11-27-2018, 05:56 PM | #1 |
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Semi-Finals: Alcoholics vs. Drug Addicts - ALCOHOLICS WIN
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11-27-2018, 06:07 PM | #2 |
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THE DRUG ADDICTS HAVE CHECKED IN
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11-27-2018, 06:09 PM | #3 |
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THE ALCOHOLICS HAVE CHECKED IN
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11-28-2018, 04:34 PM | #4 |
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THE DRUG ADDICTS HAVE SENT 16
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11-30-2018, 12:05 PM | #5 |
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THE DRUG ADDICTS VERSE:
when u count Scotch as mouthwash ur in trouble yo bein’ three sheets to the wind ain’t cool faggot, that ship sailed longgg ago can’t stand u drunk or sober, findin’ weed I forgot only adds to the fun it was Movember last time you had ur ‘stash last you the month im catchin’ a buzz, ur catchin’ a bus to work & gettin’ taxed if eyes r the windows to the soul then its fittin’ u look permanently smashed ur a worthless piece of trash, type to sell ur own kids for a jar ur only a stay at home dad because its cheaper than buyin’ drinks at the bar pissed as a fart, but gettin’ wasted alone’s for losers & deadweights even Clark Kent’s heart leapt at how u turned to a booth for an S-cape fuck u and ur headspace where #BlackLiversMatter be soundin’ viral that ‘casque-aided inner vicious cycle’ that lead to ur downward spiral this round it’s final, im off work w/ a golden handshake thrown in for measure ur Golden Handshake consist of onset jaundice and uncontrollable tremors if we grab a cold one together, it’s only cuz I’m tryna dead you in a flash see ur ‘MT’s a Mount the world over’ only til i wipe this legend off the map |
11-30-2018, 12:06 PM | #6 |
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THE ALCOHOLICS VERSE:
uses a tourniquet*an a swab, yo white as fuck from the smack! such a slave to the poppy your picking cotton to remind you your black hangs out on street corners, gettin yo fix by sucking off men jealous of a hooker cus she can wash her crack an use it again bones already poke through his skin before I slaughter this Ethiopian one walks 5 miles for water, he'll go wherever the Needle take him no self worth he's just a broke jerk who will never make shit bitch face it...your such an addict if I threw a Smack you'd happily take it! drugs got him feeling super, thinks he the strongest bitch to exist not a hero jus cus Mary Jane the heroine to ya story an u Shoot from the wrist give this addict a quick Hit, he won't feel it til next week! a slap so hard palm readers can see his future bleak by his red cheek gave a penny for his thoughts..he spent it on the closest crack being dealt.. going clean?! E such a loser for the skag he sees a hoover for its Bag, Pipe n Belt! cus u bout that Rock look, shook black bitch all itchy n vile.. shit your one Hit away from his New Jack City smile :) Sup Pookie, wheres my beer at?! |
11-30-2018, 02:32 PM | #7 |
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Drug Addicts--- 3 sheets, Movember,
Vs Alcoholics---Needle, Smack, V. Alcoholics...even in quotes but I thought his were better. And I also thought he did a better job of wording his concepts imo. |
11-30-2018, 04:26 PM | #8 |
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Listen alcy had some obvious punches like the hooker bar an some pretty reachable ones like the hoover but he hit his opponent hard with what he had to go on. That slap bar was fire but tbh I dunno if that works for this tourny. Clearly the Brummy (not) has done quite.well with them first two bars Not so sure bout the rest personally but I did like s Cape that was clever.
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12-01-2018, 05:46 AM | #9 |
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when u count Scotch as mouthwash ur in trouble yo
bein’ three sheets to the wind ain’t cool faggot, that ship sailed longgg ago i don’t get it tbh, maybe wording messed it up idk can’t stand u drunk or sober, findin’ weed I forgot only adds to the fun it was Movember last time you had ur ‘stash last you the month ok, def not done to its full potential but still not bad im catchin’ a buzz, ur catchin’ a bus to work & gettin’ taxed if eyes r the windows to the soul then its fittin’ u look permanently smashed ok ur a worthless piece of trash, type to sell ur own kids for a jar ur only a stay at home dad because its cheaper than buyin’ drinks at the bar not feelin pissed as a fart, but gettin’ wasted alone’s for losers & deadweights even Clark Kent’s heart leapt at how u turned to a booth for an S-cape ha this was dope lol fuck u and ur headspace where #BlackLiversMatter be soundin’ viral that ‘casque-aided inner vicious cycle’ that lead to ur downward spiral too wordy, missed for me this round it’s final, im off work w/ a golden handshake thrown in for measure ur Golden Handshake consist of onset jaundice and uncontrollable tremors i looked this up and it legit has nothing to do with alcoholism or whatever lol if we grab a cold one together, it’s only cuz I’m tryna dead you in a flash see ur ‘MT’s a Mount the world over’ only til i wipe this legend off the map nah not feelin it 1 nice 2 ok 5 misses Vs uses a tourniquet*an a swab, yo white as fuck from the smack! such a slave to the poppy your picking cotton to remind you your black lol decent, quite a bit of errors here that took away from impact hangs out on street corners, gettin yo fix by sucking off men jealous of a hooker cus she can wash her crack an use it again lmaoooo bones already poke through his skin before I slaughter this Ethiopian one walks 5 miles for water, he'll go wherever the Needle take him oh noooo no self worth he's just a broke jerk who will never make shit bitch face it...your such an addict if I threw a Smack you'd happily take it! not trying to nitpick but threw a smack only sounds decent 1 way, and barely. drugs got him feeling super, thinks he the strongest bitch to exist not a hero jus cus Mary Jane the heroine to ya story an u Shoot from the wrist ha this was cool give this addict a quick Hit, he won't feel it til next week! a slap so hard palm readers can see his future bleak by his red cheek nah lol gave a penny for his thoughts..he spent it on the closest crack being dealt.. going clean?! E such a loser for the skag he sees a hoover for its Bag, Pipe n Belt! whos E? Not feelin this cus u bout that Rock look, shook black bitch all itchy n vile.. shit your one Hit away from his New Jack City smile decent but idk why you assume he’s black 2 nice 2 Decent 4 misses Alright so considering I know who you both are, I think this showing was well beneath your potential. Maybe the gimmick was shit idk but personally I feel there was more you had the opportunity to work with. The drug addicts only had 1 dope bar and quite a bit of misses. Alcoholics also had a good number of misses but just 1 less than the addicts, he also had 1 more quotable than him. Really close battle here but I have the alcoholics slightly taking it. Vote The Alcoholics |
12-01-2018, 09:12 PM | #10 |
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12-02-2018, 08:05 AM | #11 |
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lmao definitely not me but I disagree entirely on this one tbh.
I think Drug Addicts did very well here, a lot of creative concepts and there were so many easy pitfalls he could have fell into but avoided. The three sheets to the wind/drunk/ship has sailed was original and creative. Windows to soul/Permanently smashed again is fresh and not seen it done before. The stay at home dad rather than buying drinks at the bar was LULZ, casque aided / cascaded wordplay was nice, not sure how Zelph thinks that isn’t related to Alcohol? It’s a casque. Pretty obvious what’s stored in casques to me and the cascaded in a vicious cycle/downward spiral is fire in my eyes. The closer is obviously ‘empties amount’ / Mt’s a Mount’ like you would find with Mt. Everest/Mt. Rushmore and the legend on the map would show the abbreviation. Alcoholics were pretty basic and boring to me, a lot of expected obvious ideas like the crack/asscrack and Smack for a punch idea which is one of the first things you would think of in that position. The rest was pretty much not hitting for me, either worded without sting or just not doing enough conceptually with creativity or originality and I just don’t fuck with that type of shit. It could be preference, I just value actual BARS and fresh material I’ve never seen done before over stale ideas and lines I’ve seen done before. I think it’s important to dig deeper. These are surface level punches to me, the low hanging fruit, very easy to construct and come up with and I just find it extremely lazy and basic and boring if I’m completely honest. No disrespect intended. I’ve been around forever and seen so much that unless you’re bringing something out the box, I don’t fuck with it. What do I know about text anyway, though, right? Vote - Drug Addicts
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12-03-2018, 01:16 AM | #12 |
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Hi...
when u count Scotch as mouthwash ur in trouble yo bein’ three sheets to the wind ain’t cool faggot, that ship sailed longgg ago This was cool... can’t stand u drunk or sober, findin’ weed I forgot only adds to the fun it was Movember last time you had ur ‘stash last you the month This was cool too... im catchin’ a buzz, ur catchin’ a bus to work & gettin’ taxed if eyes r the windows to the soul then its fittin’ u look permanently smashed I really like the wording here... ur a worthless piece of trash, type to sell ur own kids for a jar ur only a stay at home dad because its cheaper than buyin’ drinks at the bar Nah... pissed as a fart, but gettin’ wasted alone’s for losers & deadweights even Clark Kent’s heart leapt at how u turned to a booth for an S-cape Not bad... fuck u and ur headspace where #BlackLiversMatter be soundin’ viral that ‘casque-aided inner vicious cycle’ that lead to ur downward spiral ok... this round it’s final, im off work w/ a golden handshake thrown in for measure ur Golden Handshake consist of onset jaundice and uncontrollable tremors Nice... if we grab a cold one together, it’s only cuz I’m tryna dead you in a flash see ur ‘MT’s a Mount the world over’ only til i wipe this legend off the map Nah... Pretty consistent verse... It was versatile... uses a tourniquet*an a swab, yo white as fuck from the smack! such a slave to the poppy your picking cotton to remind you your black Go fuck your mother... hangs out on street corners, gettin yo fix by sucking off men jealous of a hooker cus she can wash her crack an use it again Ive heard this joke plenty of times before... bones already poke through his skin before I slaughter this Ethiopian one walks 5 miles for water, he'll go wherever the Needle take him Nah... no self worth he's just a broke jerk who will never make shit bitch face it...your such an addict if I threw a Smack you'd happily take it! Nah... drugs got him feeling super, thinks he the strongest bitch to exist not a hero jus cus Mary Jane the heroine to ya story an u Shoot from the wrist Nah fam... give this addict a quick Hit, he won't feel it til next week! a slap so hard palm readers can see his future bleak by his red cheek If youre talking about bleak from this site then this was good... gave a penny for his thoughts..he spent it on the closest crack being dealt.. going clean?! E such a loser for the skag he sees a hoover for its Bag, Pipe n Belt! Nah... cus u bout that Rock look, shook black bitch all itchy n vile.. shit your one Hit away from his New Jack City smile Go fuck yourself... I thought the KKK was eliminated last round... From your verse, Im assuming that you think that only black people are drug abusers.... Even without those lines, I still think you lost... Vote- DA... Bye...
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12-03-2018, 09:06 AM | #13 |
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Vote - drug addicts
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12-03-2018, 10:41 PM | #14 |
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The Alcoholics Win 2-1
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