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Old 10-24-2017, 05:20 PM   #1
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Black August


SUMMARY OF RULES:

Verses are due November 1ST
WEDNESDAY at 11:59 P.M. Pacific/West Coast or THURSDAY November 2 3:00 AM Eastern / 6:00 AM THURSDAY November 2 Central European/London


Verses MUST be a minimum 10 lines or a maximum of 48 lines (or 650 words).

Voting closes when a clear winner is voted for. Competitors must vote immediately on the other match. Failure to vote will result in being a faggot for a significant portion of ur life.

WHAT DOES THIS MEAN? You can technically start a life of faggoting immediately but its a slippery slope.

so....

All competitors must vote on as many battles as possible duh u bum ass idiots


Topic:: uh none wtf don't u know what this is?

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Old 10-25-2017, 02:40 AM   #2
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The only way to resolve this amicably is with a COMPLIMENTS BATTLE!

I don't want to have to kill my boy
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Old 10-25-2017, 03:55 AM   #3
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The only way to resolve this amicably is with a COMPLIMENTS BATTLE!

I don't want to have to kill my boy
hahahaha lets do it!!! line limit?
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Old 10-27-2017, 09:00 AM   #4
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Your what I aspire to be when I enter a comp
with a writing technique that second to none.
You’d win ten on the trot if you had the intent!
With a set of accomplishments you have to respect.
You’re tang is as fresh as your rap career,
same has to be said for that manly beard.
that you’ve had for years. It structures your face,
a real man’s appearance, I’m not reluctant to state.
It’s even rubbed off on shady, so don’t give it a trim!
Look at the muscle you’ve gained, you been hitting the gym?
I figured you’d slim down once you made it as parents.
I see her mischievous grin! That untamed little menace!
That baby’s inherited a full list of traits.
Now were graced with a presence that you’ve brought to our place.
What an adorable baby girl, always jaunty and happy,
its written all on her face and she get it’s all from her daddy!
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This guy is the best, he's really as polite as it gets
He's so nice he suggested we keep the line limit less!
Your styles so impressive we should be in the final together
- thanks entirely for letting me look like I did it better.
I'm at your side come whatever, I'll do all that you ask
even lied against Genocide to make sure you advanced!
I saw you as champ before the AOWL had even begun
Inno only thought up this match to give himself an easier run.
Thanks for telling me I'm a cunt; you're so positive it hurts
even kept my seat on the bus when I got a lift to work.
You're positively perfect and with looks that could kill
must of hit the lottery at birth because your mothers a MILF!
Her muscular build really... brings out her eyes?
I'd love to have children with her, if she's single sometime.
You're simply sublime, here's something I've waited forever to post
...congrats on winning this time, and Eminem is the GOAT!
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Old 10-27-2017, 02:06 PM   #6
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Lmmfaoooooo this shit dope

Mmlp had way deeper compliments i think. Man. The style was smooth and eaxh line actually had me loling like yo these niggas is trippin haha

Lars. The smooth flow of your writinf always top notch. Your compliments were a little less involvrd in his personal life until the while milf section which leaned me hard.
That lied on genocide shit had me dying tho. So this is tough to call. I really wanted a black august accomp you asshole lmaooo..

I have to go mmlp on this guys. Tough match. Both equally talented with flow and had some funny shit. I think mmlp drove it home a bit more with how much more peraonal he was in more lines than diable.

Tough one to call. I got mmlp though. Good shit guys. <3
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Old 11-02-2017, 01:14 AM   #7
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Lmao... this shit had me rolling. I can't say too much about this but it was like watching chedda cheese vs. Carter deems. LP being carter with the direct compliments and Lars being cheddacheese with the style and flow but for overall verse of entertainment idk... I got LP.
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Old 11-03-2017, 08:21 AM   #8
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Voting today.
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Old 11-04-2017, 12:00 PM   #9
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I'm voting for MMLP because I genuinely believe he idolizes Baron Mynd and that relayed through the course of his verse.
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Old 11-04-2017, 12:11 PM   #10
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Ok mmlp

I dug this verse actually. You where concise and to the point. Your flow was fucking outstanding, I gues you took slot from your your “muse” lol. Wrote in some personal stuff that made it a bit more authentic. Dope read tbh.

Diablo

Some of the same stuff from you but in old Lars fashion you couldn’t resist taking a couple of jabs lmao. Is all good honestly I didn’t see it that way. But yeah i mean your last line congratulating LP is enough for me lol. Good read tho

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