Week 2: Exis (0-1) vs. Cereal (0-1) - EXIS WINS

For Battling · 06-26-2018, 02:20 PM

COMPLETE RULE THREAD:
http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=128411

IMPORTANT RULES:
- No biting
- No swaying
- No recycling
- No feeding

MUST VOTE ON ATLEAST 4 BATTLES

PUNCHES DUE BY FRIDAY MIDNIGHT PST
VOTING ENDS SUNDAY MIDNIGHT PST

@Exis @Cereal

Cereal · 06-26-2018, 08:23 PM

Exis I drop the tee like i am the new tigerwoods clubroom
Putting X on its ass like i am going to find the next disaster dubloon

Exis · 06-28-2018, 02:29 AM

Far from a serial killer, just a Cereal nuisance
All I see is you with an Asian bowl cut all Caucasian like tryna compete with his noodles.

Ghost1 · 06-28-2018, 08:35 AM

I guess cereal>? wut in the fuck lol

v cereal

Amen · 06-28-2018, 11:03 AM

@Exis - not sure of you are aware but this isn't poetry as in where you don't need to rhyme. You have to rhyme on this side of the writing genre, fam.

Both of these were bad. Cereal was just a tad bit better/less bad but rhymed which is a plus in the 1-2.

v/Cereal

MMLP · 06-28-2018, 11:20 AM

Yeh I gotta back cereal, didn't like a punch not rhyming being the main gripe

Also hated a vague game ref I had to look up

Inno · 06-28-2018, 12:19 PM

I got exis

I don’t know wtf a disaster Dubloon is

Twodrop · 06-28-2018, 04:54 PM

hm....

Exis bar at least made me smile w/ 'all Caucasian like'

like Inno said I don't know what a disaster doubloon is, guess its treasure.. hated the bar tho..

Keep at it

v/ Exis

Exis · 06-28-2018, 10:32 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Amen

@Exis - not sure of you are aware but this isn't poetry as in where you don't need to rhyme. You have to rhyme on this side of the writing genre, famv/Cereal

Trust me I know lol...& I'm no poet...just tryna transition is all...sorry I know it's bad, but I had to drop sumthin' man.

DynamiCz · 06-28-2018, 10:41 PM

Exis I drop the tee like i am the new tigerwoods clubroom
Putting X on its ass like i am going to find the next disaster dubloon

Slight jab I guess, it's readable I guess

--------

Far from a serial killer, just a Cereal nuisance
All I see is you with an Asian bowl cut all Caucasian like tryna compete with his noodles.

Damn bro this could have been something if you rhymed it out right. Keep trying tho you will get it. Props fam

Cereal punch wasn't that much better, I only could understand it more. Better can come from each side but good shit on the effort.

V-Cereal

Cereal · 06-29-2018, 10:56 AM

votes:
http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=128517
http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=128518
http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=128521
http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=128520

sral · 06-29-2018, 01:07 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Innovator

I got exis

I don’t know wtf a disaster Dubloon is

lol pretty much

Schadenfreude · 06-29-2018, 01:25 PM

Either of you know how to word your punches. Cereal's pirate tresure concept MIGHT have worked, while Exis Ion't know what you were going for.. tried relating his haircut/head to asians..WTF are you talking about? VOTE CEREAL.

For Battling · 06-30-2018, 06:13 AM

Both of you guys need to read some text battles, legit any - but preferably some NBL battles or something. The elevation process can be long and lengthy for some but it’s always possible. Exis I’m guessing you’re comparing noodles to Chinese cocks? Idk what else it could possibly be. Cereal youre wasn’t much better and Idk what your concept means but you at least had decent flow without

Vote cereal

For Battling · 07-01-2018, 05:33 AM

11-8 Exis

Needs more votes
@sraL @Cashius @BodySnatcher @Plot @Incredible @Defiant @bleak @Allen Knight

Larkin · 07-01-2018, 05:46 AM

Vote Exis, Cereal structured his punch better but the whole X treasure is very played concept to me. Exis setup his bar really nice, but the punch just fell flat. But he still edged it for me. His line 1 jab was the best punch in the battle.

Destroyer · 07-01-2018, 08:47 AM

This was.... not great
It’s a tough vote
Going with the non-disaster dubloon guy

V/exis

sral · 07-01-2018, 11:48 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sraL

lol pretty much

I had Exis winning here

Disaster dubloon lost me sorry

Defiant · 07-01-2018, 12:01 PM

Vote ex is

Neither were great but gotta with ex is for making a bit more sense

DMS · 07-01-2018, 01:10 PM

Old what a disaster doubloon is either

V/ Exis, but I did expect a less close match with this one, big let down Exis.

06-26-2018, 02:20 PM	#1
For Battling Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2017 Posts: 3,986 Battle Record: 11-6 Rep Power: 5633912	Week 2: Exis (0-1) vs. Cereal (0-1) - EXIS WINS COMPLETE RULE THREAD: http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=128411 IMPORTANT RULES: - No biting - No swaying - No recycling - No feeding MUST VOTE ON ATLEAST 4 BATTLES PUNCHES DUE BY FRIDAY MIDNIGHT PST VOTING ENDS SUNDAY MIDNIGHT PST @Exis @Cereal

06-28-2018, 10:41 PM	#10
DynamiCz ..GunbaR MessiaH.. Join Date: Jan 2018 Location: GuN RanGe Posts: 762 Battle Record: 16-10 Champed - Battle Arena League Rep Power: 9829178	Exis I drop the tee like i am the new tigerwoods clubroom Putting X on its ass like i am going to find the next disaster dubloon Slight jab I guess, it's readable I guess -------- Far from a serial killer, just a Cereal nuisance All I see is you with an Asian bowl cut all Caucasian like tryna compete with his noodles. Damn bro this could have been something if you rhymed it out right. Keep trying tho you will get it. Props fam Cereal punch wasn't that much better, I only could understand it more. Better can come from each side but good shit on the effort. V-Cereal __________________ ...ThA New ErA...

06-29-2018, 10:56 AM	#11
Cereal killa Join Date: Jun 2018 Posts: 820 Battle Record: 1-6 Rep Power: 1312296	votes: http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=128517 http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=128518 http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=128521 http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=128520 Last edited by Cereal; 06-30-2018 at 12:06 PM.

06-29-2018, 01:25 PM	#13
Schadenfreude Dynomite.. DYNOMITE!! Join Date: Sep 2015 Posts: 1,408 Battle Record: 42-22 Champed - Netcees Battle League (2x) - BA Tag Team Titles - Lyric Olympics Rep Power: 21049081	Either of you know how to word your punches. Cereal's pirate tresure concept MIGHT have worked, while Exis Ion't know what you were going for.. tried relating his haircut/head to asians..WTF are you talking about? VOTE CEREAL. __________________ Aali hupatikana kwa ghali.

07-01-2018, 05:33 AM	#15
For Battling Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2017 Posts: 3,986 Battle Record: 11-6 Rep Power: 5633912	11-8 Exis Needs more votes @sraL @Cashius @BodySnatcher @Plot @Incredible @Defiant @bleak @Allen Knight Last edited by For Battling; 07-01-2018 at 04:21 PM.

06-26-2018, 08:23 PM	#2
Cereal killa Join Date: Jun 2018 Posts: 820 Battle Record: 1-6 Rep Power: 1312296	Exis I drop the tee like i am the new tigerwoods clubroom Putting X on its ass like i am going to find the next disaster dubloon

06-28-2018, 02:29 AM	#3
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,938 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	Far from a serial killer, just a Cereal nuisance All I see is you with an Asian bowl cut all Caucasian like tryna compete with his noodles.

06-28-2018, 08:35 AM	#4
Ghost1 Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2014 Posts: 26,349 Battle Record: 0-1 Rep Power: 84181442	I guess cereal>? wut in the fuck lol v cereal

06-28-2018, 11:03 AM	#5
Amen As-salamu alaykum! Join Date: May 2016 Posts: 8,470 Battle Record: 19-8 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Season 6 Rep Power: 0	@Exis - not sure of you are aware but this isn't poetry as in where you don't need to rhyme. You have to rhyme on this side of the writing genre, fam. Both of these were bad. Cereal was just a tad bit better/less bad but rhymed which is a plus in the 1-2. v/Cereal

06-28-2018, 11:20 AM	#6
MMLP Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 600 Battle Record: 15-16 Champed - Write Week 9 Rep Power: 9768087	Yeh I gotta back cereal, didn't like a punch not rhyming being the main gripe Also hated a vague game ref I had to look up

06-28-2018, 12:19 PM	#7
Inno Ad mini tator Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 10,005 Battle Record: 26-54 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - Black August - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 85899400	I got exis I don’t know wtf a disaster Dubloon is

06-28-2018, 04:54 PM	#8
Twodrop Unknown Join Date: Mar 2018 Posts: 673 Battle Record: 2-2 Rep Power: 0	hm.... Exis bar at least made me smile w/ 'all Caucasian like' like Inno said I don't know what a disaster doubloon is, guess its treasure.. hated the bar tho.. Keep at it v/ Exis

06-30-2018, 06:13 AM	#14
For Battling Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2017 Posts: 3,986 Battle Record: 11-6 Rep Power: 5633912	Both of you guys need to read some text battles, legit any - but preferably some NBL battles or something. The elevation process can be long and lengthy for some but it’s always possible. Exis I’m guessing you’re comparing noodles to Chinese cocks? Idk what else it could possibly be. Cereal youre wasn’t much better and Idk what your concept means but you at least had decent flow without Vote cereal

07-01-2018, 05:46 AM	#16
Larkin Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2017 Posts: 115 Battle Record: 1-2 Rep Power: 3247069	Vote Exis, Cereal structured his punch better but the whole X treasure is very played concept to me. Exis setup his bar really nice, but the punch just fell flat. But he still edged it for me. His line 1 jab was the best punch in the battle.

07-01-2018, 12:01 PM	#19
Defiant Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,121 Battle Record: 31-50 Champed - Time to Kill I Rep Power: 6442244	Vote ex is Neither were great but gotta with ex is for making a bit more sense

07-01-2018, 01:10 PM	#20
DMS DMS—Diddled My Stick Join Date: May 2018 Posts: 1,104 Rep Power: 0	Old what a disaster doubloon is either V/ Exis, but I did expect a less close match with this one, big let down Exis.