions,subjections, ...very different then your usual style it has more charisma then what you normally write some bars came off a bit '' a.i :ish::'; a few momentum breaks but I could hear this being recorded enjoyable read slick style of writing ..