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Old 09-21-2018, 01:11 PM   #1
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"My own brain is to me the most unaccountable of
machinery - always buzzing, humming, soaring roaring
diving, and then buried in mud. And why? What's this
passion for?" - Virginia Woolf

......

I come from underneath that's what unearthed means
You bum emcees are up shits creek on a buffered stream
Claim you getting the best of me on a refreshed screen
Kid please, I made ya netcees like a web freeze
Made ya net-seize, burn an effigy, if you're an effin' G...
I'm an H I J K LMNO P
Put me in a spell and sentence me, I'm evil as hell
I keep to myself, I'll let the work speak for itself
Once king of the playground now I'm bringing the plague 'round
When the outbreak breaks out I'm not giving a way out
I'm the insidious gray cloud over you wretched emcees
You all talk, bunch a small Pac's like the infectious disease
It's the creature of habit like Jack Reacher gone rabid
A sneak preview in action without the feature attraction
I stay active n' lay-text like I practise safe sex
Your apex is the grave mistake I haven't made yet
You sayin' a trophy's dumb cuz you know he won
On the podium is the only time you'll show me up
You rep where you're from but that shit's a sewer duct
Windows are boarded up like a double decker tour bus
When all is said and done I'm on another level haters
Always get the W, don't press my buttons, call me the L evader
Draw volts across the switches, one jolt can shock the system
Y'all posts apocalyptic although it's not that cryptic
You gassed up underdogs like Lloyd and Harry's last trip
Got off to a rocky start, you wondering where my Aspen
Ass-been? Whatever, 'aspiring' artists take an 'aspirin'
Go against my-grain and I may raid your cabinet
Think you fly with mouth all zipped 'til my profound crotch is itched
I'm in the house watchin' Twitch where Mighty Mouse Johnson is
Michael J Fox with this, get sloppy seconds 'til my watch is fixed
Now I just popped my wrist thinking of the mouth of a college bitch
Cycle through this, it's been a minute since I dropped some shit
If there's a recycling bin I'm in it, thought that was obvious
Hedging bets all along like Edward Scissorhands cuttin' lawns
If hiccups suppress a yawn I'm in the upper echelon
I give a fuck what drug ya on, I'm not expecting a change
Your shit's not in circulation so what you injecting's in vain
You want smoke but re-coil like you emptying vapes
Showboats, the rest of ya clickbait like a plentyoffish date
You cut and paste, I'm just sayin', most of y'all insane
Drop today but no responses came, you stalkless prey
You no killer, if a body outlined in chalk decays...
You hard pressed to have a hand in it like the walk of fame
Window panes distort the views, I build torture rooms
Lies record the truth, paint dries and portraits move
It's a clean sweep but outside a board is loose
Porch removed, I don't know what I'm in for like screws
You say "why make lines that remind of chores you do?"
I say "how can I ignore the broom that wipes the floor with you?"
THAT'S a metaphor you goof, I'll bring you up to speed
Ghostwriter's run the streets so I'm the tumbleweed
That's tongue n' cheek like a mouthful of bumblebees
That-stung-in-cheek, no one's doubting your buzz is weak
Get a leg up on me and I'll expose his reach
Cut 'em below his knees then just blow a sneeze
On the first six rows of seats, hurl my gloves in the bleachers
Guess blood must be leaking cuz I'm covered in leeches
Here's a troubling secret and a deadly rumour...
Waking out of a dead sleep proves there's a Freddie Kruger
This is the target I've garnered from far and wide
It's like the red carpet when the stars align
Sometimes I won't even look at the comments guys
I don't stick my neck out to be ostracized... (ha)
You rhyme written stored notes then hide it
If I want to battle you I'm texting your phone tonight bitch
I heard you get no advice when left to your own devices
That's a flat out lie, so guess I am prone to write it
I overnight this, if you wanna talk rap or talk crap...
Check out my podcast like my dog scratched where my arm snapped
I'm hoping you got that, I don't wanna have to explain it
You wanna do combat? Nah, I'd rather tackle a language
I'll put everyone on blast like the fucking challenger spaceship
Drop the alcohol flask, nothing worse than talent that's wasted
Y'all should just fall back cuz I love to rattle your cages
Thinking you all that but don't bring the jack of all trades in
You will just fall flat, can't hold me down my gravity's weightless
Dig up y'alls past I give a fuck what the calendar's date is (whew)
This a bit long in the tooth, no wonder you barely retained it
When writer's block is removed y'all getting buried in graves quick
I'm a zombie here's proof, this is my cemetery arrangement
My coffin exhumed by all that have viewed...

Sorry I got carried away, shit.
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Old 09-21-2018, 02:20 PM   #2
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Dope to have you here bro.

I’m a fan.

I archived a bunch of your shit here in the Hall of Names section.
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Old 09-21-2018, 02:39 PM   #3
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this was pretty intense and dope. Drop more. Liked the broom line cuz. Well done.
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Old 09-21-2018, 02:39 PM   #4
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oh and the ostrich line was superb. Why didn't I think of that lol
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The cerebral assassin, the molder of minds, the Omni potent being. Time transcending traveler, wisdom incarnate. Veritas needs no intro but I guess I have to. He’s not know in the battling world but who doesn’t know veritas? The guy us always original and if you pay attention to his bars, dude brings the heat.. The gawd.
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Old 09-21-2018, 06:03 PM   #5
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Some pretty dope rhyming through out. Would you be interested in joint our writers league? Would love to have you join and drop some more I’ll shit lol. Srsly if your interested check the league out.
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Old 09-21-2018, 06:10 PM   #6
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This guy is seriously good

could we get @Pinot Grij vs @Universe somehow, guys?

perfect matchup stylistically imo
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